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Neetu

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Welcome to "Thread - 6" of "Revenge"...

Hola Guys, 🤗

Eeeps!! Omg its 6th thread here!!
A big wala THANK YOU to all my lovely readers...
Guys thank you thank you thank you so much for your appreciation to this story...
M glad to have such an awesome people of friends cum readers!!

Writers doesn't become writer just because of their writing but because of the readers... and I seriously believe that!!

You know what guys...

"You all are THE BEST..."

Love you all...❤️

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@INDEX@

THREAD-1

THREAD-2

THREAD-3

THREAD-4

THREAD-5

Chapter 44 scroll down

Chapter 45
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132904289

Chapter 46

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133881357

Chapter 47

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134881903

Chapter 48

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/136103600

THREAD - 7

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Posted: 9 years ago

congratulations on new thread neetu

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...Chapter - 44...

After police left Jalal turned towards Jodha... His eyes are still red... She knows now, after arth, its her turn to face the 'Devil'...

She gulped hard, the red eyes are depicting the enormous amount of fear, she is feeling now... Her whole self got chilled with the infuriation that darkened orbs of her husband is showing...

She knows, the warnings she has received from him, taking them for granted, she has let them go... If she has taken them seriously then the situation which has caused havocs would not have been occurred... Only if...

"Ughhh... What the hell do you think of yourself Jodha??" shouting in frustration he ran his fingers across his well gelled thick locks... Making his wife shiver at her place...

"What if vo tumhe kuch kar deta?? To kya karta mai jo?? I would have died!!" He spoke with utter rage and frustration...

"Jalal... Vo... I..." but cutting her off, pinning her down on the sofa he ferociously claimed her lips... Oozing out his frustration with anger... Blood came out due to constant chewing from the corner of her lips...

Its not new to her... She had this experience before also...

Jodha tried her best to push him, but too heavy to be pushed... She tightly clutched his hairs indicating that she can't take it anymore...

"How many times I have told you to stay away from that bloody Artharav !!" his anger and fear spoke along... Resulting his palm to got fisted...

"Ja.. Jalal I ne.. Never... Knew about... His intentions... Not even...a... A hint..." She said the truth fumbling, trembling and shivering badly...

Wiping the blood cautiously, he gently pecked the corner... Which lessens her shivering a little...

"Damn!! Jo I have warned you earlier again and again... Do you know what I have experienced when I saw that damn Artharva hands on you!! You know what kind of fear I have gone through..." Banging his fist on the floor, his helplessness and vulnerability poured out in front of her...

Coming close to him, she cupped his face... His handsome features were reflecting the ache that enormous amount of his pure heart held... The feirceness that orbs are depicting to kill that monster...

"Jalal... M fine... Mai thik hu..." She said while gently kissing his forehead... His self got relived with the smooth and feathery touch... The tensed body muscles got relaxed as a huge gush of carbon dioxide left his lungs...

Immediately detaching his face from the smooth touch... His rough hands traveled to his wife's cheeks... Panicky took over him... Pulling her in his embrace...

"Jo... Are you fine... Thik hona tum?? Are you ok?? Does that moron harmed you??" his worry got showered on her... The red eyes widened at mere thought of a harm reaching her...

" Jalal... Jalal... Jalal... M fine... Really!!" Jodha said making him wake up from an unknown sleep which has gotten him so worried...

His lips checked upon her face while lingering on... Closing her eyes in escaty, she rubbed his back... Making him tension free...

Trailing down his lips from her jaw to her throat he reached up to her shoulder... At a slight touch on her shoulder a hissing sound of pain escaped from her mouth...

His brows got furrowed in anticipation... Immediately freeing her from the pleasure, his lips were bestowing upon her... He looked up...

Tightly closed eyes and pressed lips into each other... The look was enough for Jalal to find out about the pain his beloved is having...

Instantly while having care to not to hurt her, he slid down her tee a little from her shoulder... Because of loosens the tee without any difficulty came a little down...

Making his jaw clenched in fury and his grip to tighten on her...
"Jalal..." She hissed again... Coming in his senses, he worrily scooped up her in his arms and headed towards their room...

