Nibir ff : Miracle Happens\\\\\\ (part 19 on page 117) 18/02 - Page 71

Created

Last reply

Replies

912

Views

58.6k

Users

58

Likes

996

Frequent Posters

itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

When will you update the next part Nimi?
Plz update soon ... i m dying to read further ...
Plz plz plz😭

will update soon amina😊
itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika4

Part 14
Superb update nimi
Full on romantic
Nibir dance
Car scene was fantastic
Specially jab nisha sochti hai ki kabir uske dil ki baat kaise jaan gaya
Machhar dialouge and sourav natanki was nice
Kabir bhi pasta

thanchu niks😉
itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika4

Awesome update nimi
U change your signature
Nisha and kabir monologue was perfectly described
Nibir car accident
Hope sab thik ho jaye
Yaar tujhe bhi confession ke liye accident ki jarurt pad gayi
Nice update
Curtious to know ki kabir ka kya huya
Update soon

thanchu so much niks...😊 n spcl thnx for noticing my siggy😉
itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: janvi0513

Awesome update Pikachu

thanx janu😊
star.angel thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi 😃
Lovely update 😊
Loved their shyness 😉
Akhir vo Jaan he gy 😉
Duffer kahin k 😳😳
Loved the mono 😳😳😳
Nibirav ka accident 😲
Ye kia kar dia 😭
Kabira bleeding 😭😭
Nishu 😭
Ye kia ho gaya 😭
I hope sabb theek ho 😭
Update sooon
Thnx for pm 😳
itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Nimmi😃

Lovely update😊
Loved their shyness😉
Akhir vo Jaan he gy 😉
Duffer kahin k😳😳
Loved the mono😳😳😳
Nibirav ka accident😲
Ye kia kar dia😭
Kabira bleeding😭😭
Nishu😭
Ye kia ho gaya😭
I hope sabb theek ho😭
Update sooon
Thnx for pm😳

thanchu aimzzz😊
itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Thanchu so much guyzzz...for yr lots of love...dat u have showered on me through yr sweet sweet likes and comments...so here is the next part...

HAPPY READING

PART 16


MIRACLE HAPPENS



The man den drove his car as fast as he could and after completing der 15 minutes of journey which was full of tears pain and insecurity of losing der loved one...dey finally reached to hospital..."BOMBAY HOSPITAL" ...the name written on the name plate which was hanged on d building of dat hospital....while in dat 15 min. she died...she died thousand times and her heart...her heart was crying badly by making d sound of heartbeat which was beating...fastly wid worries and fear...while her eyes...her eyes were swollen and became red due to her excess of crying...

As soon as dey reached to hospital dey immediately took kabir inside and placed him on stretcher...uska blood..uska blood itna beh rha tha ki rukne ka naam hi nhi le rha tha...after placing kabir on stretcher saurav called doctor...

saurav - doctor doctor...plz...dekhiye na...ise ...kya ho gya h...

Nisha(she was crying badly and was not in her sense ) - doctor...plz mere kabir ko bacha lijiye plzzz...(she said dis by folding her both hands) i beg uh...plz mere...mere kabir ki jaa...jaan bacha lijiye...saying dis she bent on her knees...as no energy left on her...due to so much of crying n worrying...saurav ...saurav den immediately bent beside her and started consoling her...

doctor - dekhiye hum aapke emotions ki kadar krte h but ye police case h aap pehle police ko inform kijiye uske baad hi hum dekh payenge inhe..

saurav den stands straight n said...

saurav - doctor maine police ko already inform kr dia hai bas wo aati hi hogi...as soon as he said dis ..d police arrived der(i know ki aap sab k liye ye digest krna bhut mushkil hoga ki police right time me kaise tapak gyi but hajmola kha ke ye digest kr lena😆)...dekhiye aa gyi police...saurav said n sighed in relief...

den after talking wid police...doctor took kabir inside an emergency ward ...while nirav were standing outside d ward...in dat time saurav called gangwal family n vj n told dem about kabir's condition...after hearing dat shocking news dey all got shattered n immediately left from der to reach mumbai as soon as possible...

jaise jaise time beet rha tha nisha's state was becoming more n more worst she was still crying sitting on d floor saurav den make her stand n wo use chair pe baithata h...

saurav(wid tears in his eyes) - nishu...ye tu kya krri h...sambhaal apne aap ko...dekh kya haal bna dia h tune apna...kuch nhi hoga tere kabir ko...sab thik ho jayega...nishu...

