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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

[20 Jan/15]

originally posted here in AT 74

DRABBLE: SAVING MADAM CHUDAIL

P: OYYY CHUDAIL

T: EXCUSE ME DON'T CALL ME CHUDAIL

P: Madam Chudail

T: That's better

P: Madam Chudail I need to talk to you about something very important

T: Forget it behenji I'm not gonna leave your husband don't waste your breath

P: Listen Madam Chudail I heard you wanna marry HIM, and I just wanna ask, ARE YOU CRAZY? I mean have you seen how he treats his wife why would you want that!

T: It's just you behenji he wouldn't treat me that way

P: No no it's his default programming. He has this mode called "biwi management" and I'm telling you it's brutal stuff

T: You're lying

P: Tell you what you come live with us undercover for a week

T: UMMM

P: You'll see naa. Half the time he forgets I'm me and just acts on auto-pilot as "awful serial Pati." It's like he's being controlled by a writer's room or something

T: I don't trust you

P: That's because you're very smart.

T: Thank you.

P: But if you were smarter you would listen. HE is a terrible husband for anyone seriously.

T: Listen behenji I know you are khatternak I'm not gonna fall for your tricks

P: I'm telling you just come live behind our curtain for a week you'll see everything

T: What kind of wife are you inviting your sautan to share your room like that!

P: LOL you called yourself sautan.

T: KHATTERNAK

P: Madam Chudail seriously I'm saying this for the greater good. I'm already stuck with him but your bhagya could be free. Just enjoy being his girlfriend naa, all the benefits none of the hassle.

T: Are you...are you ok? Do you know what you're saying?

P: Well I'm not supposed to tell you this Madam Chudail but -

T: What???

P: I have an auto-programmed mode too. It is called "mahaan patni" and it is the reason you never have to fear for your man around me.

T: Oh!! Is that what it is! I thought you were just strangely spineless.

P: I'll never do anything to get between you.

T: That's a relief.

P: So you just be your clingy witchy self, and you'll be fine. Stop asking him to marry you and you won't push him away.

T: You...kind of have a point.

P: Just looking out for my best girl.

T: Your best...what?

P: See Chudail - sorry, Madam Chudail - as long as he has you to distract himself with, I only get hassled by him like 80% of the time. I need the remaining 20% of my time to cling onto my sanity.

T: Really? I thought you had embraced mahaan patni mode.

P: Well actually I'm plotting my escape but it's taking a long time because 4 out of every 5 seconds is devoted to HIM

T: Escape??

P: I can't tell you about that.

T: But but

P: You just keep on keepin' on alright? Just quit the proposal stuff.

T: ...Can I still live behind your curtain for a week?

P: sure

*A WEEK LATER*

T: OMG YOU WERE RIGHT

P: Of course

T: The way he was with that coffee! Such nakhres! I don't know how you stand it

P: Auto-program

T: And how he made you exercise with him! UFF! He's like the worst personal trainer ever

P: Things you never know about your boyfriend until you live behind his curtain, amirite?

T: And the way he expected you to know every little thing about what everyone in his family was doing every day!

P: He's a tyrant.

T: You're like an encyclopedia, behenji I hate to admit it but I am impressed. This week was exhausting. And you do this all the time!

P: Yep.

T: You know I think maybe I don't want to be his girlfriend anymore either. This auto program mode scares me.

P: I knew you were smart Madam Chudail.

T: But is there any hope? Do all men have this auto pati mode??

P: Well what you want Madam Chudail is a man who is used to service

T: I don't get you

P: Someone whose life's work is service will be devoted to you, not himself

T: You mean like a servant???

P: Madam Chudail, look at the silver lining. You could marry a rockstar and be his servant, or you could marry a servant and be his rockstar.

T: Well when you put it like that...

P: I hear Ramu Kaka is single

T: Well actually I was thinking Robin...

P: MADAM CHUDAIL. That is cradle robbing. That is not even legal. Don't EVEN go there, do you get me?

T: Right right I guess I better go poach on other territory.

P: Yeah, you do that.

T: Thanks...thanks behenji. You've saved me from a terrible fate.

