MANAN FOREVER sorry note on page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Who ever want to post this story on other sites plzz. Seek my permission and post it its a request from my side

Hii guys here is a story actually while watching a movie I got the idea and I am posting prologue



PROLOGUE


Manik Malhotra famous rock star and the chairperson of Malhotra industries. He is the lead singer of fab 5. It is band with his 4 best buddies and himself they are his only family.Fab5 is the famous band in the world.They attend many concerts .His mother died when he was at the age of 12 his father loved him a lot but he has leave him for the sake of business. One day to attend concert his friends went to kashmir there he saw NANDINI and fell in love with her but fortunately she is a sanyasi who has left worldly pleasures and dedicated herself to god.



Will he love her after knowing the truth ? Will he be able to make her fall in love with him ? Will he bring her to normal life from sanyasam? Will his friends and father agree to his decision? Or is there a reason for nandini to take this step ? Is she going through any state of turmoil?


So guys here is the concept if u like this plzz hit like and comment it wat ever ur might be let me know u liked it or not so that I may continue further plzz let me know through ur comments

And more thing if u want me to continue plzz comment now itself if the response is good I will post character sketch and chapter 1 today itself if not u need to wait for one week because my exams are going on .Actually I want to post it after my exams but with this comment in my mind I cannot concentrate on exams so posted today itself plzz comment with ur comments I may get peace and study well


OK comment fast

Byee


Your jasmine


Guys for pm buddy me who ever send me the request I will pm them


And plzz inform ur friends about this story plzz

Index
Prologue page 1
Character sketch Page2
CHAPTER 1 page 2
CHAPTER 2 page 3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Looking forward to more
Continue soon
If possible pm me
Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept...
loving it...
don't know much about sanyasi...but I'm sure that this story will be unique and interesting...
can't wait to read more...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story
cont soon
plz pm me
when updated
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX



Prologue _ page 1
Character sketch. Below
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH


Manik Malhotra aged24 a famous rock star and the chairman of malhotra industries .loves his father and friends cabir alya dhruv and mukthi very much girls go gaga around him but he doesn't pay any attention

Cabir Dhawan aged 24 famous member of fab5 as he is good at drums he treats manik as his brother and stands by his side at all circumstances

Dhruv Vedant aged24 famous guitarist he is shy guy good and innocent guy of fab5

Alya Sexana aged 23 smart and good looking she is keyboard player In a relationship with armayan

Mukthi Verdan aged 23 tomboy famous guitarist and evil twin of cabir in playing pranks in a relation ship with abhimanyu

Aryaman khurana aged 24 friend of fab5 in a relationship with alya lost his close friend nandini some years back

Abhimanyu murthi aged 24 in a relation ship with mukthi a doctor lost his only sister nandini

Nandini murthy aged 22 became a sanyasi due to some unknown reasons there is a lot of mystery to be revealed

Harshad khurana aged 35 mysterious man

Soha khurana aged 23 deeply in love with manik as he didn't accept her proposal she imagine him as his lover and dreams about him sister of harshad

Guys here is the character sketch plzz like and comment and inform ur friends to read the story and comment

And those who want pm plzz buddy me so that I can send u

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Plzz comment fast if the response is good I will post chapter 1 before 1 or else u need to wait for one long week as I have exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH


Manik Malhotra aged24 a famous rock star and the chairman of malhotra industries .loves his father and friends cabir alya dhruv and mukthi very much girls go gaga around him but he doesn't pay any attention

Cabir Dhawan aged 24 famous member of fab5 as he is good at drums he treats manik as his brother and stands by his side at all circumstances

Dhruv Vedant aged24 famous guitarist he is shy guy good and innocent guy of fab5

Alya Sexana aged 23 smart and good looking she is keyboard player In a relationship with armayan

Mukthi Verdan aged 23 tomboy famous guitarist and evil twin of cabir in playing pranks in a relation ship with abhimanyu

Aryaman khurana aged 24 friend of fab5 in a relationship with alya lost his close friend nandini some years back

Abhimanyu murthi aged 24 in a relation ship with mukthi a doctor lost his only sister nandini

Nandini murthy aged 22 became a sanyasi due to some unknown reasons there is a lot of mystery to be revealed

Harshad khurana aged 35 mysterious man

Soha khurana aged 23 deeply in love with manik as he didn't accept her proposal she imagine him as his lover and dreams about him sister of harshad

Guys here is the character sketch plzz like and comment and inform ur friends to read the story and comment

And those who want pm plzz buddy me so that I can send u


Your Jasmine

Loads of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the character sketch so much...
can't wait for the story to actually start...
I'm sure it will be very interesting...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note

Guys here there are many silent readers plzz atleat like
And comment with at least one word whether gud or bad
I am not asking for lengthy comments plzz comment after reading
Today I am not posting because I didn't get enough response
And I have exams I will not update for one week
I will post on next Sunday that too based on response
If I don't get gud response I will pm my story to them who comments below
I am not blaming anyone this is just my decision to pm my story for them who comment.


Byee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CS is interesting
I wonder why harshad is 35

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