TS: MY FIRST SHIVER (Hot+Romantic) *COMPLETE* *THE END* - Page 5

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Part 3A

Manik and nandini silently sitting inside the car and by left hand manik holding nandins hand, and nandini also holding his hand, manik looking forward to the road and lost in his thought and nandini also looking outside the window.

Both were in their thoughts and cool air is passing by them, there is also open so air easily passing by them, they are enjoying this silent treatment of each other. Weather also cloudy and birds are flying in group and making lovingly shapes, nandini watching all this and enjoying the present time, a smile is on her face.

Suddenly manik looks towards nandini and notice her smile he also make grief strong and smiles seeing her happy.

Nandini looks towards manik when she notice that manik make his grief strong, and saw that he also looking towards her very lovingly she feel shy and tries to take her hand back but manik is manik he didn't leave her hand.

The air passing by them due to which nandins hair again and again coming on her face and she is trying her hard send them back to her ear but this air have some other plans

Manik saw that her hairs again and again disturbing her and she is making cute cute faces. He stopped car suddenly.

Nandini looks towards him with questioning eyes that y he stop car middle of road.

Manik didn't said anything and looks something in car suddenly his eyes stop on her bag and he without second thought takes her bag and searching some thing

He takes out a butterfly from her bag and give her bag to her back

Nandini notice this and she is still confused because she doesn't know what is manik up.

Manik didn't said anything and he cups her face in his hands and nandidi got shiver in her body by his sudden act

Manik didn't said anything and put her head on his heart. And take her hairs in his hand and put that butterfly in such way that those hairs don't disturb her and he can enjoy her long hair also that is flying due to air.

When manik put her head on his heart nandini can clearly listen his heartbeat a don't know y she hold him by her tinny hands and adjust himself on him and close her eyes and listening the music of beats which is coming from inside of maniks heart.

Manik saw this act of her he smiles and also hugs her back, because he also want this hug and he is trying from a very long time to control his desires.

Both are enjoying this moment. Suddenly manik said

Manik: Nandini

She didn't reply

He said

Manik: MY NANDU

And at once she broke hug and looks towards in his eyes, there is lot of pain in her eyes manik clearly saw it, and he is guilty for that

So to lighten the mood he said, if u will hug me like this then, we will never reach where we are going

And it works, nandini looks to another direction and and got completely red due to his words and her sudden hug.

Manik notice this he also smiles and then again start the car.

He saw that nandini placed her one hand near his seat and he understand and he also placed his hand on her hand and their hand and fingers and curled in each other.

They again start their journey.

Suddenly nandini saw that manik take off the car from high way and turns towards forest, she got confused and asks

Nandini: manik

He didn't looks towards her

Nandini: manik again

But he again said anything and keeps looking forward

Nandini got irrupted and said: MANU Y R U NOT LISTENING TO ME

And at once manik looks towards

And he said

MANIK: not MANIK AND MANU

CALL MR "MY MANU" in serious tone

Nandini looks shocked towards him by his sudden change in mood. He is serious

She didn't say anything and looking towards him only.

Manik: he saw that she is saying something but stopped by his sudden act so he ask

Manik: ha to what r u saying?

Nandini: she came out from shock and listen him and said

Nandini: manik where r we going?

Manik: don't you trust me NANDU?

She didn't reply him and ask again

Nandini: y are we going to forest?

Manik: y u scared from FROREST in teasing tone

Nandini: no, I am not

Manik: then stop asking question and wait you will get to know soon.

Nandini she did n't said anything more then

In her mind manik whenever I am with u I am not afraid of anything in this whole word and a smile appears on her face'

Manik notice this and understand what she is thinking and in response he hold her hand tightly and looks towardsa her she also looks towards him and he nods his hand in affirmation

Nandini smiles more she thinks how easily he can understand and read her mind and looks outside

Suddenly she notice that they cross the forest and a way come of yellow trees,

A road is passing between yellow and green leaf trees and both side of road these trees makes this ways very beautiful. Nandini leaves maniks hand take her hand back and stand up on front seat by catching railing of car, and smiling and enjoying the view.

Manik notice that sudden change in behavior of her, he feel happy to her see her happy.

Nandini open her hands and closed her eyes and enjoying this fresh air.

Suddenly manik stops the car and at that time nandini notice what she is doing from last half an hour. She feels embarrassed and sits back on the car.

