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Hi I am a silent member of this forum & sometimes I scribble
my thoughts but the Naina track was such a let down that this
thought kept bugging me hang I put it down n here
There mite be some typos please excuse them
happy reading
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The hooda house was bathed in bright white moonlight, yet inside there was darkness.. the house was bathed in almost no light. Only a Dim lights appeared to be scattered in all Windows..
In her room preet was couldn't stop her tears they ran unchecked...
She had not hurt by naina But by the people she considered her own.. her brother her sister n her husband..
All who were her world now... she had lost her family once n she had gained each one of them again... But now after today's fiasco it will take her long to repair her relationships... she was scared but at no cost she would let naina ruin the lives of her loved ones..
She knew her In laws n the whole clan of hooda's were traditional n displayed the Punjabi feel like a badge b probably that's why couldn't see beyond the goodie facade of naina.. But she had seen the ugly depth of her.. the impure intentions and sinister mind.. all in all..
Somewhere in hooda mansion.. Trisha was pacing up & down.. she had been in phone with bilal for last couple of hour's trying to pacify him. Make him feel valued yet he had been reticent... on the surface it looked he was disturbed by Preet bhabhis accusations yet there was something which was nagging her..
She was a a successful professional with hooda industries n she prided in her ability to see things level headedly, her analytical skill were fantastic n over the years with her gut feeling n correct insticts she had been able to make some wonderful interpersonal contacts and relationship for her family.. yet tonite she was not able to she anything transparently she had known both bilal n Preet for 5 years n yet both had behaved weird today.. never had Preet ever accused any one.. she had been this cheerful person who believed in giving.. never had she intentionally hurt anyone rather helped everyone even at the cost of her small or big sacrifices..
She had stood by her when no one in hooda family had supported her & Bilals relationship.. in fact she had gone against the family andstood by them.. in fact if today they had a accepted relationship it was all thanks to Preet..
Bilal who was not very extrovert yet had been honest with her, he had never dillydalled any communication ever with her yet today he was not able to meet her eyes.. in fact it looked tonite that he had been on purpose avoiding an eye contact with her.. even though he had been on phone with her tonite yet his mind had not been there..
During the talk she had not been able to focus on all these minor points yet in the silence of her room these small things glared into her face..
After a couple of hour's of struggle
She decided to talk to Preet calmly she owed to her for the one women who was her friend her confidante..
Somewhere in an another part Sid had been punching a punchbag in a corner for now more than couple of hour's he was caught in a hell.. he didn't not know who to trust..
At all times he had doubted naina he had been proved wrong.. she had each and every time been proved innocent... N she was now in a relationship with him.. if he pointed a finger towards her.. n she was innocent than it would create a huge dent in his relationship but if Preet bhabhi was correct then it would be a double hell for him & his sister.. they both were being cheated.. he can bear anything on himself but nothing in his family.. once he had said he felt he had two pair of parents where his bhaya N bhabhi were the second set.. N it was time to stand by his words..
He knew in his heart n mind that prert bhabhi was sister n friend & confidante who had always been his champion..
In the hall amidst all the commotion of his family naina n Preets word his mind had freezed and he had behaved obnoxiously with her.. he had to apologise for that but moreover now was the time to listen to her.. N this time he would do it calmly not with emotions clouding his vision..
As he came to a decision he decided to go talk to Bhaya n bhabhi n it was time to do it now.. he changed into his sweat shirt n left his room
In the hall he met a equally determined Trisha..
Both of them were happy to See each other because they both had made a mistake today..
Ishaan had been struggling with himself today, never had the lines between ishaan or rizwan had blurred to this extent.. he had always been a orphan one who did not have anyone of own.. yet when he had met hoodas they had embraced him as their own not only had they shared their business but their hearts... bade papa had really become his father n so had badi mummy.. she was on a equal pedestal as his own mother.
Among all this had been Preet, who had been along him all along his journey.. she had set such high standards of love & loyalty that he had come to adore her...
He knew soon he had to leave her but
He wanted her to be enveloped into care n love from everyone.. he knew what he did today will affect her tomm..
He knew what loneliness was n what it did To you... even after her tragedy
Preet had been extremely blessed to have been hugged back into a family so soon... he had been like a thirsty passenger trapped into an unending desert until he had met hooda's.
He never even in his dreams would imagine something like that for Preet n that's why he had today almost forced, twisted her arm to seek forgiveness.. he had no doubt about Preets honesty or her good intentions..
She thrived on others happiness and with open arms n hearts she accepted everybody
Yet today he had left all logic behind n had hurt Preet.
His selfishness was pricking him like he had been laid on bed of thrones
Nothing was alright
He knew in last 5 years without his knowledge; without his realization she had become a part of him... his existence
He knew he loved her but the day he would accept this, from that very day very moment he will loose himself
Looking at Preets unused tears n her angst he felt as if he was walking non burning coal piece yet his mind heart both told him to see past.
Never had Preet pointed a finger to anyone only a few days back he himself had said to her that she is never wrong n will never be wrong... she herself had made bade papa agree for this alliance even after roka fiasco.
Since naina's arrival she had been very open though a difficult feature she had done all with a smile.. probably today in the heatbod moment he had been too harsh on her... he should apologise..
He was determined to be with her so what could be more better than to start with a apology & then to listen her with calmness...
Finally he decided to move to their room & talk to her..
He stepped out of study n in the alley he met Trisha n Sid..
