*(AOTW) WRITE A SCENE!! 4 SCENES ADDED* - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Yosh

Aww...The four boys seem heartbroken Fizz! Yeah Zarna I'm really busy atm so it't be great if you could continue!

lol😆...tell me about it😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Fiza_87

lol😆...tell me about it😆

😆! Well their dreams had to shatter one day 😆!

Noooooooo...You changed your avi 😭😆! Who's that with Akshay? Is it spoof Simi Garewal?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
no spamming here guys
k i will continue next week
do participate in the DOTW 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Hey Guys,
I would like add some.....
Since we are waiting for that romance to happen from last almost 6 months.
I dont think that it will happen easily...
It should be something like....
Urmy should get a proposal for marriage and the guy should be equally talented and handsom as our """Sandeep babu", then urmy should accept the proposal (just to see what is sandeep's reaction) and then that guy should stay back in colonel gunj for some days....
so that sandeep should be totally jealous....
and then the actual romance starts....
they don have to propose each other...........
BCZ.. that fire is already there in their eyes...
and the chemistry ROCKS........


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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
well why dont u write a part 😊 it would b fun join in. u see i wrote a small scene and then fiza continued after i did so we decided to write a story in continuation. 😊 but new and seperate entries are always welcome. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: zarna

no spamming here guys
k i will continue next week
do participate in the DOTW 😊

Sorry Zarna 😆!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
C'mon yosh jaan!!!
Please write either your scene or continue writing where i finished...please....... i really want u participate... and then zarna will write... we both are waiting to read ur entry... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
okey since none is adding or writing so i m going to continue the story...here is the recap for u

PART 2

Recap: Sandeep have told urmi that he loves her too... Jugley,musthaq, hari and rahul heard him...they looked absolutely shOcked!!!

Jugley: Abey yaar! yeh sandeep bhaiya kya urmi ke saath mazak to nahi ker rahe

Rahul: Mein to kehta hoon yaar unho ne sach hi kaha, dekha nahi urmi kaise sandeep bhaiya ko lift deti thi

Musthaq: Abey rahul miya kaise baatien ker raha...Shayad sandeep bhai jaan urmi ko april fool bana rahein hoon

Hari: April fool? woh bhi 11 april ko?

Jugley: Abey pehley to hum charon urmi ke liye latdte they ab es Luf istory mein ek aur shamil... nahi yaar!

Rahul: Mujhe to yeh lagta hai ke sandeep bhaiya humari bholi bhali urmi ko pyaar ke jaal mein pansa rahein hain

Mustaq: To ab humein sochna chahiye ke sandeep bhai jaan ka pata saaf kaise kerein.. Mere matlab unhe hum 4 shariff naujaawan kal subha ko bata de gein ke sandeep bhaiye..Urmi to hamari hai..baqi sab ki tarah ab bhi use apni bhabi samjhein.

Hari: haan magar to kab usey apni bhabi samjhe ga

Rahul: Chodon yaar.. to ab teek hai subha hum sab sandeep bhiya ke ghar jaiye gey.. Theek hai..Okey

Mustaq,Hari aur jugley: OOokEY!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Jugely,hari,musthaq and rahul subha subha chaley sandeep babu ke ghar.

darwaze per knock kiya aur sandeep ji andar aaney diya..
Sandeep: aur kiya baat hai aaj tum charo mere paas yaahan? keriyat hai?
Rahul: keriyat hi to nahi sandeep bahiya...hum ne suna hai
Jugley: ahem
Rahul: i mean hum sab ne suna hai ke aap urmi se pyaar kertein hain.
Jugley: sandeep bhaiya ... app hamarey badey bhai ki tarahan hai magar meri urmi ke beech mein koi aayega to mein ussey bilkul nahi chodoon ga..chahe woh aaapp ki kyon na ho
Mustaq: haan bhaijaan... app mere aur urmi ke beech mein kabab ki hadi maat baneye
Sandeep: koi mujhe bhi to bolne ka mouqa se ga
rahul: jee zaroor
Sandeep: suno urmi aur mein ek doosery ko chahtein hain
Jugley: sandeep bhaiya woh to aap ko bade bhai ki nazron se dekhti ayi hai
Sadeep: arey woh behn ho gi tumari..hum ek dosrey ko chahtein aa rehein hain.. aur tum agar mere aur urmi ke beech aao gey to mein to khair nahi
Rahul,mustaq, jugley and hari: kya matlab?
Sandeep: haan jab miya biwi raazi to kya ker le ga qazi
Jugley: aap ne qazi mein mang wa liya
Mustaq: abey jugley yeh ek khawat hai
Jugley: accha.
Rahul: theek hai sandeep bhaiye...hum side per ho jaatey hain..
Jugley: Bhai bhai na raha..pyaar pyaar na raha..
hari: chal jugley, chalo saab.
Wot will happen next? will they make some plan to break up thier relationship and will they happily accept urmi as their sister-in-law?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: zarna

well why dont u write a part 😊 it would b fun join in. u see i wrote a small scene and then fiza continued after i did so we decided to write a story in continuation. 😊 but new and seperate entries are always welcome. 😊



Hey you guys look really busy in here. Nice additions, but Sandeep here is very romantic (& very different from Sandeep in ACHPM). Sandeep in ACHPM is a late tubelight😆, usse shayad aakhir tak pata nahi chalega. Looking forwrd to hearing other mohalla wallahs reactions to this. Will they easily accept this?

I just thought of a new plot in case someone might be inspired to write. One of the members here made a post abt this. What if mohalla wallahs decide to marry off Sandeep to Suman? Around the same time Urmi is getting ready to let Sandeep know of her feelings. She finds out mohalla wallah's intentions and confides in Zoya regd her troubles. Sandeep overhears this conversation. Ab aage kya hoga? Any takers here?


Edited by Lincoln - 18 years ago

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