Manik notice this so he said

Manik: its okay nandini, don't be embarrassed, if I am at your place na to I also do the same.

And by hear this nandinis smile come back

And then suddenly notice that manik stop the car and standing outside the car near her side

Nandini: y r u standing outside?

Manik: Madam BECAUSE WE REACHED OUT DESTINATION, FROM HERE WE WILL BY OUR FEET and opens the door from her side and give her his hand and pass a smile

Nandini: she again feel embarrassed by this stupid question

Manik: come

Nandini: she holds his hand and come out side

Then he took in a way which is looks like made only for walk

They both walking hand by hand

Suddenly andini notice that in their way yellow light bulbs are both side the way and in trees also there is white blubs.

She forgot her embarrassment and again enjoying the nature like a small kid

Manik is noticing her cute little acts and trying to control his desires because nandins these cute antics make him fall more and more for him, he saw her smile wide, her cute lips and her shining eyes

Unknowingly nandini went near his hand and hug his hand tightly and enjoying the view, manik notices this and he was getting out of control but at the same time he wants to talk to her that's y he take her here.

Then he put his hands on her solder and she hugs him side and both walking on the way, nandini admiring the beauty of nature and manik is admiring his NANDU's Beauty.

Suddenly nandini notice that they reach near a beach resort between forests near a sea and there on the one side of beach a set up of a table with two chairs.

Actually the way they are walking directly to that set up.

Nandini saw this and got shocked and said

Nandini: MANU ALL THIS??

Manik: I know you didn't eat from morning and I also didn't eat so first we eat and then talk

Nandini: she didn't answer and think' I know manik you take me on a DATE but y r not want to feel me awkward so u saying this'

Manik: shall we have food

Nandini node her head

Manik like a gentleman pull a chair for nandini and when she sit down he also set near her.

Then they finish their dinner silently

It was getting evening slowly slowly

Manik tood her hand and said come with me in a serious tone

Now nandini notice this seriousness in his voice and understand that the time come to talk

So she didn't protect and start walk with manik

Both are walking from last 15 min and reach at a place

There is a white bad is placed on the ground and two pillows also placed with it and small small candle lamp are placed on both side of bad, it give a very sexy bad look for two passionate lover under the open sky.

Both went there and manik open his shoes and sit in a corner of bad,

Nandini feel awkward with this arrangement or she didn't understand y this set up required for talking

Manik guess nandins situation so he said

Manik: we came here for JUST TALK, so don't feel AWKWARD and come and sit

Nandini: didn't said anything and sit other corner of bad far from manik.

Both are silent nandini is waiting for manik to speak and manik is waiting her to speak.

After 5 min of silence both said together

Both: MANU, NANDU

Both looks towards each other and feel awkward

Manik said: okay you said first

Nandini: no you said first I will wait

Manik: okay because he don't want her to feel awkward or something else.

He takes a deep breath and said

Manik: so you are getting married?

Nandini is shocked by his sudden question she thought that he will ask something which is related with both of them but he is not

Nandini: Yes.

Manik: congratulations with a hurt voice but with smile

Nandin: thank you and looks downwards she also hurt when he said this

Manik: so are you happy with this marriage?

Nandini: I am doing this marriage because of my FAMILY in a hurt tone

Manik got happy by her this answer that she is getting married because of her family so for confirmation he ask

Manik: so you don't love him? With a ray of hope

Nandini: she didn't reply this question and looks downwards.

Manik: tell me nandini , your answer is important for both of us.

Nandini: no I don't love him,

Manik got happy but what she said next made him break completely

Nandini: but I will try to love him, after all he is my FUTURE HUSBAND and he will not leave me alone directly looking in maniks eyes with so much hurt and pain.

Manik: he is shocked guilty and hurt and broken heart after hearing this, he is crushing himself for leaving her like this and broking his promise.

And when he remember about promise he suddenly said

Manik: but what about THAT PROMISE?

Nandini: WHAT PROMISE MANIK?

Manik: MY MANU, CALL ME MY MANU, AND U FORGOT U MADE ME PROMISE THAT U WILL WAIT FOR ME ETERNITY.

Nandini: manik I am waiting for u from a very long time, you know what I am become mad because of you, everybody saying my parents to send me mental hospital you know because

Because I am taking your name in every line I speak, I start day dreaming about you, I am watching you everywhere, and at night I cries for you I didn't sleeps night

And then my family found this relationship and they are agree with me to marry with me, at that time I stop my every hope of spending my life with you,

Manik is too numb listening all this he didn't udder any word

Manik: I am sorry nandini which very much guilt.

