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Posted: 17 years ago
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kya karein is dil ka
jismain bhara hai sirf dard
dard vo jo rulata hai har pal
nahi rah sakte hum is jhuthi duniya main bin uske[rt]
aise duniya ko chodne ka nahi hai hume dar
bas cahte hai kuch karna
is badal ko ek bar chakhna
sish uthana hai garv se mata pita ka
phir joo cahe tu kar
kuch umedein hain is dil ki
joo hume pata hai nahi puri ho sakti
par phir bhi karna hai kuch alag
alag aisa,jisse mera hi naam ho sabki juba par
phir kya pata minjil khud aa jaye hume dhund kar[tats rt]


plz tell me how is it😃

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BinKuchKahe. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
its really sweet
good work! 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
really awesome poem........one can feel the pain in your heart........good work
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good job. really sweet... 😊
thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi !!!!
ur poem is tooooo gud.....keep it up...!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesum, welcum to the writer's family.....u can be a realyy gr8 riter,u know.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice poem dear..keep it up... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

awesum, welcum to the writer's family.....u can be a realyy gr8 riter,u know.

1stly thx a lot 4 ur ncouragement


well
i cant rite ny poem tat does not involve rt
i hav lot of such poem😃


n thx a lot 4 ur ncouragement
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow amazing poem thanks for sharing dear 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow asum poem...ere cumez another rajat wife lol

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