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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi readers this is my first time to write a story . I don't know whether u like it r not.
I just started to write the story in mind pls forgive me for any mistakes will try to improve my writing



Prologue

Arnav Singh raizada : 23yr old ambitious, achiever,sincere,honest business man
Caring brother ,have his own philosophy and principle but respect elders .

anjali singh raizada : sister of arnav 28 yrs old ,bold maneuvering personality , respect elders, hate love,tyrant businesswoman, shrewd mind .one step ahead of others loves her brother very much.

Devayani raizada: maternal grandmother of arnav and anjali.loving caring character

Akash raizada: cousin brother of arnav and anjali sweet lover playboy 21 years old.

Manorama: mother of akash ,loves arnav and anjali more , likes to show off but cares for everyone.

Manohar : father of akash ,
Loves his family very much.calming personality.

Shyam manohar jha: 30 yrs old professor of arnav, mentor philosophy knows psychology loves photography happy guy loves his sister very much.know how to handle a situation.

Payal manohari jha: 21 yrs old sister of shyam loveable, calming traditional girl loves to study. Have interest in chess, mastermind,nerdy character

Khushi kumari Gupta:20 yrs old neighbor And friend of payal.talkative and modern girl but have her own rules.parents died while her 8 age lives with her buaji.

Madhumathi sharma: 48 yr old buaji of khushi strict but considerate .owns a sweet shop . loves khushi more

Some other characters wil be introduced later
Since it is the beginning its just the third person perspective.
Part 1

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WOMAN RULES DELHI

Once again Anjali Singh Raizada has been honored as the most powerful woman in Delhi.28 yrs old Anjali Singh Raizada owner of AR company was considered as the most powerful woman in Delhi. No public statement has been delivered by her for this honourable position. As she was well ahead of us we can't reach her family to share their happiness with us . She was like an magma . It was like the world revolve around her and we can't do anything against her wish truthful to the title she has received "THE MOST POWERFUL WOMAN".Although we felicitate her for this title.we wish her more success

NM...
Khushi finished Reading the newspaper .Her face was glowing. She was proud for that woman. Truth to be told khushi considered her as her role model. Her plan was to work with her after completing her course in BA English literature in Delhi university.
She started to cut the article in the newspaper and pasted it on the wall where she had other newspaper cutting related to Anjali Singh Raizada.while admiring her she forgot the time. The big boom ( noise) from the kitchen make her to jerk from that place she started to move fast to the kitchen. The scene there make here face pale her buaji was lying on the ground covered by blood . She was standing there numb without doing anything. The frequent banging of the door make her to come out of numbness she ran towards her buaji crying out her name . no reaction from her. The banging became high she began to move towards the door crying and searching for her phone in her bag . By opening the door she saw hysterical Payal with her brother Shyam .
Payal and Shyam began to ask what happened by seeing her condition they move towards the living room khushi started to move towards kitchen with payal accompanied by Shyam by seeing buaji in that state they are terrified
Shyam began to call ambulance from his phone while khushi and Payal tired to wake buaji by spraying water . They started to clear the blood and began to move her from the place since she is not waking up.

The ambulance arrived in ten minutes in that time khushi again tried to wake buaji but she didn't show any response .khushi began to pack the necessity for them and some cash from her home .she didn't cry not even a single drop of tear fall from her eyes. Just worried look on her face with strong determination.
On reaching hospital buaji was taken to emergency ward. By checking on her doctor said her bp become too low due to stress and fatigue she just needed some rest all are relieved by it .
When buaji was shifted to ward they all went to meant her she was under sedative and sleeping . they heaved ah sigh of relief.
Shyam received a call from his asking his whereabout. He explained the situation to them and requested them for a leave but due the important lecture today they were neglecting his request. Since time rolled on khushi came out for the fresh air she saw shyam argument and decided to check on him while moving towards him she heard that he was requesting for leave and it was not granted she moved in front of him and signal him to say ok and go to work. He made a negative face but she calmly signalled him to say ok finally by seeing her determination he decided to go to work. Saying his good bye he left the hospital and headed towards his college.
On the other side of the city Anjali Singh Raizada was in a grumpy mood she was breathing fire under her nose any body who stepped on the wrong foot now will have to face the wrath of her. Her manager came and informed about the upcoming meeting to her. She was in a rage but she decided to act professional in this situation and started to walk grumpily to the conference area..
To know why Anjali is in grumpy mood stay tuned...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Differnt concept,sounds intreszing,it isnice to see a taff anjali
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u for encouraging me to write . I know I am presenting the stories in more detail I like it that way please notify me for any mistakes


