Manan SS- MERE SANAM RE...[ LAST CHP-PG 84] 1st APRIL

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello ppl once again MYRAH here... N m here again wid a sad n emotional ts.. Get ur tissue papers ready...😆I don't knw it will be of two shot or three.. Ab dekhte hain kitney mey khatam hotaa hain..
Actually today only i was watching trailers of new upcoming movie.. N i found sanam re..
I really loved the trailer this film.. Story seems to be nice.. Ho sakey to aap sab vi dekh lenaa... Jst seeing it mere dimaag mey ideas agaya.. So wrote it down...

MERE SANAM RE:





Prologue:

"Aaj us baat ko purey 2 saal 6 mahiney aur 15 din ho chukey hain bt still meraa pyaar tumhaare liye kam nahi hua hain.. Infact its increasing day by day... M really missing u my angel,my shinning star..M sorry i hv to do this...
Mera jo faisalaa thaa i planned it for both of us.. Sometimes we plan our destiny n sometimes destiny plan us...
Mujhe jo karnaa thaa i did it.. Ab sab main bas destiny pe chodtaa hu... Whether together or separation... I will accept it...
Never together... Never apart...!!"
Writing this in diary i manik malhotra closed my diary...
Amazed naa m writing a diary par kyaa karu ab yeh diary hi hain jissey main apni baatien share kartaa hu coz i hv no one left beside me to listen me... Jo thi ussey mainey chod diyaa. N i m all alone...ab bas adhuraa reh gaya hu...
He then closed his life n remember the worst day of his life...

Flashbck..


Manik was waiting for her nandini since 15 mins in garden in this cold winter.. Actually he called nandini to meet him as he something important to talk..

Finally nandini arrived...

Sorry sorry sorry for being late.. Kaan pakad ke sorry.. Woh ghar pe kuch kaam agaya thaa issilye late hogaya m sorry...nandini said holding her ears..

Manik who was looking towards nandini turned around facing his back to her..

Its over nandini... Said manik in a cold voice

Kya over..?? Asked nandini in confusion

Everything between us..sab khatam.. M done wid u... Said manik still maintaining the cold tone..

Manik main bas 15 mins late hu isskeliye u r breaking up wid me... U can do this samjhe naa..said nandini in her all time chirpy voice

Nandini its not bcoz of that main naa isskebaaremey 3-4 days pehle se hi soch rakhaa thaa bas tumsey kehne ki himmat nahi hui thi... I called u here to talk abt this only...

Man..Mani...manik u r ..u r..joking right... Main tumhe pehle hi keh rahi hu i don't like such type of jokes... Said nandini little stammeringly

M serious nandini... I m leaving u... Said manik ...

Manik.. Yeh...yeh.. K..y..a... Ku..kuch vi boley jaa rahe ho.. M getting scared..said nandini stammering badly

Its the truth of our life.. Accept it... Said manik..

Agar aisaa hain to meri aakho mey dekh kar kaho that u don't want to be wid me... Said nandini..

Manik turned around...
Now he was looking towards her..

M leaving u.. M done wid u... Now its over... Said manik looking in her eyes..

Really manik i can see u still love me... I can see it in ur eyes... Said nandini crying..

Haa toh tumse mainey yeh kab kaha i don't love u.. I jst say we r over i nvr told ki main tumsey pyaar nahi kartaa..
Mainey tumse har lamhaa pyaar kiyaa thaa aur aagey vi karunga...

Haa toh problem kyaa hain..?? Asked nandini shouting

Zaroori nahi hotaa har sawaal ek jawaab k saath aaye..M going.. Jaa raha hu tumsey dur...Bye forever... Saying this manik started to walk..

She hold his hand n said "Plz manik don't leave me.. Nahi reh paaungi tumhaare bagair... Plz.."

Manik turned towards her n touch his forehead wid her n said "Main vi yeh nahi chaahtaa bt i hv to do this.. Mainey kisi sey wadaa kiyaa hain... Sorry.. !!
I need to leave u.. Take a good care of urself as i won't be around... N haa try to move on..."
Saying this he left her n walked..



Nandini was standing with blank expression..

Manik stopped little ahead n then towards her n said
" Apne vai ko kehdenaa dhokaa dene kaa hak sirf unhey nahi hain.. Humey vi hain..."

Saying this he again started to walk...

Flashback ends..

A lone tear fell down frm his eyes remembering this...
He wiped it off... N jst caressed nandini's photo hanged on his wall..n said " I really love u nandini.."
His room it was filled with her photos only.. Some of childhood n some of now...
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So guys this was jst a prologue of my TS.. In nxt part i will give character sketch n a big one update..
Kaisaa laga plz do tell i will try to complete this story in this coming week only...
Plz do support...
N merry Christmas to all of u.. Happy vacations time..😉

Keep smiling
Stay happy...
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Index:
Chp1-pg13 ( Manan childhood)
Chp2-pg25 ( Ek Mulakat)
Chp3-pg38 ( Gazab kaa hain yeh din)
Chp4-pg55 ( Alvida yaaraa alvida)
chp5-72(Judaai..)
CHP6-84 (mere yaar milaa de saiyaan)
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jiamalik12 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
So meri doll again a emotional story..
Matlb aap thak nahi jaatey ho kya humey rulaatey rulaatey...
Chalo koi ni...
Prologue to dhamaakedaar niklaa.. Main toh prologue padh ke hi roh padi...
I hv also watched the trailer of sanam re.. Loved it...
N loving ur story too..


Zaroori nahi hotaa har sawaal ek jawaab k saath aaye...
Waah kya line hain yaar..

Continue soon.. Waiting eagerly..

N mery Christmas.. Hope santa gifts u what evr u want..😊
Edited by jiamalik12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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haye...
myruh...

kya yaar...prologue mein ki rula diya...

manik ne aisa kyun kiya...

nandu...poor girl...she would be so broken...

itne emotions...uff...they were flowing soo much

aur manik ne woh bhai wali line kyun boli...

haye...confusion bhi hai...aur emotional bhi...

waiting for nxt update

continue soon



LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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haye...
myruh...

kya yaar...prologue mein ki rula diya...

manik ne aisa kyun kiya...

nandu...poor girl...she would be so broken...

itne emotions...uff...they were flowing soo much

aur manik ne woh bhai wali line kyun boli...

haye...confusion bhi hai...aur emotional bhi...

waiting for nxt update

continue soon

and merry christmas to u too...



LOVE
SANJANA
ruchi116 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update soon why manik did this he has really hurt nandu waiting for nandu scenes
Update soon
jiamalik12 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Baccha main to aapse puchnaa hi vool gayi thi... Wat abt i will be waiting..
Aapne discontinue kardi kyaa..??
Edited by jiamalik12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
will unres at night
unres
awsm update
looking forward
tysm for pm
u knw its my fav song in these day
want to knw decision
so much curosity I have
plz update soon
Edited by Samruddhi_Kadam - 9 years ago
jamunamanik thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interstinggg

Is this any mystry story

Awsmmm part

Coun sooon dear
Tanha_Urmi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awsm pls pm me...plz...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome start...
Manan loves each other...
Then y he left her...
Continue soon...
Will be waiting...

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