my 1st ff : RoKa

Parth Garewal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heya guys....šŸ˜›
I am here wid my 1st ff ...
so here it goes...

Devika...de
robbie...ro
Kasturi...ka
raunak...ra

SCENE:- Kasturi is assigned to work as secretory of robbie ..Devika tells dis to robbie and he is shocked hearing that..Like dis-šŸ˜•šŸ¤¢

de...Ro maine ka ko tumhari secretory assign kiya hai..son she is very nice...she will take gud care of u and ur work..
ro...wat!!!! (he is making faces) no..no.. mom listen to me...
de...what ro? now u should concentret on ur career ok..
ro...but mom koi aur acchi ladki nahi hai kya?
de...ro mai acchi tarah janti hu ki tumhare liye acchi ladki ka matlab kya hai ..
(devika leaves 4m dere) (And ro is very angry wid ka)
Conversation between ro and ka,
ro...hey bhagwan tumne na jane meri mom par kya jaadu kar diya hai?
Ka...kya? mai?? ..par maine kya kiya hai sir...
ro...oh ho!! ab miss Sati savitri ji(to tease her) apne meri mom ko kya kaha ki meri mom ne tumhe meri secretory bana diya..
ka...wo mujhe pasand karti hain aur janti hai ki aapko mere alava koi handle nahi kar sakta...

than ra cums and a servant taking glass of milk for ro's dad.. but milk falls up to ra due to ro ....

ro...oh so sorry ra.. kasturi ne mujhe dhhakka de diya tha..(putiing all blame on ka )
ka...maine..maine apko dhakka diya sir ...
ro...aur nahi to kya! maine servant ko dhakka mara taki poora milk ra par gir jaye..
ka...haan aap ne hi dhakka mara hoga..
ro...dekho tum bhulo mat tum Mr.perfect se baat kar rahi ho..mijhse kabhi koi galti nahi hoti..got it..
ka...oh haan mai to bhul hi gayi thi ...galti to insaano se hoti hai gadhe (donkey) se nahi kyonki wo kuch karta hi nahi chillane(shouting)ke alava..
ro...you...I will kill u....
ra... bas bas!! bahut lad liye. office jao. mai change karke aata hun

RoKa in office..
Robbie flirting wid a girl employee

ro...dekho tum kitni khubsurat ho..(Ka enters)
ka...sir aapki kal ek meeting hai ...subah 9 am par
ro...ok ok
ka...sir mujhe aapke sign chhiye in papers pe..
ro...(to the employee) dekho na tum mera kitna khyal rakhti ho aur ye (kasturi) hai ki bas mujhse kaam hi karvati rehti hai
ka...dekhiye isse pehle mai apka accha khyal rakhun(in expressions of beating him) aap mujhe ye papers sign karke de dijiye..
Ro...oh get lost!! tum dekh nahi sakti mai busy hun ..tumhare papers kal sign ho jayenge..
ka...but sir they r urgent..
ro..nothing is urgent to me as I am robbie Sabharwal..
Ka...(in her mind)inhe to maza chakhana hi padega..

next day at sabharwal house wen ro was wid his girl frnd..
robbie's girl friend's name is.....ria

ka...(in her mind) Accha to ye phir ek nayi ladki ke sath.. kya pata inhe roz nayi ladki mil kahan se jati hai..par aaj kuch masti ki jaye..kuch maza kiya jaye....(wid naughty smile on her face)
ka...(To ro)sir ye papers sign karne the na ..apne kaha tha ki kal karenge..
ria...ro ye ladki kaun hai..
ro... wo ye meri secretory hai..
ka... (blushingly)aur secretory se kuch zyada bhi hun.. kyun sir!!!
ro...ye! ye tum kya keh rahi ho ka..
ka...kyun sir apne inhe nahi bataya ki hum dono???
ro...hum dono??? what do u mean by hum dono??
ria...ro ye tumne thick nahi kiya...(ria goes 4m dere)
ro...oh ruko..kya aam hai tumhara ....sia?... pia?..
Ka... sir uska naam ria hai....
ro...(Full of anger) kya zaroorat thi tumhe ye sab karne ki???And by the way! what do u mean by hum dono??
ka...kuch nahi sir wo to bas yun hi..
ro...yun hi?? tum!! tumhe to mai baad me dekh lunga ..filhaal mujhe rita se milne jana hai.

And after many Noke-jhokes first Kasturi falls in love wid robbie ..but ro is not cared ..than ka makes a plan ..

to know more about THe plan ..read.. the next part..

And the left on the next part..
plz send ur precious comments and adwises to me bcoz its my 1st attempt..
sorry if u feel it was boring..
next part on next day because i have to think some thingnew and spicy..


babye ..

PARTH..

dont forget to leave da comments...

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was funny pls continue soon

davia
Parth Garewal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks davia ur da 1st one to reply me ...
and wait 4 sometime 2nd part is no its way ....



PARTH
misselegent thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmmmmmmmmm gud start continue soon
shruti thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice work šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Pia, Sia dialogue reminded me of KKHH.

Do continue.

Shruti
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
ur ff is little bit different from others .any way nice part.keep cont...
pop77 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7
NICE starting...
waiting for next part...
white star thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤣 hahaha ur ff is soo funny 🤣
plzzz do continue soon hun 😃
white star thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣 ur ff is soo funny 🤣 🤣 🤣 kya aam hai tumhara ....sia?... pia?..(dis part was very funny 🤣 🤣 🤣
do continue soon hun 😃
knumnum thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Parth

I luved the starting, It was really funny with all those nok-jhoks between RKšŸ˜†šŸ˜†... And i didnt get the last part?? u mean to say tat u r not going to write abt those nok jhoks and u r directly taking the story to where KC is in luv with R??

Continue soooooooooooon yaaar..

Krishi

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