Swansan OS: Woh Humsafar tha...(part12 page18)updated - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Excellent update dear
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
koi ragini ko mental assylum vejo.. she needs treatment badly
awesumm update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Awesome update.
Can you please send me pm about update.
Thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: avihothi

Awesome update.

Can you please send me pm about update.
Thanks.


sure i will😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 11

Toofani dariya se bagavaat kar jaye voh ishq

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t2VaF0ZX65w
(please click the link for the song)


Swara kept walking on the busy roads like a wingless wounded bird unaware of her destination.
Her hair was all messy, dress which was so lovingly given to her by her beloved husband was untidy and half-ruined. She almost asked every person on the road about her love, but everyone just shook their head. As the clock was ticking, her heart beat was getting more fast, with every time passing Sanskaar's chances of surviving was decreasing.
What will she do
where will she look for him
Swara clutched her hair with both her hands and kneed down on the footpath, crying loudly.
Her whole face was covered in tears. She again and again called out his name in the hope that he will appear from somewhere and take her agony away, like he always does. But this time it was different
he was not there, he was no where.
She took out her phone
'Maa ragini ne kuch...
'nahi shona ek laabz bhi nahi bola''
Swara hung up and close her eyes.
nahi aisa maat karo mere saath maa please mujhe mera pyaar se mila do maa... apne ragini ko mujhse sabko chin lene diya likin uske badle mein mujhe sanskaar ke roop mein zindagi ka sabse baada tofa diya ab vo toofa mujjhse mat chino maa ..swara cried and cried but soon she realized she was just wasting her time she buckled up and began her search again. Suddenly her phone started ringing, it was anuparna.
swara was afraid to pick it up what will she say to her but gathering all her courage she picked it up
'Swara sanskaar kaha hain''
did she know?
'maa wo''
'humne tv pe dekha swara, humare waha ki factory mein aag lagi hain aur guard ne hum mein kaha ragini aur sanskaar woha the jab aag lagi''
Swara now understood, she didn't say a single thing and hung up the phone
she called sharmishtha
'maa ragini ko phone dijiye...
...ragini sanskaar ke factory mein aag kaise laagi''
'tou tumne dhoond liya swara'' smirked ragini 'waise kya fayda aptak tou saab khatam ho chukka hoga''
swara hung up in disgust and ran to sanskaar's factory.


Anuparna was right, the place was in fire, everything was blazing.
Sanskaar whispered swara.
she ran towards the burning building but someone pull her from behind
'madam kya kaar rahi hain ap?'' asked the policeman
'dekhiye mere paati Sanskaar maheshwari andaar hai''
'ha madam hum jante hain isiliye vo dekhiye firefighter ki team andaar ja rahi hain unhe dhond ne ap nahi ja sakti''
'nahi please mujhe jaane dijiye''
but the police man was hell bound to stop her. Then swara did something which the policeman would never have expected she bite his hand and ran away.
She went to the firefighters
'main ap logo ke saath andar ja rahi hoon''
'ap kaun hai?''
'main sanskaar maheshwari ki patni hoon, jo andaar phase hain''
they looked at each other.
'madam aag bohut khatarnaak lagi hain ap...
'maine ap logo se salha nahi mangi main ja rahi hoon baaas!''
'nahi madam sorry hum app ko nahi le sakte aur apko hum andaar jaane bhi nahi denge''
Swara took a fire log
'agar mujhe andar jaane nahi diya tou main apne aap ko jala dungi''
'madam kya kar rahi hain ye chod dijiye usse''
'nahi'' screamed swara 'le chalo mujhe andar abhi'''
'thik hai thik hai ap yeh jacket peh niye aur vo mujhe dijiye'
swara calmed down a bit and wore the jacket
The whole place was burning, there was fire and smoke, it was so difficult to see everything.
but swara was determined to find her man. She kept running from here to there nearly escaping danger but she didn't care about her life anymore. Then she came to a halt ...there he was.
Lying lifeless on the floor his face covered in blood and he was surrounded by fire.
The sight of her lover's condition made her whole body weak ,she controlled herself from kneeing down, she didn't wait a second she just ran to him through the fire like a superwoman. Swara kneed down beside him. she took his head and placed it on her lap. With shivering hands she checked for his pulses
yes he was alive
Swara closed her eyes and sighed in relief
She hugged his head and kissed Sanskaar's forehead.
She held his cheeks 'main kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe jab tak main hoon tum ho''
Soon she and the firefighters took him out and took him to the hospital
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Pls requesting u thoda jyada likha kro.😆
& PM all the coming parts & update soon👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manisha.8148

Pls requesting u thoda jyada likha kro.😆
& PM all the coming parts & update soon👏



haha aww sure i will its just great thiings come in small packets😛😆

and sure i will PM you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey😳
Really liked how you described Swara as wounded, wingless bird..⭐️ Her angst and panic was wonderfully shown, especially when she goes hysterical, threatening the firemen to taker her with them.

Aww she ran like a superwoman to her man... When Sanskaar finds out he won't be too happy though.. "Are you a superwoman?" wala dialogue will defo me marred, just like in the recent epis!😉
Looking forward to the next update.

PS: Listening to Judai definitely helped me to connect with Swara's emotions more. Nice touch!😊

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