TUM SIRF MERI HO-A ZAYA TS chapter - 9

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CHARACTER SKETCH

zain-a 25 year old boy ,a dashing dude and a london return

zubair-a 25 year old boy ,aliya's cousin and works in bhopal

aliya-a 24 year old girl ,and cousin of zain and zubair

rizwan-zain's best friend

ayat-aliya's sister

shabhan-aliya's mother and hates aliya a lot

what will happen when a jeasouly filled zain ...

well lf u want we to cont further l want two comments and then l will cont
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-1
BHOPAL
HAIDER HOUSE
KITCHEN
aliya was preparing the dinner just then zubair came
zubair-hey Aalu
aliya-haan zubbu bolu
zubair-Aalu yeh do tickets hai chalo na aaj mera saath movie dekhne
aliya-movie ka kya time hai
zubair-9'oclock in night
aliya-thik hai main aate hoon
zubair-tumhe koi problem toh nahni hai na mera matlab bohat raat hai na
aliya-zubbu tum ho na mera saath phir kya tension hai tumhara saath main safe rahne wale hoon
aliya and zubair hifi eachother
zain was seeing this and was fuming in angry
zain went to his room
zain-yeh aliya kya smajhte hai apne aap ko itne raat ko akela wo bhi zubbu ke saath khud ko toh safe nahni rakh sakte wo aliya ko kya safe rakhne wale hai
zain dialled rizwan's number
zain-aaj raat ke liye 2 tickets lekar aaya tu dhyaan rakhne 9'oclock ka show


lf u want more l need two more comments then l will cont
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-2
NIGHT TIME
zubair-chalo aliya
aliya walk down stairs
aliya-haan chalo
zain-chalo main bhi ready hoon
aliya-tum aanewale ho
zain-haan kyun koi problem
aliya-nahni
zubair-chalo
zubair holds aliya's hand and they both walk hand in hand
MOVIE HALL
movie begins zubair and aliya both were talking zain was fuming in angry
after interval zubair brought aliya's favt ice cream aliya was eating ice cream and just then ice cream stuck to her lips zubair tried to touch aliya's lips but zain grabbed aliya by her waist and stared in her eyes and with his thumb he removed ice cream and in background a very romantic song was playing which made the scene more hot , aliya just stared at zain ,how has desire in his eyes and top of all of that he had angry and concern in his eyes
soon bell ringed and movie was end
aliya got up from her seat and zubair holds her hand both walked hand in hand till the exit gate
zain-kya main aapke aalu ko mera saath lekar jaa sakta hoon
aliya saw angry in zain's eyes so without giving it a second thought aliya spoke
aliya-haan zain main tumhara saath chale rahe hoon
zubair-lekin aalu
aliya-meri bhi kuch choice hai zubbu issliye main zain ke saath jaa rahe hoon baaki tumhe acha lage yaa bura l don't care
and she left zubair's hand
zain holds aliya's hand and he took her till his car and they both drove back to their home
aliya was about to go inside just then zain stopped her by his hand
zain-toh aliya ji bohat acha lag aapko zubbu ke saath time spend karke
aliya-pagal ho kya zain zubbu cousin hai mera
zain-ohh haan galat toh aliya ji ke life main sirf ek insan hai aur wo hai zain usmaan abdullah
aliya-zain pagal hogaye ho tum kaise smajho main tumhe zain
zain-zubbu my foot
and very hardly hit his hand on car
aliya took his hand in her hand and blowed some air on it
aliya-zain pagal ho tum kuch lag jate toh
and she blowed some more air to it suddenly zain took his hand back from her hand
zain-main kal jaa raha hoon mumbai important meeting hai meri
aliya without replying anything goes back to her room
NEXT MORNING
shabhan-ayat chal mera saath tera abbu se milne chalte hai
aliya-ammi abbu se milne ka kya fayad hai wo toh aapse kitne nafrat karte hai kabhi unhone toh pocha tak nahni ki aap kaise hai
shabhan-wo sirf tumhara wajah se ,tumhara wajah se unhone dusra nikkah kar liye aur tera wajah se aaj ayat ko bhi sab kuch sahne karne pada rahe hai
shabhan and ayat leaves to meet ghulam zain was listening this conversation and was really feeling bad for aliya
aliya turned back and saw zain with his luggage
aliya-jaa rahe ho
and a tear rolled down from her cheeks
zain-haan khudahafiz
aliya-khudahafiz
and zain too goes away aliya wiped her tear by thinking that this is her life which always cheats her