P: Anytime.

T: I would say you should save yourself but actually I still don't like you.

P: The feeling is mutual.

T: Goodbye forever.

P: Have a nice life.

*MADAM CHUDAIL FLIES AWAY LIKE A BAT*

*FUGGY FLIES TO ROCKSTAR LIKE A BUTTERFLY*

*ROCKSTAR CATCHES FUGGY*

A: Your plan worked!! My Fuggy is a genius!

P: And you lost the bet AND your Madam Chudail. So you better pay up.

A: One week of service...well listen can we redefine the terms of service?

P: What did you have in mind

A: Well I could make your coffee and all that rot but how about instead *whispers*

P: *blushes* Interesting. But technically that is duty, not service.

A: What???

P: You have a lot to learn about pati mode.

A: I...guess you'd better start teaching me?

P: Go run me a hot bath first, I need to recover from a week of being shadowed by the bat.

A: Do I get to join you in this bath?

P: Maybe.

THE END

sorry mina is nuts but you all already knew that :P

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

[20 Jan/15]

originally posted here in AT 74; inspired by Kate's amazing edit

(glorious edit by Kate!)

DRABBLE: PRAGYA'S PROBLEMS

MATURE CONTENT WARNING - THE FOLLOWING CONTAINS SUGGESTIVE CONTENT

sometimes pragya had problems.

because -

she wanted to lick her husband's neck

bite his adam's apple

rub her cheek against his stubble

grab those big thick biceps in her small hands

feel his heart thud against her ear

peel off his shirt and trace curling patterns along his skin.

he was shameless so she'd seen almost all of him very early into their non-marriage.

but there was one part she hadn't seen

and she wanted to see and touch and taste there too.

she imagined having him at her mercy, undressed and lying on his stomach

she would straddle his back and map its contours

slowly drag his boxers down his powerful legs

tease his insteps with fluttery kisses

ease him into a false sense of coziness with a homely massage along his calves, and up his buttocks, and along his spine.

she imagined turning him over

holding her hand over his wicked mouth

having him accept the indication not to speak.

she would skim her fingers along his jaw

down the bridge of his nose

around his eyes

along his long lashes

across his lips.

she would bite his ear

kiss his neck

press her mouth to his hot skin, down and along his broad chest and flat belly.

she would dig her thumbs into the thick flesh at the top of his thighs

take a long careful look at the one mystery of his body still locked to her

take him in her hand

tease him with her fingers

put her mouth to him

let her hair brush against his legs as she explored her new task.

she didn't know how he would taste

she imagined salty and musky

she hoped appealing, or at least bearable

she ignored the whisper in her mind that told her she'd probably never find out.

she would draw back when he was hard and ready

climb onto him

take him into her

set his hands on her waist

hold onto him by the neck

try to close her hands around that broad column

hang tight.

not choke him, exactly

but

maybe a little.

she wanted to ride him in silence

well, silence from her

she could stand to hear some gasps from him

none of his wicked mean words

just primal sounds of breathing and bodies in motion.

she would keep her eyes closed

focus on the sensation

but she would know he'd be watching her body move

glancing down to where she'd accepted him into her.

his fingers would dance on her hips, wanting to move elsewhere

but it would be her fantasy

her way

so his hands would stay where she left them.

sometimes pragya had problems

getting these ideas out of her mind.

sometimes she'd see him across the room and freeze in place

flashing to any random one of the many things she wanted to do with him

to him

for him.

and of course her biggest problem

was that he would never, ever

even if she told him in specific detail

ever, ever believe that she wanted what she wanted.

and he'd never give it to her.

and she'd never take it.

and so

pragya just had problems.

Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

[20 Jan/15]

originally posted in AT 74
Drabble: Abhi's Problems

not meant to be in the same universe as Pragya's problems but I guess it could be, further in the future...