Nisha (while sobbing)- sau...saurav tujhe pata h jab...aaj na lunch..me j..jane se ...pehle...me..mere hath...se ...hmara...wedding...pic...wala...frame toot...k...gir gya tha...tab se hi...mujhe bahut dar...lag ra tha...aur dekh...dekh saurav...mera dar haqiqat ban k aa gya...ye sab meri wajah se hua h saurav sirf meri wajah se na wo photoframe mere hath se girta aur na mera kabir is haal me hota...apne kabir ki is haalat ki responsible mai hu sirf mai...as soon as she blamed herself saurvad immediately placed her one hand on her mouth so dat she could not speak further n said...angrily...

saurav - shhh...chup ekdum chup nishu... kab se dekh ra hu kuch bhi bole ja rhi h...samajhti kya h tu apne aap ko jo man krega bolegi...aur ye photoframe tootna wagarah tu kab se aisi baaton pe vishwaas krne lag gyi...she den protested to speak further by removing his hand but saurav again sealed her lips by placing his hand...n continued...nishu ye sab se kuch nhi hota samjhi...aur band kr khud ko blame krna...den he became lil polite n said teri wajah se kuch nhi hua h...nishu...kuch nhi...aur dekhna kabir bhut jaldi thk ho jayega...wo bhi to tadap ra hoga na tujhe dekhne k liye haina...on hearing dis she nodded while saurav wipes her tears...

After a few min. a nurse came to nirav n said...

Nurse - chaliye aap dono bhi apna treatment kra lijiye aap dono ko bhi kitni chotein aai h...

saurav nodded n said to nisha...

saurav - nishu chal...dekh kitna khoon beh ra h tera...bhi..chal pehle...pehle treatment kra le...

Nisha - nhi saurav mujhe kahin nhi jana...mai is waqt apne kabir ko yha akele chhod k nhi ja sakti...nhi ja sakti mai ...mai yhi apne kabir k paas hi rahungi...mujhe nhi krana koi treatment is waqt mere kabir ko meri sabse jyada zarurat h...aur mai...aur mai use chhod k ek pal k liye bhi kahin nhi jaungi..dekha nhi tune kitna...kitna khoon beh rha tha...mere...mere..kabir ka...n she again broke down in her never ending pain...

saurav den politely cupped her face wid his both palms...n said

saurav - nishu...dekh zid mat kr... jab ...jab kabir uthega...aur use ye pta chalega ki tune apna...bilkul khyaal nhi rakha...apne aap ko tune itna dard diya... to kitna dukh pahuchega usko...haina..nishu...apne liye na sahi apne kabir k liye apna treatment kra le...plzz

on hearing d name of kabir she noded like a 5 yr old kid n went wid saurav...for her treatment ...

Inside Emergency ward

doctor 1 - patient ka bhut khoon beh gya h...inki condition bahut hi critical h...

doctor 2- ha hme bina waqt zayar kiye inhe immediately operate krna hoga...

doctor 1 - hmm...mai inke relatives ko operation k bare me inform kr deta hu...

After applying treatment n firstaid ...both again went towards Emergency ward...while walking towards emergency ward nisha was walking as fast as she could seems dat she was competiting for marathon...ek pal k liye bhi use apne kabire se judaai bardaasht nhi ho rhi thi...physically she was der yes she was der but mentally...mentally she was in her own world of guilt and unexpressable pain....

As soon as dey reached der...saurav made her to seat on one chair n he himself sat beside on an another chair...

Doctor den came outside..n..as soon as dey saw doctor both stands straight n started asking questions...

nisha - doctor...kab...kabir...mera kabir kaisa h??? thik to hojayega na wo...??? she said dis wid gaining lots of courage...