Part 1
Venue: Delhi university auditorium

All the preparation for the chief guest lecture is carried out
Students and professors are at the edge of their legs running here and there to finish the setup perfectly.

Shyam enter through the entrance banner reading welcome alumini

The head of the student with principal were at the entrance waiting for the arrival of the chief guest

On seeing shyam principal gave the bouquet to the shyam.
Shyam was bewildered by this behaviour of principle usually the female staff or the principle himself will deliver it to the guest.He was also eager to see who is the guest

A black bmw appears on the entrance of the college and stopped before the portico. All were informed about the arrival of the guest and moved to welcome .

Shyam moved curiously towards the guest and shocked to see the view before him.
There stood the ASR in his full glory having a lopside smile by seeing the reaction of his mentor.He move towards him smiling at him shyam came back to his sense and extended his hand for handshake saying welcome Sir
ASR extended his arm to hug him and said you are always my mentor no formality.

Shyam: fumbled by his causuality .
He said " Hi Arnav pleased to see you".

ASR: its my pleasure to see you sir . how are u and how is my little angel?
Shyam: I am good Arnav. Your little angel is not so little studying 4 th year here. You will see her later
While talking this they hear the announcement of the arrival of guest so they moved inside.
Arnav was giving a fire pack lecture to the students girls are drooling on him boys are seeing him as role model . shyam has reminded of the time when he first met Arnav "it was the end of the first semester he saw a boy siting at the library thoroughly immersed in the book he was reading time rolled quickly it was time to close the Library he moved towards the boy as the librarian feared to move towards him
Shyam: to arnav its time to close the library will u please move out.
Arnav was disturbed by the voice and looked irritatedly to the source of voice. There stand an young man with calm face. Shyam was intrigued by this man.

Shyam: what are you doing here? Today is the last day of semester you shd be at home enjoying your holiday why are u here studying this book.
Arnav: I am arnav . who are you? And what r u doing here?
Shyam: he was taken back by his rudeness but he can see an underlying respect in him so he replied
" shyam new professor here. May I know my ans now?
Arnav: I was so immersed In this book So i didn't know the time sorry.
Shyam was impressed by seeing the title of the book. The book is about the project management.
He came back to present by roaring applause from the students.

Scene AR conference room
Anjali finalised the deal success. Her manager was beaming with happiness to finalise the 10 crore worth deal. But Anjali is lost in her thought . she was angry with arnav for not coming to home or office from airport. He was returning to home after three years but he straight away went to attend the function in his college rather than meeting her. She was so enraged and decided to go home to cool her sense.

Scene shantivan garden
Devayani Raizada was siping coffee from her cup she is very happy today finally she is seeing her grandson after many years
Anjali entered the Raizada premises.she is entering the house while her nani called her.

