MaNan FS TOM AND JERRY BUT WITH LOVE EPILOGUE /PG 51 (25 MARCH) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
intersting and manan on tom and jerry...
u knw what i love jerry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
interesting

so no fab 5

but manan is thr n thr tom n jerry fight


waiting waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
interesting concept its lyk love at first fight waiting update soon take care ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

CHAPTER 1:

Manik and nandini grew up and along with then their fighting's also grew bigger. Now they were studying business management degree course in the same college.

It was morning 10.00 AM in the morning but one lazy head was still sleeping and digging his face in the pillow to hide him from the sunrays. A tall man of early 40's entered inside his room and saw his one and only son sleeping and he went and throwed water on his sons face and the cute little boy woke up with a jerk and sat on the bed and rubbed his eyes.

Boy: what is this dad yehi koyi tarika hey kya utaneka

Raj: manik r u still sleeping and at least learn from nandini she is younger than u but see she woke up earlier than u and doing her regular work

M: wht dad early morning only u started class

Raj: class nahi truth hey

M: fine I am up are you happy

Raj: better

Raj went out from his room and his mom Nyonika entered with a glass full of milk for her ladla son. Manik made a grumpy face to which Nyonika smiled

M: mom I don't want it today plzz

Ny: no beta see u have to have it otherwise u will be weak and u need strength na

Manik smiled for his mothers care and took the glass and drank it in one go by closing his nose. After finishing it he rubbed his mouth like a baby and gave the glass to Nyonika. Nyonika left from there happily

Manik came to his balcony and saw the balcony opposite his house which was nandini room balcony. He checked upon her and found her still sleeping. He was used to this as she woke up early and gives his father a reason to fire on him for being irregular and she again goes to bed later.

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Both manik and nandini families were good friends and nandini father love manik a lot whereas manik father love nandini a lot and manik is always in the good boy list of nandini mother. Manik mother too loves nandini a lot but not more than manik.

Manik freshened quickly and went to nandini house.

M: good morning aunty

Manik went and side hugged sheela(nandini mom) to which she responded with motherly affection.

Sh: good morning beta

M: kya kar rahi hu

Sh: kuch anhi bas khanna prepare kar rahi hu

M: hoo uncle kaha hey

Voice: I am here

Manik turned around and saw maan( nandini dad) approaching towards them and he went and took blessings from him (buttering him).

Ma: mera manik toh aaj jaldi ut gaya

M: haa papa hey na voh uta diya

Sh: did u have ur breakfast??

M: nahi aunty bas abhi doodh piya tha

Ma: good boy aaj kal kaun ddodh peeta hey

M: uncle where is nandu???

Sh: vo toh room mey kuch kaam kar raha hey

M: nahi aunty she is sleeping see I am good I woke earlier than her

Sh: really let me check

Manik excused himself from there and went to his room to check the scene from his room in live.

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Sheela reached nandini room and found nandini sleeping peacefully and she woke nandini.

N: mom please let me sleep na

Sh: no how much time will u sleep now get up

N: mom bus todhi der aur

Sh: nahi manik se seeko roj doodh pete hey and woke up earlier than u on Sunday also

Now nandini understood it was the plan of manik to make her get scoldings from her mother.

Nandini woke up and decided to take panga from manik in his weak point i.e. studies as their results are coming tomorrow and manik is so weak in studies.







so here is the update

hope u all like it

next part manan fighting face to face

many more to come

romance fighting

this part i want to show all the interactions between the famiies

so it was less of manan

do tell ur views

spread love

prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome update...
Luved it 2 core...
Plz continue asap...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Loved the update
It was awesome
Update next part soonish...
Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Loved it totally...😛
Ek dam nya concept hain...!!!
Cont soon...😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
awesome...
loved it...

jom and jerry fight...

next face to face...

wow so excited...

continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
MANAN are so...cute...

nice update...

continue soon...

👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Awesome update. Manan's and their families intro was beautifully penned. Manan got successful in making each other getting scolded.totally an blissful update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊

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