Placing her gently on bed... He went to took out the first aid kit...

Jodha's phone started to vibrate... Showing an unknown number on the screen... Watching the number, being unknown, she cuts the call...

****

Coming out of the airport with his hands possessvily snaked around her... They stepped out...

"Taxi..." He called out...

A taxi stopped in front of them... He very carefully made him sit inside, keeping the luggage on the top, he carefully sit down beside her...

And the taxi drove away leaving a hues of dust mixing in the air...

****

Sitting at her back, he gently applied ointment on the mere red marks... Blowing air simultaneously to kill the burning sensation that ointment is causing ...

His hot breath fanning over her shoulder, resulted a chill ran to her spine...

Feeling the shiver under his fingertips, a lop sided smirk followed by his gentle massage formed its way...

****

They checked in the hotel and pulling her again in his embrace he walked to the reception...

Pressing the door of elevator, they waited... Soon the door got opened and stepping inside, he pressed the desired button...

Coming out of the lift, they headed to the room...

****

Clutching the bedsheets in her tiny fists, Jodha arched back... The expert petals of her husband are giving her the unbearable pleasure ...

Turning around she pressed her lips into his'... Feeling the smirk forming against her mouth, she detached herself from him while panting heavily...

The smirk grew wider as watching his wife's blushing face is really a treat to his eyes...

Gently laying her down... Removing his shirt, the orbs got bored into each other... His eyes is searching for the emotions which he has carved for whole life...

She knew how much he has suffered, how much his soul has ached, how much his broken heart has bleed...

His eyes are flowing... His most precious possession was going to be tattered, if he would not have been reached at right time...

Resting his forehead on hers... He closed his eyes and thanked almighty...

"Jo you know what... You are so special... Bohot special ho tum mere liye... And m sorry"
He indicated to the injury on her lip...

Opening her teary eyes she watched him... Unable to control her emotions, she hugged him as tightly as a human can... Crying profusely in his chest...

After all she too got afraid after watching that monster... What if Jalal would not have reached on time!! Her whole self got shuddered in fear...

Making her comfortable Jalal gently got flipped on bed... Now Jalal is laying on bed and Jodha is laying on him...
Caressing her hairs, he tried to comfort his wife... Finally the sobs decreased...

After some time when she slipped into deep slumber, Jodha's phone started to vibrate, again a call from an unknown number, Jalal watched the number... But cutted the call, being the number unknown... AGAIN!!

****

Opening her eyes, she blinked to adjust with the lights...

"Oh fish!! It's noon now!!" immediately jerking up she ran her hazel balls to find her husband... But he was nowhere in sight...

She watched her phone, 50 miss calls from that unknown number... She tried to call back... But the number was busy in another call, so she can't get connected... But for now her main concern is her husband, so she neglected it...

"Jalal... Jalal..." getting up from the bed she called softly while yawning softly... Coming out of the room she again called out but he was nowhere to be seen...

Slowly the main door opened... Sweat beads started to form on her forehead... The morning incident is still fresh in her mind... Though she knows that police had arrested that Artharav, but then also the fear was there...

Soon she saw her husband emerging from the gate... She sighed in relief... Anger is clearly visible on his sharp features... Jaw clenched, red eyes, blood soaked palm... Wait!! Blood soaked palm...

"Aap kaha gaye the?? Or yeah??" she asked in her soft yet worried tone...

"Police station..." He said while gritting his teeths... And sits on sofa while resting his head and close eyes...
Sensing his angry mood, she dared not to ask further details...

****

How dare you Artharva?? How dare you to set your filthy eyes on My wife My Jodha?? Jalal thought... Reminiscing about the scene in police station where arth had proudly claimed his obsession for Jodha, his Jodha..

It's an SIN to set your eyes on something, which is not yours, and especially when the possession held by THE Jalaluddin Mohammed... Then you have to face the "Devil"...

Feeling a soft touch on his hand he opened his eyes... She is dressing his wound...

Jalal remembered, When that bloody arth has commented about his wife figure, he lost it... And was about to punch him, but unfortunately his hit goes in wrong direction due to hold of constables, and it strikes on the glass sheet kept on the table...

After completing his dressing, she was about to go...

