TS: MY FIRST SHIVER (Hot+Romantic) *COMPLETE* *THE END*

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Hello guys this is not a love story, it's a Fantasy story


I mean I am writing this TWO SHOT on a Girl. How she Complete her Fantasy before Marriage.


I know everyone fantasize about their crush that he/she will do this that with him/her. I also do fantasy and I know you girls and boys also do it, so don't embarrass okay.


If we human being than its natural doing fantasize about someone okay so it's good.


I am saying don't hide your emotions.


The name of this TS- MY FIRST SHIVER


WARNING: I am starting now. And I am saying please those who don't like Fantasies then stay away from this because you have to leave is in middle when they get WILD okay.


Enough of my lecture, this is my problem; you have bear it with me also.


So the story starts now.


Part 1 of two shot



This story is of a girl who is getting married within a week with a person who she doesn't know. Whom she never meets before and she don't want to do this marriage but due to the reason of her family she agreed.


She is a big fan of ROCKSTAR and always do fantasies about him, in her dreams don't know how many times they kissed each other madly wildly and don't know how many times in dream they tries to get intimate with each other but every time someone come and wake her up in middle.


She has a dream that she wants to complete her fantasy with her ROCKSTAR before her marriage.


So I am writing this in girls pov okay, if u guys want in boys pov tell me I will give u that also.



Girls POV



Hiii I am Nandini Murthy and Belongs to Middle class family. My age is 21 and I will be 22 before 1 day of my marriage.


You know I am getting married in next week and I am sad because my future HUSBAND said to me that he will make me his on our WEDDING NIGHT.


I know it's the right of every man that he make her wife completely on his wedding night as a gift of marriage. But I am sad because I don't love him, I love ROCKSTAR MANIK MALHOTRA.


Yeah you here right I love MANIK MALHOTRA from my childhood. I have my crush on him from childhood when we plays together. He always calls me NANDU and I always smile and I called him MANU, My MANU.


Yeah we are neighbors, and our homes is very near to each other only a single street is between our homes where we parks our cars.


In childhood we don't know our feelings but he said me his nandu and I clles him my manu.


Then one day his family sends him to foreign for study and I left here. At that time he said me to come with him but I said that my family is not rich I will study here and I will get higher marks then you.


He said me that he will live in contact with me by phone or mail but when he went away he never called me and mailed me not a hii.


I got hurt very much but then one day when I turned 15 years I saw him on TV he is performing with 4 others people 2 boys and 2 girls and when he finished his song everybody shouting


FAB5 FAB5 FAB5 FAB5


Then I search on net and found that he is in SPACE Academy the biggest music collage of india and this FAB5 is his band.


Then I search more about FAB5 and I got to know that he is in a RELATIONSHIP with ALYA who is member of FAB5. That time my Heart Broke down because till the time I am having a hope that someday he will come and make me his as he says in childhood but now he to don't even remember me and is in a relationship with also.


When I found that he is in relationship I then I never think him as mine but what about my heart he to still beat only maniks name I hide my feelings. And start my new journey with manik.


Now manik is my crush whom I love more than my life. But I don't know what destiny is planned for me


I start to seen dreams about us. In which me and manik both comes near each other. Sometimes he kisses me and sometimes I kiss him, he kiss me madly, he bites my neck, ears chicks, sometimes he gives me love bites on my cleavage he slid his hands in my top and touch my back, his long long finger do magic in my body. You know in my dreams it looks like real. Then I am enjoying this state,


Every day I am waiting for night to come soon and I will go in my maniks dreams and then slowly this dreams is increasing day by day, sometimes I dream about him in days also, when I make tea, when I eat, walk, everywhere I am watching and thinking about him only


One day In mine dreams when we got intimate with each other then I start to mouns his name loudly and my MOM hear it and next day I got BIGGEST SHOCK of my Life.


I am sleeping on my bad and my mom come and wake me up, she give me a red sari to wear then I ask her mom what is the function so u r making me wear sari'


Mom said that today a boy's family comes to see me for my marriage


The boy's father is my papas good friend and their son also do work in my papas office.


I deny but they make me engaged with him by blackmailing and all.


Then my mom gives my phone no to that boy and gives him permission to meet me anytime


That day at night he calls me and then we talk some time because I am not interested in this marriage so


One day he called me and said that he have a surprise for me but I said I don't want any surprise then he said to come and meet him in a caf.


He also called my mom to take permission and mom happily agreed with him,


And I went to meet him that day.


