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Hi friends

How are you all . Thank you very much for your love and appreciation on last update.Love you all 🤗.

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PART 2a

Manik was continuously niharofying his childhood princess.



He was amazed at her beauty.He badly wants to hold her in his arms,to listen her sweet talk for a long time, to watch her cute pouty expressions but he was unable to do all these things at this moments. So with bad heart he controlled his emotions.


Chacha with a smile said to Nandini to tease her: Ayiyo Nandu beta ab agar shouting ka session ho gya ho tou in se milo yeh haan... ( Chacha forgot Manik's name which cabir told him) Kya naam bataya tha os ne?


Manik: M. Malhotra


Nandini to make fun of him:" M " yeh app ka name hai ? ya M for Malhotra kahna chah rahe ho app.


Manik with a smile replied: Nahi " M " merey name ka initial hai. Main apna full name use nahi karta.


Nandini like a child asked: Kyo ? kya koi Don ho app jo sirf initial se hi sub kam chal jate haan.


Other 3 members present in that rooms started smiling on these silly questions.


Manik again replied while gazing at her face: G nahi Don nahi hoon main...


Chacha: Arey Nandu Bacha tu kisi ko bolne ka moka de gi tab tujhe pata chale ga na . main tujhe yehi bata raha tha k ajj se yeh tera Bodyguard hai.


Nandini on listening this word "Bodyguard" remembered her childhood Friend ( her Bodyguard) .Her expression changed from happy to sad and this change of expression was noticed by only 1 pair of eyes.Manik observed some sadness in her eyes on the word Bodyguard and his inner soul started bhangra on this thing.


He thought

" I know Meri Princess apnay os chotey se bodyguard ko yaad kar rahe hai. But don't worry jald hi tumhain pata chal jae ga k tumhara wo bodyguard aa gya hai."


Nandini's Pov


" Bodyguard ka naam se mujhe sirf wohi kyo yaad ata hai.kya karon ... kahan dhondu main osey...(making cute pout) Bara kahta tha mera bodyguard hai jab se yahan se gya hai 1 baar bhi mere bare mein nahi socha hoga os ne...huh... to main kyo os k bare mein sochun."


She recovered from her sad phase and said in irritated voice: Chacha... Chachi u know na I don't need any bodyguard.Mujhe nahi chaheye koi bhi bodyguard.app isey wapis bhej do.


Chachi: Arey Nandu tu kaisi batein kar rahi hai haan. Tujhe pata hai na ajjkal tu jahan bhi ati jati hai kuch larke tujhe follow karte haan.to beta yeh sub teri safety k liye hai na.


Chacha: Haan shano g thek kah rahe haan ... aur Nandu Bhai shb aur bhabhi ki death k baad aik tu hi to hai un ki nishani. To ab hum tujhe kisi bhi halat main khona nahi chahte.Bacha samjh na hum tujhe apney Rishab se bhi zyada pyaar karte haan aur tujhe kisi bhi takleef mein nahi dekh sakte.


Nandini after seeing Chacha Chachi's love for her agreed and said: Ok sirf app dono k liye main yeh karne k liye ready hoon but meri bhi 1 condition hai.


Nandini: isey koi bhi Bodyguard nahi kahe ga. Aur yeh kisi ko bhi nahi batae ga k isey app logon ne meri security k liye rakha hai.


Nandini's talk with her cute childhood friend in her imagination.


I don't know k tumhe main yaad hoon ya nahi but main apney os cute se bodyguard ko kabhi nahi bhool sakti. I miss u ab to a jao wapis.


Chachi: Nandu meri jhali guriya(doll) ab isey hum bodyguard nahi kahen ge to kya kahen ge.


Nandini: Meri pyari chachi kuch bhi bol lo but mera Bodygurad nahi. (she said this last line in slow voice ) kyok mera bodyguard to sirf 1 hi hai.


Chacha said to solve this problem: Ok to ajj se yeh security officer ... Ab to thek hai na.


Nandu with a smile said to make some fun: Wow Chacha app to genius ho.Love you haan.


And this thing again brought a smile on others face.


