MaNan FS TOM AND JERRY BUT WITH LOVE EPILOGUE /PG 51 (25 MARCH)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi friends its prathyusha again and i am up with an four slot
i think many of u love tom and jerry na
i thought of writing a tom and jerry version of manan
i hope u guys will like it

GLIMPSE

Manik and nandini are neighbors from childhood but they don't like each other and their battle started from childhood only.

Manik was eight years whereas nandini was also eight but 3 months younger than manik when they met each other for first time. Their zagada started from that age only

Manik was playing cricket with his friends but our chotusa nandini went and took ball from manik and she bowled and as a result manik lost the game.

M: y did u came in middle if u dint come then I would have wined easily

N: but I wanted to ball

Manik got angry and beat nandini lightly due to which she started to cry and left for the house.

Manik played for some more time and came home and found his father raj very angry on him. it dint take him to find out the reason behind his anger as he saw nandini beside him and what he guessed was right nandini complained about him to his father raj who loves nandini very much.

Raj beat manik (to say just a light slap) for behaving rudely with her and nandini was very happy as her ego satisfied and now it was time for the next attack from manik.

Like this entire their childhood they used to fight with each other. But the main thing is they cant live without each other. When nandini used to go for holiday's manik used to miss her a lot and waits for her arrival and same is the case with nandini. Although they were in same class they used to fight a lot

What will happen when they go to college??

Will they be able to find out the feelings for each other??




this FS contains only of manan

no Fab 5 or music

it was a story of two lovers who were in love from childhood

but dint realize their feelings for each other

what happens when they realize

will they realize before its too late???

it wont be a sad one

it will be on happy note

do say ur views

love u all

prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX


GLIMPSE--UP

CHAPTER 1C

chapter 2 A-page 23


CHAPTER 2 B


Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i liked it
want to read more
continue soon and pm me
will be waiting
---SIMRA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its interesting . would love to read more . cont soon
plz pm me when u update. buddy me . I am not able to send buddy request
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue..awww they both r soo adorable.. update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue. Seems to be an interesting story. Continue soon.thanks for pm.wow manan as tom and jerry😆.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Lovely concept... Continue soon... Manan fighting like Tom and jerry ... Waiting for your update eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story. ...pls pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz continue... i luv it..

I love both tom manik and jerry nandu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting...
Luved d glimpse...
Plz continue soon...
Take care... & keep writing...
Stay blessed...

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