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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice written
But I can't understand one thing
Why do u all see raman as a culprit
Galti bhale ishita kare
Lekin culprit uska bhi raman hi hota h
Raman ke kisi bhi jhooth se family ne itna nahi saha jitna ishita ke iss ek jhooth se dukh saha h
Usne apni amma ka gala pakad liya
Apni saas se itni badtamiji ki
Wo dono aged h
Unhe heart attack bhi aa sakta tha
Ruhi and adi ko itna daraya itna rulaya
Unse jabardasti I love u shagun mumma bulwaya
Aur Raman wo insaan din raat roya h
Uski raton ki needein din ka chain sab cheen gaya tha
Usne ashok ko jute tak pehna diye
Itni insult sahi
Phir bhi uska saath nahi choda
Aur bhi pata nahi kya kya kiya ishita ne is dauraan
And recently usne apne parivaar ko domestic violence ke case mein jail bhej diya
Jo ki ek non bailable offense h
Wajah bhale koi bhi rahi ho
Wo acp ke saath ghar ka search warrant lakar bhi ghar ki talashi le sakti thi
Usne seedha unhe jail pahuncha diya
Uske iss kadam se raman ki respect uska business sab khatam ho sakta h
Ishita har kisi ko jakar to nahi bata sakti na ki Maine jhooth bola tha
Lekin abhi bhi raman galat h wow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kras

Very nice written

But I can't understand one thing
Why do u all see raman as a culprit
Galti bhale ishita kare
Lekin culprit uska bhi raman hi hota h
Raman ke kisi bhi jhooth se family ne itna nahi saha jitna ishita ke iss ek jhooth se dukh saha h
Usne apni amma ka gala pakad liya
Apni saas se itni badtamiji ki
Wo dono aged h
Unhe heart attack bhi aa sakta tha
Ruhi and adi ko itna daraya itna rulaya
Unse jabardasti I love u shagun mumma bulwaya
Aur Raman wo insaan din raat roya h
Uski raton ki needein din ka chain sab cheen gaya tha
Usne ashok ko jute tak pehna diye
Itni insult sahi
Phir bhi uska saath nahi choda
Aur bhi pata nahi kya kya kiya ishita ne is dauraan
And recently usne apne parivaar ko domestic violence ke case mein jail bhej diya
Jo ki ek non bailable offense h
Wajah bhale koi bhi rahi ho
Wo acp ke saath ghar ka search warrant lakar bhi ghar ki talashi le sakti thi
Usne seedha unhe jail pahuncha diya
Uske iss kadam se raman ki respect uska business sab khatam ho sakta h
Ishita har kisi ko jakar to nahi bata sakti na ki Maine jhooth bola tha
Lekin abhi bhi raman galat h wow



Yaar jitna raman ne saha.hai...usse bahut.zaada.ishita ne saha hai.


C was dying eveyday by hurting her family knowingly...c was shown so many tyms hw hard it is 4 her...
Still c tried 2 b nrml.wid evry1... But in surrogacy track raman was on cloud 9 ...he literally started ignoring ishita...har tym shagun shagun...he hurted her wid her most vulnerable state...

I knw ishita is wrong...n so raman was wrong in d past...but ishita is shown repenting but raman he was alwz shown as he was ryt
.at d tym of surrogacy wen d confrontation was gong on den also he said I did dis 4 u.

Aur mujhe kuch galat nai laga...
So jab.ishita usse 10 tym usse rude behaviour aur uski mistakes ke liye maaf kar sakti hai...toh why cant he...
My point was nly dis
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Both Parts Are Fantastic
Continue Soon
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Thank You So Much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful,pls update soon waiting eagerly & pls add me to d pm list so dat I get updates wen u update d story...
Edited by snehaseshan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zindagi4pyaar

1st.of all wish.each.and every1 of.u a vry.happy n rocking.new year...may.dis.year.b d bestest.for.all of u(including me)


2ndly thank u 4 appreciating my writing...


So here's d 2nd part..


Part 2:
Its start wid raman opening d letter...raman had a smile.will.reading d 1st line but dat smile vanished as soon as he read.d 2nd line


Hello ravan kumar


Sorry I 4get ke app ke liye toh humara.rishta khatam...so ravan kumar toh nai bula sakti...so
Hello raman