"Jo... Are you okay??" he asked... She hummed in response with a small smile...

****

After that day Jodha again joined radio station to divert her attention after a lot of insistence and encouragement from Jalal... The call again came from the same unknown number but whenever they picked it up... No body gave any response from the other side... So they thought better to neglect this blank calls...

Life is going smoothly... Daily call at sharp 1:30 from Jalal to Jodha or at least a message if busy, their similar timings of breaks, just for casual talks...

At dinner, Jodha telling about the funny calls she received at radio station from listeners, Jalal just kept listening...
But from some days he too started a to open up like Talking about his recent projects, his new and old clients, friends and many more...

Sometimes going out for dinner... Teasing each other... Walking on terrace at night after dinner...
All this small small things are strengthening their relationship...

Unaware about the storm that is soon going to hit their lives...

****

Standing in the balcony of their room, just in his pants, he is lost in deep thinking...

Suddenly a women covered in thin white silken sheet came from back and wounded her arms around him, from back...

"M I doing wrong with Jodha??" he questioned sadly...

She looked up and smiled...
"You can never be wrong!!" she whispered...

****

The constant phone vibration broke his sleep... He looks at the watch, which is showing 2 o clock in the night...
His sleepy eyes furrowed in... He nudged his wife who is sleeping so peacefully in her heaven, her husband's embrace...
"Jo your phone..." He said in his sleepy voice...

But snuggling more close into his chest, she slept again... Making him smile at her innocent move...

So he very carefully picked up the phone from the table, again the same unknown number...

Gently coming out of the bed he came out of the room so that his wife's sleep doesn't got disturbed while him giving some piece of mind to this unknown person...

Today Jalal thought to end it for once... But before Jalal can speak

"Hel... Hell... Hello... Jo... Jodh... Jodha... I love you baby... I know I have hurt you a lot...
But that time circumstances were like that and I was not in a condition to come to you...
Jo! Hope I have this right to call you..!! Firstly you always tried to mend our relationship, but then what happened doll?? You didn't even messaged me since 6 months!! But when you called yesterday, you know what doll I was the happiest...
Umm doll this is my second number... Doll are you there?? Jodha?? "

came a shaky manly voice in starting then gradually changing to emotional...

Jalal's sleep flew away in seconds... Unimaginable rage started to bubbled up within him... Today fury is crossing its boundaries... Angry hot salty droplets oozed out of his eyes...

This voice... How can he forgot it... Once it had snatched his everything...

He throws the phone away with such an intensity that it got broke into pieces...

"Jodha!! Jodha!!" roared the furious man at the highest level of his voice...

She immediately came running out only to find her Angry husband, very angry...

"What made him so angry at this odd hour??" she thought with utter confusion written on her face... Sleep has left her eyes...

"What happened Jalal??" she said while going close to him making the biggest mistake... Unaware about the phone call...

Jalal forcefully pushed her by the near by wall and coming dangerously close to her face... He hissed angrily...
"Why you have done this??"

"What??" she said while trembling, she has seen him angry many a times but this much anger was out of her league...

Fisting her long jet black hairs... Jalal pulled Jodha closer... His eyes are tearing up with rage... Only he knew how much it is taking him to not to hurt his wife...
She BETRAYED him!!

"Ahh Jalal leave me... It's hurting..." She cried while trying to loose his grip on her hairs...

"You know what I hate you!! I hate you so much!! You betrayed me with your Bloody BROTHER..." fire and disgust lacing his each and every single word...

"For the first time I thought that someone cares about me... Wants to be with me... I felt wanted... I felt lo... Loved..." His voice choked, his conscience is till now working to digest the fact...

He can't believe that after telling her about his past, then also she is in contact with with that bloody BROTHER of hers...

"Jalal... I have lost my contact with him, After our marriage... 6 months ago... Yeah I... I tried to contact him before our marriage but..." She tried hard to explain but Jalal was nowhere to listen... He was blind up in his own rage...

"Shut up... Just shut up!!" he shouted...

Dragging her from the hallways, still holding her hairs in his painful grip and throws her outside the house at midnight...

