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My immediate reaction on reading the update was, there ought be a special wing in purgatory, reserved for the ilk of Ragini. 😆
But then, on cooler reflection, and this is the beauty of this fic of yours, you've portrayed the human frailties of all the characters, one realizes that Ragini is, after all, only doing what she is doing in a desperate attempt to hold on to someone she deems as "hers", and whom she is not really sure of.
Insecurity and a degree of paranoid suspicion she is prone to, were bound to make her take cunning steps. But one thing is, she at least knows her mind about what (or in this case whom) she wants. Swara, on the other hand, for all her empathy and benevolent spirit to do good for others, has absolutely no clue of what she herself wants, and what she has (perhaps) started to feel for her "best friend", to whom, incidentally, she's already realized she's attracted to.
Reminds me of a saying--"The road to hell is paved with good intentions". One can do a lot of harm, even by being too selfless, too considerate.. 😃
But then, on cooler reflection, and this is the beauty of this fic of yours, you've portrayed the human frailties of all the characters, one realizes that Ragini is, after all, only doing what she is doing in a desperate attempt to hold on to someone she deems as "hers", and whom she is not really sure of.
Insecurity and a degree of paranoid suspicion she is prone to, were bound to make her take cunning steps. But one thing is, she at least knows her mind about what (or in this case whom) she wants. Swara, on the other hand, for all her empathy and benevolent spirit to do good for others, has absolutely no clue of what she herself wants, and what she has (perhaps) started to feel for her "best friend", to whom, incidentally, she's already realized she's attracted to.
Reminds me of a saying--"The road to hell is paved with good intentions". One can do a lot of harm, even by being too selfless, too considerate.. 😃
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