New TS ### humara rishta.....part 2 pg 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyz...I jst wanted 2 write sumthng regarding dis track...

So basically sarikas true.is out...dat c adopted rohit 2 get an entry.in bhalla house...n rikin.came 2 knw abt its..
Dats why c murdered her...

So sarika is put behind bars along wid ashok...

But raman is in coma...aftr dat juice mixing drama by sarika...
Its.been.15 days



So aftr finding d khabri...n bringing her out in d.light...ishita went 2 Hospital 2 met raman...c was sitting beside ramans bed holding.his hand and creasing it...
Ishita: raman C d khabri is arrested n nw no one can harm u n our family...so plz raman now get up... coz family needs u..
Romi needs u d most now...u hv 2 getwell 4 him...he is totally shattered...he need ur support...ur shoulder 2 cry...plz get up...
I knw u r angry wid me...u dont want ny relation wid me
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Fyn I understand...but jst coz of me u cant punish our family...plz get up...I knw u dont wana c my face ryt...so here I promise u dat I will nvr ever show my face 2 u..
.chali.jaungi kahin dore apse...bas plz u wake up...by saying so c stood up kissed raman on.his forehead...n left his room his lyf...n her heart...
Aftr a week raman woke up from coma...n all.d family members wer happy 2 c him.fyn...dr. Did his checkup n said dat everythng is fyn n he will b decharged aftr 24 hrs...

All d family members came n met him...but his eyes wer searching 4 her...his madrasan..his ishita...but 2 his disappointment c didnt show up...he wanted 2 enquire abt her but den he remember d confrontation wid ishita n shagun...n wat he said 2 ishita...dat der relation is ovr.

C is d dil of family mother of his children...but 4 him c is no1...
He thought ke I knw I tld her 2 stay away 4rm.me...but as much as I knw her...c would definitely cum 2 me...coz c luv me way 2 much...so thinking all dis he drifted into sleep...

Nxt mrng he woke up...n dr
Informed him dat he is perfectly all ryt nw...n ur discharge papers r ready..n ur family is waiting outside 2 take u home...raman was so excited dat finally he is gono c his madrasan...but 3 his bad luck...it was romi bala n mihir who came 2 take him...he wanted 2 askdem abt ishita...but didn't do so as he thought c must b preparing 4 his wlcum in der home...
Finally he reached home...he entered his home n was hugged n wlcumd by every1...but d one for whom he was waiting 2 wlcum him was nower 2 b seen...neither in d kitchen nor in d hall...so he thought may b c might b in der room...mrs. Bhalla saw raman dat he was thinking sumthng...n c knw wat he is thinking so b4 raman can ask nythng.c tld romi.n mihir 2 take raman 2 his room...so dat.he can rest...
2 ramans surprise his.madrasan was not.der in their room also...den he thought sayad madam clinic gaye.hogi...kisike daant ukhadne...but he started self talking dat...I knw c is busy..butitna bhi kya dat 4 d tym I gained conscious c didn't cum 2 meet.me...I knw I wasrude 2 her...but c deserved it...par did c took it so.seriously dat mujhe milne bhi nai aaye abhi tak...he was getting hell angry n irritated...n was ready 2 give his madrasan a long lecture dat kaam ke liye pati ko bhul gaye..
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He dozed off thinking abt hw 2 taunt his wife 4 ignoring him...
It was evening wen he woke up...as he opened his eyes he saw ruhi n adi sitting beside him...as soon as adi ruhi saw der dad waking up dey.hugged him n started crying...
Raman console dem dat he is perfectly all ryt n fit n fine...he made ruhi sit in his lap n adis head was on his lap..so 2 cheer dem up he started cursing der ishimaa..
Coz raman knew dat dey cant here a single bad thing abt der ishimaa...
So he started.. Raman: ruhi why didnt u change ur dress yet..I must say ur.ishimaa hv spoilt u a lot n adi u why r u lukng so messed up...didn't ur ishima got u ready 4 ur classes...aane do tumhari ishimaaa ko... aise toh c keep on giving me lecture abt parenting...but jab.khud par aaye toh c wat c is.doing...bas spoiling u guyz...he was continusly blabbering...but stoped wen he hard ruhi Saying dat papa 1st u hv 2 bring our ishimaa home 2 scold her...raman said yha.I knw c wil cum in a while..aftr her clinic duty..
Adi: papa ishimaa is not der in her clinic
Raman:toh ammma appa ke yahan hogi aa jayegi abhi
Ruhi:c is.NOT der in pattis place also
Raman: are kahin aur.hogi...bas aati hogi bhi thodi dair mai..
Adi n ruhi: papa ishima has not cum home 4 past 20 days...
Raman was shocked he said 4rm past 20 days...wat r u guyz saying abhi 2 days.pahele toh woh.yahin thi...mere hospital jane se pahele
Adi: papa u wer der in hospital 4 20 days...u wer in coma
Raman was shocked he said wat 20 day...coma..raman was abt 2 ask more but simmi interrupted n askd adi n ruhI 2 go n freshen up n have der supper...
Adi n ruhi went off...
Den raman askd simmi abt ishita... den simmi tld dat c left dis house...raman didnt understand ny thng...he askd simmi 2 explain n tell him wat all happend in dis 20days...
So simmi narrated hw he tld ishita dat Der relation is not more.hw he was found unconscious in his room,he his mother blamed ishita 4 his state n throwed her out of d house...hw true face of sarika came out...n den hw ishita lefty...
Raman was getting hell angry dat why didn't dey tell him nythng yesterday...simmi tld dat u didnt ask abt her so v thought u r still angry wid her..
Raman: thik hai mai coma me thai...but atleast u guyz must hv stopped her...
Simmi: aftr finding d true of sarika v went 2 hee c was staying at prateeks place...but wen v reached freq..Prateek informed us dat c left d place...c went away...he said dat he tried 2 stop her...but c was vry firm in leaving...he tld dat c gave him a letter which was addressed 2 u...
raman: give me d letter
Simmi went out n aftr few.min came back wid d letter..handed it 2 raman n left his room...




