Twinj One Shot FanFic - The Truth Revealed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I'm not really new to the show I've watched it since day 1 but I have been a silent reader for a while. So basically today I decided to create my own one shot of how Yuvi's truth will be shown since the show is going nowhere so far I don't expect it to with all this dragging but hey we should have expected the CVS to just create more unnecessary drama.

Anyway enjoy xx

THE TRUTH

Trust takes years to build but seconds to break and forever to repair'

NEW YEARS PARTY

Kunj: how many times do I have to tell you to stop this Yuvi drama twinkle can you not understand how many people are getting hurt because of your foolishness

Kunj screamed as he held tightly onto twinkles arm while the expression of pain and hurt was clearly seen on twinkles face

Twinkle: Kunj, please hear me out once...

Kunj: NO, you listen Twinkle this was meant to be a joyous new year's party but no you had to go and try to prove Yuvi's illness is all an act. Was your birthday not enough how much will you try to prove yourself when the truth is in front of you when will you stop all this drama it's embarrassing now

Twinkles expression quickly changed to anger. Was Kunj embarrassed by her? Everything she was doing was for him for his family. Bebe got hurt because of Anita aunty, Kunj had to face so much torture from Yuvi and now he says he is embarrassed of me of my actions that is only for his and his family's benefit

Bebe: Kunj putar at least hear her out...

Kunj: No Bebe enough is enough how much more pain will our family have to go through because of her

Anita: wow twinkle now you're saying my son is acting his illness where is her proof huh where is that video she speaks of where is the CD?

Twinkle: I don't know it was on the table now it's disappeared how am I meant to know, Yuvi must have found it and took it

Anita: Bebe Kunj is absolutely right Twinkle has been nothing but trouble for this family...

Leela: ENOUGH!! How dare you Anita accuse my daughter when this problem started because of Yuvi this is not my daughters fault and I have been quiet for all this time but not anymore I have full faith that my daughter has done nothing wrong

Anita: How dare you point fingers at my son because of your son in law and daughter my son is in this condition today that he looks at me not as a child looking at their mother but a stranger

Leela: Maybe you should think why your son is in the condition he is today or so called condition don't forget it was your son who went to Goa to cause trouble for my children

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Bubbly was walking down the corridor when she bumps into a waiter

Bubbly: oh I'm so sorry

The waiter got up and hurried along the corridor and disappeared in the distance. Bubbly began to walk when something caught onto her shoes

Bubbly: what's this? A CD what's is doing here oh that waiter must have dropped it maybe it was meant for the music for the party since there is no music and no music means no party

(FLASHBACK SHOWS ANITA SEEING THE VIDEO AND IS SHOCKED THEN SHE GIVES MONEY TO A WAITER TO GET RID OF THE CD)

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Twinkle: Please Kunj trust me I am not lying you have to believe me this is all Yuvi's Plan to cause misunderstandings...

Yuvi: No dos Yuvi did nothing believe me yuvi did nothing yuvi good boy this twinkle bad very bad twinkle no like Yuvi that's why Twinkle make Yuvi look bad... Bad Twinkle VERY BAD twinkle

Yuvi said to Kunj who calmed him down then turned towards twinkle and winked while twinkle looked on disgusted

Kunj: JUST STOP IT TWINKLE STOP IT OR I SWEAR I WILL BREAK MY RELATIONSHIP WITH YOU...

A loud screech filled the hall...

The screen appears with Yuvi's face

Yuvi asks twinkle, have you gone mad? Twinkle says yes I have gone mad, nothing is remaining in my life, you have destroyed everything, you have taken away my mother from me, my mother doesn't even talk to me, my husband doesn't love me, my in-laws don't like me and now you are acting like a kid to destroy my marriage, Yuvi says I am doing all this for you? We will live together, Twinkle says you are destroying my life and saying that you care for me? Yuvi says I really love you and I realized it when you were getting married to Kunj, I really love you, from that time, I have done everything for you, whatever I did in Goa then this kid acting is all done to get you back, to be with you, Twinkle says you are lying, you are doing all this to take revenge for your mother, Yuvi says no it was before, I accept that I used to not love you before your marriage, I wanted to take revenge from your mother and what's better than getting married to you? The time we spent together was a lie, it was my mother's plan, I am sorry I lied to you but now i really love you, leave old things, and comeback. Yuvi says to Twinkle that I have done mistakes but now I will rectify everything, you come to me and leave Kunj, Twinkle says this is not an option now, Yuvi says we will live together, Twinkle says leave me alone, Yuvi says okay i am leaving but you leave that railing and comes inside,

SCREEN ENDS

Bebe: what is this? WHAT IS THIS? SOMEONE ANSWER ME YUVI WHAT HAVE YOU DONE YOU PLYED SUCH A BIG GAME

Yuvi remains speechless and looks towards twinkle angrily along with his mother

Bebe: Wow Anita what a game you played with this family how low can you get that you tried to break my Twinkle and Kunj's Shaadhi

Anita: No Bebe I never knew this how could I know my own child slapped me of course I believed he lost his memory

Surjeet: Yes Bebe don't blame Anita or Yuvi this is all Twinkles planning to get them out of the house

Bebe: ENOUGH!!!!

