*(AOTW) WRITE A SCENE!! 4 SCENES ADDED*

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi everyone, sorry i ddint put up a disscussion last week. hope u all like the previous episodes of the show. i did. do tell me waht did u all think about the ways Guptaji changed his mind and helped his wife give the exams.

thsi week we are going to do something different. this week's epi was full of romance so let me give you guys a chance to be creative.

ok here is wat you going to do. lets create a romantic scene for our Dear Urmi and Her Sandeep babu. it can be about anything. you guys can put up a scene where Urmi is proposing or a scene that takes place after the proposal. it can be funny, romantic, sad, or mixture of all. so do put your thinking caps on and get started.

hope u all have fun. be creative. Enjoy๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 18 years ago
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so zarna can we post it here??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh yes u can post it here. if ur shy to post it in public pm it to me and will post it here as ananomous if dats wat u want.
Edited by zarna - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh wow ... tht will be great........will soon post u mine either here or by pming... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...btw ur doing a great job. ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks hon, im trying me level best to keep this forum active.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi everyone plz do participate in this its not hard. u just have to post a simple scene taht has urmi and sandeep in it. like i said it doenst matter if its sad, funny, romantic or even a dream. i would lvoe to see all different types of crations plz. participate.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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scene one

"sandeep babu... kahan hai aap dekhiye main aapke liye kuch layi hun." entered urmi with a red rose in her hand

"agar tum khana layi ho to please ushe wapish lejao kyunki tumhari mummi abhi lekar aayi thi aur maine kha liya hai." sandeep told urmi coming into the room from the balcany

"main khana nahi aap ke liye phool layi hun." suman said

"C.Gunj main fools kam hai ki tum aap ne aap ko ush list main add kar rahi ho?" sandeep asked urmi

"dekhiye aap ish tarah baat maat kijiye varna main aap se kabhi baat nahi karungi aur khana dene bhi nahi aaungi." urmi said making faces.

"thik hai thik hai, par tum yeh phool kyun lekar aayi ho?" sandeep said.

"woh aaj valentines day hai.."urmi said

"toh main kya karun?" sandeep said

"aap kuch mat kijiye sirf yeh phool accept kar ligiye." urmi said

"kyun mere bhaag phoot gaye hai ki main yeh phool accept karun?" sandeep said

"dekha phir se aapne mera mazak udaya main jaa rahi hun." urmi said throwing the flower.

sandeep grabbed her hand and picked up the red flower from the floor.

"urmi kya tum mera phool accept karogi?" sandeep asked urmi leaving urmi in shock

"urmi bachpaan se hum ek hi mohalle main reh rahe hain par maine kabhi tumse thik se baat nahi ki. aur ushki vajah yeh hai ki main tumhe pasand karta hun. main darta tha ki agar main tumse pyaar se baat karunga toh tumhare liye meri feelings aur bhi badhjayegi par tumse naa baat karke meri feelings apne aap hi badhti gayi. aaj main chup nahi reh sakta aur aaj to valentines day hai. har koi prem karne wala aaj bina dare aapne pyaar ka izhaar kar sakta hai to main bhi karna chahunga."

"urmi, kya tum mere is virani zindagi main bahar lana pasand karogi? kya tum mera saath dogi? agar tumhara jawab wahi hai jo main soch ta hun to phir yeh phool jo tum layi thi aur ab jo mere haat main hai please accept karlo." sandeep said slowly getting on his knees.

smiling urmi took the flower and left the house. a smiling sandeep got up racking his hair wiht his hands.
Edited by zarna - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: zarna

scene one

"sandeep babu... kahan hai aap dekhiye main aapke liye kuch layi hun." entered urmi with a red rose in her hand

"agar tum khana layi ho to please ushe wapish lejao kyunki tumhari mummi abhi lekar aayi thi aur maine kha liya hai." sandeep told urmi coming into the room from the balcany

"main khana nahi aap ke liye phool layi hun." suman said

"C.Gunj main fools kam hai ki tum aap ne aap ko ush list main add kar rahi ho?" sandeep asked urmi

"dekhiye aap ish tarah baat maat kijiye varna main aap se kabhi baat nahi karungi aur khana dene bhi nahi aaungi." urmi said making faces.

"thik hai thik hai, par tum yeh phool kyun lekar aayi ho?" sandeep said.

"woh aaj valentines day hai.."urmi said

"toh main kya karun?" sandeep said

"aap kuch mat kijiye sirf yeh phool accept kar ligiye." urmi said

"kyun mere bhaag phoot gaye hai ki main yeh phool accept karun?" sandeep said

"dekha phir se aapne mera mazak udaya main jaa rahi hun." urmi said throwing the flower.

sandeep grabbed her hand and picked up the red flower from the floor.

"urmi kya tum mera phool accept karogi?" sandeep asked urmi leaving urmi in shock

"urmi bachpaan se hum ek hi mohalle main reh rahe hain par maine kabhi tumse thik se baat nahi ki. aur ushki vajah yeh hai ki main tumhe pasand karta hun. main darta tha ki agar main tumse pyaar se baat karunga toh tumhare liye meri feelings aur bhi badhjayegi par tumse naa baat karke meri feelings apne aap hi badhti gayi. aaj main chup nahi reh sakta aur aaj to valentines day hai. har koi prem karne wala aaj bina dare aapne pyaar ka izhaar kar sakta hai to main bhi karna chahunga."

"urmi, kya tum mere is virani zindagi main bahar lana pasand karogi? kya tum mera saath dogi? agar tumhara jawab wahi hai jo main soch ta hun to phir yeh phool jo tum layi thi aur ab jo mere haat main hai please accept karlo." sandeep said slowly getting on his knees.

smiling urmi took the flower and left the house. a smiling sandeep got up racking his hair wiht his hands.

Wowwooowww zarna!!!!!!!!!!

tht was totally amazing......... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘....okey shall i write wot happens afterewards?

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 1

Cornel ganj ki yeh subha ajj aam subha se mukhtalif thi
ajj sandeep aur urmi ki annkhon mein kal raat ka nasha abhi tak chdha hua tha

Urmi: Woh kal wali baat jo apne kahi thi, kya woh aap dobara se kehein gey, kyun ke mere kano ko abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha sandeep babu!(talking to hi outside ratan chacha's shop)
Sandeep: Arey ! tumhein kya ab wohi sab dobara...rehne do.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Urmi: theek hai to mein ja rahi hoo! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Sandeep: acha suno(holding her hands)
Urmi: chodiye sandeep ji, kisi ne dekh liya to
Sandeep: arey! yeh sab to apne hi hein, kya hua agar kisi ne dekh liya, pyaar kiya hai koi chori to nahi ki.
Urmi: ran away to her house.
Sandeep: Suno urmi.. I LOVE YOU! I Love You Urmi!(saying it loudly)
Those four panters heard him.... tan tan tan....finished... will post the next later....But till then keep guessing...kya reaction hoga rahul,hari,jugley aur mustaq ka? uske liye aatey rahiyen ACHPM forum mein au padhtey rahiyen yeh section ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by Fiza_87 - 18 years ago
zarna thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey this can be great and it can be our own little story post for the forum. i wish more ppl participate. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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