SuArDi OS: The Midnight Moons - Page 4

Originally posted by: amritat

This is probably the first OS of yours I am reading n must say...it is great.

I have read many OSs on Ardi but few that shows Arjun, Subhadra n Draupadi in such an amazing collaboration with one another...

No pain..no tragedy...no malice...maybe this is how some women used to live in harmony in a polygamous environment...

Beautiful...😊

Your writing is not overtly poetic... n yet not too simplistic...Just the right quantity of poetic touch mixed appropriately with simple language...In short...I LOVED it.

Keep up the great work...😛

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Such A Beautiful OS Choti..!! 👏

You have so beautifully described the events that I can visualize them easily.❤️

Thanx For Pm. Keep Writing.

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

Oh so beautifully written pro!! Loved it to the core..the mutual understanding between them was so nice...one again i must say..loved it!!

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

beautiful os proteeti
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Beautiful...you always come up with a unique and beautiful concept of stories.

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

AWESOME !!!!! PRO!!

LOVED IT!👏

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Beautiful OS 😊

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Very beautiful os pro

Loved it a lot

The dancing lessons were really pretty good

Keep writing more

Thanks for pm

-Manu