Hope u r fyn now...n u shuld b as m nt der 2 torture u...
I knw umust b thinking ke why.I wrote dis letter 2 you...I should have talked 2 u...but kya karu kiss haak se baat karu.aapse...biwi hone ka haak apna cheez.liya...
Par haan iss ghar ke bahu aur apke baccho ke.maa ke haak se baat.karne aaye thi appse milne bhi aaye thi but mujhe kisine milne nai diya aapse...coz sab ke liye apki iss halat ka zimedaar mai thi...toh milne chodo apko dekhne bhi nai diya...
Phir Maine bhi koshish nai ke kyn ke taak chuki thi mai sabko manate manate aur samjhte...par koi samajhne.ko he ready nai tha..
I m not saying ke saab ke galti hai...galti toh meri thi...koi proof nai tha na mere pass uss khabri ke khilaaf..jo mai sab ko dikha saku...
Aap soch rahe honge ke aab jab sab saach aa gaya sabke saamne...toh mai aapse kyn nai mili...
Mai.milna chahti thi appse...but sayad aap ko mera milna accha na lagta..tabhi toh hossh mai aane ke baad aapne ek baar bhi mujhe yaad nai kiya...na kisise poocha mai kaise hoon kahan hoon...toh maine socha.jab aapko nai.fikar.meri toh mai.kyn koshish karu apsse.baat karne ke..

Sab ne kaha yeh ghar ye log jitne aapke hai utne mere bhi...aap ke liye nai sahi...but apke baccho ke maa aur bahu ke naahte.mai ghar laut aaon...aur ek pal ke liye maine ye he socha ke mai iss ghar mai aaye toh ruhi ke maa ke haisiyat se he thi na...toh wapas waise he laut aaoon...but myheart didn't permit me dis tym ke.mai sirf maa yha bahu banke aaon...ruhi ke maa ka phase toh kab ka badal gaya tha
.apki biwi Baanq gaye thi...
Par aap toh mujhese rishta tod diya na...kya kahan.tha.ke humara rishta khatam...toh maine socha jab rishta khatam..toh iss rishte se judda mera wajood bhi khatam...so kyn aaon mai wahan jahan merawajood nai...

Isliye Maine jaane ka faisala kiya...

Par aapse bahut kuch kahana hai...
Mujhe laga.ke aap mujhe maaf kar doge..jaise haar bar mai aapko.maaf kar.deti hoon...chahe woh apki surrogacy ke baat.chupani ho,askok ke office mai job karna,adi ka custody matter...yha rinki aur.mihir ka matter...

Mujhe laga.jaise.maine.aapko maaf kiya...apke mujhe ghar se nikal dene ke baad... Meri ishimaa aur acchi maa home or sawal karne ke baad...
Mujhe laga u will 4give me as o alwayz 4give u 4 ur rude behaviour...4 ur hiding things...coz mai inn sab ke peecha aapka pyaar aur aapkI fhikar dekhi chahe woh mere liye ho,apne baccho ke liye yha ghar waloo ke liye...toh.Mujhe laga aap bhi mere iss drama ke peeche ke fhikra dekh logo...par mai galat thi...aapko mera natak mera dhoka mera jhoot dikha but mera.pyaar meri fhikar meri taklif jo paal paal aap logo ko mere liye pareshan hote dekh hoti thi woh nai dikhi aapko...
Aapne mujhe itna he samjha.kya raman...mujhe laga aap samjho ge ke.maine.aisa.kyn kiya...agar aur koi rashta hota toh aapko lagta hai mai yeh rashta aapnati..
But u proved me wrong...ke jitna mai aapko janti hoon...apke bin sooche samjhe mujhe kuch bhi bol jane.ke addat ko janti hoon...aap bhi mujhe itna jaante hoge par nai aap toh mujhe samajh nai paaye...
M sry raman maine iss bar bhi try kiya ke mai bhul jaoonn aapne jo kaha woh Sab...par jab Maine socha Ke mai sab bhool kar wapas aa bhi jaaon...par jab aagle baar agar.kuch aur hua toh aap toh wapas sab blame mujhe par daal dove.
Coz u knw mai toh apko maaf kar he.dungi...
So iss.baar maine aapke liye nai khud ke. Liye socha...meri self respect ke liye socha...aur.mujhe aap sab se dore jana ka option ke saabse sahi laga...
So ones again m sry ke aaplogo ko mere.iss jhoot se bahut sahena.pada aur aap logo ko bahut paresani hui...but nw I promise u dat ke aab.kabhi aap sab ko meri wajhe se koi taklif hogi...
Bas jaate jaate ek baat kahena chahti hoon...logo ko 4 granted lena chod ko coz hume pata.nai kab humari choti se baat logo ko humse humesha humesha ke liye dore kar de...

Gudbye raman...take care of every1 n shagun 2...c needs 2 b taken care of...n give my luv n all d happiness 2 our baby...

P.S : I luv u n will alwz luv u..

Ishita


Raman was totally shatterd ...he was not able 2 feel nythng...ryt nw he jst want 2 go n find his.madrasan...n give her a lecture n scold he for even thinking of leaving him...n their family...so wid dis thought he got up 4rm bed...2 bring his ishita back 2 der.home wer c belong..


like really pehla part padke mujhe laga kuch accha hoga but 1 more raman hater hahahahahha
wah kya likha hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When are you going to update I'm waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can't wait please update soon year don't be late
Any way awesome update'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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