Now Chachi asked Manik: Beta is k liye to tum security officer ho gaye lykin main tumhe kya bulaon ... wo kya hai na yeh Mr Mr kah k main kisi ko nahi bula sakti.


Manik again with his smiling face replied: Mam app mujhe Maan bol lijeye ga( while saying this he also noticed Nandini's expression).


Chachi: Ok

Nandini in her excited voice interrupt their talk and said: Maan... kya main tumhe Manu bula sakti hoon plz plz plz.dekho na Maan se milta bhi hai. Nick lagta hai is ka. So plzzz.


Manik got a shock on hearing this Manu from Nandini's mouth.


Flashback

Manan were in Manik's house . Nandini was sitting with manik who was busy in playing with guitar


Nandini called Manik to gain his attention:Manikkk


Manik turned his face towards her and asked with his head: what ?

Nandini with her cute pouty face and lowered eyes: Mujhe tum se baat karni hai.


Manik replied: to bolo na.


Nandini with her angry face said: Don't call me Nandu... U know ajj tumhari wajha se meri sub friends mujhe nandu bol rahe thi.


Manik: Tou kya hoa.itna cute nam lagta hai Nandu.

Nandini don't like when anyone call her with some nick name.


Nandini again with angry pout said : Acha agar Nandu cute name hai to phir ajj se main bhi tumhe isi tarhan k kisi naam se bulaon gi.


She started thinking: hmmm hmmm Haan Main Nandini se Nandu tou tum Manik se Manu.(she started clapping in happiness) yes Manu.


She pulled Manik's shirt in excitement and said: Manik ... Manu cute name hai na.


Manik saw her happy face so he said: Hmmm acha hai but Manu mujhe sirf tum bulo gi aur koi nahi. Aur yeh hamara secret hoga ok.

Nandini in her happiness said : Ok done. And hugged him I love you my Manu.


Flashback End


Manik came back in reality and when his gaze stopped at her expected eyes then unknowingly he nodded his head and gave her permission.


Nandini in excitement said: Oh thank you ... thank you... thank you... You are the best.


She then turned towards chacha and with holding his arm she said: Now I am going for shopping. You know na Navya aur mujhe convocation k liye bhi jana hai to os k liye dhairrr sari shopping karni hai mujhe . aur Navya mall pe mera itezar kar rahe ho gi. So abhi main ja rahi hoon bye.


And with this she left from there leaving others behind.


Chachi said : Maan Beta plz meri Nandini ka khyal rakhna . I know wo log phir se isey follow Karen gey.


Manik/Maan: G Mam app tension nahi lo Nandini ko main kabhi kuch nahi hone doon ga.


After this he also left from there.


When he reached outside he saw that Nandini was waiting for him.


He came near her then she asked: Manu Tumhe bike chalana ati hai kya.


Manik with amused smile said yes.


Nandini asked: To kya tum mujhe bike pe le k chalo gey plz ( she folded her hands like begging)


Manik with a smile: Ok Mam as u say.

Nandini jumped and clapped like a kid.

With this demand Nandini again walked through the Memory lane.

Flashback

Manan were in the same park when Nandini pulled his sleeves and said while pointing towards another girl: Manik wo dekho na wo girl cycle chalate hoe kitni cute lag rahe hai... Mujhe bhi cycle chalni hai. Plzzz Chalo na.


Manik looked in that direction and then said : Ok Nandu but tumhe cycle chalani ati hai kya?


Nandini with giggles shook in No.


Manik:To phir chalao gi kaise?


Nandini with extreme cute and innocent face: Arey cycle tum chalao gey aur main tumhare sath bethon gi. Yayyy( she started clapping in joy).

Flashback Ends


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Part 2B


Manik came with a heavy bike and asked Nandini to sit.



Nandini sat behind him. Manik started his bike and moved towards Shopping mall in normal speed.


In the mid of their way Manik noticed 3 to 4 bikes were following them .


He tilted his head a lil backside and asked Nandini to hold him tight as he is increasing the speed of his bike.


Nandini in a lil hesitation hold him by his shoulder. Manik noticed her this move and then deliberately grab her hand and placed them around his waist.


Nandini felt his touch on her hands and his soothing touch removed all the hesitation from her body.