"Jalal... Please meri baat to suniye... Jalal... Aap..."
Closing the door on her face... He slid down against door, the anger subsidised by the irrevocable pain... That is biting his soul... Eating him slowly and slowly...

"Jalal please open the door... Darwaza kho liye Jalal... Jalal."
She rapped the door ferociously... Her whole body is shaking vigorously...

What crime I have committed that you are punishing me like this?? She cried helplessly...

****

In past midnight She is sitting with wide open eyes...

"What happened??" he asked...

"Nothing..." She answered...

"Pakka?" he again questioned...

"Mujhe naa ice cream khani hai..." She squealed excitedly...

"What!! Baby we are in India... And moreover its 2:30 now... So sleep..." He replied...

"I don't care... Mujhe khani hai... Bss..." She stubbornly argued with a cute grumpy face...

"ok cool!!" the sleepy man turned on his heels and stormed out of the room... She looks baffled...

"Are you coming??" he asked while peeping from the door...

"Yep..." taking a shawl, she ran outside...

****

"umm... Yumm..." She said while licking the ice cream sitting in garden of the hotel, chilling night winds are in their full potential...
He smiled...

"M coming in 2 minutes stay here..." He said while getting up and left...

She is looking around, the green grass is flowing in the direction of room... The strong blowing air is lashing out at the tall trees standing up there... And the dutiful watchmen has slept!! Wait slept!! Voila!! She secretly sneaked out to irk HIM...

Walking a little far from the hotel, she is enjoying the chilly weather... But her feets got froze at the place...

She looks around, four drunkards are coming close to her... Howling of dogs and empty roads with dead piercing silence is not helping her either...

Without any second thought she ran to save her life... She is more worried about the life growing INSIDE her!!!
And got hit by some person... She looked up... She relaxed and hug him tightly...

****

He opened the door... She is sitting near the door shivering badly due to cold... Her nose has become cherry, redness has made its way around her big doe shaped Brown eyes... His condition is no different...

Looking up... She immediately stood up...

"Just few more hours, then you would get out of MY house..." coz in few hours, morning is going to made it's arrival... And left from there, slamming the door of HIS room, he left her alone in the hall...

She wiped her tears... She has some hours to make him understand...

"Jalal... Jalal... Just listen me once... Just ek baar sun lijiye... Jalal hear me out..." She said while continuously rapping the door with the leftover power...

"Why me Allah?? Why always me?? Kyu??" he cried inside the room..

Both the souls are broken to no extent... Weeping, crusing, wailing can be heard in the house... Sometimes it's Him... Sometimes it's Her... For the LAST TIME... Just for the last time Destiny is testing the strength of THEIR relationship... This two souls have to pass it...

****

Its 1 week... 7 days 16 hours 53 minutes to be more precise... As the clock is ticking every second, this time span is elongating with tick tock, tick tock...

"She Left HIM!!"

Jalal entered inside the house after unlocking the door with the keys... He looks around, everything has her essence... Her enchanting smell...

He strode towards the big life size photo of their marriage and taking one of the big vase keeping on the either sides of the painting giving a classy and magnificent look...

He banged it broking his life into zillions of pieces which is slicing his heart painfully yet slowly... Very slowly...

He is desperately missing her... However big pain she has given him, how much his heart has bleed because of her betrayal, how much he is trying to forget her... But she is simply his 'Jaan' and he can't forget her... He just can't...

"I hate you... But I miss you JAAN"...

****

"I miss you Jalal!!" she whispered sitting in a dark room...
Jodha sifted more in corner as the sound of knob opening reached her ears...

****

Ok so here chapter ends...
Longest chapter till now!!
I am sorry guys I have not replied to some comments I will reply to them all... in previous thread!!
Hope you all are not disappointed...
Sorry if its not worth reading!!
This is the second last 'SAD' chapter... after next chapter , all problems Will be sorted out...

Merry Christmas guys!!

Edited by Monucute - 9 years ago

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sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

yipee first
superb chappi
u again caused misunderstanding between Jo ja neetu
feeling bad for jodha how can jalal do that with jodha
and jos brother is good for nothing
hope this is second last chappi of their problems and sadness
continue soon this time

Edited by sho123 - 9 years ago