Precap: ishitas letter 2 raman...i


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svati12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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vry nyc.. waiting for d letter...
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I would like to see this on screen..not coma...but Ishita leaving
Nice write-up
Edited by Mdwst - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting and heart touching also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi
Waiting to see what is in the letter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...
Waiting for the letter
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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1st.of all wish.each.and every1 of.u a vry.happy n rocking.new year...may.dis.year.b d bestest.for.all of u(including me)


2ndly thank u 4 appreciating my writing...


So here's d 2nd part..


Part 2:
Its start wid raman opening d letter...raman had a smile.will.reading d 1st line but dat smile vanished as soon as he read.d 2nd line


Hello ravan kumar


Sorry I 4get ke app ke liye toh humara.rishta khatam...so ravan kumar toh nai bula sakti...so
Hello raman

Hope u r fyn now...n u shuld b as m nt der 2 torture u...
I knw umust b thinking ke why.I wrote dis letter 2 you...I should have talked 2 u...but kya karu kiss haak se baat karu.aapse...biwi hone ka haak apna cheez.liya...
Par haan iss ghar ke bahu aur apke baccho ke.maa ke haak se baat.karne aaye thi appse milne bhi aaye thi but mujhe kisine milne nai diya aapse...coz sab ke liye apki iss halat ka zimedaar mai thi...toh milne chodo apko dekhne bhi nai diya...
Phir Maine bhi koshish nai ke kyn ke taak chuki thi mai sabko manate manate aur samjhte...par koi samajhne.ko he ready nai tha..
I m not saying ke saab ke galti hai...galti toh meri thi...koi proof nai tha na mere pass uss khabri ke khilaaf..jo mai sab ko dikha saku...
Aap soch rahe honge ke aab jab sab saach aa gaya sabke saamne...toh mai aapse kyn nai mili...
Mai.milna chahti thi appse...but sayad aap ko mera milna accha na lagta..tabhi toh hossh mai aane ke baad aapne ek baar bhi mujhe yaad nai kiya...na kisise poocha mai kaise hoon kahan hoon...toh maine socha.jab aapko nai.fikar.meri toh mai.kyn koshish karu apsse.baat karne ke..