Manik fastened the speed of his bike and also change their route. The boys who were chasing them tried very hard to follow them but Manik dodged them very easily.


After sometime Manik stopped his bike infront of shopping mall and said to Nandini: wait here I'll be back don't go anywhere without me.


Nandini nodded in yes.


Manik came back after parking his bike and saw Nandini was not there.


Manik started searching for her in his surrounding and then finally he found her .


She was jumping and dancing with a group of kids near Donald Duck.


Manik came towards her with a smile and when Nandini saw his face she very cutely hold her ears to say sorry to him.


Manik on this cuteness wants to give her a hug but again he can't do it .


On same moment Nandini received a call of her friend and then she started moving towards inside.


Inside Nandini meet her friend and then they started their shopping.


Navya noticed that Manik was not leaving them alone so she asked her: Nandini yeh ajj kis ko le ayi sath haan. Waisey jo bhi ho hai bohat handsome .

Nandini nudged her and said to tease her: Os ko chor aur apney BF pe dehan de. Wo dekh wahan un girls k pass.


Navya saw cabir with a group of girls and those girls were trying their luck on him: hannn Cabirrr ajj to tum nahi bacho gey.


She started marching in that direction and when Manik's gaze shifts in that direction then he was shocked to see cabir there.


Manik thought: Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai...


Nandini in joy said in loud voice: ab maza aye ga. (with a clap)


Manik looked at her face and then again towards Cavya .He was trying to find the reason of Nandini's excitement then she herself told him the reason.


She in excitement hold Manik's hand and said: U know yeh Navya ka BF hai . aur har time mujhe tang karta hai. Ajj maza aye ga jab Navya sub k samne is ki dhulai kare gi.


Manik again looked towards Cavya and after watching the scene there he knows that Nandini is right. Navya waqae mein Cabir ki dhulai karne ko tyar thi



Manik ran in their direction and then she holds Navya's hand and said her that it is not safe for Nandini to stay at one place for such a long time.


Navya after thinking this side leave from there in anger and Cabir said to Manik: Thank you Bro ajj tu na bacha liya nahi to ajj is Madhubala ne mujhe zinda nahi chorna tha.

Manik: But tu yahan kya kar raha hai.


Cabir: Long story yaar filhal to itna k Navya ko shopping mein help karne aya tha.

Manik: Ok Baqi detail pending hai wo baad mein abhi k liye chalein Girls wait kar rahe haan.

Girls did their fav time pass and boys hold their heads in their hands like(Kahan phans gaye).


After this Shopping Manik Dropped Nandini at her home and told her Chacha that he is going for an urgent work he will be back after some time. And Chacha gave permission.


Manik observed that those boys were still there near Nandini's house. So he sent a msg to all his group members and called them in Cabir's house.


Manik came there and saw that Cabir, Aliya and Mukti were waiting for him .


Cabir in worried voice: Yaar abhi to miley they kya hoa itni urgency mein kyo call kiya?


Manik in anger: I want to kill those Morons. Samajhte haan k wo Nandini ko aisey follow kar k dara lein gey.Kameeney saley abhi yeh nahi jante k ab Nandini akeli nahi hai. Os k samne main khara hoon.Aur main kabhi osey kuch bhi hone nahi doon ga.


At this statement all friends looked at him and then to each other.


Cabir with his eyes told them that they will talk on it later.

Mukti: Manik plz relax... Teri in baton se mujhe yeh to samajh a rahe hai k tu Nandini k liye tension mein hai but itni zyada tension ... Kuch hoa hai kya?

Manik at once said: No ! Kuch nahi hoa aur na hi main kuch hone doon ga.Nandini ko kuch nahi hoga.Kabhi bhi kuch bhi nahi.

Cabir placed his hand on Manik's and then said: Relax dude... just relax. Acha yeh bata k tera plan kya hai coz jitna tu is time gusey mein hai tu ne ate time hi sub plan bana liya ho ga. To chal bata kya karna hai hum ne.


Manik 1 mint pahle Dhruv ko bhi line pe lene de.


He dialed Dhruv's number and then explain them his plan.


Dhruv: Ok Boss kam ho jae ga.