MATURE CONTENT WARNING: THE FOLLOWING CONTAINS SUGGESTIVE CONTENT

abhigya start sleeping together but

pragya still has a part of her locked away.

she gets naked with him, does everything with him

but there's a brittleness.

she won't let him see her vulnerable.

she enjoys it, loses herself to the moment

but somehow still he feels this distance.

it eats at him.

their first time he agrees she should be on top

control the pace, etc

when she takes him she flinches, and he holds her, strokes her shoulder, murmurs that it will be alright

but she stays stiff and snaps that she's fine.

rejects his comforting.

and so after that between them it's hot and raunchy and satisfying -

but never tender.

and abhi hates it.

at first she resists being under him.

doesn't want the closeness.

pushes him into positions that keep their faces and hearts apart.

gradually she accepts the full body contact

clutches his back or hips in missionary

but still, still this distance.

because he has some hurt to make up for

which she won't admit to him.

she has a bravado

like "come on rockstar, we're f--king now, it's fun, don't talk to me about anything.

i don't owe you anything more than this."

and he wants...

he wants tenderness, softness, affection

he wants it to be an act of cherishing

not just hot sticky fun.

he starts to feel used.

he doesn't understand his feelings.

he tries to reach for her more and more.

and she's game, she's giving.

but he can't touch her heart.

and it makes him upset.

he thinks bizarrely that he wants to make her cry

because that would at least be genuine.

he doesn't want her cool indifference

her sharp anger

her coy curiosity

he doesn't want any of that.

he wants his sweet innocent chashmish

who blushed and sharmao'd when he used to get close before

wants her wonder and surprise

wants her shy smiles and cautiously wandering hands.

and he knows he should be grateful that she's bold and hungry and willing to meet him appetite for appetite

but it's not what he wants.

and he doesn't know what to do with himself.

he doesn't know what to do with her.

and how do you solve a dilemma like that?

how do you even state the problem?

"my wife loves having sex with me but she doesn't love me"?

is that what it is?

but how can it be

she loves him, he knows she loves him.

she's put all their bitter past behind her

they're together now, they're solid now

of course she loves him.

she's said it

she means it

he knows she means it.

but why then

why

why can't he ever get her to that knee-trembling breathlessness

that precious hopeful expectation

her mouth turned up for a kiss

her eyes shut in anticipation

her heart thudding loud enough for him to hear

like that day against the closet

before their non-divorce.

when she'd been so damn ready

and he'd been so damn blind.

that day against the closet comes back to him all the time now

because he never gets her like that anymore

never

and he starts to think that what he does get is not enough

no matter how hot she can be with him

it's not what he wants

so there's nothing for it -

he has to make a plan.

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

[20 Jan/15]

originally posted here in AT 74; spurred by Kat/kdsubs' prompting drabble

DRABBLE: THE GAME

*abhigya fight, abhi taunts pragsy, pretends he's going to visit chudail but actually slinks into his mancave/studio for some recovery time*

*pragsy's UNRESOLVED FEELS for her hot hubster overcome her and she collapses into a puddle of tears*

*semi-reformed aalu comes by and decides to INTERVENE because she is an agent of BHAGYA and also she is bored*

*aalu gets pragsy sloshed and hypnobabbles her into proposing to abhi*

*well not proposing so much as propositioning*

*because aalu knows about the power of hormones*

*and she's concluded it's the only thing that can rescue her schoolyard-crush bhai-bhabhi from an eternity of immaturely avoiding their full potential as a couple*

*aalu leaves pragsy to start dreaming/plotting - she doesn't need the details and her work is done*

*pragsy indulges aaalll her fantasies and decides that come hell high water or a plague of chudails, she is going to TELL HIM*

*abhi recovers his manly equilibrium and strides back into his fuggy-infested domain...only to find fuggy precariously meandering the balcony*

*DAMN IT the girl is drunk again UFFF*

*since abhi is in Stable Bro mode, he responsibly swings his talli biwi into his arms, with the intention of setting her down on the bed. he'll take the couch - it'll be easier than fighting her in this state*

*but then FUGGY decides to impersonate an EEL and clings to his neck!*

*abhi is a little bit distracted because fuggy's night anarkalis are a lot thinner than her regular chahtris and he can feel...warm roundness against his arm and erm erm wait fuggy is fuggy, fuggy does not have...round...ness...*

