Twinj 4S || TuM SirF MERE Ho.!!! Shot 4(last part) pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
It was a lovely update. Totally awesome.
I'm so happy that kunj is jealous!!!!
Would love to see what happens next and what KaYa have planned. Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Uff. ...so interesting.
I am loving KV, he is just so cool. I like how you have portrayed him.
Excellent
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
loved it dear
kunj is jealous
aww so cute
pls continue soon
sry for the late comment
love u sonal
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
wow awesome update dear
i loved it very much
jealous kunj is a treat to watch
KV is an awesome banda
bechari twinkle she isn't getting any clue why kunj is behaving like this
iam really excited to see how maya and KZ bring twinj closer
plzzz do continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
this is really amazing! wish we had this kinda jealously track on show!! :D :D fab!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
OMG this is soo exciting..
Hyyy kunj wo bhi jealous ..loved it .
Sonal m realy very excited for next that what the both are going to doo..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
ooohooo gogo didi😎...kitni cute haina hamari twinj...😳😳😳
wonderful job👏👏👏..meri gogo didi😳😳
cutie kahaani😳😳...jealous kunj😳😳...kitna acha lag raha hai
kunj ko issi tarah jealous rakhna😆😆
poor twinky😔...divorce ke baare me sochkar tedap raha hai😭
didi,jaldi sab kuch theek kar dena ...plzz😃😃
karanvir bhi hai kamaal ki cheez👍🏼...afterall army ki property hai😆😆
kv aur maya ne haath milaya...wah..wah👏👏⭐️
continuesooon😃😃
sry 4 late comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Part 3

