The Vengeance Lover thread 4.....Note @page 138.....29th Aug 2017

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just too shocked to be on 4th thread...never thought i will sustain for this long...i m still doubtful how can u guys like my story this much

Thanx alot readers.🤗...n sorry too for not that regular😉


P.S.- story is inspired by one of my fav korean drama which i think will suit best on maan n geet...

P.S.S. - this one is dedicted to my vampy n devil......missing u devil😭

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For the truly wronged, real satisfaction can only be found in one of two places: absolute forgiveness, or mortal vindication. This is not a story about forgiveness.

Maan's POV

I sat on the roof ,staring the darkness of night. There wasn't a single star in sky, its is pitch dark with deadly silence which speaks out my present condition to me. A medical student with bright future was pushed into this ugly dark phase. Yes, I m criminal in the eyes of law as I killed a man who had forced my girl ...the love of life. Due to circumstances and my medical background they wer forced to punished me for only 5 yrs but these 5 yrs snatched my happiness, from my life..leaving trails of this dark truth and betrayal .

In return I was deceived... betrayal by my love...for whom i accepted that false allegation...yes that is true...i didn't killed anyone, i just saved my love my life to get punished by law.

But I wont let it govern my future I wont push myself more into this darkness. I have decided to fight back my destiny. I will snatch back all the happiness back to my life n let it brighten with my bright future if not for me but i have to do for my sister. I took the blame to save my love..to prove my love ..those years I spent in jail..in the only hope that she will support me and my sister... I accepted her crime for her bright future letting mine in to blaze in fire..but now it's my time to shine in this bright sky and for her to pay back ...

When everything you love has been stolen from you, sometimes all you have left is revenge.
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Maan Singh Khurana- A 4 yr medical student, very bright, topper of his university and madly in love with his gf but all in past.

Geet Handa - only daughter of Mohinder Handa and Priya Handa

Sameera Handa - Maan's ex-girlfriend and now wife of Mohinder Handa and step-mom of Geet

Mohinder Handa - Owner of Handa Enterprises

Annie - Maan's Sister

Arjun - Maan's Best friend

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congrats for the new thread vandy 🥳
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Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

congrats for the new thread vandy 🥳

Thanx alot di😃😃
howz u??
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They both boarded flight...but whole way back to India, geet was very disturbed n silent...maan tried asking her many times but everytime she answered him to b office problem but maan knows it is more than that...but he didn't force her to share just now...he knows geet will herself share with him but she need time to get acquainted with the problem herself first...

They reached India in late night hours so maan decided to drop geet first at handa mansion ...geet so many times tried to deny as he have to travel opposite way...n she can handle it very well as it was not her first time...but maan didn't change his stand n in end geet had to go with maan way...as maan had his car parked in the parking area...they left in it...

Drive was silent again...maan was driving n geet was lost in her thought n looking outside...

After what happened in between them...this silence was killing maan...it was giving negative vibes to him...like it was silence before the storm...he was fearing any kind of misunderstanding between them...as after what sameera planned to do in paris, he was sure sameera won't sit quite till she separate geet n him... she will plan something for sure to harm him or geet... He is not afraid of himself but for geet and their relation in which they hardly took one step forward n he can't lose geet that too because of some misunderstandings created by sameera...

Whole way he was thinking n noticing geet...wanted to break the silence but something within him stoping him...

He stopped the car when they reached at handa mansion n Geet passed smile at him n said...
Ohk maan...goodnight n take care...n moved towards the gate to step down...when maan holds her hand n stopped her

Geet I need to talk to u something...its very important...I need to tell u what happened yesterday night...y I was late...I....geet kept her finger on his lips to hush him...both were looking in eachother eyes...lost in pool of emotions their eyes were showing to eachother...

(credit to uploader...got from net)

Shhh...maan I don't know y I m becoming so irrational in ur case ...i learnt my lesson not to trust anyone and I had always follow that in past ...but u have changed me and my belief too...now I trust u alot...may be more than I trust myself n I also believe u won't break it...and if u ask me reason y I do... I don't have any reason y I do so...I don't know u from long nor anything about ur past...but frankly when u r near to me ...with me...nothing matters...no past... no future...for once I want to live in present with u...just u n me...

Mmm.....maan tried to say something but geet finger was still on his lips n seeing him speak...geet pressed her finger bit forcefully on his lips..

Shh...what matter to me is that u came...may b late but u came there for me....geet said to him with smile...

Maan removes her finger placed on his lips and holds her hand in between his. Slowly he caressed his thumb over her palm and say


geet I m truly honoured ...felt bless to have ur immense faith n trust but I won't b in peace till I share with u.....he take her hand near his lips n gave a kiss on her hand still holding it...n said...for me geet...please...

Geet passed smile to him n said....ohk...just for u...tomorrow at dinner...will meet u at abc place...

Maan smile heartily listening to geet...n said ohk...I will b there at 8...chalo now u go n take rest...else ur fever will b back...bye n gn...take care

Geet nodded at him.n said...u too take care n goodnight...drive safe...

Geet moved in to her home n maan drive away ...


In office


Both maan n geet reached office n was busy in work from morning...few day off result in piles of files to be work on...n didn't allow them to meet eachother...finally lunch time approaches...maan decided to ask geet for lunch n go out to near restaurant ...maan approached geet cabin and just entered inside without knocking...

Gee...his word didn't get completed seeing some man hugging his geet...sudden anger just shoot inside his nerves but he controlled himself ...... its just hug maan...its commom nowdays...cool down...

But maan's voice was enough for karan to break his hug n looked at him...where as geet was still in shock to what happened with her in last 5 min...

5 min earlier...(flashback)

Geet was working on her file when she heared knock and without looking at it ...she just asked to come in...when for 2 min no one speak up ...she looked above n was shocked seeing karan...now she understood whole thing was cooked up by karan n her father to prepone her trip as there was no emergency in office which cant wait for one more day...her anger shoot up n she stood up n went near karan and hold his collarin her hand n said...what is ur problem karan...y u lied about dad's health...how can u be just stone hearted...u know what dad mean to me...still u lied about his health...

But karan was lost looking at her...it was after that incident, she was reacting to him...may b showing her anger but it was ice breakage for karan...as in past she just become to numb to him...always ignoring him and if in some circumstances she had to talk to her ...it will b just professional...

Karan was overwhelemed and just hugged her...whereas geet was in shocked seeing his reaction it was just when maan entered her cabin.

Flashback end


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finally updating...😆😆
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Congrats on new thread di😃
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