*abhi tries to lay pragsy on the bed, the sooner he can get away from...round...ness...the better*

*pragsy holds on to him - grabs his head and whispers in his ear - i have to tell you something*

a: *exasperated sigh* what fuggy?

p: i want you to take me to bed

a: that's exactly what i have done

p: really! are you reading my mind again

a: fuggy we've had a long day, how about now we sleep

p: how about we have a long night

a: how about we -

p: let's play a game

a: no games fuggy i'm tired

p: the game is called "everything i'd do with my husband if he didn't have a chudail"

a: err...what??

p: item one, i would forbid him from wearing shirts in our room

a: fuggy? you're talking nonsense

p: item two, i would forbid him from wearing clothes to bed

a: *confused and speechless*

p: see one time he made me a promise that he always sleeps nude but he's so NAUGHTY he stopped doing that

a: you want me to go starkers around you??

p: not YOU my husband

a: i'm your husband

p: no you're chudail's boyfriend

a: but -

p: if MY HUSBAND didn't have a chudail i would keep him in bed every night

a: you...would?

p: and every morning. and once in the afternoon.

a: three times a day? really?

p: yes i'm a very appetitive woman

a: and you would know this how?

p: I JUST KNOW. anyway item three

a: fuggy, you're going to regret this conversation in the morning

p: ITEM THREE if my husband didn't have a chudail i would not wear chahtris to bed

a: what would you wear

p: i can't tell you that, that's for my husband

a: fuggy -

p: ITEM FOUR ok listen i can't explain everything in words i have to show you come lie down

a: uh fuggy i don't think -

*in a feat of superwomanliness, pragsy swings abhi over her and onto the bed on his back, and then climbs onto him, resting her rump right on his groin*

*abhi is immediately in hyperdrive hormone mode and really confused because gah warm roundness - DIFFERENT warm roundness - in exactly the wrong spot WHAT IS THIS FUGGY DOING*

p: so this game remember it is called "everything i'd do with my husband if he didn't have a chudail"

a: fuggy -

p: don't tell chudail i played with you, she'll be upset because you're her boyfriend

a: listen -

p: so first i would sweep my hands up his chest, like this -

*pragsy slowly glides her palms against abhi's chest...her touch burns through his tshirt...she maps every ridge and dip of his chiselled abs...by the time she makes it up his shoulders, her loose hair is clouding around his face and all he can think is that...it...smells really nice*

p: *whispers* and then i would take off his shirt...

*abhi is so frozen in surprise that he just lets it all happen...her light soft touch is too good to turn away...*

p: and then i would kiss his neck...and his chest...and i would lick, like this...

*an electric thrill runs through abhi and he grabs pragsy to stop her*

*pragsy pouts*

p: i'm not done the game!

a: this is a dangerous game!

p: you're no fun

a: fuggy, you're not feeling well, you need to rest -

p: you only want to have fun with that chudail, you have no idea, i could be so much fun

a: i might be starting to have an idea

p: there's so much more you know, what i would do to get all his clothes off, how i would make him wait to touch me until i was done exploring, how i would challenge myself to -

a: stop, fuggy, stop

p: i know i can't DO any of them but why won't you at least let me TALK about them

a: because -

p: next thing you know you're gonna tell me i can't THINK about them either

a: do...you...think about...about...

p: everything I'd do with my husband if he didn't have a chudail. yes, i think about it all the time.

a: i think maybe i should tell you something

p: what

a: i...don't have a chudail

p: WHAT

a: it got to be too much a headache, i decided to get rid of the chudail and keep my fuggy

p: OMG WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME

a: i'm telling you now

p: SO MUCH TIME WASTED come on now we can do all the things

a: yeah, no

p: why not!

a: not until you're sober

p: but that's not until tomorrow!

a: exactly. so i guess in the meantime you better just keep telling me.

p: all the things i'm going to do to my husband tomorrow?

a: yes. wait, "to"? what happened to "with"?

p: wife's prerogative

a: i...don't know what that means

p: don't worry...i will show you!

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

[21 Jan/15]

versions of this were posted in AT 75; special credit to Donny (SaaraDon) for inspiration and Iris (sara7iris) for the cap!!

