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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Please update soon waiting for next chappy

Updating :))

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA
Pls update do na bechare fans ko..

Lolz... Updating di :)

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Update de b de abb...

Updating re...😃

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Will wait eagerly for the update.

Update today only di :))

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: sho123
dekhna kaju yeah update nahi KR rahi

Kr rhi hu sherry di and kaju di dekh lo me doing update😉😆

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swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Monucute

I replied it yesterday😆 di m updating today only 😃

wow
today
thats grt neetu
update asap

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

...Chapter - 45...

"I miss you Jalal!!" she whispered sitting in a dark room...
Jodha sifted more in corner as the sound of knob opening reached her ears...

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His helpless orbs gazed at the petite figure cuddling up herself in a corner... Unknown to the world outside... Her brown orbs depicting a kind of fear, pain... That she is hiding from everyone, that is chewing her deep inside mercilessly... Didn't even ate anything properly since two weeks... He reminisced the day, when he had found his own precious gem in the worst of condition...

She was sitting on a bench in the garden, near the hotel, he is staying in... Her wholeself is tormented to no extent... Eyes full of tears, dull face, looking nowhere particularly... No slippers...

That day she cried holding him tightly, for the first time, he heard what he has been carving for those six months when they are not in contact... Just uttering a single sentence...

"Bhai... Bhai... I didn't... I didn't ditched... I didn't ditched HIM... I didn't... I didn't Betrayed HIM..."

After that silence has overtook her soft soothing voice... He didn't know who HIM here... She had pushed him that day after crying in his embrace... Unconsciousness just took over her and he brought her here... Mumbling same thing again and again...

This HIM had made her a statue... Many changes can be seen in his sister... The bubbly girl, he had left, has lost somewhere... This girl who never sits quietly on a place... Now doesn't even move from this dark room... Seems like have some enmity with light... She loves to sit in this dark room ogling at her mobile screen... God knows what? And shedding her precious pearls on someone... Who think... She... Betrayed HIM... How can his doll do something like this??

He badly regret that time when he decided to stay aloof from everyone... People.. Even his own Dadi had believe that he hates his sister...

But how can he?? When she is the only one whom he have to call as his!! I admit... I admit... That I said I hate her... But none didn't even tried to console that small boy who himself was devastated when dad and maa left them... Alone to face this cruel world... How can I took her in my arms when me myself needed someone...

Dadi mistook my silence as my hatred and this silence just killed me from inside... Just murdered my soul brutally...

His eyes got filled with droplets which are ready to hit his cheek any moment... A soft hand on his shoulder and turning around he embraced the other most important part of his life... crying profusely on her shoulder... While she looks at his sister, pity and guilt flowing in her eyes... Pity because the doll of her husband is seeming so tormented and guilt because somewhere a reason behind her misery is SHE !!
she knows the HIM here!!

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He stared at the scattered pieces of their lives... In the form of their marriage pic... Numb black bluish orbs involuntarily searched for the feast that will be able to provide him to vanish that memory which is carved deep inside his soul...

With a thud the man came on his knees... A smile now seems a burden to release for... The emptiness that was felt inside was irrevocably causing deterioration of his emotions...

Watching the innocence depicting in the snap... His shivering hands involuntarily reached out to hold the broken frame...

Locking it in his embrace, the former made a long cut just above his heart, heart that had just learned how to live but got crushed brutally with the dirtiest betrayal...
Want to punish it... Who carved out for a traitor... Who screams for its beholder... Who seems dead with uneven pumping out of blood...

He even have hoped that maybe once the owner of his life will come back, Will prove that... She can never betray him...

But all he faced is disappointment... Leave the thought of coming back, she didn't even tried to contact him... While he was dying to hear a single syllable for soothing his wounded soul...

Next moment he punched the walls as a outlet of his emotions... Blood slides down the wall making a small pool below... Never a weak person, cried in this two weeks... Sobs echoing in the house pitied his own self...