Next day..Kunj ws in College but his mind ws at Home.. He cudn't help but think abt his Syappa Queen.. And Karanvir offcourse.. He kept convincing himself tht they r jus friends and nothing more.. But all of their encounters keep haunting him every second.. Karanvir spoilt his Sunday...he cudn't spent tym with Twinkle...which made him even more Cranky...Lecture after Lecture. As tym passed he cudn't concentrate in any of thm.. He filled his books with TKS.. ENCLOSED IN a Heart.. He din knw how his fingers kept drawing it.. " Kunj, tum yehi ho na ??", Maya asked... She was watching him since 1st lecture.. And she knew he ws lost in Twinkle land.. Trying as if he wer a Knight saving his princess Twinkle frm the Devil..Karanvir... She giggled looking at him... She ws on chat with Karanvir.. And giving him all the details of Kunj.. On the other hand.., at home, Karanvir kept company wit. Twinkle..but Twinkle ws not in any mood for talking.. Only one question ws roaming in her.head.. " Y Kunj wanna Divorce her ?".., she kept hissing to herself...
Kunj came early... It ws getting impossible for him to braethe ther in college..so he came back home in afternoon itself... He.came to his room.and looked for Twinkle.. " Twinkle kidar hai ?, Karanvir k sath gai hogi kidar... ", he.huffed..Her.dupatta ws lying on the bed.. He grabbed it, rolled.it and threw.it in anger... " Kunj, ye kya kar.rae ho ?", Twinkle said angrily as the ball of dupatta hit her face.. He turned to look at her... " Kidar thi tu ?... Gharpe per tikty nai hai tere,. ", kunj went and.grabbed her by shoulders... He intensely starred.at her... " Kunj , ... ", she ws abt.to say.something... " Shhh... Koi bahana mat de.. Sab janta hu me.. ", he said clenching his jaw... " Kunj bahar jao ", Twinkle said jerking his hands and turning around... " Kyu jau bahar,. Mera kamra hai. Nai jaunga.", he again held her hand and pulled towards him... He ws angry.. "Aaahhh,.", Twinkle shouted.. Kunj immediately left her listening to this... " Mujhe change karna hai Kunj, Bahar jao ", she ws giving warning this tym... Her.words hit him in head as he moved back and looked at her... She ws drapped in a towel and her.hair wer wet and water ws still dripping frm it... She ws holding tht dupatta on her chest...he looked at her.frm top to bottom... holding his breathe... And whn she jerked himm.he gave out a gasp... He lowered his eyes and silently walked out...she immediately locked the door..
" Mera iss tarah se Kunj k samne janeka bhi koi fyada nai hua... Wo mujhe bilkul pasand nai karta uska ek kadam bhi meri taraf nai bada..", Twinkle thot as she sat on the floor clutching the dupatta and.sobbed... Kunj ws standing outside leaning on the pillar... Starring at the their.door... He ws not in his senses.. He had completely lost thm whn he saw his wife all wet draped in a towel... His whole body ws burning and he only knws hw he msut hav controlled tht series of desire wich strted hovering upon him whn his eyes checked her.frm.top to.bottom... His hand went on his chest under his shirt upon his heart and held it.. " Ye kya ho raha..Dil kyu itna zor.se dhadak raha hai.. ", he.said...
" Kunj !!!!", Maya ws walking towards him... As she.approached him.. her.feet got entangled in the carpet and she ws abt to fall whn Kunj held her.. And exactly at the moment Twinkle opened the.door... She saw Kunj holding Maya.. And. ...she.strted.burninh with anger... " Maya, tu.tthik hai... " kunj asked making her stand.. " Haa, actually pata nai kaise carpet pe per atak gaya.. " she said... " Oh. No problem.. Bata kaise aana hua ?", Kunj.asked... " Actually mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni hai ", Maya turned and looked at Twinkle... Twinkle ws watching thm ..silently... As Maya smileed at Twinkle , Twinkle jus gave her a side smile and walked away.. Off course Twinkle ws jealous... Maya smirked.. This ws all planned .. Maya cautiously text KV,. "A thumbs up.. And nw ur turn... "...
After abt half and hour Kunj and Maya came down... Twinkle ws in kitchen chopping vegetables.. She saw thm coming down smiling at each.other... Anger filled up in her eyes..and vegetables had to obviously bear iit...she strted cutting thm haphazardly strring at Maya... KV came in with a big.card in.his hand... And saw Twinkle doing.some stupid stuff in her jealousy... " Aaahhh , ", Twinkle shouted... She cut her.finger and blooded strted dropping frm her finger... Kunj and Karanvir both saw her and.ran towards her,. Obviously KV.reached before Kunj..held her finger , removed his handkerchief and pressed tightly on her finger.to stopp the blood.. He places on hand on her face and wiped the tears...Kunj.stopped as he saw KV..comforting Twinkle... " Tera dhyan kidar hai.. Ek kam bhi nai.kar.sakti thik se...", Kunj shouted amd angrily walked towards Twinkle.. Took her hand frm KV.. He removed KV's handkerchief and took her finger in.his mouth to stopp the blood... A sharp shiver ran.down Twinkle as her finger touched his lips...and his tongue healing her.wound and her.blood mixing into his saliva... Maya And KV .looked at each other .and shared a smile... Der plan ws working... KV.saw a tinge of smile on Twinkle's face as she ws starring at Kunj...
".Ye kya ho raha hai ..itna hungama..", Bebe asked.. Twinkle immediately took down her hand frm Kunj... " Aare.Karanvir aur Maya tum dono.yaha ? Koi kaam tha..? " , Bebe.asked... KV went to Bebe and.touched her feet... Even Maya did the same... " Bebe, actually me aaj sham ki Party ka Invitation dene aaya tha.., but aaya tabhi deka ki Twinkle ne kam karty waqt apni ungli kaat li.. Bas hum uski help kar rae thy ", he said.. Bebe smiled at KV.. " Koi nai, kitchen me ye sab hota renda hai.. Waise kis khushi ki party hai ??", Bebe asked.. " Actually me kal wapas jaa raha hu.. Toh socha apny doston k sath thoda aacha waqt gujaru... Aap sab bhi bht special hai.. Meri Twinkle ki family ho.. Isiliye ye invitation ", KV handed the invitation to Bebe.. " Hum jaroor aayenge ", Bebe took the invitation... " Haa KV, hum jaroor aayenge.. Akhir (MERI BIWI ) k khass bachpan k dost ki party hai.. ", Kunj said with obvious anger in his eyes.for KV calling his wife as Meri Twinkle... Twinkle smiled at KV... KV went to Maya and ask her also to join in for the party.. And she happily agreed.. Agree toh hona e tha na.. Aakhir Plan jo hai..
Kunj ws getting ready for the party.. He ws dressed in.all black suit... Contrasting his complexion... Twinkle came in completing her kitchen work.. As she opened the door , she saw Kunj getting ready.. Her husband ws looking smacking hot... She ws drooling on him.. Whn Kunj noticed her..and she flickered her eyes.. " Kya hua, babaji ko thank you bol rai hai.. Jo tujhe itna handsome pati diya hai " he said teasing her... If this divorce thing had nt exsisted she wud hav jus given him.a perfect answer.. But today she jus smiled at him...and went in for changing... " Kunj , mujhe tym lagega , tum jao..me aati hu... ", she said took her dress out and walked in to change... " Me tera bahar wait kar raha hu", he said and walked out.. She starred at him., y hasn't he given her the lecture abt hw much tym sje takes for getting ready today... She thot.. Mayb.. He ws not interested in her anymore so y to waste energy and tym on her... Tears again pooled in her eyes... Kunj ws waiting outside... " Me kyu jau pehle.. ? Hum husband wife hai... Kisi bhi party me sath me jayenge.. ", he thot to himself... Abt 20 mins later, Twinkle came out.. KuNj ws on his phone talking to someone.. and his eyes went on her... Drop dead gorgeous
TWINKLE KUNJ SARNA... ddraped in the magical black sari.. Exposing her alluring waist.. with a thin band of golden kamarband... Her cut sleeves blouse sexying up her long slender arms.. Her long neck held only her mangalsutra.. She walked towards him... " Chale ?" she said.. Kunj.closed his open mouth and walked behind her... She took her hair to one side.. Exposing her back.. Her blouse ws deep cut and perfectly traced the outline of her scapulas.. , later meeting into jus two hooks.. Kunj Flickred his eyes.. Today Twinkle ws making him mad... First in.towel and nw in this most sexy sari...
They reached Taneja Manson... The hall ws beautifully decorated ... Only soft dtinks wer served at the counter... Everyone ws der frm both the families.. Twinkle and KV other friends.. KV''s frm.army.. . Kunj.and Twinkle came in together.. Everyone looked at him... They wer the most PERFECT NEW COUPLE OF AMRITSAR... A VERY DEADLY COMBINATION of GORGEOUS BEAUTIFUL WIFE AND SMART HANDSOME HUSBAND... KV went and welcomed thm.. He.shook hands with.Kunj.and went and Hug Twinkle... As he hugged Twinkle, he placed hus hand on her back... Kunj eyes went der.. And he looked at KV with anger for touching his wife... He felt like killing him thn and der.. But he had to control his anger ... Maya too came over and hugged Twinkle and complimented her.. Kunj gave her a smile.. " Maya ur looking gorgeous today ", Kunj said hugging her.. Twinkle looked at thm.. " Mujhe ek nazar bhar k dekha b nai Kunj ne.. Itni nafraat karty ho mujhse.. ", she thot and walked away... Later KV and Maya Shook hands with a Hi5...
After.abt.an hour all the older ppl went to garden.area for dinner and all.youngsters wer still in.the hall for dance.. " Plan B shuru , KV.said to Maya.. " Yes .. Lets Dance ", she said... Twinkle ws talking to her friends and also at the.same tym checking on.Kunj... Kunj.ws a.counter with his drink... Grls wer trying to hit on him..even after.knwing tht.he.ws married... Music strted..". Everyone grab ur partners and on the dance floor "..., KV announced.. Kunj smiled and.walked towards Twinkle... Jus thn KV came and aksed Twinkle for dance... Twinkle nodded her.head in yes... Kunj.got numbed and stood der..watching KV take Twinkle's hand ... Twinkle looked at Kunj...whn Maya jerked Kunj and asked him for dance.. Twinkle turning to Kunj and Kunj turning to look at Maya.. Ws not jus a.coincidence.. It ws all.a plan by our two Cuties..
Music began... And evryone grooved.. Kunj continuously eyeed Twinkle... The music ws to ball dance... KV held Twinkle's one hand and.wrap other.hand around her..placing it.on her bare waist... Kunj clenched at the site.. His.eyes.nw.all red... Maya.ws making him.Dance but.somehw his body.ws stiff... Twinkle too looked over and Saw Maya and Kunj.dancing... making her more jaelous.. And her.eyes.filling up with anger.. whn she saw Kunj.hand on Maya's back... As the music advanced... The couple twirling their partners exchanging thm...And.nw.Maya nad KV.and Twinkle and Kunj... Maya Kav.first.gave each other a Hi5 and thn giggled looking at Twinkle and Kunj.. As Twinkle joined Kunj.. Her hand immediately grabed his shoulders and moved to his neck... His hand immediately went.on.her waist digging his fingers in get skin and pushing her.more.closer to him... The other hand interlocked...tightly.. They looked at each other... There ws this.Tashan in.der look... Both of thm.burning in.anger ... AngeR of Possession.. ..Anger of Passion... Anger of Lust ...and Anger of Love..