Nani: Anjali bitiya come here for a second.
Anjali : ji nani.
Nani : bitiya why are u so angry?
Anjali :kuch nahi nani
Nani: bitiya mein tumhare nani mujhe sab kuch pata hai tum chote peh naraz ho na .
Anjali : nani woh yes nani I am
Nani: don't worry bitiya he is on the way to home.
Anjali: nani u know that he didn't come to home straight from airport. R u not angry with him?
Nani: why shd I be angry with him bitiya? He is going there to address the gathering and I am proud of him . And the main reason he has gone there is to meet his mentor first who give more support to him bitiya. So don't be angry on him
Anjali: as u say nani
Anjali started to move inside while a hand came before her eyes and blocked her vision she knew who it is.A smile emerged on her lips but while turning it changed into a stern look
Anjali with angry eyes asked arnav
Anjali: why did u come now u shd have come at the night after we all slept
Arnav knew abt her sister so he played along as an innocent boy who was hurt by her command
Arnav: yes di u r right since nobody was happy with my arrival I shd have come at the night and returned before dawn . ok di I will do as u say bye
Arnav turned that side and have a lopside smile
Anjali knew his brother mind so she came before him and turned his ears.
Arnav laughed and hugged her she too did the same
These were watched by nani and a small tear drop fall from her eyes.
She wished that these happiness should always be in their life.


Part 2

Scene hospital
Khushi is clearing all formalities for discharge payal is with buaji .after clearing the formalities she moved towards buaji's room
And heard their talk.

Payal: buaji how r u feeling now?
Buaji: I am fine beta just worried . I want to see my khushis marriage before something happens to me
Khushi intervened and said
Khushi: nothing is going to happy to u buaji . u r going to live for hundred years. Don't worry.
Buaji: beta i am just saying that I am weak and anything can happen to me
Khushi: nothing is going to happen to u. I won't allow any harm to come to u. I am there to take care of it . u just take good rest when we reach home no more works.
Payal say their conversation and just nodded her head that khushi is correct buaji shud take test

Scene Raizada mansion

Arnav is talking abt his speech and abt shyam how he behaved with me . all family members were sat around him and hearing him
Arnav: shyam was shocked when I appeared before him after so many years.he behaved so formal with me but I hugged him he hugged me with contentment
Nani u know wat I wished I would see him when I wanted to come back to Delhi . And my wish was fulfilled when I receive the cal from my college to deliver a speech . I was so elated to see him first. He was is and always be my godfather.
Anjali become jealous on hearing arnav praises someone other than family member she developed an instant hate towards that shyam. While arnav continued to say more . she stopped him to go and take refreshment
Anjali: chote go fresh up and come will talk later u had a long hours flight remember
Arnav:ya di u r right want to meet shyam sir later.
Anjali: on hearing this her rage knows no limit.she quiet quietly moved towards her room.

Scene khushis home
Shyam : buaji how r u ? Sry buaji I can't be with u when u r being discharged.
Buaji : its ok beta. I am fine nothing to worry
Shyam to payal: payal u know ur hero is back he is asking about you. He become a great business though he doesn't forget me and came and hugged me I am so happy for him. Shyam is expressing his happiness to her sister payal
Payal : sach bhai I am eager to meet my hero . where did u meet him bhai.
Shyam: u know payal today our college has a guest speech he is the guest I am shocked to see him there as a guest.when he came near I extended my hand to shake by he hugged me payal hugged me . I am so proud of him.
Khushi: bhaiyaa who is that u r talking with so much affection any of ur relative
Shyam: no khush he is my student best student like a buddy.
Khushi was intrigued to know who it was but decided otherwise and moved inside to make food for them.
Shyam: khushi ur course is going to complete this year what is ur plan
R u going to study or work?
Khushi: bhaiyaa u know me I am going to work under Anjali Singh Raizada
Shyam: as u wish princess shyam used to cal khushi as princess and payal as angel.though they r not related by blood they r like siblings.

Scene Raizada mansion
Dinner time

All family members are having conversations with dinner.akash who is not present during arnavs arrival came to him and hugged him
Akash: bhai superb speech
All girls r drooling over u .I am jealous of u bhai. My girlfriend is asking ur no bhai its not fair u know u shd have informed me before ur arrival I would have kidnapped my girlfriends away from u now they r after u instead of me.
Arnav: what to do akash its my charm .
Akash whispered in his ears
Akash: pls teach me bhai I too want to impress someone.
Arnav : oh ho someone akash what's the matter r u seeing someone?
Anjali: what secret my bhais r speaking may I know it
Akash: situation is not good now some other time bro.
Arnav : ok akash as u say
Akash: nothing di just speaking .
Akash to arnav : don't say to do bhai u know how she is she hate love.
Arnav : ok bro don't panic man to man promise.
Akash: thanks bhai.

