Twinj 4S || TuM SirF MERE Ho.!!! Shot 4(last part) pg 9

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Tum Sirf Mere Ho

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"Divorce papers !!!!... Kunj mujhse talaak chahata hai.. Wo mujhse itna naraz hai uss baat ko lekar jo wo mujhese durr hona chahata hai...Babaji ye kya ho raha hai... Nai babaji aisa anarth mat karo... ", Twinkle stammered as a teardrops rolled down from her eyes... Her whole body ws numbed as her legs gave up and she dashed on the floor... Everything around her blackedout... She ws drowning.. But only one face she cud see.. " Kunj ", she gasped... " Meri ek galti ki itni badi sazza..", she thot...as her throat ws all choked unable to form words.., The whole night Twinkle was sobbing clutching her dupatta in her mouth , so tht Kunj cud sleep peacefully... Tht day she felt tht she has lost him forever and with him she had lost herself also...
Next Day, Twinkle got up early, she had nt slept and her eyes wer all red.. "kya hua puttar ?", Bebe asked feeling concerned at her look... " Kuch nai Bebe, bas thik nai lagg raha ", Twinkle said and took to work.. Bebe checked her.. She ws having slight fever, and she advised her to rest.. Alarm hit 7 and Kunj ws up.. Rubbing his eyes, he looked at the bed, which he does everytym whenever he gets up or goes to sleep , to see if Twinkle is ok and sleeping peacefully... "Kya baat hai, Syappa Queen aaj mujhse pehle uth gai ?", he smirked and raised his eyebrow...typical Kunj...
Kunj came out of the shower folding his sleeves and ws amazed to see his breakfast already on the table.. " Phir shuru ho gaya iska maska lagna ", he smirked as he ws enjoying all the attention he ws getting from his wife... He relished on the amazing breakfast whn Twinkle walked in.. Without making any eye contact with Kunj , she went towards the wardrobe and strtd arranging clothes.. Kunj watched her and rolled his eyes... " Aaj late hoga ghar anneko, intezar mat kar.. Khana kha le... ", he said and strted packing his bag, he ws actually waiting for her to reply... " Thik hai ", she said and walked out of the room... Kunj turned and sighed.. " Ek mauka nai chodti ye ladki irtitate karneka, matlab itna attitude bas thik e bol k nikal li.. Aaj patni banneka daura nai pada shayad "..
Everyone wer on the dinning table and Kunj was leaving for college...Twinkle came running towards him.." Tumhara Tiffin ", she said.. Kunj happened to see her eyes, he found thm dull, red,slightly swollen ... He placed his hand on her cheek and ws abt to ask her... Jus thn Leela came running... " Twinkle.. Twinkle.. wo..", she gasped... Twinkle ws shocked to see her mom so tensed... " Twinkle wo Karanvir ... Karanvir wapas aa gaya ", Leela said and smiled at her...Tiffin wich Twinkle ws holding dashed on the floor... Her eyes sparkled with tears and a smiled stretched on her face... Everyone looked at Twinkle as she almost ran outside... Kunj, Leela, Bebe and Usha followed ..
In the Bright sunshine, his Aviators sparkled.. His hughly built body and his lengthy figure casted a long shadow on the ground... Wind blew but his hair had sharp army edges.. A perfect army uniform and Five gold stars on his chest glistening wildly having strength to make anyone blind.. and a darker green Jeep wich stood with him in Pride.. Holding a Army Duffle ws Mr. Karanvir Singh Lieutenant General Indian Army.. (kindly Imagine Gautam Rode or Karan Tacker )
Twinkle came running and ws abt to fall whn Karanvir held her... " Twinkle !", Kunj exclaimed as he saw his Syappa Queen stumble and his hand reached for her... " Tu thik hai ", Karanvir asked.. Twinkle held her hand on her mouth in disbelief and moved away from him.. He smiled at her.. She smiled back with her teary eyes .. Evryone wer watching thm.. Kunj ws looking at Twinkle and thn at Karanvir with mouth slightly open.. " Leelaji , ye kon hai ?", Usha asked making a wierd shock face .. Leela with big teary smile " Ushajee , ye Karanvir hai.. Twinkle ka bachpan ka dost.. Hum Jalandhar me rehty thy, toh Karanvir humare sath e rehta tha... Bade hokar Army join karli..aur ek din pata chala ki usse goli lagi..tabse humne itne sare calls , msgs kiye but kuch khabar nai.. Lekin Waheguru ne meri sunn li..usse Sahi salamat bhejkar... Mera Karanvir ", glowing like a proud mother..Karanvir ws an orphan..raised by Leela.. Kunj listened silently and again starred at thm both..Twinkle kept starring at Karanvir..tears drooling down her eyes,. She jus cudn't control her emotions and she jus went and hugged him , madly crying ... " Kaha chale gaye thy tum ", she sobbed... Karanvir pressed his hand on her head.. Kunj eyes jus popped out and his fingers formed a fist.. His jaw muscle clenched at the sight.. Leela sensing the situation went to Twinkle, held her back and creased Karanvir's hair... " Puttar tu sahi salaamat aa gaya ".. Karanvir bent down and touched her feet.. Leela took him to introduce to evryone.. Twinkle ws looking at Karanvir with smile and Kunj ws looking at Twinkle with wide eyes... " Karanvir ye Twinkle ka Sasural hai.. ", leela said ...KV smiled back at Twinkle and gestured his hands in Namasty towards Bebe and Usha.. Leela introduced Evryone and she came near Kunj.. " KV, ye Kunj hai..Twinkle ka Pati..aur Kunj puttar ye Karanvir Twinkle ka bachpan ka dost ", Karanvir nd Kunj looked at each other... Karanvir gave a warm smile and raised his hand for a handshake but Kunj in return jus sidegrinned and shook hands with him., showing off his displeasure.. Kunj has never been like tht.. He never welcomed anyone with such displeasure ... But he did it today.. .. Coz it ws abt Twinkle nw.. His Wife...