Nandini: no you don't be sorry, it's all my fault, I am fool who is waiting for you like mad, and when I saw that you are enjoying your life fully, one day I read that you become a lead singer of band FAB5 I feel proud that day but when I read that you are in a relationship with ALYA, my all hopes dies that time only, now I have no hopes manik

Manik: he is hurt and guilt for hurting this much to nandini but he said

Manik: I don't love ALYA

Nandini: what?? Shocked

Manik: you hear right, I don't love alya

Nandini: she is too numb don't know what to say

Manik: if I ask you, that now I am back so r u happy?

Nandini: she come out from her shock and don't know what answer, she is very much happy after seeing him

But she is getting married and if she says she is not happy then he will hurt and if she says that she is happy then he will have hopes like me, because I saw same pain in his eyes, it too late, if he come 1 month before then today I am happy with him for forever.

Nandini: yes I am happy, you came on exact right time at my marriage, I am very much happy that MY MANU is came back at my MARRIAGE.

Manik: he didn't understand her double meaning line, he said further

Manik: if I will say leave him and marry me then will you marry me?

Nandini: what?? Shocked

Manik: will you marry me if I proposed you right now?

Nandini: she didn't answer anything and looked in his eyes

Manik got his answer so he didn't said further and said

Take these keys, its evening and so we will leave in some time to your home till you rest, I have booked a room in beach resort.

Nandini: she ask where are you going?

Manik: I have a important work so I will come in some time till you rest then we will leave for home.

Nandini take the keys and went to resort. Manik also left towards beach side

In resort

She reached in resort and by lift she reach on top floor and went the the room which manik opens

She reaches inside the room and saw that manik decorated room very beautifully there is flowers and room fresheners are making her hot, the look of room are said everything to nandu that for what manik prepared this room, she remember maniks words

If I will propose you then will you marry me.

And she is too hurt because of hurting him, she knows manik don't have any work and he want some alone time so that he can reduce his pain, now seeing the room she also understand that manik also loves her but didn't confess due to her silence.

She went near window from where she can saw beach clearly

There is a backwater also at where no stream comes and still water flowing

She suddenly saw that manik is sitting on the beach of backwaters and looking sunset alone.

She is in tears looking him in this state she don't want hurt him but she is help less

Then she saw that manik is stand up and going towards backwaters and suddenly he is start going deep and deep inside the water and when water reach near his neck he stop and standing there.

She can't hold herself more and start crying and sit on the bed, both are in pains

Then nandini went inside the washroom to wipe her face and what she saw make her shocked

Bathing tub is filling with white milk water and rose petals are inside mix it and candles all over the side of tub. The entire washroom is decorated in white and red flowers.

She came out and run and falls on bad and starts crying

Then after some time she is stopped crying and she remembers something

His future husbands words

AT WEDDING NIGHT I WILL MAKE YOU MINE

And then she thought something and said to herself

"I KNOW I AM GETTING MARRIED AND I CAN'T BE WITH MANIK BUT I CAN ENJOY MY THIS NIGHT WITH MANIK, YES THE FANTASY WHICH I AM DOING FROM SO LONG I CAN COMPLETE IT, I WILL NEVER LOVE MY HUSBAND AND I WILL LIVE MY ALL LIFE BY THIS BEAUTIFUL NIGHT MEMORY"

She went near wardrobe and saw some packet inside, she know what is it, she took that packet and opens it found a skirt and short top. She wears them and went outside the room after locking it

She reached near backwaters and saw that manik is still inside the water.

She opens are slippers and also went inside

When the water reaching near her neck and she is still very far from manik

She thought to call him, she said

Nandini: MANUUU loudly

Manik at once listen this and turns backwards and what he saw make him shocked

Nandini is standing water and water is reaching till nack or more till her mouth

Manik: NANDU and come towards her firstly in fear

Manik: what r u doing here nandu? I said you na to take rest

Nandini: manik I want to spend this time with you.

Manik: what?? Shocked

Nandini: yes manik I want to make this day special for me, I know we can't be together but we can enjoy our present today, will you be with me in this

Manik: with smile, of course

Nandu: she suddenlu hugs him tightly

Manik also hugs her back and when he notice that she is in shorts

Because his hands touches her bare waist

Then nandini said

Nandini: let's go

Manik: where?

