BLIND IN LOVE -CHAPTER 2 ENTER THE WILD UPDATED - Page 4

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CHAPTER 1 - THE AIRPORT SAGA PART 1

MUMBAI, SANTACRUZ AIRPORT,
29TH FEBRUARY,2016
TIME:12:30PM
Attention passengers we have safely arrivedour destination. The climate outside is 32 degrees celcius. Thank you for travelling with us. A young man dressed in a slim fit blazer suit and blue jeans deplaned with his two bodyguards and set his feet in Mumbai.

'' At last Jalal you reached here.'' Said the young man excitedly to himself. '' Ok guys you take my luggage and everythingand I in the mean time will go to the washroom and come.'' said Jalal to his bodyguards. ''Ok sir then Dom will escort you there.''said Drey one oh his bodyguardkeeping in mind his masters saftey.''No way that I am gonna go with him.''said Jalal hysterically. ''Ok sir then I will come.'' said obedient Drey. ''Neither I am gonna go with you nor him.What do you think that I am a child. Never ever mess up with my personal matters; you both understood.'' said the irritated master.Both of them nodded their heads in yes. ''Good now go and collect my luggage .'' ''Yes sir.''
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''Good plan Jalal, stupid fellows didn't even notice me coming out of the washroom and they call themselves a bodyguard. What an era has come . My God I can't control my laughter." Getting out of the airport something struck his mind,"Damn it my clothes and everything is with those stupids ; what to do now ? Ya I Can buy everything from here besides my laptop is with me ,so no worries Jalal. Now to find for Abdul.(Jalal took out his iPhone 6 and dialled his friend, but to his fate the phone was engaged.)God,what a fate now where to find him, before those dumbs get me." But it sees this time luck was on his side; there he was standing right in front of him. '' Hey Abdul."shouted Jalal enthusiastically. All the passerbys looked at him as though seeing an alien. Jalal became embarassed."Well good Jalal, first time in India and what an entry you have taken .You made a joker out of yourself;everyone looked but the one who should look i busy it seems."The bestie was engrossed in his mobile when someone patted on his back . The buddy turned towards the owner of the pat and became happy seeing him and captured him in a huge friendly hug and said "Jalal " as though saying intentionally so that the listener on the mobile could listen and made sure the call went off so as not to be noticed by Jalal. Jalal too hugged him back. A moment while he was mad a his friend but the hug made him relaxed and suddenly he noticed his so called bodyguards coming out of the arrival gate.
Abdul remarked," Hey buddy at last you are here. By the way welcome to India ." "ya..um... thank you " said Jalal restlessly."Is something the matter Jalal your not looking happy and by the way where is your luggage ?"asked the concerned friend. "Abdul we have to rush home otherwise I will be captured forever" said Jalal panicking and trying to hide himself by turning his back to Abdul. "WHAT?WHY?" Abdul asked confused with the not so pleasing behaviour of his bestie.


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CHAPTER 1 THE AIRPORT SAGA PART2