Tired of smacking the wall... His whole weight slid down the length of blood as he settled on the floor... Her clothes cosmetics all scattered around him, he tried to felt emotions that almighty snatched away always when he bestowed it upon him...

Trials of vanishing the memories of his precious part... Had butchered his insides thoroughly, but the stubborn self didn't flinched a bit... The intensity of his emotions sometimes takes a toll on his health... Which even made him land up in hospital... After he crashed his car in the metallic door of his own house...

The care, innocence, emotions showed by HER Now seems mirage of the dessert... A beautiful mirage indeed... Which he meant to be in real, wanna cherish his possession who backstabbed him so terribly...

The self hatredness had built up to an unimaginable level for starving for the lady... Who took her brother's REVENGE and left him alone to rotten in THEIR home...

Sitting while taking the support of the wall, he intently gazed at the room... Where their sorrows and happiness has been shared wrapped up in love and care...

His trust once again has been tattered by the almighty... He showed that happiness doesn't meant to be his...
Buzzing of his phone caught up his attention... A much needed distraction... Faint smile made a way to his lips...

"Hello..."
"Give me your address..."a voice emerged from the other end...
"Don't tell me you guys are here..." he frowned...
"Give me your address damn..." this time anger filled whisper reached his ear..."
"Note it..."

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Buzzing of doorbell rolled into his ear drum , beating it frantically...

He checked himself... And immediately changing the blood soaked shirt he wore a tee with his bandaged hands... Opening the door, his world stilled watching the guest...

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Words prohibited from his throat... Wave of anger gushed through his body, ferociousness emerging meticulously from every corner of his body... Rage reaching out limits he can control...

The latter's reaction was a mixture of shock and fury bubbling within...
She stood with eyes full, ready to flow anytime... While the other one made sure that anger must be visible on her sharp features...

Jalal punched Sujamal right at his stomach make him almost puking the blood... The ladies expression changed to horrified... While another blow was in his way, when the doting wife stood between the former and latter... Shutting her eyes tightly expecting a blow on her...

"MISHA... Move away..." a dangerous shriek escaped from his mouth... While Jodha looks helplessly with utmost concern to his palm while the bandaged turned redder...
"Stop being violent Jalal!!" she matched the tone that was par with his...

"Do you even know... Whom you are saving..." he asked watching her defending HIM...
And pulled Jodha in his embrace... Both souls got showered with peace... Finally!! Damn finally!! She is in his arms!! This is what he has carved for these bloody whole two weeks... Clinging to her life his life depends on this... While she was back to her heaven...

Sujamal tried to pull her back... But his hand got stopped by a piercing grip... His sister's husband... A dead grip...
"Stay away from her... She is mine... Only mine... Sirf meri... Samjhe... Sirf meri... You don't have a single right on her... Just stay away... You have already snatched enough... Now no more" his possessive and proud voice boomed in the whole mansion... Neighbours came out of their houses hearing the roar...

"And m not understanding why the hell are you defending him!!" He shouted while pressing Jodha more into his chest who was clinging to him... She is not getting what is happening around...

"My husband..!!" as the ferocious words left Misha's mouth... Jalal was left spellbound...
"Then where is Atul?"

*****

Precap : The Unexpected Past

Here m with the next chapter... Very unsure...
Hope you all like it...
*fingers crossed*

Sorry if it's not worth reading 😊

Edited by Monucute - 9 years ago

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priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Woow finally u updated dr
supurb dr chappy
Jalal jodha one again ...
Precap twist uff
Plz u make update fast dr
👏 👏 👏

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Poor jalal damaged emotionally

Awesome chappy dear

Update soon buddy

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mickeymini

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Nice update
Bdw what's ur name ???
I read ur whole story in one day
It was awesome
Each part u wrote explaining there pains happiness etc etc
So sujamal has married to Misha then I mean jalal's sister
Then what's his prblm more
I think he dnt know the past completely
Common now dnt take much time in updating the next part
Will be waiting for the update