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sahib29 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Hey dear nice begninig 👏 👏

ur FF is so funny 😆 😆

i love rk nok jhok 😳

plese continue 😛

manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
I m sooooooooooooo sorry guys to keep on u waiting for a long time because my computer was

not ok so I am in an internet parlour..

And thnku soooooooooo much 4 ur comments I really liked them...

So hang on Here is th Part two....
THE PLAN..

ka started loving ro but ro was not cared about her..so she made a plan wid ra to make him

jealous ,So according 2 d plan she has to pay attention on ra more than ro so that he may

feel jealous..and she will show off that she has fallen in love wid ra...


So here it goes...

one day at office..
ro...ka meri file lado na ghar par hai plz...
ka...sir wo kya hai na mujhe ra sir ke sath bahar jana hai to plz aap khud kyun nahi le

aate..
ro...bahar jana hai??? par kahan??
ka...mai aapko nahi bata sakti..
ro...pehli baar maine kisi ko kisi kaam ke liye PLZ bola aur wo mana kar de aisa ho hi nahi

sakta..

(robbie follows them Ka and ra get into a resto and have coffee dare to see this ro is

angry)
at office again..
ro...(in his mind)ye ka meri secretory hokar ra ke sath bahar jaarahi hai..how dare she do

that??
ro...ka kahan e aarahi ho tum?? kahan gayi thi ra ke sath???
ka...sir ek baat btaiye aap mujhe..
ro...poochho kya poochhna hai..
ka...sir aap mujhe apne samne dekhna nahi chahte aur kisi aur ke sath dekh nahi sakte ..kya

chahte hain aap..wats ur prob??
ro...meri prob ye hai ki mai tumse...
ka...mujhse?? mujhse kya sir??
ro...ka mai tumse pyaar karta hun ..aur kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakta tumhe chahe wo mera

daffor frnd ra hi kyun na ho..
ka...sir I lov u too..par ke baat aapko mujhe promise karni hogi ki aap mujhse kabhi nahi

ladenge..
ro...ok!! mai tumse kabhi nahi ladunga.
ro...ek min...kahin ye sab drama tumne mujhe patane ke liye to nahi kiya na...
ka...I m sorry sir mere paas koi rasta hi nahi tha sir..
ro...iam very hurt tumne meri feelings ke sath mazak kiya.. mujhe ulloo banaya
ka...sir dekhiye aap mujhse phir lad rahe hain.
ro...haan!! ladunga .. zindagi bhar ladunga tumse
ka...to thik hai mai aapse shaadi hi nahi karungi..
ro... kya kaha tum mujhse shadi nahi karogi to phir mai phir se ria(his ex girl frnd) ko

pata lunga..
(by hearing this ka runs behind him to catch him and to beat him)


At sabharwal house..

Ro to his mom..
(de is not a vamp here..)
ro...mom mai aapse baat karna chahta hun ..maine apne liye ek ladki dekhi hai shadi karne ke

liye..
de...aur ro mai jaan sakti hun ki kaunse number ki ladki jisse tumne shaadi karne ka mann

banaya hai..
ro...mom im serious this time..
de...ya really jahan tak mujhe yaad hai tum Ishita.. rita ..garima ..in sab ke bare me bhi

serious the na..
ro... mom im not joking..
de...accha to is baar kis ladki ki kismat phoot rahi hai????
ro...mom ka ki??i mean wo ladki kasturi hai..jisse mai pyaar karne laga hun aur wo bhi mujhe

pyaar karti hai..
de...chalo mere sath..
ro... par mom hum kaha ja rahe hain..
de...ka ke ghar ..tumhara shagun lekar. agar tumhara dimag phir change ho gaya to mai ek

achhi bahu kho dungi..



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and thats all for 2nd part..
On part 3..
Read what happens wen ro and de reach ka's home ..what was d reaction of jp and kaushalya...
What drama did alka do... and wat happens wen kasturi gives birth to a baby boy..



thanks again 4 ur comments and plz comment on this part too.
I will be waiting ...

And krishi .. if d noke-jhoks of RoKa is overed than kasturi has no meaning..it will loose

its trps so noke-jhoks of RoKa is da jaan of the serial and my ff too



PARTH-----------------------------------
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Part 3....
Ro & de reached ka's house..
ro...mom i m soo nervous..
de...cumon son u r robbie sabharwal...why r u so nervous??
[door bell rings and alka opens da door]
Alka...haaye haaye... bauji....bauji..
bauji...ki hoya puttar ?? kyun chilla rahi hai..
alka...Ro aur usi mataji aayin hain..
bauji...kya?? accha jaa jp aur kaushalya ko bula la..
alka...bauji mujhe to lagta hai kasturi ne aisi galti ki hai iske karan devika ji khud yahan aayi hain..
bauji...ruk to jaa.. unhe ander to aane de..
alka...par bauji ,sochne wali baat hai ki koi to baat hogi na jo ki ro aur de ji yahan khud aye hain..
bauji...jaa pehle jp aur kaushalya ko bula la..


and then conversation continues...

jp...kya hua devika ji ?? ka se koi galti ho gayi kya??
de...dekhiye bhaisaab, aapki beti ne wo kaam kiya hai jo is sheher ki koi ladki nahi kar payi ..[then alka immediately said]
alka... dekha bauji is kasturi ne to humari naak katva di hai..
Ro...[silently in da ears of de] mom ye alka aunty yahan koi scene creat kare, jaldi se bole dijiye..
de...dekhiye..hum aap logon se kasturi ka rishta mangne aye hain mere bete ro ke liye..

[alka was shocked wid her mouth open; jp aur kaushalya agreed and ka marriedto ro ]

3years later......
[ka gave birth to a baby boy; ro took him in his arms and named him as ARYAN]
ro...ka aryan meri tarah rockstar banega..
ka...nahi ye businessman banega..
ro...rockstar banega..
ka...businessman banega..
ro...rockstar banega..
ka...businessman banega..
ro...rockstar
ka...businessman
ro...ka ye mera beta hai ye rock star hi banega..
ka...ise janam maine diya hai ye businessman hi banega
ro...ka meri baat maan jao ye meri tarah rockstar banega..
ka...nahi aap meri baat maan jaiye ye businessman banega..

[aryan became a popular rockstar and agud businessman too]


and they lived happily ever after..
and of course thier noke - jhoks never ended even wen they were old...




howz my ff plz comment


I will be waiting for yuor comments..

PARTH----------------------------------------------
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

ye kya ue ended it that but the ending was funny..😆 i cant sya pls continue soon but still write a next ff soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
sahib29 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Hey dear both parts are nice 👏

but yee kya tumne FF ka end bhi kar diya ...koi bhi romantic scene nahi post kiya 😆

but very funny ending 😆 tumhari nest FF ka wait karenge 😛

manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
wat a ff 😆
only 2 parts
but though i have 2 say tt it was a really nice 👏
i loved all the scence between rob/kas 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
thanku sooooooooooo much....
only ur replies made me to write this much...
and i promise I will post my next ff soon ...
but sorry to say taht it would not be very very soon bcoz i have to think of a different storyline...

And thanku thanku thanku thanku thanku thanku thanku thanku sooooooooooooooooooooooo much guys for ur replies




DAVIA..
Ur were so much encouraging and thanks for ur replies



PARTH---------------------------------
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
thanks parth for your lovely FF..waiting for next FF

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