Nandini: arre inside the water na, I want to go more deep

Manik: but water already reaching till your neck

Nandini: so what?? You are here na to lift me and by saying this she climb up on maniks back from side

Manik feels current pass through his body when her hot body touches his cold back, nandini also feel jitters in her body and she make her grief strong.

Manik feel that he will lose his control anytime so he want to protect and said

Manik: we can enjoy from here only na

Nandini: no I want to go , cholo na manik,you will not listen me

Then manik take her inside the deep in water and smiles on her cute antics but he only knows how hard he is controlling himself if he want he can claim her here itself, but he don't want her to hurt but he don't know for what intentions nadini come here

They reach at the place where manik is standing before.

Manik take nandini in side hug and both are watching sunset which is looking very beautiful. They are enjoying this moment and suddenly nandini kissed maniks chick

And manik looks lowards her with shocked expression, she is directly looking in her eyes and manik can clearly sees the same intensity which he have

Both are burning with same fire

Now manik can't control himself and he takes her in front of him and placed his lips on hers and starts kissing her

Nandini also start responding, manik is holding her by her waist and nandini;s hands are around his neck, she take her hands in his hairs and pulls him more towards her.

Manik also getting out of control he is caressing nandins bare waist and he is taking his hands on her stomach also he hold nandinis both thigh and put her both legs around his waist line and nandini curls her legs around him now manik holding her from bottom from back side and pushing her towards himself more and more, manik is biting her lips and she also biting his lips suddenly manik bites her lower lip very hard and she opens her mouth in the pain and manik take this opportunity and catch her tongue and start sucking it, he is sucking her tongue like it is a ice-cream and drinking all the water from her mouth, then suddenly he left her tongue and roaming his tongue inside her mouth for testing every bit of her mouth and nandini take this opportunity and catch his tongue and start sucking

Manik shocked by her this bold act but smirk nandini saw this and she bite her tongue very hard and manik tired to take her tongue back but she is holding between her teeth, manik feeling pain and he got angry and start making his grief on her butts and start crushing them, nandini smiles by his this act then she slowly start suck his tongue and start shooting pain from his tongue, manik like her this act and he let her do what she is doing and enjoying the moment, nandini holding his hairs in her fist and sucking his tongue and then start roaming inside his mouth suddenly she take his both lips in her mouth and start sucking them and biting them

Manik feel pain and he suddenly push her little upwards and their lower part come in contact and nandini feel ticklish and at then she understand what is coming and suddenly he leave his lips and break the kiss and hugs him tightly, manik also hugs her tightly back,

then manik start sucking her solders and necks and start walking , nandini has her eyes closed and didn't saw where they are going.

She is not afraid where manik is taking because she knows what is coming so she feels shy and kept her eyes closed

Suddenly she noticed that manik put her on something and at when she opens her eyes and saw that she is on a boat bad which is lying on water

Manik also come upon and start looking in her eyes with so many desires,

Nandini can't take it more and hugs him tightly and by this sudden hug both fall back on water bad which full of white in color

It is looks like manik already arranged everything before their arrival

So she looks towards him in questioning eyes

Manik understand and nodes in yes

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Nandini thought that manik is doing so much for her now its her turn to show her love to him

So now she take first step and start kissing him again manik is happy and shocked by her first stap and holds her waist

Nandini start opening his shirt buttons and when she opens them completely start kissing his chest , heart solders, abs , every place of his body

Manik is getting out of control and he holds her very tightly and suddenly he push his hands inside her top from back side and start rubbing her back and moaning her names with pleasure

Nandini didn't stop kissing him she reaches again to his face and start kiss his forehead, his eyes, his chicks, jaw line his chin, sometimes she bites on his chicks manik is enjoying her sweet torches, nandini didn't kiss his lips and manik want kiss so he go angry and push his other hand on her stomach and start pinching her belly

And by his sudden this act nandini stop kissing and looks him shocked and manik take this opportunity and directly take her lips inside him mouth and start sucking and biting them, now nandini understand his act and start responding and roaming his tinny hands on his bare body, suddenly she start roaming her hands on his abs and manik is feeling very hard and out of control so he put his hand inside her top and start open her top,

Suddenly nandini stop his hands and looks him, manik also looks her confused

Nandini looks here and there, manik didn't understand anything then he is looking outside the bad and notice that some other people also there and they can watch them, he understand why she stop him, he take water bad near beach and take her in his arms start walk inside the forest