(Lohri episode - Abhi holds Pragya at arm's length in front of their bed)

Illustrated Drabblet/Caption: A Matter of Time

P: No baby, that's not where your hands go - come closer naa!

A: Try and understand, we don't have time, they're waiting for us downstairs -

P: Please naa it will only take four and a half minutes remember I timed it? We have the SPEED VERSION down come on baby don't leave me waiting all night 😈

A: Sweetheart...waiting will make it better...have some patience...you're wearing me out. So hands off until later!

P: Some rockstar you are won't even rock my world for four and a half minutes UFF 👎🏼

A: 😕

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

[21 Jan/15]

originally posted here in AT 75, around the episode for Tanu's birthday 😆

Crack Drabble (Pranu Friendship): Better than Sex Cake

pragsy: OH!! IT'S MY CHUDAILS BDAY!! IMMA MAKE HER A CAKE!!

abhi: she's...not...your chudail? wait what the heck is happening

p: shuttup rockstar it's a girl thing nowww let me find my cocoa powder and eggs and butter and ferrero rochers ROBIN you will help me naa tanu maam is your favourite naa

*p disasterifies the kitchen and makes a maha cake*

t: ohhh! behenji!! FOR ME!!!!

p: yes sweetheart happy birthday!

t: OMG behenji this cake is to DIE for

p: yes i used a special recipe

t: what's it called

p: "better than sex cake"

t: OH!! yes!! it SO IS!

a: EXCUSE ME?

p: i knew it darling, who would know better than you and me how unsatisfying the rockstar is. but now we at least have cake!

t & p: *gorge on cake and bliss out*

a: haaayeee *is a sad mess whose mardangi has not just been questioned but fundamentally destroyed...by cake...*

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Mina

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Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

[22 Jan/15]

originally posted here in AT 75

drabble: born this way

*PRAGSY CRYING*

*ABHI LOOKING MISERABLE IN A CORNER*

*CHUDAIL WANDERING ABOUT GRINNING, GIVING PARENTS A TOUR OF MEHRA MADHOUSE*

BB: Di? DI?! WHY ARE YOU CRYING? Now is the time for action GET UP

P: BULBUL!!!! *grabs her and hugs her*

BB: Di? What??

P: BULBUL WHERE DO CHUDAILS EVEN COME FROM

BB: uhh...uhh? Di?

P: BULBUL I DON'T UNDERSTAND

Indu Daasi: Beta, let me handle this

*BB retreats*

ID: Pragya puttar, when two chudails love very much to cause problems, sometimes they get togeter and make a baby chudail who can grow up and cause more problems in the future, it is the reproductive imperative you know

*BB & Abhi admire ID's erudition*

A: Daaasi you spent your life in the village naa how are you so educated

ID: Puttar, I READ.

P: REALLY DAASI me tooo. But I never read about the creation of chudails and I'm so sad and confused.

A: Kya fuggy Daasi just explained to you why are you confused still

P: BECAUSE

BB: Because what Di?

P: BECAUSE I WANNA BE A CHUDAIL

A & BB: 😲

ID: 😳

BB: *small voice* di...why???

P: BECAUSE CHUDAILS HAVE ALL THE FUN and then maybe rockstar would notice me. i thought i could BECOME a chudail but now if you're telling me chudails have to be BORN from chudail parents THERE IS NO HOPE. BB!! WHY ISN'T MAA A CHUDAIL! WAS PAPA A CHUDAIL! COULD WE BE HALF CHUDAIL! DO YOU KNOW!

BB: JIJUUU WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY SISTER I COULDDD END YOU RIGHT NOW 😡

A: LADIES LADIES RELAX. mini fuggy, don't you worry, your sister will be fine. SENIOR FUGGY LISTEN TO ME i notice you all the time you're my fuggy naa??

P: yes but

A: and now that chudail's parents have come, they will take her back to chudail land, and they will find her a chudail husband, and then you and i can have all the fun, ok???

P: PAKKA PROMISE?

A: yes!!

P: okkk...let me go do puja for chudail parents, byeee

A: but fuggy, fun???

