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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liking the suspense element here...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi all
I couldnt format the layout of this chapter because this is typed frm my phone. Pls excuse for spelling mistakes and variations in text size.
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Chapter 5

Drinks were served, the lawn was decorated , the ball room looked amazingly decorated. The women were gossipping and complementing each other. Men were talking about buisness and much more.despite all these all their eyes fell on the lady who entered. It was ajabde looking less human and more angel. Jalal was list in her beauty. Each and everyone praised her except pratap who didnt even had a proper look at her stunning beauty.soon jaimal ji a reputed staff and the host if the day entered and welcomed all their guests.
Jj- ladies and gentlemen, as you all know, this party is organized to celebrated the new found friendship between sisodiyas and mughals and this is only possible because of pratap and ajabde. I request them to pair up for today's ball too and join us for a dance here.
Both if them were reluctant but finally had ti agree due to endless requests frm friends and comrades.they unwillingly held each others hand and moved forward to the arena. The dance floor was occupied by numerous couples and also by praja right in the center . They held each other and started to dance.the song played.

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari aduri kahani...
Hamari adhuri kahaani

the song resembled their life, their past and their live.they wanted to forget it but destiny had something else for them.They tried not to liok at each other but failed miserably as they couldnt resist each other. This eventually led to a cute eye lock. The song resembled their life.the crowd cheered up for them. However there was a fire of jealousy in phools as well as jalals eyes. Phool saw jalal staring at the them and soon realused heshared the same feeling if jealousy and hatred. Shewalked upto jalal.
P- hi iam phool.
J-iam jalal.
P- i kniw you love ajabde and thats why you cant see her with someone else.
Jalal was shocked to hear this. Only he knew his feeling and howcome this girl came to know of it??
J-what do you mean ?
P - i know u r faking nit to know it but listen i love pratap and u love ajab. If we both join together we can create a barrier between them and also have our owm profit in it.
J- i see !! You are smart enough !! Its a deal then. But before we create a rift between then first we need to create trust and then destroy it. Breaking trust once again will be unbearable for them and they will hate each other to the utmost.
he then tells his plan.
P- way to go .thats a good one but can you please tell me what has happened in their past ??
J- ha ha ha... their past.. it is truely said that each live story has a villain and yeah !! Iam the villain of this live story.
Saying this he left leaving a confused phool behind.

Pratap and ajabde danced to the song lost being lost in each other.
Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..

Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahaani.
Soon the crowd gave them thundering applause and cheered for them.they just realized the world around them amd broke their eye lock which was happening for past few minutes( indeed a long one😊).

Meanwhile a brand new costly bmw car sopped infront of the lawn. From it stepped out a woman in an elegant black and golden saree and a young lady in a red gown.

Seeing them , pratap ran towards them and hugged them , gave them a brand welcome. This was not unnoticed by ajab. A taer rolled down her rosy cheeks. She tried her best to hide the tears but failed miserably.
As they proceed, Ajabde was noticed by the women .
Woman-Ajabde!!!
Ajab- rani ma...
She went ahead to hug the woman there. Yes!! It was jaiwanta bai. It was pratap's mother and her beloved rani maa. The young lady was none other than maan kanwar, prataps sister.Later Ajab went and hugged maan who was over whelmed to see her.ajab gave them a briefing of what she was doing there. Maan informed ajabde that they have come from uk for this bash and would be in india for around for few weeks.
This however made ajab happy, very happy...

Meanwhile pratap came to join them and ajab left them faking some excuse.jb saw that ajab was trying to avoid pratap and so was he. She decided to bring them back together and to the erase misunderstandings between them forever.
Eaxh and every one enjoyed the party.Phool saw ajabde having her drink near the swimming pool.
Phool to herself- ajab you have enjoyed a lot. I swear i will get you out of prataps life forever. This day is gonna be your last day ever.
She went right near ajabde and involved her in her talks.she drugged ajabdes drink and acted friendly to her and asked her to have the drink. Ajabde beleiving the girl iut there dank the glass in 9ne gi. Siddenly she started feeling dizzy and started walking without any balance. She was unable to walk and splashhh she fell into the pool.the poor girld didnt even know to swim and couldnt even scream for help. Luckily ajabde was noticed by jaimals wife who screames and gatheted people. Pratap couldnt beleive what he saw. Ajabde
Had almost given. She would die any time.
He didnt care about the surrounding and jumped right into the water to save his ex- girlfriend. His hatred towards her couldnt stop him from saving ajabde. Prataps strong hand clung around her and he pulled her out of water. A much worried jb came running towards them. Ajabde was unconcious.soon a doctor was caleed and he checjed ajabde.he managed to get the water iut if her body and disclosed that she had been drugged. All if them were shocked.

The party transformed into a nightmare. One by one all guest left. Jb asked pratap to drop an unconcious ajabde home. He carried ajab in a bridal styleo his heep and left for her home.
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Precap: subho at home and past unveils.
I know bohot spelling mistakes hain coz i have written it from my phone and auto correct indeed creates trouble. Please excuse me it it was boring coz i dont have much experience writing stories like this.pls pls s comment.
Positive and negative response welcomed...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was very touchy... N Jalal between Ajab n Pratap!!! Now the past is getting interesting...
Presently is Ajab under some debit of Jalal n so she is working for him???