Nandini happy gives in and put her tinny hands around his neck and her head on his chest, when she saw that manik taking her inside the forest and he made all the arrangement in the resort then why he is taking her in forest, a confusion make pout on her lips and manik saw this and gives a quick pack on her lips and she is shocked by his this act,she feel shy and hide her face in his chest

Then suddenly she saw that manik stop walking then she looks other side and got shock

There is a camp inside the forest and a cozy bad inside camp

She jump from his hands and runs inside the camp and looks the arrangement and got amazed so much love

She notice that manik arranged so many things for her

She suddenly notice that there is no light lamp and when she clearly saw them she got shocked because there are so many fire flies in boxes and placed near bad some are hanging near bad and all fireflies are glowing

She took one box in her hand and looks towards manik

Suddenly manik said

Manik: NANDINIII

She saw that manik is looking towards her with much love in his eyes

Manik: I LOVE YOU NANDINI

She is shocked stunned and happy and surprised at one time, she is don't know what is this feeling and only looking in his eyes

Manik notice that she is not answering back so he further said

Manik: yes nandini, I love and I know you also love me but you are not saying because you are getting married in a week, I know I went away leaving you when you want me most, and today I lost you because I know I don't deserve your love, I come back from foreign for you only when I realizes my loves towards you and yesterday night itself I make all these arrangement then got to know that u are getting married so my heart broke but I want to confess my love time so I take you here, yes I love you, and you are the only person whom I love in whole word, and I will love you forever

Nandini: she is happy shocked very much that manik confessed his love at last

She didn't reply now

Manik notice that and said

Manik: say something MY NANDU PLEASE

Nandini: I LOVE YOU TOO MY MANU and runs and come near him

Manik got very much happy and lift her in his arms

Nandini goes near his lips and put her lips on his

Both start kissing each other

This kiss is not that wild, it is pure fill with love, tears are coming out of their eyes and both are kissing slowly slowy with so much love

Then after kissing so much time, manik break the kiss and notice that nandinis eyes are closed

He took her inside the camp and placed on bad

He came on top of her and starts kissing his eyes

Manik: open your eyes NANDU

Nandini; she opens her eyes and looks directly in his eyes

There is so much passion love desire intensity

Both are looking in each other eyes

Manik suddenly ask through his eyes to continue

Nandini nodes with a smile

Manik went near the zip of her top and start opening it that suddenly his phone start ringing,

And in next second nandini's phone start ringing both looks confused in each other's eyes

They both got annoyed by these cells

Manik got up from nandini and went took his phone and saw caller id

The name flashing made him angry

He said loudly CABIRRR
nandini also check her cell and saw NAVYA calling

She said to manik: NAVYA
they both think by them both calling them at this time

Manik thought something and said

Manik: don't pic nandini, its cabirs plan to make me angry, he do like this every time

Nandini: every time means

Manik: every time means whenever I do some important work he always disturb me

Nandini: but manik, what if there is come reason they both are together and both were calling, I think we should take their call

Manik: its okay nandini I know cabir, nothing happen, I know

Now both phone stop ringing

But in next second they again start ringing

And manik and nandini both look at each other

Manik: not again

Nandini: I think we should talk once otherwise they will not stop

Manik : yeah and he attend said in anger

CABIRRR

And what he here made him shockd

Manik: WHAT???

And looks towards nandini

Nandini saw his shocked face and she also attend navyas call

And she is also shocked when navya said something from other side

Then they talk a very long time

At last cabir said manik to put phone speaker and navya said nandini to put phone speaker

They put

Cavya said from other side in happy tone: TAKE YOUR TIME LOVE BIRDS, WE HOPE U GUYS SPEND SOME QUALITY TIME
manik: yeah IF YOU GUYS WANT THEN WE CAN SPEND NA, DON"T CALL US AGAIN

CAVYA: LAUGH together and said OKAY BOSS ALL THE BEST

NAVYA: ALL THE BEST NANDU

Manik and nandu look each other and pass a happy smile

But manik saw that there is tension in nandinis face

Manik: what happened nandu?

Nandini: I am afraid?

Manik: for what?

Nandini: what is something wrong happen?

