abhigya ff : ghost house epilogue updated in page 3

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<font size="4">this is a story in which three pairs who are 2 months married go to a ghost house</font>
Characters

Abhi:heir of leading bussines man Ravi Mehra. He falls in love with pragya and marries her.
Pragya: sweet and innocent girl who hates her father for cheating her mother. Abhi's wife.
Bulbul-purab, aliya-Neil : abhi and pragya's best friends who get married in the same day of abhigya's marriage


Additional charaters

Ragav: pragya's father and a leading bussines man
Dadi: abhi's Dadi Very sweet and innocent
Ranbir: abhishek'a brother. Arrogant person, he often plays with girls llifehe has a interest on pragya.
Tanu: victim of ranbir's fake love and dies because of ranbir's torture
Rishi: tanu and ranbir's baby. Ranbir kills rishi with his mother and dumbs there body in the backyard of there farm house in juhu.


Part 1

Pragya was packing there bags to go to abhi's farm house. Dadi forces them to go to there farm house as she is going to her village to stay with her sister's for 2 months

fuggy you will be really amazed to see our farm house. it is 7 acres and it has 20 rooms
what 20 rooms?? abhishek why do we need 20 rooms as if we are having 100 kids.
you are having a idea of having 100 kids fuggy! you are too bad fuggy beats him with the pillow
fuggy once if we go to our farm house you will see the real me??
Comes near her and kisses her cheeks. Someone knocks the door.
suprise! suprise!
guys. you
haan we are!!!
actually Dadi told us to join your trip
Abhi and pragya are very much exicted to see there Friends coming with them
it was dadi's idea to suprise you
my Dadi is rocking like me
Dadi comes to the room and tells them to leave. Everybody comes to main hall and waits for Dadi. Dadi comes and blesses them they all take there bags to leave suddenly Bulbul is supposed to be fall but purab catches her
beta wait a minute gives them water
dadi please dont believe in such bad omen's
shut up abhi
pragya take care of this stupid abhi gets annoyed


Everybody tells Dadi to take care of her health and leaves


guys let us have race who ever is reaching the place first will get a award
award!!! what award abhi
scotch
that's great buddy
abhishek don't have such great ideas
fuggy its just a race
then you have stay separately for 10 days
what
abhishek please understand it's not safe to drive fast
okay fine meri ma

Abhi gets confused by the roots and ask a old man for a help but he advises them not to go there else she won't leave them. Abhi thinks he is insane and leaves the place.secondly purab stops his car and asks the way to the same old man. The old man tells him to save his friend and leaves.



All three pairs finally reaches there desination. It's was almost 9.00 pm because of abhi's extraordinary knowledge to find the way. All were really exhausted and wbnt to there respective rooms. Pragya was unpacking abhi's luggage while she hears some baby crying. She comes outside and sees abhi and purab watching a movie and and goes to her room.
abhi suddenly how the channel gets changed
May be some technical praoblem purab
purab: by the way I have tell you something today while travelling a old man told me to save you
me!!! purab he is mad. He even told that someone will kill me
[COLOR=yellow]May be some ghost
stops him and scolds him for his childish behaviour
okay purab a I will leave now to my room
Goes to his room and hugs pragya from back
abhishek what are doing
excuse me ! I am your husband and I have all the rights to kiss you hug you and...
enough my romantic husband
so you accept I am romantic Comes near her and pins her to the wall and starts kissing her passionately. She runs her hand through his hair. They both break there kiss and goes to sleep pragya places her head in her husband's chest as it is the most safest place in this world. Soon pragya falls asleep
Abhi looks at her and kisses her forehead and covers her with blanket. Suddenly he hears a child crying. He slowly removes her head and places in the pillow and goes outside to catch the child's cry




Precap: pragya places abhi's hand in her tummy and tells him she is pregnant with his child. Abhi gets exicted and happy . He kisses her and lifts her with joy. Someone calls abhi and tells him to take care his child and wife else she may kill them both. Abhi gets shocked.



Enough for now

Akshayaakshaya


Sorry for mistakes

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yey!!! horror story, please continue soon, I am too greedy 😉 for this
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Fabulous! Continue soon. Looking forward to see the next part.
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Amazing update, loved it
Continue soon plz.
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Part 2
This is a happy chapter doesn't involve ghost yet but next chapter will be more suspence and horror

Abhi hears the noise coming from the terrace so he gets a torch and walks towards the terrace suddenly someone holds his hands. It's turns to be pragya. Pragya asks him why he is going to terrace.abhi very well know pragya is very reactive and gets scared so he gives her some blame excuses.


