The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Ragini really needs a psychiatrist. Swara and Laksh, can you guys please atleast act to be aware of your surroundings?

With Ragini and Laksh, I still cannot reach a conclusion as to who holds the control? Ragini has her insecurities. Yes, and whenever she has raised them with Laksh, Laksh has been rather successful in putting off the fire with tactful consoling. But is it really enough to keep her in check? Clearly No!

Uttara and Swara seem to have a nice bonding and thats a pleasure to read. Atleast some place there is an unassuming relationship.

Cant wait to read the next update.

Update soon.

Cheers
Sharon


Thanks Sharon!

Exactly! Lakshya has so far managed her capably but it's not good to have someone who needs constant management.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: whity.007

Hi bubble
Superb dear
😡 Ragini 😡 😡
Thank you so much for pm

Unie swasan quickly please


Thank you Whity 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight



You have written this part wonderfully. No plan could have gone as smoothly as it was going so far. You have added the right issue that could derail the plan. it was necessary for laksh to encounter this so that he can understand all the aspects and resolve this for good. wonderfully update as well.

Happy new year!


Yes, there are bound to be glitches and setback - nothing happens as smoothly as we may like.
Happy New Year to you too!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Awesome...update soon dear... waiting desperately..👍🏼


Thanks Krishu 😊 Next one soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eshat.k

Isn't ragini turning into an insane...I feel she is
She and her stupid insecurities... and yes! I think better considering
Ragini's drama lakshya should maintain a distance from swara...
Aww bhabhi- nanad internship again a pleasure reading...and yes the humorous part
Was of sanskar dragging lakshya...thanks for the pm bubble

Amazingly composed

Esha


Thank you Esha, glad you liked 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MillionThoughts

Loved the chapter Bubble.
Really amazing.. And to be honest it's true to the characters. Insecurities that are deep within a person don't go within a blink of an eye.
So it's only fair to bring up that topic again to remove it completely for good.

I just hope that Ragini doesn't do something awful of nasty again, coz that would mean Lakshya's effort going down the drain.

I'd love to read a scenario where Ragini is upset with Lakshya. That'd be interesting.

P.S : An amazing chapter yet again.

Love
TJ (a girl)🤣



Thanks so much, TJ-girl. 😃
Yes, Ragini has deep rooted issues 😕


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice!!!

R swara and sanskar talking now???

Continue soon!!
Than you for the PM!!!


They didn't stop talking fully, Jidnyasa... just became awkward.
thanks - next part up soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Best of Things
(RagLak, SwaSan) Fan Fiction Series
By Bubble

Chapter 24

Even so, nothing may have come of the various incidents pricking Ragini's jealousy had Lakshya been there. He was so tuned in to her moods, paid so much attention to what was going on in her mind, that he would have diffused the build-up of negative emotions. But as chance would have it, Lakshya left just then to attend for a three-day conference in Jamshedpur. And Ragini was free to wallow in her misery... and almost without a coherent plan, she started making Maheshwari House inhospitable for Swara.

She targetted the easiest of marks - the two elder Maheshwari ladies. With Sujata it was absurdly simple... a series of small, innocuous reminders that Swara was a fish-eating, meat-eating Bangalan. Sujata, who had almost forgotten the objections she had previously had to Swara was reminded of them all... along with suspicions that Swara probably gorged on mutton and chicken every time she went out of the house. Sujata was horrified, and well-primed to treat Swara with abhorrence.

Annapurna was a little more of a challenge. Ragini found her moment when the two of them were cutting cabbage at the dining table.

With a little smile, she said, "Hum aur Lakshya itne khush hain, Maa... I so wish Sanskaar and Swara were happy as well! It would make me so happy if Swara were settled... but sadly..." she trailed off.

"What are you saying, Ragini? They are happy!" Annapurna asserted. "They are such good friends also!"

Ragini nodded, a little doubtfully.

Annapurna sharpened her gaze on her. "You don't think so? What are you trying to say? Kya kehne ki koshish kar rahi ho tum?"

"Nai, Maa, kuch nahin..." Ragini shook her head.

Now hooked, Annapurna demanded an answer. "Bolo Ragini - I want to hear what you have to say!"

"Nai Maa, I know that Swara came back to this house along with me, and that Sanskaar and Swara were both going to give their marriage a serious chance... but Maa, Swara just agreed because Maa... that is, Sharmistha Maa made her promise to a six-month period... and Swara has never taken that seriously. She still wants to go back to the Baadi... this is just a waiting period for her."

Ragini looked earnestly at Annapurna, "In fact, I feel so bad for Sanskaar because he's in love with her and he's willing to settle for crumbs from Swara - he'll do anything she wants... but I feel really bad for him. Doesn't he deserve a chance at happiness, Maa? If Swara had not come back to this house, if they had gotten divorced right then, by now Choti Maa would have found a nice girl for him... but he's just wasting his life waiting for Swara..."

Annapurna frowned. "As far as I can see they are very happy together! Sanskaar has never indicated otherwise, and Swara is very much a bahu of this house!"

Ragini leaned forward. "Maa, that is not false. They are really very close, but I doubt if they are husband and wife. In fact, I've noticed Swara sleeps in the guest room, and yet neither of them says anything. I think they're really secretive... I don't think any of us really knows what is happening between them."

Annapurna was perturbed. "Achcha!? Ok, I'll observe them more closely myself... and judge for myself..."

Ragini leaned back, satisfied.

***

That evening, Swara gathered her razai from the cupboard and bit her lip. She wanted to come back to their room, but what should she say? Use some excuse... like what? She could say that the guest room's AC was too powerful to be comfortable!

Sanskaar came in just then and saw Swara standing there, with her razai in her arms. He looked away immediately. She folded it and brought it back here every morning, leaving no trace of her presence in the guest room... why couldn't she just sleep here... when he was leaving the full king sized bed to her? But he couldn't even say that, she would just become more uncomfortable...

He cleared his throat. "The AC in the guest room is really strong, Swara, and the thermostat doesn't work too well. Take an extra blanket, or you'll be cold."

"Yeah... yeah," Swara stammered.

He bent to the bottom shelf and pulled out a kambal, and put it in her arms.

Not knowing how to say what she wanted to say, Swara slowly left the room and walked towards the guest room, arms laden with woollens, miserable and casting piteous looks up to heaven.

From the opposite wing, Annapurna watched her go into the guest room and close the door behind her.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow she is searching for a reason to stay back
With her hubby 😆
Ragini 😡 again started
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dont make Ap take some foolish decision against swara??
Instead why dont you make her cupid???
😉

Make swara confess her love for sanskar soon!!
Continue soon!!
Thank u for the pm..
Edited by Jidnyasa - 9 years ago

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