Manik: trust me nandu , now onwards nothing went wrong, and now I am there na with you always

Nandii: always

And both pass smile to each other

Then manik said

Now give me your mobile

Nandini: y?? u have your na

Manik: yes I have mine but I want yours also, you have any problem

Nandini: no, and gives her mobile to him

Manik switch off bith the cell and put them in nandinis bag

Nandini: y u switch off phone, what if some calls

Manik: that's y?

Nandini: matlab

Manik: matlab now nobody will disturb us enjoying our time and winks at her

Nandini understand his meaning and looks downwards shyly

Manik smiled saw this and start coming close to her

But we know na nothing comes that easy,

How can manik enjoy with when clouds are their

Yes suddenly rain start and maniks mood spoils completely

Manik: not again yar

Nandini saw this and start giggling

And manik get more angry then said

Lets go inside resort

Nandini: lets enjoy rain na MANU and she enjoy the rain and start jumping here and their

Suddenly she start sneezing

Manik: look you get cold, let's go inside otherwise I have other ways also

Now nandini want to protect but manik shows his eyes and she sadly agree

Manik: don't sad NANDU; we will HAVE MORE FUN INSIDE, I HAVE A SURPRISE FOR YOU

NANDU: SURPRISE and said LETS GO

Manik took her in his hand and start moving towards resort

Both were looking in each other's eyes and water droplets are dripping from manik face to nandinis face

They reached inside the resort and everybody is looking them and passes a smile

Manik also pass smile back and nandini feel shy so hide her face in his chest

Then they reach outside

Manik put her down and said

Manik: ready for surprise

Nandini: very much

Manik: okay he opens the door and let her come inside and shouts

Manik: SURPRISE

Nandini: she looks towards room and look here and there and notice that everything is same as before when she came some time before

Nandini: where is surprise manik? In confused tone

Manik: WHAT?? In shocked state

Nandini: looks confused towards him

Manik: DIDN'T YOU NOTICE ROOM

Nandini: yeah I notice its very beautiful arrangement

Manik: THIS IS ONLY SURPRISE

Nandini: WHAT???

Manik: yes

Then nandini think something and start laughing like mad person

Manik: reality stuck manik also and he said

Manik: OHH GOD, SHIT SHIT and mad sad face

Nandini notice maniks sad face and stop laugh and said

Nandini: manik don't be said

Yeah I am surprised when I come first time so your surprise don't waste'

Manik also smiles at last then said

Manik: yeah I am fool; I send you alone that time

Nandini: its okay MANU, I am happy u are with me,

Nandini: okay manik you wait I will take first shower then you take, look how dirty our cloths due to rain

Manik think something and said

Manik: I have one more surprise for you

Nandini: what?? Tell na where is

Manik took her in washroom and show their s arrangement

Nandini: this

Manik: you didn't surprised

Nandini: YES MANIK I AM SURPISED IN DRAMATIC TONE

Manik: don't tell me you also seen this before

Nandini: SORRY MANIK

Manik: SHIT SHIT and crush him

then he think something and said

i have one more surprise for you

nandini: and i guess i also seen that also

manik: no you not, i can bat

nandini: then i am waiting for it

manik 1st you close your eyes

nandini: okay

manik went near her and lift

nandini: where we r going manik

manik: SURPRISE

nandini: okay

after some time manik put her down and said

manik: SURPRISE

nandini open her eyes and got surprised

they are topest floor of that that resort and from thair they can saw entire city, and manik arrenged their dinner there

then they complete their dinner

manik: so i made you surprised i want reward

nandini: what reward

manik: a kiss

nandini: not anymore manik

manik got said when he hear she call him again manik

he come back in his room without saying anything

nandini also come back

nandini: SORRY MY MANU

but he didn't look at her

Nandini: she notices his sad face and don't know what made her said

Nandini: don't be said manik, LETS TAKE SHOWER TOGETHER

Manik: he smiles and said YEAH LETS GO

Nandini: WHERE

Manik: FOR SHOWER TOGETHER, you already said na

Then she notice this what she said

Nandini: no manik

Manik: yes yes

And he closed the door of washroom from inside

Then he on the hot pipe of water in bath tub and went near nandini

Manik put his hands on her waste and pull her closer he start nuzzling his nose in her hair and start opening her top,

He pulled it off and threw in corner

Then start giving kisses on her solder

Nandini clutches his solder and moans his name, manik start running his fingers on her stomach and making round round shape on her velly button

Now nandini also start getting warm and she start open button of his shirt and when open it completely she threw in a corner

Now nandini take step and start kissing his chest, abs and her tinny hands are roaming on his body