Sab ne kaha yeh ghar ye log jitne aapke hai utne mere bhi...aap ke liye nai sahi...but apke baccho ke maa aur bahu ke naahte.mai ghar laut aaon...aur ek pal ke liye maine ye he socha ke mai iss ghar mai aaye toh ruhi ke maa ke haisiyat se he thi na...toh wapas waise he laut aaoon...but myheart didn't permit me dis tym ke.mai sirf maa yha bahu banke aaon...ruhi ke maa ka phase toh kab ka badal gaya tha
.apki biwi Baanq gaye thi...
Par aap toh mujhese rishta tod diya na...kya kahan.tha.ke humara rishta khatam...toh maine socha jab rishta khatam..toh iss rishte se judda mera wajood bhi khatam...so kyn aaon mai wahan jahan merawajood nai...

Isliye Maine jaane ka faisala kiya...

Par aapse bahut kuch kahana hai...
Mujhe laga.ke aap mujhe maaf kar doge..jaise haar bar mai aapko.maaf kar.deti hoon...chahe woh apki surrogacy ke baat.chupani ho,askok ke office mai job karna,adi ka custody matter...yha rinki aur.mihir ka matter...

Mujhe laga.jaise.maine.aapko maaf kiya...apke mujhe ghar se nikal dene ke baad... Meri ishimaa aur acchi maa home or sawal karne ke baad...
Mujhe laga u will 4give me as o alwayz 4give u 4 ur rude behaviour...4 ur hiding things...coz mai inn sab ke peecha aapka pyaar aur aapkI fhikar dekhi chahe woh mere liye ho,apne baccho ke liye yha ghar waloo ke liye...toh.Mujhe laga aap bhi mere iss drama ke peeche ke fhikra dekh logo...par mai galat thi...aapko mera natak mera dhoka mera jhoot dikha but mera.pyaar meri fhikar meri taklif jo paal paal aap logo ko mere liye pareshan hote dekh hoti thi woh nai dikhi aapko...
Aapne mujhe itna he samjha.kya raman...mujhe laga aap samjho ge ke.maine.aisa.kyn kiya...agar aur koi rashta hota toh aapko lagta hai mai yeh rashta aapnati..
But u proved me wrong...ke jitna mai aapko janti hoon...apke bin sooche samjhe mujhe kuch bhi bol jane.ke addat ko janti hoon...aap bhi mujhe itna jaante hoge par nai aap toh mujhe samajh nai paaye...
M sry raman maine iss bar bhi try kiya ke mai bhul jaoonn aapne jo kaha woh Sab...par jab Maine socha Ke mai sab bhool kar wapas aa bhi jaaon...par jab aagle baar agar.kuch aur hua toh aap toh wapas sab blame mujhe par daal dove.
Coz u knw mai toh apko maaf kar he.dungi...
So iss.baar maine aapke liye nai khud ke. Liye socha...meri self respect ke liye socha...aur.mujhe aap sab se dore jana ka option ke saabse sahi laga...
So ones again m sry ke aaplogo ko mere.iss jhoot se bahut sahena.pada aur aap logo ko bahut paresani hui...but nw I promise u dat ke aab.kabhi aap sab ko meri wajhe se koi taklif hogi...
Bas jaate jaate ek baat kahena chahti hoon...logo ko 4 granted lena chod ko coz hume pata.nai kab humari choti se baat logo ko humse humesha humesha ke liye dore kar de...

Gudbye raman...take care of every1 n shagun 2...c needs 2 b taken care of...n give my luv n all d happiness 2 our baby...

P.S : I luv u n will alwz luv u..

Ishita


Raman was totally shatterd ...he was not able 2 feel nythng...ryt nw he jst want 2 go n find his.madrasan...n give her a lecture n scold he for even thinking of leaving him...n their family...so wid dis thought he got up 4rm bed...2 bring his ishita back 2 der.home wer c belong..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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heartwrenching...
bt dnt u think ds tym she had gone overboard wid d drama... n raman nevr said to go away..
anyways nicely written..
update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent with your point view of story but in my view Ishita character is so strong that she never left any difficult situation in mid way.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice liked that ishita's pov has been brot out.. Waiting for next update 😊

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