After finishing their dinner they moved to their room to rest.

To know abt akash love story stay tuned







Edited by susmithasus - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Scene:
Khushis house
Dinner time
Buaji: khushi stop stop I am full I can't eat more
Khushi: no buaji u have to gain strength for that u have to eat more
Buaji: pagal ladki my stress is due to u not becoz of food . when I make u get married all my problems will be solved.
Khushi: no buaji not again . I am just a small kid to get married want to achieve so much in life want to buy new house car and want to make u live like a queen ordering servants around . after that only I wil think abt marriage.
Buaji : pagli its not needed ,to make me happy u have to get married. After ur parents death I am only alive for u. My work will be finished if u get married and move to ur husbands house.
Khushi: buaji u want to get rid of me from this house but that's not a chance I want to live with u for this life time . no escape from me
Buaji: u know wat khushi I can't do anything abt u . u r mad and always do wat u think not listening to my words stubborn girl.
Khushi: oh no comments .its me 😆😉
Buaji: ok khushi u go and take rest I wil do the work
Khushi: no chance buaji u go and take rest I wil do the rest of work.
Buaji: u won't listen to my words ok gud night take good rest beta.
Khushi: ji buaji.

Scene arnavs bedroom

Arnav: wats the matter akash, new girlfriend😉😛
Akash: bhai wo wo ...
Arnav: split it akash . u know I have less patience
Akash : bhai I am in love.
Arnav: akash love ... Well its not a bad thing but u know abt di na she don't believe this but don't worry I will help u to convince di.
Akash : bhai the problem is not abt di its abt my girl actually I am in love with her but she is not in love with me.
Arnav: oh then its a problem. Did u say ur feelings to her?
Akash : actually bhai . I have shown my interest on her I have indirectly notified her but she is not responding to any of this
Arnav: akash the girls today. u know they want boys to be their puppet to do things they like will keep on dragging them without accepting their love and one fine day wil say that I treat u like my friend.just beware of them.
Akash: she is not that category bhai actually she is quiet opposite the nerdy type,silent,traditional and all. She is unique bhai. These quality only make me to fall for her.
Arnav: akash I have seen in movies that once they love someone they talk like mad but now only I got to see one😆
Akash: bhaaaiii...
Arnav: ok OK just kidding .whether she is in ur Frnd circle or not?
Akash : no bhai she doesn't make Frnd.but while following her I found out that she has a neighbourhood Frnd they r very close to each other almost share everything with each other.
Arnav: then its good just try to make her as a Frnd if it doesn't work make her as an acquaintance in any way. U said she has a close Frnd look for her for help. She can be ur card for achieving ur love.
Akash: will think abt it bhai. Bhai thanks for ur advice
Arnav: anything for u akash but till she loves u don't say anything to di.
Akash : ya bhai I know I won't say anything to her and I will be more aware around her to get caught .
Arnav : good then all the best akash. Go get your lady love.
Akash : thanks bhai... Gud night

After akash left the room arnav wonder whether love is true! is there any feeling called love ? what wil happen when we fall in love ? he is so curious abt it.

In khushis home
Khushi is lying on the bed and thinking. I know buaji wat u want but I have some responsibility to do. Wil do whatever u say after completing it.
I will marry someone of your choice . I know Marriage shd be out of love . but question is whether I wil receive that love from anyone in my life...


To know the ans wait for further updates

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4:
Breaking of dawn usually bring new hope in everybody's life, new day, new hope,new thoughts...

For akash its new hope , hope to gain his lady love. He is so happy to execute his plan now. Late night.. talk with arnav has given him hope to pursue his love.