Naow manik is badly moaning her names

Plz nandini

Then nandini looks towards him in his eyes, manik is burning in fire nandini also not less than fire

Manik pull her closer and put his hands on her shorts button, he open her short and open is completely and then threw in same coroner

Now nandini only her in yellow undergarments

Then he pick up her and place inside the hot bath tub

Now he opens his jeans threw now he is also come in his boxer only, nandini can easily how hard manik is she feel shy and looks downwards

Manik notice this he also went inside the bath tub and pull her in his lap, he start giving kisses her all over neck solders

He start rubbing her solders and back and giving her bath

Suddenly his hand reach on note of her bra and he open it, then he take her bra out put aside

Then he again start rubbing her body his hands roaming all over his body, then he took his both hands on her both breasts and start caressing them he is squeezing them both very hardly, nandini is moaning his name lodly

Manik,manik plz

Manik took her lips inside his lips and start sucking her lips and his hands don't stop massaging her breasts.

Suddenly he left her one breast and took his hand downwards and Nandi's heartbeat increase very wild

Manik put his hand above her p***y and notice that how hot she become, he start rubbing her from above the cloth

Nandini is moaning vary wildly and saying

Manik plz, manik

Manik know that now she is complete ready for next step he off the pipe and took towel which is placing near tub and take her in his hands and put towel around her body and start walking towards bedroom, he went inside the bedroom and put her on the bedroom and removes towel from her body

Manik notice that nandins body is shivering some due to cold and some due to his torches

Manik went near wall and light the fire

Now that fire is adding more fire in their desire fire

Manik come over her and looks towards her lips which are shivering, he take her lips in his and start kissing her, now nandini also respond back. Both are kissing each other only till 5 min then manik saw that now she is not more shivering and clam down he said

Manik: nandini open your eyes

Nandini: open her eyes and looks inside, she saw that the fire and intensity is very high, he ask

Manik: may i?

Nandini: nodes her head in yes

Manik: are you sure? Again

Nandini: she didn't said anything and close her eyes

Manik got his answer and start kissing her again then he come down and start biting her neck and solder and his hands are massaging her breasts vary wildly, they become red due to pinching

Manik reach near her left breast and take in his mouth and start sucking hard it, nandini feels so much pleasure that she is moaning he name very hard, manik is creasing her 2^nd breast and other hand is roaming on her valley button, then he goes on 2^nd breast and start sucking it and creasing 1^st one

Now nandini start shivering very badly she pushing manik head between her breast, then manik left her breasts and reach her valley and start blowing air on it by his mouth, she is shivers due to cold air, manik is enjoying her this state, then he opens her panty and take her hand there and start creasing it he notice that she already vary wet due to heat, he slide his one finger inside and a very loud moan come from nandins mouth

Manikkk

Manik come up and take her lips inside his mouth and start kissing her, after some he notice that she is clam and completely ready he said

Manik: nandini if u want we can stop here, it will hurt u

Nandini: no manik, I want be your by all rights, make me yours

Manik: okay nandu and he come completely top of her and looks inside her eyes

His node in yes

She also node in yes and manik put his parts on right place of her part and said nandini it will hurt sometime

Nandini: I am ready manik

And with a sudden push manik went inside her, both cries loud, because it's the 1^st time of both, yeah manik never got intimate before, he only kissed. Manik noticed that there is barriers between them to make her completely

He took her lips inside and push hard with force and break the barrier and went complexly inside, tears are coming out off her eyes and she is start shivering with pain,

Manik stop their for some time, he is inside her for some time, and kissing her lips to shoot pain, when she clam down, manik start again, he slowly start in out rom bottom side , 1^st both feel pain but after some time they start enjoying, both are moaning each other's name loudly, then after some time both reach peak and come together and moans very loudly

Manikkk

Nandiniii

And both fall down on each other in same position

After some time manik slowly come out of her, and she moans in pain

Manik

Manik: did I hurt u

Nandini: no, you never hurt me, then manik took her inside bathroom, he cleans both the body and took her in his hand and come back to bad

He know she is very tired so he took her in his hands and both sleep a peaceful sleep before setting alarm of 6 o clock

In morning

Manik wake up due to alarm and notice that its already 6, he saw nandini is sleeping peacefully hugging him tight

Suddenly manik phone buzz and he saw cabir is calling

He took phone and said hi cabir in happy tone.