Cabir: Hmmm to ab mujhe un logon ki activities pe nazar rakhni ho gi.


Mukti: Aur mujhe Media pe nazar .


Aliya: Aur mujhe os Harshad pe nazar rakhni hai.


Manik: Nodded in yes.


Manik: Aur main Nandini k sath rah k koshish karon ga k hamara plan sahi kam kare. But guys 1 thing yeh mera special number hai jo ajj se hum isi plan k liye use Karen gey. Tum logon ko agar is plan se related kuch bhi baat karni ho to merey isi number pe contact karo gey . Understand.

Fab 3: Yes Boss.


Manik to Cabir: Cabir main soch raha hoon k Murty's k haan hi stay rakhon apna . Coz abhi tak hamein un boys ki kisi bhi planning k bare mein pata nahi hai.


On same moment Manik heard the ringing tone of his cell phone. He picked his phone and saw the caller Id . it was Nandini's Chacha's number.


Manik attend that call and his face color instantly changed. He only said: Ok I am coming.


Mnaik to others: Guys Mujhe abhi jana hoga. Those boys were crossing their limit.Mujhe abhi ja k Nandini ko dekhna hai baqi detail main baad me bata doon ga.


All others: Ok hum wait kar rahe haan.


Manik left from there.


He came back to Murty's house and Nandini's Chacha told him that those boys threw stones on Nandini's Window and with 1 stone this letter came.


Manik hold that letter and after opening it he started reading that letter.


" Arey Janeman Bach k kab tak raho gi. Ajj nahi to kal Tumhe meri hona hi hai"

Tumhara Chahne wala


Manik folded that paper in anger and after controlling himself for this time .He assured Nandini's Chacha that He will take care of this Matter .


He asked for Nandini when Nandini's Chacha told him that she is sitting in her room.


Manik: Uncle/ Sorry I mean Mr Murty kya main Nandini ko dekh sakta hoon abhi.



Chacha: Ok beta

Manik came in Nandini's room and saw her tears stricken face.He saw that she was holding something in her hands while sitting on her bed.


When he keenly observe that thing then again he got a shock that was the same teddy bear that she had in her childhood.


FlashBack


Nandini was sitting on Manik's bed in sad mood when Manik came out from washroom .

At that time he started learning guitar.


Manik: Nandu kya hoa?


Nandini with teary eyes and sad pout told: Manik Mera Teddy... Mera teddy Mar gya.


Manik giggled on this and asked: Arey buddhu teddy kaisey Mar sakta hai.


Nandini again with sad expression: Buddhu main nahi tum ho. Filmo mein bhi jab kisi ka oper se car guzar jati hai to wo mar jata hai na. to jab mere teddy k oper se car guzri to wo kaise zinda hoga.


Manik again giggled on her explanation


Manik : Nandu I have a magic jis se tumhara teddy phir se zinda ho jae ga.

Nandini looked at him with hopeful eyes: Sachiii


Manik: Muchiii


Nandini to jaldi se merey teddy ko thek kar do na plzzz.


Manik: Ok he picked up his guitar and started playing it.

After sometime he stopped and then said to her: Ab dekho tumhara teddy bilkul sahi hoga.


Nandini again looked at her teddy and shouted in joy: Yipeee mera teddy thek ho gya yooohooo.


She placed that teddy on his bed and came near him and kissed him on his cheeks.

Flashback End


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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww

soo cuteee

lots of flashbacksss


cavya too

soo adorablee


cntnue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Beautiful

I m in love wih these cute cute ppics


Awesone chapter

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please update soon really looking forward to it pretty please update regular if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update..
It was damn cute...
nandu has only one bodyguard thts manik..
Manik was soo happy tht nandu nandu remembered him..
Flashbacks were awesome..
Pics were soo cute..
Cant wait for nxt update...
Luved it..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Sooo cute nandu

Lovely story

Awsmmm flash back

Every pic sooo cute

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww!
I'm in love with the flashback scenes!

They were so adorable

Well written !


Pictures Were perfect

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story is the cutest
Loving ur story
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
So cute and adorable
Manik is nandini's bodyguard
Manik was so happy that Nandini remembers him
Flashbacks were cute
The images were aww
Update soon

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