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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice cs lots of mystery behind nandu waiting to know how she will fall for manik update soon dear waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii I am back actually I know I am late but wat can I do I have exams my last exam is on Sunday but I couldn't stop myself from posting so here comes my first update

CHAPTER 1

Manik's pov

I was running restless on the hospital corridor carrying my life my jaan my love my world in my arms.she is lying lifeless in my arms my white shirt was completely filled with my love's blood I was totally scared that my jaan may leave me alone again I can't afford to lose her again I need her in my life without her I cannot live she is my oxygen my heart my soul and my everything my soul reason of living I immediately reached near doctor and asked him to save her I placed her on the stretcher but I am not ready to leave her hand because I was that she may leave me forever but I need to leave she need to be operated for that sake I left her and she was taken to operation theratre after sometime doctor arrived and I immediately asked him about her wellbeing
"I am sorry Mr but her condition is critical " he replied but I was totally numb after listening that my nandu's condition is critical I immediately fell down tears started their way out from my eyes and then he continued
"May I know wats ur relation with her " doctor asked me but I was not in a state of replying after 2 min I replied
H hu hus husband ".I stammered a lot
It's ok but u need to sign these papers "doctor replied
"For what doctor I questioned him "
"These are just formalities nothing to worry by the what's ur name "doctor asked me
"Manik malhotra"
It's ok Mr malhotra ur wife will be safe have hope on God " he patted my back and left to operation theatre

I Sat there lifeless on the bench and remembering my life before her
Before she come in my life I was lifeless body I have everything but nothing to do with she is the who completed me she is the who gave me the life if that day we refused the concert then I would have missed her but the almighty want us to be together that's why I was there that time

FLASH BACK

I packed my stuff as I need to board a flight within 3 hours I was lying on my king size bed in my huge room of my mansion my room is big but it always suffocates me I don't why but that day I was I was feeling restless this is the first time I was feeling in such a way my mind and heart they are trying to say something but I was unable to understand that day I laid remembering all my restlessness for about two hours and I came back from my trance when my mobile started buzzing it was from my friend cabir he remembered me about my flight then I remembered only one hour left I immediately ordered my servants to place luggage in my car and then I took driving seat and started going to airport
Oh sorry
I forgot to introduce myself I am Manik Malhotra chairman of Malhotra industries and lead singer of our own band fab5 I was going to Kashmir to at attend a concert which is almost after 10 days this is our habit to be at that place before 10 days and enjoy family time as we are considered as family I almost reached airport in the meantime by covering 30km distance from my mansion in very less time Soon my friends noticed me and they were blaming me for being late and I apologized them according to my habit Very soon we were in our flight and seated in bussiness class as we were famous band And according to our plan Aryaman and abhimanyu will be joining us after two days as they have some important work it takes two hours for the flight to land in Kashmir and time passed with our chatting session Soon we reached KASHMIR. It is indeed a beautiful place with mountains and hills covered with snow those trees and everything We reached our hotel and everyone went to their rooms as they are exhausted but I have some other plans to enjoy this trip I went to the manager and instructed him and he asked me for 2 hours I agreed and went to my room to take hot shower and relax my body After some time wardboy knocked my door and me that everything is ready and I was taken to a place on the hill where there is a small hut and everything covered with greenary the place was indeed beautiful My actual plan to spend these 10 days close to nature I ordered the boy to arrange my stuff and leave soon I opened my iPhone to record these beautiful memories While recording I found the most beautiful one maybe I have never observed such beauty in my life I froze at my place watching that beauty

Precap : manan

Hey guys I hope I wasted ur time a lot with this boring stuff but believe u will not regret its something different however the update might plzz bear it and ya don't forget to comment and like in spite of my exams I am posting ur comments and liked gives me support to write more and if I get more responce I can write my exams well with ur support so plzz do comment and inform ur buddies about my story if u do that I will be more happy

Thank you

JASMINE
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
interesting prologue.
nice charecter Sketch.
very good part.
thanks for pm.
waiting for next Update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
So sorry voh I didn't get time to read it
Today only I read it
It seems really interesting
Continue soon
And best of luck

Happy dialing

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazin'
mindblowing update
hope nandu will be saved
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for late update but I will be posting once in a week mainly on Sundays but if the response is good I will post in the middle of the week so I need good response here comes the update

CHAPTER 2
I saw the most beautiful one this earth actually I don't have words to describe it she is like an angel actually to say she is my angel who came to earth to give me peace solace which I am craving for actually I am craving for love may be she is the one who can give me that love yes I am very happy that I found my peace but I can I meet her as I don't have any experience with girls and I slowly moved towards her she is in plane chudidar I don't know y she is very simple without makeup as far as I know mukthi alya and navya don't come out of her room without makeup then y is she simple I can see her smile but I don't know y I can see pain in her eyes her smile is not natural its artificial one wat ever it might I have determined to remove all her pain and make her princess of my world and treat her as my princess and I don't know her name wat should I call her then my heart said "JAAN" yes she is my jaan my life and I moved towards her but i was stopped by an elderly woman of age 60 to 70 then I realized that she is in a asharam but y she is living in asharam her family is she an orphan then how she would have lived without her parents that mere thought pierced my heart my that she is an orphan then that elderly woman called Me

Beta app koun ho app yaha kya kar rahe ho - she asked me but how can I say her that I came to meet my love my jaan I cannot say her now but tommorrow I will say that woman about my love as there is nothing to hide that I replied

Namasthe maaji I wished her
Woman. Namaste Beta kuch kam hai app ko app yaha aya

Me. Nahi maaji mai bus sight seeing ke liye aya
Woman : beta app ka naam
Me : Manik
Woman : mera naam suvarna app lunge maaji bulasakte ho beta yeh ladies ashramam app yaha nahi Aa sakte
Me : jee maaji I am new here so I don't know may I meet ur ashramam members I just want to meet them
Maaji : beta u can meet them but not today u can come tomorrow morning and meet them
Me : it's ok maaji I will come in the morning
But before I go I want to see my princess but how then I heard maaji calling someone named nandu and here my jaan came then I got it her name is nandu then she saw me her eyes were big but she looks beautiful then maaji introduced me to my jaan

Maaji : beta yeh Manik yeh yaha sight seeing keliye aya
Nandu : namesthe
I was lost in her beautiful eyes then I heard her beautiful voice she wished me and I wished her back
Manik : May I know ur name
Although I know but I want to hear it from her
Nandu : nandini murthy
Nandini murthy I heard this name some where but where I kept fulstop to my thoughts wished them and left to my place

Guys sorry for short update next time I will give u big one but this time bear with this plzz do comment silent readers let me know ur presence plzz if I get good response I will post next part on sunday which May have manan friendship or else u need to wait until next Sunday

For pms buddy me

JASMINE
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manan finally met...

loved it...love at first site for manik...

hope nandu helps him in sight seeing...

want to know more about her past...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome update
Read all 2 part in one go
Pls pm me next time have send you a buddy request
Cont soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update.
waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE

Guys sorry I didn't post from a long time sorry for that but sorry to say this I cannot post this story for some days because of some personal reasons so please cooperate

JASMINE

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