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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay... Pehle toh

I know I should be studying right now...
And i also know many people are going to bash me for this...

Starting a new TS when I already have got a few pending one's...

But i swear I wanted to write this...

Idk if this topic has been written by anyone before
So if it is...
Please pardon me

I do not intend on stealing someone's ideas...

And before bashing... Coming up with hurtful abuses on how irregular and careless I am about my work...
I apologise in advance
And i would appreciate if you atleast read it

And haan..
Please try not to be more hurtful
I still have to give an exam tomorrow

So here is a small introduction...
Let me know if you like it...

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HE LOVED HER!
But failed to express it!

HE CARED FOR HER!
But couldn't show it!

HE NEEDED HER!
But he chose to hide it!

SHE WAS HIS LIFE!
But he couldn't make her believe it!



She still accepted him with all of it... Showered him with all the love and care she had...
She too knew that he loved her...
But sometimes just knowing is not enough
You need to show it... You need to express
You need an assurance from the other person

But she never got that...

She hid all her hurt and pain... Still never failed to love him selflessly...

But until when could she even hide it...
Untill when could she possibly burrow all her anguish...

And one fine day...
It happened

The thing which he dreaded the most...

SHE LEFT HIM!

One argument led to another...
He yelled
And she screamed back...

He was frustrated
She was tired

He was angry
She was hurt...

And the moment she decided to leave
He regretted every single thing...

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So what do you think about this story...
What will happen

Will he win her back

Or will he lose all his hopes

Will he finally be able to express his feelings...

Or will he let go...

Tell me if interested

...

Ps* before you barge on me asking for updates of different stories
Let me clear the schedule

More than friends
Life Changing Bet
My Gangster Lover
One Mistake

This will be the order for now

Uske bichme you will get updates of my Ts...

And it won't take long
Hopefully
As once my exams are done

I can spare time fot the updates

So yeah...
See you soon

Just two more papers to go😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heyy...
A new stry.
I think its gnna be
Aswm one
I thik its gnna a emotional
Ts..
I am interested..
But baki ff bhi update krna

Nd all the bst gor ur
xm

..

Pls continue
Waiting for nxt
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really liked the idea. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nw dat sounds intrstng
lukin frwd to it
update soon
ol d bst fr ur xms n thnks fr pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks For pm..Dear

Very very interesting concept. .

Looking forward to seeing it. .

Good luck for your exams. .

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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This wow! :D
What an introduction boss!!
Jaldi jaldi nipta na exams apne! I want iske updates jldi jldi ^.^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What is wrong with u
Dont take this as a bash but a suggestion for ur good
u should be studying rather than thinking about these shots
U said u have exams that is why u cannot concentrate on the main stories which r pending badly n here u r busy writing shots rather than concentrating on ur books

Well I must say u have lot of things going inside ur head and u really have a creative mind that is why u just show up anytime with some short story

Well this one is good I would love to read it but just concentrate on ur study rather than thinking about such stuff

May Allah bless u and all the best for ur exam and study well I know ur gonna rock it
Aur ha exam me syllabus ka hi likhna ye story ka koi part mat likh dena

Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice...interesting story
good start
would like to read more
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start!! Concept is new... Pls continue soon... I m desperately waiting for the life changing bet update... Sorry for bugging u up ...thanks for the pm... 😊 😊

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