There is some extra spring in his move.He is beaming with happiness while coming to dinning table . All looked at him for his wierd behaviour.Anjali is keenly noticing his behaviour from yesterday. She thought something is fishy.
Anjali: Akash !anything special u r seeing unusually happy today.
Akash: (in mind oh shit akash u r gone) nothing di just happy.
Anjali: ok OK have some breakfast( in mind something is fishy have to look into it)
Arnav to divert Anjali
Arnav: di !!I am going to join office today.
Anjali: chote u just returned yesterday. Take some rest and join .why so soon...
Arnav: u know me di . I can't simply sit in home. And more over I want to analyse the progress in office and want to discuss it with my master. I said I would meet him at evening. So for that I have to visit office.
Anjali again feel jealous . Her brother giving more importance to an outsider than her.
Anjali: as u wish.
By saying this she begin to move outside .
Nani: chote why don't u cal him to our home for discussion. We will also get a chance to meet him in person.

Arnav : ya sure nani . will ask him abt it.okay nani will see you later.


Scene Delhi university

Akash entered the college with his friends and tried to locate his lady love .
She is nowhere to be seen.
His heart sank for not seeing her.His dejected face is evident to others . On this way to class near library he feels someone is watching him.on rising his head he see her watching him with unreadable expression.
He start move towards her and extend his hand saying awkwardly
Akash: Hi... I am akash.!!
Instead of payals voice he heard another voice .
Hi I am khushi and this is my jiji payal.
Akash give a weird expression to khushi And stumbled with his words
Akash: wo wo . hai I think I have seen u somewhere. So I thought to ask u abt it.
Khushi: being the chatter box answered him ya I too think the same. R u from Lucknow . becoz we r from there. U may have seen jiji becoz she is university rank holder for last three years...she continue to blabber till payal dragged her out.
Akash don't know wat to say . he planned to talk to payal to make her as an acquaintance but his plan is failed . due to a girl called khushi.

Payal: what's the need to say those thing to him
Khushi: wo I think that I have seen him before to. So to make him as my Frnd I started a conversation.
Payal: khushi don't act dumb u know who he is . when he approached.
Khushi: ya ya i know who he is the great akash Singh Raizada who is the sole reason for my jiji's insomnia.
Payal: khushi not again.
Khushi: ya ya I know I know u don't love him its just an infatuation for u . but u know wat he is totally in love with you.
Payal: don't blabber khushi its nothing like that
Khushi: ya I know I know . he is a playboy and a rich one .so he is out of range for u.
Payal: khushi its not like that.. u know me. I will not do anything against my bhai's wish so there is no more question abt it..
Khushi: payal if bhai is the problem I can solve it . I know he will support u . I can talk to him for u.
Payal. No khushi don't go there its nothing just leave it.
Khushi : as u say payal.
But khushi had other plan she intended to talk to shyam abt it today.

AR office.

Anjali is busy with back to back meetings she didn't have any time to think abt the morning issue .she is in full swing professional mood.
During lunch time she called arnav to eat with her

Arnav on entering her cabin
Arnav: hai di .how is ur day today?
Anjali: as usual chote nothing new just a new deal.
Arnav: congrats di I heard abt it . u packed the 10 crore deal single handed . wow di I want to learn more from you.
By hearing this anjali is so happy all her inhibitions are removed she smiles to him and said
Anjali: its nothing chote . u already know how to handle these things ,as u have one yr experience . don't sugarcoat me chote.
Arnav : ahhh di I am wounded . how can u neglect ur bhai's praise for u. U r rude u know!
Anjali : han han I know that don't start ur drama come and have ur lunch
Arnav: ha ha ok di.
While having their lunch arnav got a cal from shyam. Leaving his food he started to talk to him. This irritated Anjali more..