Cabir: manik come soon home, nandins future husband is doing drama from last night, I have called u list night but you boths phone is switch off

Manik: we are coming, I hope everything is ready

Cabir: yeah everything is ready but u comes fast, I can't handle this anymore, I want to punch him very hard.

Manik: on my way

Manik saw that nandini is still sleeping he make her changes

And took her to his car which is come by his one phone call

He put her on passengers seat and drove to murths house

When he reaches outside the notice that very loudly noises coming from inside he notice navya is standing outside with tensed face.

Navya saw manik and runs towards them, he ask about nandini, manik said she is sleeping so I don't want her sleep to disturb so I take her like this

Navya got happy listen so much care by manik

She went near nandini and tries to wake her up when she notice love bites on her neck

Navya: MANIKKK
manik: horrified what happen navya

Navya: r u dog?

Manik: what?? Shocked

Navya: what is this and shows love bite marks which turns red

Manik: wo ye wo ye and looks donwards guilty

Navya: I know you look like monster but can't u behave with this angle less wildly

Manik: sorry

Navya: its okay I am joking and laugh

By their talk nanidni wake up and notice that she reach home, navya saw a new glow on her face she hugs her and said

Navya: I am very happy nandu for you, and she turns towards manik

Navya: thank you very much for giving her back

Manik: she smiles in return

Suddenly they rear loud voice of slapping someone

They all run inside and saw that cabir is very much furious and 1 person is standing holding his chick

That person notice nandini and said

Person: LOOK WHO IS HERE, OHH SO YOU COME AFERE SPENDING YOUR NIGHT WITH YOUR FRIENDS ha

Manik got angry and went near that person and hold his collar and punch hard on his face.

That person fall on ground and blood start coming out of his mouth

Suddenly that person stand up and tries to punch manik but cabir came in middle and shows something from his mobile to him,

That person leave manik and shocked to see that

It is the yesterdays video where he spend quality time with a girl by ruppes, that girl are call girl

Then cabir shows that video to nandinis dad and said

So you still want to marry your daughter with this jerk

Dad went near that person and slaps hard and said, I am ashamed on myself that I can't see your real face,

Nandini watching all this from very long time, she suddenly runs from their and went her room, navya also runs after her

Cabir called polish and make that person behind bars, manik again punch that person

Then manik went near dad and ask

Manik: today I will not call you champ, I will come here from foreign for one thing which is mine with you

Dad: what?

Manik: dad I want to marry MY NANDU, please give me MY NANDU.

Dad: no

Manik: y dad, I love her show much, I will take care of her very much

Dad: that I know, but I don't want my nandu to suffer in your house when your don't don't want her as your wife

Manik: dad I already told, I don't live with him anymore, and now I will found myself work and will love nandu plz say yes

Dad: he agree at last

Then nandinis mom come and hug manik, manik also hugs and saw tears

Manik: bebydoll don't cry

Then

Cabir said: yes in next month we are launching our first album so you don't worry your daughter become queen of maniks heart

All laugh on cabirs statement

Then manik notice that nandini is not their so he looking towards her room helplessly because he is afraid if his CHAMP

CHAMP: go and meet her, she is waiting for you since a very long time

Then manik went to nandu and said that dad is agree with their marriage

She also got happy and hugs him tight

Then cabir said from behind

Cabir: MANIK but ALIYA?

And nandini looks towards manik with sad face

Manik cups her face and said do you trust me na

Nandini nodes

Manik: I am all yours only

Nandini smiles fully and hugs him

Manik also hug back

Then they break hug and manik took her down near her dad and mom, and said that he will come at evening for eggengement because he want to marry her on same date which is fixed before

Nandini blush and runs to her mom and hugs her

Mom: said a thank you to manik for bring back old nandu back

Manik: smiles in return

Then manik reach his home with cabir and they talk with alya and he said he everything wht he feels and all first alya got angry but when cabir said about druv she blush and druv also blush and then manik said cabir,

Manik: what about navya

Now this turns to blush for cabir

Then mukti said

What you all found your true love what about me?

Fab4: you will also found it soon

Then at that evening fab4 got engaged

Manik with nandini

Alya with druv

Cabir with navya

And mukti meet nandinis cousin ABHIMANYU who came to attend nandins marriage

And whey fall in love in 1^st meet

And mukti and abhimanyu also get engaged

And after 5 day

They got married and now they are leaving happy with their love partners or wife

THE END

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