*(AOTW) WRITE A SCENE!! 4 SCENES ADDED* - Page 4

Hahaha...Urmi behen hogi tumari 😆! Arrogant Sandeep...Am liking! Great job Fiza!

Just one question...You posted that entry at 3.19AM..?!?!?!? 😆

Hmm..Nice possible track Kiran! Why don't you continue!?

Originally posted by: Lincoln

I just thought of a new plot in case someone might be inspired to write. One of the members here made a post abt this. What if mohalla wallahs decide to marry off Sandeep to Suman? Around the same time Urmi is getting ready to let Sandeep know of her feelings. She finds out mohalla wallah's intentions and confides in Zoya regd her troubles. Sandeep overhears this conversation. Ab aage kya hoga? Any takers here?

very nice plot we can use this in our second part of the story or as a T**** i dont wanna say it out loud because then everyone will figure it out. but if i write a part soon i will definetly use ur plot and u can help out as well. i mean its ur plot so u dont want to write about it?

Originally posted by: zarna

very nice plot we can use this in our second part of the story or as a T**** i dont wanna say it out loud because then everyone will figure it out. but if i write a part soon i will definetly use ur plot and u can help out as well. i mean its ur plot so u dont want to write about it?

😆😆😆 I think I know what you referred to. Thanks zarna. I have never attempted writing stories but will think over the plot over this week. Be sure to pm me if you think of some ideas I can use.

the four boys go out and sit at jugle's Gadar video shop. all boys in thinking mod except jugle. looks like he is scratching his head or may they call dat thinking. 😆

alrite gettting back to the story looks like our dear rahul has a plan.

Jugle: are yeh sandeep bhai apne aap ko samajte kya hain? bachpan se bij bo kar paid humne ugaya aur ab woh aaram se fal kha rahe hain. esa thodi chalta hai.

rahul: sach jugle aaj zindagi main pehli baar tune sahi baat kahi hain.

Hari: sach yaar, sadeep bhai to raste se hat ne ke liye taiyar hi nahi hai to ab kya karenge?

Mustak: are miyaan agar hum yunhi sochte rahe na toh woh din dur nahi jaab sandeep bhaijaan apni barat lekar urmi ke ghar aa jayenge. kuch to karna padega.

rahul: idea.

Hari, Mustak, Jugle: kya???????

Rahul: sandeep bhai apna rishta bheje use pehle agar hum chaar apna rishta bhej de to??? chahe hum charo main se urmi kisiki bhi ho (pointing to him self) par Sandeep bhai ki nahi honi chahiye.

the rest of the boys agree.

Julge: main aaj hi mammi se baat karunga.

Hari: abe sale to bole ga kaise? kuch bhi kehne se to yunhi darta hai toh phir yeh baat kaise kare ga?

Jugle: tu kya mujeh dudh pita baccha samjta ahi ki main yeh baat nahi kar paunga.

as soon as he says that Jugle's mom enters with a Mug full of Milk.

Pammi: le jugle Dudh pi le.

Julge: main nu nai pina dudh in tino ko pilado. main koi dudh pita baccha nahi hun.

jugle leaves from there. the rest of the boys starts to laugh and Pammmi is left wondering.

AAGE KAY HOGA? kya woh char ladke kar payenga apne pyaar ka izhar? ya phir sandeep ka rishta pehle jayega?

to find the answers keep reading. 😊

no one else wants to continue?

i would love to conti........ zarna why did u stop????