Phone conversation:
Shyam: Hi ASR .
Arnav: shyam sir its just arnav for u.
Shyam: ok OK arnav .r u free today evening?actually I like to invite u to my home as ur angel is eager to see u.
( khushi and payal are with shyam during this conversation . on hearing abt his hero payal become so happy)
Arnav: oh wow actually I am planning to meet u at this evening.
Shyam: oh that's good then.
Arnav: actually my nani invited u to our home for dinner.
Shyam: oh in that case I think I will meet u at your house just sent the address.I will arrange another day for ur meeting with angel(payal face fell on hearing this)
Arnav: no no shyam sir . why don't u bring angel with u also.nani will love to see u all.( shyam ask payal whether she is willing to come . on seeing her alarmed expression. He declined)
Shyam : its not needed arnav u know how she is .. She wil be uncomfortable u know her.
Arnav: is angel with you ?
Shyam : ya she is with me.
Arnav: give phone to her.
Shyam : ok.( shyam give phone to payal)
Arnav: hello angel how r u?
Payal : stammering hh hhhi hero I aa aam good..
Arnav: angel won't u come to my home to see me . u know its ur heros order u shd come along shyam sir to my home.
Payal: heroo its not needed will see u later.
Arnav: no angel ur hero is requesting u to come . will u not do that for him?
Payal :oh woh ok hero
( on hearing this khushi become sad she thought she would speak to shyam today eve but her plan is flopped due to that unknown ASR or hero or whatever now her plan to spend time with payal also flopped becoz of him so she expressed her shock)
Khushi: kyaaa.. Payal u cant do this . u promise me to spend time with me this evening now u bro and sis is going out without me. I won't allow u...
She take payals hand in her possessively..
Shyam: princess its not like that . u too know that. It's an unexpected invitation from his nani and we have to be there we will spend tomorrow evening with u ..wat say
Khushi : no not possible u can go Mr shyam manohar jha but I can't let payal .

Arnav is hearing this conversation through phone.
On hearing this arnav become furious to know that someone is opposing him and his shyam sir. But shyam sir said princess he is also speaking to her with an underlying affection . who is this lady spoiling my all plan now.he decided to give his peace of mind to her but shyam managed the situation with his talk.

Shyam: princess wat say tomorrow evening movie ice cream u me and payal good combo know?
Khushi thought for one minute and said
Khushi: promise !!!!
Shyam : promise.
Khushi: pakka vaaala promise no lying and no cheating..
Shyam : ok mere ma pakka promise with no lie and I won't cheat u.
Khushi: then u may go payal saying this she leave her hand..

Arnav was astonished by hearing this . shyam sir speaking to an unknown lady with these much affection but that mature voiced lady behave like a small girl complaining for chocolate. He just can't believe it.he is curious to know who this unknown child like lady is? But he decided that it's not important and kept the phone after sharing pleasantries..

After the phone conversation payal and khushi left shyams cabin towards their class .khushi dropped payal to her class and moving towards her . while something clicked in her mind .she ran towards shyam room .

Shyam is surprised on seeing khushi again.
Shyam: wat happened princess any problem.
Khushi: nothing bhai just want to ask something to u
Shyam was puzzled by this statement
Shyam: and may I know wat is that?
Khushi: bhai do u believe in love?
Shyam: he was taken back by it but said yes
Khushi: are u in love?
Shyam: calmly no not yet.
Khushi: will u support if someone is in love?
Shyam: khushi wat happened to u why r u asking these questions suddenly?
Khushi : bhai I have to submit an essay abt the story based on love. So to know more abt it I am asking u.
Shyam: but why did u ask that whether I will support love or not?
Khushi: woh bhai woh hai. To know whether people who don't love will believe and support it .that's why only
Shyam: gave a wierd expression to her.
Khushi: thank u bhai . u are such a great help. By laughing she moved out of his cabin thinking how to make payal confess her love.

At AR

Anjali is irritated when arnav neglected his lunch and spoke to shyam. Her hate towards shyam doubled.she listened to arnav quietly on mention of angel Anjali wonder who is that girl whom his brother call with such an endearment.she is also curious to know it.she feared whether arnav love that girl?!!!!
She decided to find the mystery behind Akash activities and Arnavs talk..





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