Waiting for the past to be revealed!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Actually ajab considers jalal to be her good friend and is unknown abt his feelings for her. She is just working for him. she has no debt😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome...waiting for next...pl z can't wait to know the unknown truth😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6
Punwar residency.

There was utter silence in her room .ajab was surrounded by her mother and subho. Subho was her best friend and was away for almost 2 years.
She was the only person whom ajabde confided in.hansa bai sat on the edge of the bed weeping while subho constantly assured her that ajab was alright. A ray of hope lit for hansa when she saw her precious daugher ajabde open her eyes.

A- maa.. wh..where am i?? How did i reach here???
H-ajab dont worry my child you are safe now. Pratap bought you home
A-pratap? Oh my god !! Did dataa say anything
H- no ajab . Your data is not at home.he went...

Subho who was overwhelmed interfered.
S- arre auntie. Let it be. Let us be thankful that ajabis fine.
Meanwhile ajab who noticed subho was releived.
A- subho when did you come?
S- few hours ago ajab but let it be!! What you need rightnow is some rest!!
H- subho is right ajab. Dont take strain and go to rest

Soon hansa and subho left a confused and devasted ajab . She tried hard to temember what happend.this make her conscience subjugated her with some qiestion which probably she coundnt answer.
Why did phool drug me???
Why did pratap rescue me??
Why didn't he refuse todrop me home??
And a lot more. She couldnt take it anymore.she moved out of her room and sat in her balcony. as she looked at the moon a drop of tear fell from her beautiful eyes. She sat remembering the worst day of her life.

----------4 years ago--------------
She sat dressed in her bridal outfit looking as beautiful as an angel.hes it was her day finally she would become his . Only his. After a lit of obstacles she had managed to win her love. This time she wouldnt let him go.
Ajabdeee the baraat is here already... and purohit ji is calling the bride.said subho and soon escorted her to the mandap. She sat in the mandap and looked at her love ..pratap. he too looked at her and both of them shared a short but cute eyelock. Soon the rituals began. Each increasing moment increased herlove for him. he was about to make her wear the mangal sutra. Suddenly a small envelope fell near the havan kund. They wondered ehat it was. Pratap took it and opened it. His hands shivered as he read it. It have him the greatest shock.tears ran out of his eyes.
P- ajab what is this ? How could you betray me??
A- pratap ?? What are u saying ?? Me and betrayal ! Never my love
P- enough ajabde. Why are you acting? I am not a fool right now. Now i know your reality. You and your husband were trying to cheat me.
Ajab said with tears running out-pratap what are you saying? I dont understand.. my husband?? Pratap you are the only man in my life.
P-stop it ajabde. Look at this paper. This is a proof. You were married to jalal a year ago. This is ur marriage certificate. I wonder how you could cheat me!! Shame on you !
Ajab grabbed the paper with trembling hands.
She said- beleive me . This is false pratap. All these are false.dont you trust me???I have not married him and i dont have any affair with him.
these ate false allegations.
P- enough its enough. I have had a lot of your drama. Now i wont melt. Love is dead ajabde. My love for you is dead.
Saying so he removed the pagdi and left the mandap leaving a shoresd and devastated bride behind. Jaiwanta and maan ran to console him while hansa and rao mamrakh stayed with ajabde. The guests departed.she felt the whole world on her. She couldnt accept what has happened. Her most brightest day bought darkness into her life.How could he not trust her?? She burst out and said I hate him. I hate him the most.

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By this time ajab was crying vigrously. Subho who knew her friend very well knew what she would be going through and ran to pacify her.
A- how could he do this to me subho?? How could he leave me behind?what was my fault? I only loved him.
Subho kept her head on her lap and kept on listening her friend.
A- how could he think i had an affair. how could he leave me on the mandap jyst like that? Didnt he think of me even once?? Why dint he try to understand me??i hate him subho ! I hate him .he is the worst man ever. I hate him. He is a cheat who dont know to trust someone. I hate him...

The whole night she cried and shared her worries and subho attentively listened to her and pacified her.

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Hey guys i have updated it after a long time.
I am not an active member u see! And yes pls ignore spelling mistakes and no cross checking is done.
Pls i need your comments and views

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG

Pratu believed some papers over the person he claimed to love
Seriously iss Pratu ko accha se lesson do in fact main toh bolti hoon Ajabde choose Jalal over this halkat yeda Pratu

Jab tum sachi mein chali jaogi na tab sabak milega
Be happy with the one who loves you


Pratap you disappoint me yet again

Nice update
waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice update n the reason for fallout was ... Kya Pratap kuch bhi?? Do you understand the phrase FORGED DOCUMENTS ??
And if you were so angry with Ajab then you should also be angry with Jalal; Then why business with them and that too as partners for a big deal??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unress
Pratu should get a biggg punishment for this...make him cry...
He is a dumboo
Cheer up Ajab!!!

Update soon
Edited by Mnp279 - 9 years ago

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