well today l will complete this story ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-3
BHOPAL
aliya was in her room just then someone knocked the door aliya went down stair to open the door and their she saw a unknown person
aliya-ji
person-shabhan aur ayat haider yahan rehte hai kya
aliya-ji wow donno meri ammi aur behna hai
person-bahut dukh ke saath bol ne pada rahe hai ki wo ab iss duniya main nahni hai
aliya fall on knees and was now totally shocked
aliya some how made some courage to go till her room just then zubair enter
zubair grabbed aliya by her hair
zubair-chalo mera saath
aliya tried to push him but he was strong
aliya-choodo mujhe pls
zubair-kyu kya galat hai iss main suhugaraat bane chahat hoon main tumhare saath hone wale biwi ho tum meri
zubair was about to kiss aliya but only one name escaped from her mouth"zain"
and zubair was on floor zain beat him blue and black and aliya whispered "zain"
zain came to aliya and cupped her face
aliya-zain wo zubair
and she burst in tears zain hugged her
zain-shhh
aliya-zain ammi ayat wo nahni rahe ab
and she cried more
zain cupped aliya's face
zain-aliya main hoon na kuch nahni hoga
aliya-zain tumhare meeting thi na
zain-thi lekin tumse zyada important nahi thi
and kissed her forehead and aliya closed her eyes
AFTERNOON
whole house was filled by people and aliya was in zain's arms
every thing was ready and now it was time to take the funeral of shabhan and ayat
zain left aliya but aliya hold his jacket by indicating him not to leave her zain indicated aliya that he will be back soon
aliya some how left zain
and zain took shabhan's funeral and other two people took ayat's funeral with them
and aliya cried her heart out zain glanced at aliya and was feeling a pain in his heart to see aliya in this way
AFTER SOME TIME
zain returned home and saw everyone gathered in main hall
zubair's mom-aliya ab tumhe nikkah kar lena chahiye waise bhi ab tum kya karogi
zain was listening this conversation
aliya didn't replied back as tears were forming her eyes
zubair-waise bhi aliya kitne khobusuraat ho tum kya bharso kal kya hojaye hai na ammi
aliya looked at him and zain tighly fists his hand in angry
phupi-toh thik hai aliya ka aur zubair ka nikkah kare dete hai
aliya gave them a shocked look and zain was also shocked at same time

SO WHAT U THINK ITS A END OF ZAYA LOVE STORY


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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-4
BHOPAL
zain-aliya ka nikkah mujhse hogaya zubair se nahni
aliya ran in arms of zain and zain hugged her and kissed her hairs
zubair mother-thik hai jo karne hai karo lekin dekha lene regret karoge tum
and everyone leave the house and aliya too left for her room
ALIYA'S ROOM
zain was about to knock her door but he stopped
aliya-allah zain ne mujhse nikkah karne ka decision liye hai lekin mujhe bharso hai ki wo mujhe kabhi hurt nahni karga aur phir jo bhi hota wo aapki marzi se hota hai
and she starts to pack her stuff
zain-aliya
aliya-zain tum aao na andhar
zain-aliya hum donno kal hi nikkah kar lete hai mujhe galte mat smajhne lekin main tumhe yahan se dura leke jaane chahte hoon taaki tum safe raho
aliya-jab main tumhara saath hote hoon na toh main safe rehte ho
zain smiled after hearing this statement from her mouth and left the room
NEXT MORNING
aliya was lost in her thought just then some one knocked her door
aliya turned back to see zain
zain-aliya yeh lo isko pehne kar neecha aaya jao qazi sahab wait kar rahe hai
aliya-thik hai
she took the dress in her hands
HALL
zain and aliya both were wearing this


aliya came down and all eyes were fixed on aliya she was looking breath taking
aliya took her seat and passed a smile to zain and zain too passed her a smile
qazi saheb-aliya ghulam haider aapka nikkah zain usmaan abdullah ke saath ho rahe hai kya aapko yeh nikkah qubool hai
aliya-qubool hai
and passed a smile to zain
qazi saheb-zain usmaan abdullah aapka nikkah aliya ghulam haider ke saath ho rahe hai kya aapko yeh nikkah qubool hai
zain-qubool hai
and everyone clapped, zain went to aliya and took her hand in his and they both walk hand in hand till car
MUMBAI
NIGHT
BARKAT VILLA
zain and aliya both entered together in barkat villa
chandkhala-mashallah kitne khobhsuraat hai zain ki dulhan agar madam aur bhaijaan hote toh bahut khush hote
and she feed zain and aliya a spoonful of kheer
chand-zain aliya ko apne room main lekar jao aur utha kar lekar jao
aliya-chandkhala mujhe mamu aur mami ki photo ke paas ek baar jane hai
chandkhala-dulhan wo hai photo
aliya prayed for them and when she was done with it zain picked her in his arms
ZAIN'S ROOM
zain placed aliya on bed and closed the door
zain-aliya l hope tumhe koi problem nahni hai bed share karne main
aliya-nahni bikul nahni koi problem nahni hai mujhe
zain-okay then good night kuch chahiye hogaya toh bol dene mujhe
zain and aliya both lied on bed and zain closed side lamp both faced eachother and slept
whole night zain was taking utter most care of his hand so that it should not lie on aliya and that can hurt her feeling zain loved aliya from his bottom of his heart and doesn't want to force himself on her