When I reach at that caf I got shocked that he booked complete caf for me and then he PROPOSED ME


He said I LOVE U NANDINI and I want to confess my love to you'


I said I don't love you but I will try my best to love you'


He said I know that your mom already said me about that


I got shocked that what my mom told him about me I asked


What my mom told you about me and looks towards him


He said that you r in love with ROCKSTARTMANIK MALHOTRA but you know na he is not love you, he is already love someone else and one more thing that he is so rich and you are middle class then how can you thought love to him.


I got hurt by his words but didn't said anything then I said'


I know he is not in love with me, but I love him and I don't know I will ever love you or not I am only marring you because of my parents, I know mom already told you so y not completely truth. So here is the truth I AM IN LOVE WITH MANU, AND I WILL LOVE HIM ONLY FORVER AND YOU WILL NEVER TAKE THAT PLACE IN MY HEART


By hearing this he Laughed I thought he will angry with me but no he is laughing, he is mad or what. But what he said make me take two steps back from my place


He said I DON'T WANT THAT PLACE, I ALSO MARRING YOU BECAUSE OF YOUR BODY, I WANT TO MAKE YOU MINE ONLY SO THAT YOU CAN GIVE ME PLEASURE EVERY NIGHT'


That time I understood that the thing he is talking about some time before is not LOVE, it is LUST, COMPLETELY LUST.


Then he tries to come near me and trying to kiss me but I slapped him hard on his chick and said


You know what you will never get it what you are trying to'


He said" I will baby. I will make you mine on our wedding night and that day you also can't stop me because at that time this is my right and give an evil smile."


After that I reach home but I know if I tell my parents about him then they will not believe me and for that I have to get proof.


Now only one week is more to my marriage, today I wake up early because I didn't sleeps these days, I want to show his real identity to my parents.


I wake up at 6 am and went on terrace and what I saw make me shocked, happy, and much more.


My DREAM IS STANDING INFRONT OF ME; YES MANIK MALHOTRA IS STANDING ON THE TERRACE OF HIS HOME AND DOING EXERCISE.


But then again get sad after thinking that, I am getting married in a week.


Then I lost in him and watching him doing exercise,


He is looking very handsome, and has a very good height, his eyes nose lips everything is perfect. His body is sweating due to exercise and sweat drops are sliding down from his hair to his forehead to nose to lips to chin to neck to his bare chest to his abs and get lost in her boxer.


His physic is very good, he is looking so strong, at this time he is looking hot. I to completely lose in him. Then I saw that he faced me but can't see me and doing chin ups , when he is going up down, his bare solder are making me gaps at my mouth, ohm my god his solder are so strong and his body so hot that I to start shivering at my place only seeing him.


my eyes are watching her lips which kiss me in my dreams and give me love bites, i am watching the hands which holds me tight when i feel weak in my dream and that fingers who do magic in my body when they slid on my bare back, and those eyes which make me weak in one look, and that nose which always come in my hair and smell them, i to totally checking him but suddenly he disappear and i come out from manik land and feel shy


Then suddenly he stopped doing exercise and went near a chair and sit down, now my Trans is broke down.


I thought that this also is my imagination but suddenly he stand up and start wiping his sweat from his body by a towel, and he is looking so yummy that I to eat him at this time only and start giggling my own self.


Then suddenly I saw that he stopped wiping and he is looking towards me.


I also stopped my giggling and looking in his eyes and saw that he is looking in my eyes. We both lost our senses and don't know for how long we are watching each other. Suddenly our Trans is broken by a girl who came shouting


MANIK MANIK


Where r u manik?


Why u wake up from bad so early you know na I don't sleep without you?


And she come and hugs him.


I saw this but I know that that girl is not other then alya, I mean she is his girlfriend.


Tears come in my eyes and I hide them because manik is looking towards me so I turn my face and left from there.


Maniks POV


Yesterday itself I reach back to this place and I feel like I connect to this place. I don't know why I am feeling so restless after coming here back.


From yesterday evening after sleeping alya I came here near my stars where I got my peace. I am sitting here from 1 AM at night and its 6 AM


I don't know when time spends.


I am sitting here and thinking about my life. How my life change. My father wants to do MBA and continue our business and here I am busy making my carrier in music. I fought with my father for music because I know music is the only thing which gives me happiness and dad never understand me, my friend also don't know about it they know that my father loves me a lot but this is not my mother only loves me and she always make me do what I want she always fought with my father and now she also left me forever that y I am sitting here with stars because I know my mom is with me when I see these stars


When my mom passed away they said me that if I feel lonely and restless then go back from where my life start at that time I don't understand her words but after her death I feel lonely at that house and I am removing the things which is not my use at that time I found a album in which I have my old pics at this house.