To be continued...

Guys.its getting too long... First i thot of 2 shots..thn i thot of 3 shots...nw probably 4.shots...🤣
I'll update soon... The next.part...,
Be ready to Handle the Hotness coming ur.way...in next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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killer update gogo didi👏👏⭐️
ohhh gosh...both r burning in jealousy😆😆...i want see their face when they get to know maya and kv planned this together😆😆
ohh didi ...twinkle in a black sari...it is a long awaited dream..i hope she wears a black sari in the show too...
kunj in black as always is killer😳😳
loved kunjs little gesture at the kitchen😳😳
gogo didi...u can make it 10 shot if u wish...i wudnt mind😉😉
continue sooon😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahadev07

killer update gogo didi👏👏⭐️

ohhh gosh...both r burning in jealousy😆😆...i want see their face when they get to know maya and kv planned this together😆😆
ohh didi ...twinkle in a black sari...it is a long awaited dream..i hope she wears a black sari in the show too...
kunj in black as always is killer😳😳
loved kunjs little gesture at the kitchen😳😳
gogo didi...u can make it 10 shot if u wish...i wudnt mind😉😉
continue sooon😊


Thanks dear... I m glad u liking it... Actually our TEI had gone up to Yuvi nw... I am running late... But i wanted an hardcore jealousy track... Our CV's din giv us... So jus pacifying myself...

Part 4 will b a last one and hopefully the best one..

Tashan added with Ishq... Killer combination...

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