NEXT UPDATE-A LIP LOCK


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CHAPTER-5
BARKAT VILLA
aliya came out by drying her hairs and her milky back was exposed ,and zain saw aliya and lost his breath,aliya looked at zain and give him a blushly smile
zain-good morning
aliya-morning
zain too got ready by wearing blue t-shirt and yellow jacket(cruise party clothes zaya were wearing by same hairstyle)
HALL
aliya-chandkhala main breakfast ready karte hoon
chandkhala-aare nahni dulhan abhi tumhare kitchen ki rasam nahni huaein hai ek kaam karo kuch meetha bane do
aliya prepared sheer korma served it to everyone
and zain appreciated her a lot for sheera korma
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya entered in his room
aliya-mujhe mera gift chahiye
zain-ohh haan
and he gave her a diamond earrings
zain-this is for u
aliya-mujhe yeh nahni chahiye
zain-thik hai tum bolu kya chahiye tumhe
aliya-mujhe kuch alag chahiye
and zain kissed her cheeks
zain-ab kaise hai gift
aliya-perfect
and she smiled
zain-okay then bye
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya was getting bored just then she switched on the tv and their she saw a romance between a couple,aliya was imagining herself and zain inspite of them but her thoughts got disurbed by a call
aliya-hello
zain-aliya wo aaj raat ko main late aaogein toh tum khane khaya kar soyagaein okay
aliya-okay fine
NIGHT TIME
12:30
everyone was sleeping zain entered in his room only to find a fairy resting her head on sofa and was sleeping her hairs were flying
zain was lost in the moment
aliya got up and saw zain and passed him a smile
aliya-aaye gaye tum chalo dinner lagte hoon main
before she can head towards kitchen zain stopped her
zain-aliya tum mera wait kyu kare rahe thi
aliya-itne saaare baatein dimaga mein well ek kaam karo dinner karte karte question kar lene okay chalo
he was lost in his thoughts
aliya-zain chalo na neecha darr lagate hai mujhe akela pls
and he smiled and they both went together
aliya served him the dinner and sat beside him
zain-aliya bolu na tum ne mera wait kyu kiye
aliya-zain biwi hoon main tumhari haq hai mera ki main tumhari wait karo
zain-lekin itne time tak problem huaein hogaye na tumhe
aliya-zain r u mad shahaur ho tum meri faarz hai mera ki main tumhara khayaal rakho chalo ab bas karo mujhe bohat bhooki lage hai
and both had their dinner
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CHAPTER-6
BARKAT VILLA
NIGHT
zain was sleeping peacefully and aliya saw his hands which were under his utter most care
aliya saw it and smiled at it
MORNING
aliya was on dinning table and was getting things ready for breakfast just then zain arrived
zain-good morning
aliya gave him a blushly smile
aliya-morning
zain took his seat
chandkhala brought paratha for zain
aliya took the plate from her hand
aliya-yeh toh bikul garam nahni hai main dusre lekar aate hoon
aliya went to kitchen for preparing paratha for zain ,she was in a hurry and in the result to it her hand got stuck to hot pan and she shouted
aliya-allah
and zain rushed towards her
zain-aliya kya hua
and took her hand in his hand and blowed some air on it
aliya-zain bohat pain ho rahe hai
and she got tears in her eyes
zain's biggest weakness was aliya's tears
zain-chalo room main
aliya-lekin breakfast wo bhi ready karne hai
zain took her in his arms till their room and placed her on bed
zain rubbed ice on her hand and aliya closed her eyes
aliya-zain abhi bhi bohat pain ho rahe hai
zain kissed her hands
zain-ab thik hai
aliya-haan ab thik hai ,main tumhare liye breakfast lekar aate hoon
zain stopped her by holding her hand
zain-chup chap yahan par baitho aur aaram karo main breakfast office main kar lunga
zain left for office
aliya-office toh chale gaye lekin kiss nahni kiye how unromantic
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CHAPTER-7
BARKAT VILLA
MORNING
ZAIN'S ROOM
zain was getting ready for office just when he got a call
zain-hello
zeeshan-hello zain main zeeshan aaj shaam ko ek meeting hai jaise ke tum ko pata hai ke humne deal crack kar diye hai toh ek party hai khush main tum tumhe aane hai
zain-yeah okay bye