Doctor - dekhiye aap shant ho jaiye hum puri koshish krre h unhe bachane ki...unka bahut blood loss ho chuka h...aur hume isi waqt unka operation...krna hoga...

on hearing d word operation she sat on d chair like a dead soul...n murmured...again

nisha - operation...

on seeing d state of nisha saurav took doctor on another side n asked...

saurav - doctor kuch ghabrane wali baat to nhi h na...

doctor - unki haalat bahut critical h...hme unhe jald se jald operate krna hoga...aap reception me 10 lakh rupees jama kra dijiye...

saurav - thk h doctor mai paise le k aata hu aap operation ki taiyaari kijiye...

den saurav shook nisha n said

saurav - nishu...tu yhi baith mai abhi thodi der me aata hu...he said n left...from der...

After somewhat 10 min. he returns wid a suitcase full of money...den after talking to doctor he handed some papers to nisha n said...

saurav - nishu...isme sign kr...de...kabir ka hme foren opertion krana hoga...

nisha(still sobbing) - mujhse nhi hoga saurav...mai ye nhi kr..pa...paungi...

saurav - par tujhe krna hoga nishu...kabir k liye...he said n went to reception to deposit those 10 lakhs...

nisha den held dose papers to sign wid as much as courage dat left on her... while signing...kabir's smiling face yes his smiling face was continuously flashing on dose papers n making her again brokedown in dos endless tears...she den closes her teary eyes n let dose tears to flow down...

"MOJO" a soft voice came...on hearing d word mojo...her heart became happy n started dancing in an anonymous beat...while her lips...her lips...whispered only one golden word "KABIR" she said happily n opens her eyes...n wat she saw made her happiest...she saw kabir yes she saw her kabir who was seating beside her n wiping her tears...

nisha - kabir tu yha...tu thk ho gya...she said happily...

kabir - nhi mojo...mai bilkul thik nhi hu...mujhe bahut dard ho rha h...bahut bahut dard ho rha h pta h kaha..she asked "kaha" through her expressions den he again continued... yha...he said pointing towards his heart...tujhe pata h jab bhi tu khud ko takleef deti h na to mujhe yha bahut dard hota h...he said emotionally...n tears started flowing from his eyes..den he cupped her face n said...mojo...mujhe na hospital me bilkul accha nhi lagta...mai na tere sath rehna chahta hu...tere paas tu mujhe yha se le jayegi na..he said to her wid hope..."ha jojo mai tujhe yha se le jaungi" she said immediately...den he again continued...to fir jaldi se in papers me sign kr de...ye papers na meri master key h tere paas aane ki...bol kregi na tu inpe sign...hmm...she den nodded positively n wiped his tears den he again took pen n signed dose papers...as soon as she signed n looked above she saw his kabir yes his kabir who slowly vanished in air by bidding her bye wid smiling face..n ...saying "will come back soon"...n den reality dawned upon her n again tears started flowing from her eyes dat it was not he it was her imagination yes it was her imagination... not reality...but her heart...her heart was not believing...dis...it was continuously saying dat his soul came to meet uh...nisha...becoz ...becoz he cant see uh in pain...he thinks about uh...ur happiness even being in dat condition also...plz dont cause her more pain nisha by giving countless pain to urself...den...her trance was den broken by saurav...

saurav - nishu tune sign kr dia paper...

nisha noded in yes...n den saurav went frm der to submit dose papers...

In precap kabir gaining concious...

To know more about dis...stay tuned wid dis story

Waiting for yr likes n comments...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
mansi_as18 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Res b4 pm

Nimzi 😡 😔 kuch hua na mere kabira ko to mai tjhe bhot maarungi... ur agar tne memory loss karaya na to dekh 🤣 poor nishu... 😔 saurav 😔 i luv the way he stood beside nishu all along...
Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
itznimi003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Res b4 pm

Nimzi 😡 😔 kuch hua na mere kabira ko to mai tjhe bhot maarungi... ur agar tne memory loss karaya na to dekh 🤣 poor nishu... 😔 saurav 😔 i luv the way he stood beside nishu all along...

🤣🤣thanx mansi😊
Aha121 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Kabir's soul
Nirav
Wow!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".