Abhi asks why pragya gets up from sleep. Pragya tells she had a bad dream where a child is crying and she follows the sound but suddenly someone strangled her. Abhi consoles her and both go to there room. But abhi doubts it.


Next morning

Abhi narrates his incident to purab and Neil. Both starts laugh seeing is fear for ghosts. Both makes fun of him. Abhi asks them to stop there nonsense talks and all the three plans to go somewhere and spend there time but there wives rejects there plan. So abhi purab and Neil decides to leave thre wives in the farm house itself


After few hours
Bulbul: it's good that they are not here
Aliya: you are right Bulbul. Give me an high five
Pragya : guys you don't miss them
Aliya: obviously we miss them pragya.
Bulbul: we can spend some quality time pragya
Suddenly pragya runs to washroom and starts vomiting. Bulbul and aliya gives her some water and makes her sit in the sofa
Bulbul: pragya are you okay
Pragya: I am fine Bulbul
Aliya:pragya I will call the doctor na
Pragya: aliya i am absolute fine
Aliya: what happened to you?
Pragya : for past few days I am feeling dizzy and stressed and think I might be because of traveling
Bulbul:did you got your cycles??
Pragya:not yet Bulbul
Bulbul: it's better if you take a pregnancy test
Aliya: ya pragya Bulbul is right you take a pregnancy test
Pragya: nothing will be like that guys
Aliya: how are sure pragya
Pragya : we both never had idea of babies aliya
Bulbul: what do you mean pragya. Are you both using protections
Pragya: no no Bulbul
Bulbul: then what pragya. I will buy a pregnancy kit
Pragya :okay fine


Pragya takes pregnancy test which turns positive. Aliyaa and Bulbul are very happy that pragya is pregnant but pragya is slightly confused.
Pragya : guys that kit may not be true
Aliya: what are you saying pragya. Are you not happy with this great news wait I will call the doctor immediately
Pragya : aliya it's not I am unhappy infact I am very happy that I am carrying abhisek's child but I don't know how will be react to it. Will he be ready to accept the child very soon in our relationship
Bulbul: how can you doubt abhi like this prags. I am sure abhi will be happy as Dadi too insisting you both for a child
Aliya: Bulbul is right
Pragya emotionally cries and hugs Bulbul and aliya. They both consoles her and ask her to take of her health. Bulbul tells her to take her is Jr. Rockstar too.
Doctor comes and confirms her pregnancy and advices her to be very careful and come for regular checkup. Finally pragya gets relaxed and feels the joy of motherhood.


In night
The three friends are yet not arrived. Pragya plans a suprise for abhi. She wears a green Saree with black border and plain black blouse ( she weared next day of Bulbul's death, no chasma, exactly looks how she is looking now but wears mangalsutra and sindoor).

It's almost 10:00 pm pragya calls abhi and he doesnt attend the call. She places her hand in her tummy.
Pragya: baby see your papa didn't attend my phone let him come we will kill him.
Abhi enters the room and is really very much exhausted he comes and sits in the sofa. Pragya finds him very tired and gives him water. He tells her he is very tired and going to sleep.
pragya : abhishek please you can sleep later now listen to me.
Abhi: fuggy I am really very tired I will continue my story tomorrow
Pragya: abhishek today for you I weared your favourite colour but your not even listening to me
Abhi: fuggyyy
Pragya: okay I will make you active in a second
Abhi: why are you playing with me fuggy
Pragya takes abhi's hand and places it on her tummy and tells him she is pregnant with his child. Abhi becames silent.
Pragya: abh.. abhisek
Abhi immediately hugs her and kisses her forehead and cheeks. He becomes speechless and emotional pragya too cries.
Pragya: abhishek i am sorry. I thought you are not ready to have a baby now. I am really sorry. I want my child to look like his papa. He should have your smile your eyes your voice and he should a copy of you.
Abhi: thank I for everything fuggy
Abhi takes pragya in his arms and places her in the Bed and switches off the light. He removes her pallu touches her bare and exposed stomach. He kisses her tummy and whispers something.
Pragya :abhishek what are you doing
Abhi : I am talking to my baby. What's your problem Mrs. Pragya abhishek Mehra.
Pragya caresses abhi's hair while he continues his chat
Abhi: baby. I am really very eager to see you. I want you be like your mumma. She is best friend best wife and best mother too.
Abhi kisses her tummy. Pragya tells abhi that he forgeted her after the baby so abhi kisses her lips with passion and both fall asleep.