" Mujhe late ho raha hai ", Kunj said looking at Twinkle... anticipating tht she'll run inside and get him his Tiffin.. But to add more to his displeasure she din moved..Her eyes were fixed on Karanvir... Kunj wanted to jerk her and get back her attention towards him but he decided otherwise and went away.. Leela asked Bebe to take Twinkle home so tht she cn spent some tym with Karanvir.. Bebe agreed...
In college, Kunj ws having a tuff day.. He ws not able to concentrate in any lectures... His mind kept flashing KV and Twinkles hug and his hand ws doodling 'TKS' on every notes... It ws lunch tym, Kunj ws hungry.. It had nver happened tht Kunj ever miss lunch and had eaten outside... Twinkle made sure he always eats homemade food.. Food which she makes.. But today he thot he'll have to manage with canteen food ,since his Syappa Queen forgot to giv him his Tiffin ... Kunj ws walking towards canteen whn he heard someone call him... He turned and here she ws, walking fast towards him, holding a Tiffin... A smile stretched on his face as he saw her, " She never forgets ", he mumbled.. Gasping.. " Tum Tiffin bhool gaye thy , ye lo "she said.. " Let me correct u , Tu mujhe Tiffin dena bhool gai thi .", Kunj and his sarcasms.. Hushhh.. But this tym Twinkle shocked him more whn she apologized for his accusation... Kunj din knw wat to reply.. " Abb sorry kyu bol rai hai.. ", he asked ... Before she cud say anything.. " Chal khana khane de.. Bht bhook lagi hai...", he said , sat on the platform and strted eating.. Twinkle starred at him being satisfied tht she reached on tym and her Kunj is having his lunch in peace... She ws abt to leave.. " Ruk, kaha jaa rai hai.. ?", he asked...before she says.. " Tune khana khaya ya mere Tiffin k chakkar me bhool gai ", he passed his Tiffin towards her.. " Nahi Kunj tum khao, me ghar jake kha lungi..", she said and ws abt to turn whn Kunj placed a piece of morsel in front of her mouth... She cudn't refuse.. She ate with a smile .. " Kunj tum mujhse talaak kyu chahaty ho.. Agar durr hona chahaty ho to itni parvah kyu karty ho.. Mujhe nai hona tumse durr.. Maat karo na ye sab ", she cried in her mind..as her eyes moistened... Twinkle took the last morsel and went to feed it to Kunj whn Karanvir grabed her wrist and she accidentally feed him.. Kunj glarred at him and Twinkle smiled back at him.. " Hey , kitna wait karwayegi.. ", Karanvir exclaimed smiling.. " Karanvir, Tum Kunj se mile na sube?", she pointed at Kunj.. Karanvir smiled at Kunj .. " Hey , Kunj.. I liked ur college.. Aacha hai .. Yaha aake mera b mann kar ra hai join karneka ", he giggled.. Twinkle smiled and Kunj jus moved his head with a plastic smile... " College tak thik hai .. ", Kunj mumbled... " Twinkle chal gurudware jana hai ", he said , grabbed her wrist and took her away.. Twinkle looked at Kunj and Kunj looked at their hands and thn at Twinkle... Twinkle saw a sad look ok Kunj's face and ws abt to free her hand , rite thn she saw Maya calling Kunj ... She felt the prick and she silently walked away... Kunj kept looking at her... His senses were numbed for a moment... " Kunj chalo , lecture k liye late ho ra hai. ", Maya called... Kunj ws nt listening... His eyes fixed on the passage frm wer Karanvir took Twinkle away frm him...

To be continued...
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Sherni_Jerry thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing TS
interesting
Loved it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

Amazing TS
interesting
Loved it
pls continue soon


Thanks Jerry...
Jus so badly want Kunj's jealousy track...
Pacifying 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey.. Awesome one.
Jealous Kunj😆😆..just want to look his jealous face..

Plz continue soon.. Poor TwiNj
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. dear
very nice 😊
just loved it 😃
kunj jealous aww..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am loving jealous kunj..😳
Awesome..please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update. Loved it.
i liked Jealousy kunj 😉 continue soon please.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story yar... I want to say that more than cvs u know the mindset of twinj fans... Really I want to see the jealous kunj... Still not happen in the serial... It looks cute when a boy feels jealous than a girl... Awesome writer u r... U made me a big fan of u... Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
I love both Gautam Rode and Karan Tacker! Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Awesome awesome.
I loved it!!
It was pretty and Lovely.
update soon.

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