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Hello people!!
I know its been ages since I have updated DDLJ and here I have started another one..
Dont worry guys its just a small SS with 4 or max 5 parts may be even less..
I just want to set my mind to writing mode before I start working on DDLJ..😉
Tonight I am just posting the prologue..
Will update once I shape up the story properly..
NOTE : The story is not entirely my idea.. I read a novel few months back and got an idea from it.. You can say this one is inspired from that novel but nowhere same as it. So if anyone reading this feel that it is similar to some orginal novel then please people, know that I am not taking the entire credit for this one. But the narration is completely in my own words though very few phrases are taken from the original one. Also there would be few similarities between the characters in my story and the original, for ex their profession.. Actually I think that is the only major similarity...😛😆
Hope I wont be bashed for taking idea from someone else's story..😕
Guys if you are not okay with this please tell me, I will stop writing this here itself..
Okay!! This is the end of my pakao session and here is the prologue
PROLOGUE
She stumbled along the hallway carrying her small suitcase and ran as fast as she can. Frustatingly she pushed the button for the lift to open up just to escape from this place as early as possible. The moment lift bell dinged she instantly rushed in and pressed the button that leads to the garage, the same way she has come up to the penthouse and the door mercifully shut behind her. She rushed out of the lift as soon as it opened only to find his loyal chauffeur looking at her alarmingly may be because of her awful appearance she thought and his eyes filled with concern looking at her messed up face. He called out to her and offered to drop her at her place but she did not give any heed to him and ran out of the building onto the road as a maniac not exactly worrying about her disheveled state.
A taxi stopped just mere inches away from her inorder to avoid collision and she without thinking anything hopped into it. The driver looked at her as if she is some crazy lunatic but she hurriedly opened her suitcase, taking out her wallet and thrusted few dollars at him and asked him to drive away. She got gracelessly out of the cab when it stopped and walked away swiftly into the hotel not even acknowledging the known girl at the reception though she heard the girl calling out her name. She felt a wave of relief swept across once she entered her room but that did not stop a broken sob from escaping her lips continued by frantic, hopeless sobbing.
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So here it is friends..
Please give your feedback!!
Waiting anxiously!!😃
Jhanak
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