P: FIRST CHUDAIL KA BIDAAI AND THEN FUN

BB & ID: 👍🏼 👏

A: ok fuggy...whatever you say

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

[22 Jan/15]

originally posted here in AT 75
drabble: SPIRITS

p: ABHI

a: what fuggy? when you call out like that it freaks me out, like when you were drunk, but you're not drunk, i know you're not

p: ABHI

a: sorry was rambling. yes, fuggy?

p: ABHIII

a: YES FUGGY

p: i can talk to spirits

a: yes, because you're a witch

p: WHAT. NO. HOW DARE YOU SIR.

a: ???

p: there is only one chudail honestly rockstar get a clue don't confuse us

a: but you just said you can talk to spirits, like a witch

p: you are missing the point

a: what is the point?

p: you are being haunted

a: yes, by a chemburwaali fuggy, aka you

p: you're not taking me seriously. i'm trying to tell you cockroach bhootni has a message for you.

a: and she told it to you so you could tell it to me?

p: YES

a: uh huh, and?

p: AND

a: and?

p: AND AND

a: and and and and AND and and?!

p: and dooom will find you soon

a: ehhh?

p: you need to watch out for chudails

a: i thought you said there was only the one?

p: YAH THAT ONE

a: i don't get it, cockroach bhootni is giving me a warning? does cockroach bhootni like me?

p: EVERYBODY LIKES YOU

a: even you fuggy? haww!! i knew it!!

p: what? no we're not talking about me

a: you like me so much you're talking to spirits for me

p: i am doing no such thing

a: and you want to save me from chudails

p: i...i...i'm just passing on a message! i have been given a cosmic gift!

a: whatever fuggy, i know it's all just because you love me

p: me and love you? please even cockroach bhootni couldn't love you

a: you're so cute when you're lying fuggy, you should do it more often

p: I AM GOING TO SET SPIRITS ON YOU

a: well they all like me right? so thank you, i'm sure it'll be great

p: YOU YOU YOU---

a: yes, me, it's all about me. i'm so glad you've seen the light fuggy.

p: ☢️

~THE END~

😃 😛

edit: note this is one of the only occasions on which abhi will win in my drabbles/fic. usually i find a way to leave pragya triumphant, but this one got away from me 😉 😆

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

[22 Jan/15]

originally posted in AT 76
PLAYING WITH FIRE

P: oooh! imma dance around the lohri fire with my sister and the daasis! heehee!!

A: NOOO FUGGGYYY YOU WILL EXPLODE

P: err what?

A: MY PRECIOUS FIREWORK STAY AWAY FROM THE FLAMES

P: hello are you talking to me?

A: YES!!! because you're dynamite!

P: oh...my...thank you 😳

A: eh relax fuggy i didn't mean it like that

P: no????

A: i just didn't want to have to jump into the fire to catch you like i had to jump into the pool

P: you!! you're so mean!! you're telling me you don't like saving me!

A: i don't!

P: you don't like playing hero!

A: no i don- wait, am i your hero?

P: of course you're my hero!!

A: naughty fuggy! you keep getting into these life threatening situations so i can save you???

P: finally!! i thought you'd never realize!!

A: fuggy didn't anyone ever teach you not to play with fire

P: arre why not you'll be there to save me naa

A: fuggy i am the fire

P: all the more reason to play 😉

A: 😲 ...

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

[23 Jan/15]

Originally posted in AT 76.

FULL DISCLOSURE

Mama Chudail: Well my dear, good to know you are on the side of our new relation

Pragya: Sorry, what new relation?

Papa Chudail: When your husband marries our daughter

P: When my...excuse me?

A: FUGGY, I think Daadi's calling you, why don't you -

MC: We're really glad that you understand that Tanu and Abhi belong together

P: Tanu and...Oh. You're Tanu's parents?

A: Fuggy I think you should -

P: So you're Tanu's parents. And you came to finalize the rishta with Abhi.

PC: Yes.

P: *stiff smile* *awkwardly reaches out to shake Mama Chudail's hand* Right, well, thank you!

A: ...Enh? What? Fuggy what?