"Sir. "came a call from behind. Jalal closed his eyes in disappointment knowing who it was.On seeing the view in front of him a jocose smile crept on Abdul's face and said, "so this is the cause of ur restlessness Jalal. " "Dude you don't know they are real Thomson and Thompson." said Jalal in a irritable manner. "Sir, we were waiting for you outside the washroom. At last we found you. Now we can hold our breath. "said Dom. "Oh really, I didn't know it . Now stop acting and say how the hell did you reach here . I mean according to my calculations you should be here after 30 minutes.2 minutes maybe for collecting the luggage and 10 minutes waiting for me outside the washroom and may be another 18 minutes searching me inside the airport. That's what you did last time. Now tell me the truth. My plan was great then how it got messed up. Tell me. Don't stay dumb. " said Jalal disappointedly." Sir actually we " nervousness sounding in their voice. "We what? Say it." said gritting his teeth. Drey whispered to Dom,"Dom you only say it,after all you always say he is the cutest client you have ever got. So now say to your cutie. Maybe he will forgive you." Gulping the saliva Dom uttered the truth, "sir before getting angry on us we have to say that it's for your safety. Knowing of your habit of running away from us, we did this. Afterall one learn from his mistake. " Abdul watching the whole seen suddenly started to laugh. Looking at him Jalal got embarrassed and looked at them with cruel eyes. They continued, "We have put a GPS tracker on your blazer so that we would locate the location you are in." Shocked by the revelation Jalal's mouth went wide open and anger emerged in his already irritated brain and before it could burst out a call interrupted from the bodyguards phone. Before he could open his mouth to curse them they handed over the phone to Jalal. He gave a 'what the'look to his bodyguards and received the call. "Yes Jalal here." answered Jalal uninterested. "It's me boy your dad.So reached your destination " voiced from the other side. "Dad its you. Yes I have reached here safely thanks to your so called trustworthy boys or I say irritating freaks. I mean how could you have trust on them more than me."said Jalal in disgust. Bharmal asked confused, "Why? What did they do this time?"Jalal answered,"What did they do? you won't believe dad ...no no I mean you should believe. You know what these stupids Did. They have put a tracker to trace me down. It's so childish I mean putting a tracker for such silly things. " Bharmal from the other side was controlling his laughter and thought, "boys you are really funny. Made Jalal a lion running from the cage.I wonder that the lion would be a professional in escaping more than Jalal." and voiced after a second. "Jalal it's for your safety child. My boys have done a good work. Tell them regards on my behalf. " Listening to Bharmal's reaction Jalal's eyes got wide open. " That's it; you are giving them regards. I never expected this from you." Bharmal voiced from other side. " Whatever you say Jalal, but I have an important message for you. Your exams are gonna begin in 3 months so you have to reach here before that."said Bharmal .Jalal answered shocked " Exams! I am bored with these exams. I don't want to write it dad. I have come here to enjoy myself, not to study. " said Jalal. "Whatever you say son, I will tell your principal mam that your not gonna write the exam. Afterall you are Jalal. Rich, handsome, intelligent why should you be doing such stupid things. Right? " Said Bharmal coldly." Yup ,your right." answered Jalal.Bharmal again voiced hiding the mischievousness in his voice " No problem son,but you won't get your MBA certificate, but then why do you need that right. You are more than an MBA student. And so nice half stress will be released. You don't need to continue your studies and..." " Dad I was just kidding. I will appear for the exam. " said Jalal cutting him in between.Bharmal again asked to know his mind, "hmm you sure? Then afterwards don't say I forced you. " Jalal replied sadly, "No dad I won't. " Bharmal said," ok then enjoy these 2 months for the time being. Bye." " bye dad "After the call ended Abdul asked his friend,"So now can we go. " Jalal nodded in yes when a question occured in his mind. " By the way who were you talking to ". Abdul stopped in his way and said,"hmm a.. no one I mean..." Before Abdul could say Jalal stopped him in between and said,"Before you cook up your own story I want to know the truth. Abdul knew he hascaught him and said," ok I give up. It was your brother.He wanted to know if you reached safely. " " I don't understand, why are they so overprotective about me. Firstly they keep bodyguards who are 24 hours around me and secondly they ensure whether I am safe personally and that too not to the person who ts being put under surveillance but to his friend. What's their problem. I am not given a privacy at all. Do I look like a child who should be looked after. Even they are more independent than me."All the while Abdul stayed a silent listener. It was his luck that at the knick of time the driver came with the Grey Audi Q7


Otherwise it would be up to him to answer , the so called questions put up by his loquacious friend, whose answer he too dosen't have.Seated in the four of them travelled their way home.

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Edited by AnnSoosan - 10 years ago
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yay me first!
nice beginning buddy!!
but short one...😊
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Interesting start of the series. Jalal running away from his own bodyguards😆
Would like to read more about this suspense. Do update next one soon. Greedy me 😃
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Amazing chppy..
jalal apne hi bodyguards se bhaag raha h ...hehe..
cont soon dear..
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