Bebe: walks towards twinkle and wipes the tears away on twinkles cheeks

Bebe: No one believed you no one listened to you and you had tried to show us the truth but no one paid attention I put my hands together and seek forgiveness from you twinkle that you have been a victim in this cruel game and you were the one to suffer the most

Twinkle: No Bebe please don't apologise you have always supported me and been by my side it would be wrong for you to apologise

Twinkle wipes her tears away from her face and walks to a shell shocked Kunj and held onto his arms

Twinkle: What's the matter Kunj why are you so quiet? Do you not trust me know even after seeing this video huh ANSWER ME KUNJ

Kunj: I...I... I am...

Twinkle: what Kunj what are you shocked, surprised, hurt I know you felt horrible and guilty that you put Yuvi in this condition but did you have no faith in me did you have no trust in your wife after everything I did was try to be a good wife yes I never loved you but I gave my all to you in terms of being a good wife but yet you still doubted me... but I can't blame you all for it you were too blinded by Yuvi's act but still you didn't even have 1% of trust in me...

Twinkles voice broke as tears fell down her cheek while Kunj couldn't even look into his wife's eyes because of the betrayal and mistrust she eyed him with. She let go of his arms and walked towards Yuvi

Twinkle: Well done Yuvi you did it you managed to cause a misunderstanding between me and my husband that's what you wanted right

Yuvi: Twinkle how can you I did this all for you and now you're going against me still...yes I did this all to break your relationship with Kunj because I HATE KUNJ SARNA I HATE HIM SO MUCH...

Twinkle slapped Yuvi hard as Yuvi held his cheek in anger

Anita: HOW DARE YOU SLAP MY SON

Leela: SHUT UP ANITA THIS WAS YOUR SONS MISTAKE AND YET YOU ARE STILL TAKING HIS SIDE ARE YOU NOT ASHAMED SOME WHAT OF WHAT YOUR SON HAS CAUSED

Anita: LEELA

Bebe: ENOUGH!!! I HAVE DECIDED WHAT DECISION WIL BE MADE

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PRECAP:

Bebe: I have decided that today Anita and Yuvi will leave this house

Surjeet: WHAT NO BEBE THIS IS NOT HAPPENING OR I WILL LEAVE TOO

Twinkle: No Bebe Anita aunty and Yuvi will not leave this house, they need to be in this house for the sake of Surjeet uncle... (Twinkle looks towards Kunj) When a husband only sees his wife as just a responsibility where there is no trust or love then what's the point of this relationship... trust takes years to build but seconds to break and forever to repair which is why I have decided that I will leave this house...

Everyone looks on shocked

Hoped you liked this scene I made up and this was my first time writing something like this for the show.

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MeDHellsAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear.
Welcome to the forum as a writer.
The OS was just amazing.
Loved it to the core.
Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hey dear.

Welcome to the forum as a writer.
The OS was just amazing.
Loved it to the core.
Continue soon.😊

Hey thank you I'm glad you liked it and yeah i may because i did enjoy writing it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZaYa13

Hey thank you I'm glad you liked it and yeah i may because i did enjoy writing it

Ya plz continue it soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm so sad it ended LOL. This was great, like the twinkle I've been waiting to see! She should not just be treated as a responsibility, she deserves trust and love and she's not getting it in the Sarna house. So thank you for this! I can't wait for the next update! (:
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum.
Loved the OS.
Waiting to see what happens next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: teddyyy

I'm so sad it ended LOL. This was great, like the twinkle I've been waiting to see! She should not just be treated as a responsibility, she deserves trust and love and she's not getting it in the Sarna house. So thank you for this! I can't wait for the next update! (:


Lol yeah and thanks. Same here i wanted that feisty Twinkle back that was one reason i liked the show that she wasn't going to be that typical wife or bahu but i guess maybe she may since thats the way its looking.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Duumps

Welcome to the forum.

Loved the OS.
Waiting to see what happens next.

Thanks i may carry this one on or may not it was just an OS I was planning to write along with what happens in the show but just change the way they wrote it or change what could have happened
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. Fantastic OS, well done!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG, dont leave it an OS. Write more where Kunj wins back Twinkle!! Please!!!!

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