Next morning
Pragya wakes up in abhi's arm she sees him sleeping like a child tightly hugging her. She carefully removes his hand kisses his forehead and covers him with the blanket. She adjust her pallu and leaves to kichen.
Abhi wakes up hearing his phone'sring someone tells him that she will kill his wife and child soon and cuts the phone. Anni gets tensed and gets down from bed



Precap: somebody pushes pragya from stairs. A old lady comes and tells the story of the farm house
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing.update dear, loved it.
Hope nothing happens to Pragya and the baby.
Continue soon plz.
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Hi dear plz apdate next part ASAP because it is going very interesting. Really loved it. Hope pragya and baby will be fine. Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Awesome update dear. Continue soon.
Please Assure us that nothing happens to pragya and her baby.
Update soon. Eagerly waiting for the update. 😃
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Thank you for your suppourt guys.
Soon I will update the second part
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Part 3

Abhi is very much worried about the phone call and thinks not to inform anything to pragya as she very protective. Abhi tells this about the phone call to purab and Neil. Pureil tries to console abhi but they are unsuccessful.

Purab asks abhi to give the phone number of that unknown person who is calling abhi. Abhi too gives the phone number. Purab calls his friend who is a policeman. After 10 min the police calls back purab and tells that there no number existing like that. All three friends are now really scared.

On the other side pragya is very happy and very existed. pragya thinks of informing this news to her mother and Dadi. Bulbul and aliya comes and teases pragya for being too fast in her life. Pragya asks about there future plans. Aliya tells she need sometime and Bulbul tells purab needs sometime all of them are very happy Chating and teasing each other.

Night 9.00 pm
On the other hand
Purab tells abhi to take care of pragya and his child well. Abhi leaves to his room while purab and Neil thinks to find the mystery about the phone call.abhi is really worried about pragya and their child he sees her happily watching tv. He thinks not show his tension in front of pragya.


Abhi goes and sits near pragya and she leans on his shoulder. Abhi notices pragya watching horror film. Abhi asks pragya why she is watching horror film when she is really scared of horror film then why she is watching it.pragya tells him that his son wants to watch horror film. Abhi asks pragya how she can decide it is a boy. Pragya tells abhi
that she wants her baby to be a carbon copy of his father. She tells him that her child's smile, eyes,voice,look everything should be like his father.


Abhi gets emotional hearing her answer and kisses pragya.abhi asks whether he can join them. Pragya greets him to join their team. Abhi likes horror film very much but pragya doesnt. Abhi holds pragya very tightly as she is very much afraid of horror films. Pragya tells abhi that Dadi told them stay here for 4 Months as she am pregnant. Abhi gets more scared hearing this. Abhi tells pragya to sleep as it is late. Pragya aurgues with abhi and tells him sleep only after the movie is over. Abhi never saw pragya this much adamant.


Pragya suspects abhi for being so tensed and enquiries about it but he tries to hide it. Pragya takes his hand and places it on her tummy and tells him to promise on their child. Abhi refuses and tells pragya to sleep and goes out of room. Dadi calls pragya but the signal is weak so she goes to terrace. Abhi comes and searches for pragya.
Someone comes from back and tries to push pragya but abhi shouts pragya. Immediately pragya turns and the shadow is vanished. Pragya asks abhi why he is so tensed. Abhi drags pragya and scolds her badly. Pragya asks abhi what wrong she did and tells him Dadi called her and the signal was weak so she went to terrace and starts crying abhi tries to console her but she tells him not to touch her.


Abhi hugs her but she pushes him telling not to touch her. Abhi tells sorry for over reacting and tells her he cannot she her in problem. Pragya hugs him tightly and tells him not to scold her as it hurts her a lot. Abhi kisses her and wipes her tears. Pragya tells abhi that her child want to scold him for scolding her. Abhi kneels down and touches her tummy and tells sorry for scolding his mumma and kisses her tummy. Pragya closes her eyes feeling the warm of his lips.


Abhi tells pragya to sleep as it very late. Abhi caresses pragya hair and thinks why Dadi called her in this time and sees pragya sleeping peacefully in his arms without disturbing her. He covers her with blanket and leaves. He calls Dadi but the servant takes the call and tells Dadi has slept before 2 hours



Precap:pragya is very happy that she is carrying twins.
A old man tells the story of tanu.
Tanu's spirt goes to Bulbul
Abhi finds abortion tablets in the kichen and enquiries about it to the servants and runs to pragya's room


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