P: I'm so glad you came! You can't know how I've been itching to be free of this marriage. Now that you're here we can sort it out once and for all.

PC: You're such an understanding girl, Abhi was right about you!

MC: Wait, what do you mean, itching to be free?

P: Oh, you know, I was forced into this marriage too. And I - I c-can't stand Abhi! We have nothing in common, and we don't get along. I've been trying to get him to leave me for ages. You know I can't leave, the way society looks down on women who abandon their marriages, even to such a husband as him

A: Ehh Fuggy stop lying! Can't stand me indeed! And what do you mean, such a husband as me?

PC: Is there something wrong with him as a husband?

P: And I really don't know why he hasn't finished things months ago, I mean Tanu has been waiting all this time -

A: Fuggy! What are you saying? You know Daadi -

MC: Hang on, hang on. She doesn't even want to be married to you. She's been trying to push you away. Why have you kept our daughter waiting?

A: No no it's not like that - you have to understand -

P: Don't believe what he says about his daadi. She's very strong and very loving. She'll learn to love Tanu in no time.

A: She just got out of a coma -

P: And of course once Abhi and Tanu are married, Daadi will just go back to Ludhiana, so she's really nothing to worry about

A: That is not -

P: In fact I have to congratulate you, Tanu is such a committed girl, not many women would stand by and believe in her boyfriend through all this, you've done a great job raising her

MC: What do you mean "all this"?

P: Oh, you know, our fake marriage, and all the festivals and rituals she has to watch us perform together, how she never gets time alone with Abhi because he has to spend every night with me, the way everyone in the family misunderstands her - Tanu's been through a lot the last few months, she has such strength of character to put up with so many insults and -

PC: Insults?

P: Abhi has asked her to tolerate a lot of disrespect and she's done it, she really loves him, I'm sure they'll be happy together

A: Fuggy, what are you doing?

P: And he makes a great husband and an even better son-in-law, you'll see. You know, he even went to jail for my family? Beat several men almost to unconsciousness just because they maligned our honour. He even calls my mother "maa," which I'm sure he'll start doing with you too ma'am, he does so need a mother's love

A: FUGGY! That is not -

PC: You went to jail for her family?

MC: You accept her mother as yours?

PC: I thought you said this was a fake marriage, a forced marriage!

A: Yes - well -

MC: But it sounds like you've been fulfilling all your marital responsibilities!

P: Oh, not all of them! Don't worry, we don't have a relationship. He still sees Tanu for that.

PC: You - you - you scoundrel! You've been using my daughter while married to someone else?

A: Ahh noo noo noo it's not like that for months we haven't

PC: At least you could have a sense of limits! Just because my daughter's waiting for you and trusted you doesn't mean you should -

P: Oh, no, sir, please don't blame them. It's been such a hard stretch of months for them, doing what they can to keep their relationship alive under so much pressure. Really, we should be celebrating their love.

MC: What kind of love requires so much hiding and lies?

P: Anyway, I will be so happy to help you out with Tanu and Abhi's wedding. You know Abhi almost got me re-married last month too? We were this close to getting divorced, we signed the papers and everything, but then he changed his mind and didn't file them

A: Fuggy you know why I

PC: Let me get this straight. This young woman doesn't even want to be married to you and even signed for a divorce, but you stopped it from happening? Even while knowing my Tanu was waiting for you?

A: Sir -

MC: I could understand about you being forced to start with, but what's all this about keeping it going if it could have ended months ago?

A: It's not that simple -

P: Oh, but it is. And now that you're here to support Tanu, we can finally end everything!

A: Fuggy - Fuggy why are you smiling

P: Now if you'll excuse me I have to do some things to finish off the lohri celebrations - bahu duties you know. Luckily when Tanu is his wife she won't have to do all this, since they'll live apart from his family.

A: Who says -

P: See you at the wedding!

*P walks off, nodding benignly at Mama and Papa Chudail*

*Mama and Papa Chudail cross their arms and face Abhi because they want Answers*

*Abhi swallows hard...and wonders why Fuggy turned on him...and what can he even do now...*

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Edited by -mina- - 9 years ago

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