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Good Morning everyone!!

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Adultery & Amen

"What was that?" asked a startled R&B

Sam had texted unspeakable things about Chachi to Tan, so he was clued in

"Forget it boss" Tan hinted, with a disappointed look

"Chhod beta" he patted Sam, hugged her, and pulled her closer, Sam began to cry again

"Shhh" Tan cooed

II sat lifeless, half the breakfast was uneaten, Manya was gone

she had basically "told off" Chachi

WELL DESERVED!!!
I ALMOST LIKE HER NOW

"II?" R&B coaxed

"Chachi... just went bat shit crazy" II said calmly in a state she wasnt feeling on the inside

"Why?" R&B asked angrily

"She said Ma deserved Dad having an affair because she cared more for us than Dad" Sam gasped at the end of that

"f**k!!!" Tan groaned

R&B, did not say a word, he went up with Lasya, on his shoulder

"Hum chalte hain Tan" Sam begged

Ranjan walked in... horrified at seeing Sam crying

"Chaliye jee, sabne poocha Harish di woti kithe" "Abhi sab changa ho gaya" he said

"Sam betaaa" he sat down by her "Kee hoya?"

"Is se achha aati hi nahi Dad" Sam said

"Kya hua beta?" he asked

"She is toxic, she is unable to say anything without spreading her toxicity" Sam said

"Tan... tu bhi tha?" Ranjan asked confused

"Chaddo... Dad" Tan got up "Ek beer ho jaaye?" he asked

Mahavir came in wondering why no one ate, he began refilling only to see the food still sat there

"Chal beta kuch khila" Tan said cheerfully "Biwi to khilayegi nahi, tu hi khila de"

"Sam?" Ranjan's hand trembled...

"Dad weve been through enough... we are finding lil nuggets of happiness in a huge empty desert...
we dont need her to drive up with 100s of sand trucks onad dump it all off on us"

"she feels for Ma puttar... she was saying Bhabhiji ne hafte bhar ki party kar dena tha" Ranjan smiled

"She is a pathological liar" Sam screamed

Ranjan was startled

II was helping Mahavir refill, and serve Tan, she served Ranjan and took a plate up

R&B stood in the balcony speaking on the intercom

"Agar main ghar par hoon, to please unko andar nahi bhejiye"

II didnt have to ask to know who the "unko" was

She walked over and hugged him tightly

"Whats this for?"

"Not reading a book in the balcony?" she lied sniffling

He hugged her back

"Nobody deserves an adulterous spouse II!!!" he said clearing his throat, as emotion threatened to mute the audio

"I agree" "Kandipa (for sure) "Bilqul" she hugged him tighter... and felt him cringe
He cringed under the feelings of shame and ignominy because of Ranjan's act FIVE FRICKING years ago.

"Ayyo" she cried softly... "What can I do to make it better for u?" she pleaded

"Not a thing" he said softly... agonized

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


The Saturday morphed from a joyous, family get together to a torn shredded pattern

manya never came out of her room, Nandu ate in the theatre

Tan came up to the balcony brought Ranjan with him

Sam took a nap on R&B and II's bed,
II sat by Lasya as she napped on the sun room bed

By 4 every one left, II wanted R&B to go with her and watch her sing
She didnt want to leave him alone, Tan refused to send him
R&B and Ranjan got dragged for poker

Sam took Manya to emporio

She went to paattu class

And went to Amma's texted R&B atleast a dozen times between 4 and 7 PM


Amma thought something was wrong

She was finishing up writing chapter 11, her last contribution for the NCERT book

II heaved and panted and sighed as she sat down
As usual she she had filled up a picnic basket with Appa's fave paranthas and moong dal halwa and rasmalai

"Edukku dee?" Amma scolded

"amma will u make rasam for me?" II asked

Amma kissed her head

"beans curry pannatuma?" she asked

II nodded

"What happened?" Amma asked

II shook her head

"where is Appa?"

"Ayyo, printer wont print, u know him nenacha neruppla... (if he thinks of something he has to do it), his boarding pass"

"WHERE is he going?"

"Bombay for some RBI Summit" Amma said wearily

"Oh... u come to MM no?" II offered

"How can I bring Periappa?" Amma argued

"WHY NOT?" II asked

"Appa already told Janaki Athai's husband" Amma said unenthusiastically


"Yaar kaal la vizha koodadu nenaipomo kadavul ava kaal la vizha veppan, ava moonjiya paaka veppan"
(who ever we pray we shudnt be obligated to, who ever we pray, we shudnt see,
God will ensure we beg for such people's help and see such people" Amma said getting beans out of the frig

"amen" whispered II

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The last kines...so bloody true !!!
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heart touching!!
"Nobody deserves an adulterous spouse II!!!"

This line takes there relationship to new heights...
Sharing ur utmost fears is wht a companionship is all bout.
And they hav reached there...
Love them
And II give dude one more tight wala hug from my behalf also
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just love the way you have written this update loved the ii and dude scene
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Chalo Rb has sounded chachis death knell..she won't be allowed to enter as long as Rb is around. But Ranjan continues to live in his own paradise where everything is fine...he needs to be shaken out of his dream and made to realize that what he knows deep down, he needs to acknowledge it as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
A nice happy day turned painful for everyone...and Dude took action...👏
He should have banned her entry forever...but I loved the way she tried to comfort . Family's support helps a lot and once more I can say bhallas are lucky to have Tan as SIL and II as DIL. I really hope Manya finds her happiness with Makarand soon.

Thanks for the update Nish...😊

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