he kept his phone
aliya enters in room with a tray
aliya-zain chalo breakfast kar lo
zain looked at aliya and she was looking breath talking he was staring at her lips which didn't went unnotice by aliya she was feeling shy under his gaze
aliya-zain main neecha jaa rahe hoon tum breakfast kar lena
but before she can leave
zain-aliya aaj...
raat ko party hai issliye ready ho jaane tum time
par
aliya-thik hai ready rahogein
and he leaves for office
aliya-aaj bhi kiss nahni kiye kya karo main
EVENING
aliya was getting ready and was sitting in front of mirror
aliya-main kitne bhi hot kyu na dekho wo toh mujhe kiss bhi nahni kargein
zain -aliya are u ready
aliya-haan aayi rahe hoon
aliya walked downstairs and zain looked at aliya and was lost in her
aliya-chalo
and she waved her hands in front of him
aliya touch his arm
aliya-zain
zain-haan chalo
PARTY
zain and aliya both entered together
zeeshan-arre aao zain
and both shaked their hands to which aliya smiled
zain-yeh meri wife aliya
zeeshan-hello nice to meet you
aliya-thank you
zeeshan-thik hai phir tum donno enjoy karo main abhi aate hoon
zain and aliya both walked together
zeeshan looked at aliya from far and smirked
zeeshan-kya biwi hai zain ke
aliya and zain both were busy in hearing the compliments
girl-chaliye dance floor its dance time
zain gave his hand to aliya and she smiled at him and took his hand
both danced together in full passion but zeeshan starts dancing with aliya
aliya was feeling uncomfortable and zain was fuming in angry
zeeshan-chalo
aliy-chodo mera haath
zain-yeh kya hai zeeshan
zeeshan-zain yeh deal todhe baaki hai aur agar yeh deal tumhe chahiye toh aliya ko mera saath room main bheja do
and winked at him
zain beat him blue and black
zain-nahni chahiye mujhe asie deal
and took aliya's hand in his hand and left for barkat villa
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliy-kyu rokha tumne zeeshan ko jaane deta mujhe
zain pinned her to wall
zain-r u mad asie kaise jaane deta
aliya-tumhe kya farak padhta hai ke woh mujhe chooein yeh nahni
zain-farak padhta hai kyu ki tum meri ho sirf meri aur tumhe chooein ka haq sirf mera hai
aliya-oh really toh touch kyu nahni karte mujhe
zain-hai kuch wajah
aliya-agar wajah thi zain toh nikkah kyu kiye tumne woh bhi mujhse maine asie kya kiye tha jo mujhe yeh sab
and tears rolled down from her cheeks
zain-kyu koi problem hai kya tumhe iss nikkah main
aliya-nahni mujhe koi problem nahni hai lekin jab iss nikkah ka koi future hi nahni hai toh kya fayyad nikkah ka
zain-kyu koi future kyu nahni hai
now zain was on his last stage of angry
aliya-kyu koi plan hai tumhara baccho ka aur plan hogaye bhi kaise itne din hogaye nikkah ko lekin tumne aaj tak mujhe kiss kiye nahni kiye ,mujhe lagate hai mujhe main hi kuch missing hai main hi beautiful nahni hoon lekin bas zain maine bhi decision le liye hai
and she goes near cupboard and took her trunk and starts to pack her things but zain grabs her by her arm and twist her arm
zain-tum bhopal nahni jaa sakte
aliya-main bhopal jaaogein aur tumse toh baat nahni karogein main agar tumne sab ke samne nahni kaha hota ke tum mujhse nikkah karoge toh mera nikkah zubair ke saath hojate kaam se kaam woh maarte toh mujhe pyaar nahni toh dard milte lekin tumhare saath nahni pyaar milte hai mujhe aur nahni dard
and she took her trunk
aliya-khudahafiz zain
BHOPAL
MORNING
its been five hours since she left zain but her mind and soul were craving for zain
aliya-main hi pagal hoon uske liye usko koi farak nahni padhta
and she cried more but their was one person to embrace her and he was none other than zain,he hugged her
aliya-kyu aaye bhopal
zain-aliya mumbai chalo
and she came out from his embrace
aliya-nahni main mumbai aaogein aur nahni tumhare saath
zain grabs her by waist
zain-biwi ho tum meri sharafat thi meri jo kuch nahni kiye lekin aab dekho tum kya karta hoon main
aliya-kyu maaroge tum
zain-nahni
aliya-toh
zain-just wait and watch

both aliya and zain were wearing this



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hey please continue I was enjoying reading it please countinue
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