When I am watching these old pics and a pic came in front of my eyes that in which two children are playing one boy and one girl.


Now I remember who that girl is


She is my NANDU yes I remember her, how can forgot, I made her promise that I will come back for her, will she waiting for me, I know she will be waiting for me, but why she will wait for me, we are to only friends then what is this feeling. I am very disturbed.


I know my mom don't like alya as my girlfriend she wants to make me marry with a simple girl and my dad wants to make me marry with a girls whose father is rich


I know my dad is greedy that y I don't wanna live with him, I know my mom died because of illness and I also know that there is no solution for that ill. But due to my father's carelessness my mom dies early otherwise she will be with me and I got tears in my eyes.


When I watching that pic cabir came inside and sa me, I immediately hide that pic but he has dog eyes nothing hide him, and he saw that pic and when he saw that pic he asked me one thing


Cabir: do you love her?


Manik: what?? Shocked


Cabir: I know you heard right in a serious tone


Manik: I love alya then how you can say like this bullshit


Cabir: because I know you love alya but only as friend not more than that you also loves us same like her, but I saw a new sparkle in your eyes when you are watching that pic from a very long time and you didn't notice me that I am standing at gate and when I saw tears in your eyes I make sound and you hide it


So tell me you love her


Manik: I don't know yaar and again look nandins pic


Cabir: I know you love her.


Manik: hmm and smiles


Cabir: then y r u sitting here we are going your old home where you born I know this pic is from there.


At that time I understand what my mom wants to say me, she is saying for this, yeah she knows that I love nandini and she wants her with me but due to dads nature she never said anything


Now I make my mind that I will get my peace by anything and then we all got ready to come here.


I am not sure that is she single or married so I come with hope that I will confess her my love if she is single and make her hand from her family I brought a ring for and took out from my pocket,


I know alya is problem she will not understand I know she also don't love me its just attraction and when cabir said me that she have feelings for druv I got happy and come here fast


But when I reached here then I got to know that she is getting married in a week, my all hopes broke at that time, I want to see her but don't have much courage to see her so I went to my home


I saw my old pics with nandini and remember our last chat


She said: manu I will wait for u till eternity plz come soon


And I said: yes nandu I will come, your manu will come to take her nandu with him and then we I leave from here


I got tears


Alya and others notice this alya got angry and said


Who is this girl


I didn't said anything because I already hurt and don't have much energy then I went in room and lay down on bad when alya come she sleep beside me and hugged me,


But today I feel different because cabir said alya have feeling for druv and I notice druv also have, and what I am doing separating them, I know nandu is not mine now but I don't want druv alya relationship so I make my mind to break up with alya tomorrow and come here on terrace and here I talk with my mom my stars


It was morning and I feel a new smell in air and I feel like this smell is only for me


Then I open my t shirt and star doing my exercise and when I complete it I saw that a girl is watching from near home,


Then I remember that this home is nandinis


I saw that she is continuously watching me I thought is the my NANDU because she looks like very different in child hood she is different


We are watching her and when I am watching her then I notice that I am feeling happy, I feel that same peace when I am with my mom,


We both are looking in each other's eyes and I notice that she is happy after seeing me,


Suddenly alya came and hugs me


And when I saw that girl again then I notice that she is having pain and hurt in her eyes and tears are coming from her eyes, she turns her face and walk away


End of MANIK POV



Click Here for Part 2: Page 5



guys here is part 1

tell me how is it

i know i am not much good like others but bear it


plz i am new so support me and give me like and comment

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Note: next part 2 is full of MANAN ROMANTIC FANTASY this part is to make it real. if you feel ashamed or shy in reading some adult part plz don't read okay, because you know my fantasy is very WILD


HAHAHAHA


i am Jocking



With HUG

MyGuitarVina

(Rahul)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice .
It was awesome
Continue soon
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Mahn.. How old are you..??
Wild fantasies and all.. Hun..?? Whose your crush..??
Hehe.. Achha.. I won't ask..!!
It was nice..!! Like first part is sweet sa..!!
And second..!! So we'll see..
Post the next part soon..
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It was sweet n interesting... Pls continue soon... 😊 😊
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hope to unite love birds in last...make man an unite
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Vai aapne ek aur story likhi n u didn't even pm me.. Not done...!!
Chalo iss baar maaf kiya nxt time koi vi update dogey toh pm me okay naa..??

This ts is damn awesome.. I jst loved it alot...
Looking forward to it..
Plz continue soonish...
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Awesome update loved it manan love each other n in part show their wedding also if they love each other they should get married. Waiting update soon
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Awsm yr...plzz pm me whnevr uh upload next part..😊😊
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