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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 9 years ago

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mahima

@Mahiima16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Pro 🤗
This was something incredibly beautiful ❤️
You always come up with unique and beautiful ideas! I really loved this SuArDi OS!! 👏 ❤️

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Okay, you have all the right to shoot me considering that o had reserved even before your PM and am commenting now!

But I got so caught up with enjoying those little moemts of liberty after a week and a half of assignments, it slipped out of my mind.

Anyway, enough with my useless ranting...should I squish you into liquid jelly, now?😆 (Remember?)

This was so beautifully written Proteeti, I absolutely loved it.

It was amazing how you showed the three of them together, with no traces of their past problems, and the little after-exile episode.

I have often told you that you are an amazing writer, and this OS proved that yet again.

Also, the last part was brilliantly written, and each character's personality shone out even though the story was short.

Love your work, and keep writing more... 😳

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely os! Very well written. Beautifully shown the bonding between SuArDi. Loved this to the core. ❤️

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

WOw what a spell bounding OS 👏👏

loved it a lot Chotti😃😃

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

@KURT15

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful OS Proteeti. The descriptions were very nice. 👏

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amritat

@amritat

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

This is probably the first OS of yours I am reading n must say...it is great.

I have read many OSs on Ardi but few that shows Arjun, Subhadra n Draupadi in such an amazing collaboration with one another...

No pain..no tragedy...no malice...maybe this is how some women used to live in harmony in a polygamous environment...

Beautiful...😊

Your writing is not overtly poetic... n yet not too simplistic...Just the right quantity of poetic touch mixed appropriately with simple language...In short...I LOVED it.

Keep up the great work...😛

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Such A Beautiful OS Choti..!! 👏

You have so beautifully described the events that I can visualize them easily.❤️

Thanx For Pm. Keep Writing.

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saishree

@Saishree97

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Oh so beautifully written pro!! Loved it to the core..the mutual understanding between them was so nice...one again i must say..loved it!!

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

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beautiful os proteeti
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm

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