A smile lit his face.. he now knew no matter what Preet will always have this family.
my thoughts but the Naina track was such a let down that this
thought kept bugging me hang I put it down n here
There mite be some typos please excuse them
happy reading
-----------------------------------------------
The hooda house was bathed in bright white moonlight, yet inside there was darkness.. the house was bathed in almost no light. Only a Dim lights appeared to be scattered in all Windows..
In her room preet was couldn't stop her tears they ran unchecked...
She had not hurt by naina But by the people she considered her own.. her brother her sister n her husband..
All who were her world now... she had lost her family once n she had gained each one of them again... But now after today's fiasco it will take her long to repair her relationships... she was scared but at no cost she would let naina ruin the lives of her loved ones..
She knew her In laws n the whole clan of hooda's were traditional n displayed the Punjabi feel like a badge b probably that's why couldn't see beyond the goodie facade of naina.. But she had seen the ugly depth of her.. the impure intentions and sinister mind.. all in all..
Somewhere in hooda mansion.. Trisha was pacing up & down.. she had been in phone with bilal for last couple of hour's trying to pacify him. Make him feel valued yet he had been reticent... on the surface it looked he was disturbed by Preet bhabhis accusations yet there was something which was nagging her..
She was a a successful professional with hooda industries n she prided in her ability to see things level headedly, her analytical skill were fantastic n over the years with her gut feeling n correct insticts she had been able to make some wonderful interpersonal contacts and relationship for her family.. yet tonite she was not able to she anything transparently she had known both bilal n Preet for 5 years n yet both had behaved weird today.. never had Preet ever accused any one.. she had been this cheerful person who believed in giving.. never had she intentionally hurt anyone rather helped everyone even at the cost of her small or big sacrifices..
She had stood by her when no one in hooda family had supported her & Bilals relationship.. in fact she had gone against the family andstood by them.. in fact if today they had a accepted relationship it was all thanks to Preet..
Bilal who was not very extrovert yet had been honest with her, he had never dillydalled any communication ever with her yet today he was not able to meet her eyes.. in fact it looked tonite that he had been on purpose avoiding an eye contact with her.. even though he had been on phone with her tonite yet his mind had not been there..
During the talk she had not been able to focus on all these minor points yet in the silence of her room these small things glared into her face..
After a couple of hour's of struggle
She decided to talk to Preet calmly she owed to her for the one women who was her friend her confidante..
Somewhere in an another part Sid had been punching a punchbag in a corner for now more than couple of hour's he was caught in a hell.. he didn't not know who to trust..
At all times he had doubted naina he had been proved wrong.. she had each and every time been proved innocent... N she was now in a relationship with him.. if he pointed a finger towards her.. n she was innocent than it would create a huge dent in his relationship but if Preet bhabhi was correct then it would be a double hell for him & his sister.. they both were being cheated.. he can bear anything on himself but nothing in his family.. once he had said he felt he had two pair of parents where his bhaya N bhabhi were the second set.. N it was time to stand by his words..
He knew in his heart n mind that prert bhabhi was sister n friend & confidante who had always been his champion..
In the hall amidst all the commotion of his family naina n Preets word his mind had freezed and he had behaved obnoxiously with her.. he had to apologise for that but moreover now was the time to listen to her.. N this time he would do it calmly not with emotions clouding his vision..
As he came to a decision he decided to go talk to Bhaya n bhabhi n it was time to do it now.. he changed into his sweat shirt n left his room
In the hall he met a equally determined Trisha..
Both of them were happy to See each other because they both had made a mistake today..
Ishaan had been struggling with himself today, never had the lines between ishaan or rizwan had blurred to this extent.. he had always been a orphan one who did not have anyone of own.. yet when he had met hoodas they had embraced him as their own not only had they shared their business but their hearts... bade papa had really become his father n so had badi mummy.. she was on a equal pedestal as his own mother.
Among all this had been Preet, who had been along him all along his journey.. she had set such high standards of love & loyalty that he had come to adore her...
He knew soon he had to leave her but
He wanted her to be enveloped into care n love from everyone.. he knew what he did today will affect her tomm..
He knew what loneliness was n what it did To you... even after her tragedy
Preet had been extremely blessed to have been hugged back into a family so soon... he had been like a thirsty passenger trapped into an unending desert until he had met hooda's.
He never even in his dreams would imagine something like that for Preet n that's why he had today almost forced, twisted her arm to seek forgiveness.. he had no doubt about Preets honesty or her good intentions..
She thrived on others happiness and with open arms n hearts she accepted everybody
Yet today he had left all logic behind n had hurt Preet.
His selfishness was pricking him like he had been laid on bed of thrones
Nothing was alright
He knew in last 5 years without his knowledge; without his realization she had become a part of him... his existence
He knew he loved her but the day he would accept this, from that very day very moment he will loose himself
Looking at Preets unused tears n her angst he felt as if he was walking non burning coal piece yet his mind heart both told him to see past.
Never had Preet pointed a finger to anyone only a few days back he himself had said to her that she is never wrong n will never be wrong... she herself had made bade papa agree for this alliance even after roka fiasco.
Since naina's arrival she had been very open though a difficult feature she had done all with a smile.. probably today in the heatbod moment he had been too harsh on her... he should apologise..
He was determined to be with her so what could be more better than to start with a apology & then to listen her with calmness...
Finally he decided to move to their room & talk to her..
He stepped out of study n in the alley he met Trisha n Sid..
A smile lit his face.. he now knew no matter what Preet will always have this family.
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