The Karvi Chronicles||Episode 2- Surviella and the Gold Earrings

Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Considering how bad the first one was, I'm surprised you are reading the second😆
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Surviella was honest and kind,
A wonderful person, a treasure to find.
She and Prince Karthik met,
And soon enough their friendship began to set,

Prince Karthik smiled, beaming.
He gave Surviella earrings, gold and gleaming.
She promised to wear them at his ball,
But didn't know she wouldn't go at all.

Her step-aunt forbid her from happiness,
Surviella had to take off her beautiful dress,
She went back to her room and wept and wept
On her bed, until Surviella, finally slept.

Prince Karthik roamed around, visibly upset,
Why hadn't Surviella come yet?
He was filled anger, pain and broken trust.
Soon their friendship turned to dust.

8 years later, Karthik now a fine young man,
But even now his mind was hatching a plan
He demanded that all fair maidens should attend the ball
"Make sure," he said, "To bring them all."



Now Surviella had no choice to go
How would she face Prince Karthik though?
Because Surviella was so fearing,
She forgot to take out her golden earrings



Prince Karthik saw them at just one glance,
And he realised this may be his only chance.
She saw him and tried to leave,
But he had found the person that made him grieve.


She ran out, he ran after her,
They looked at each other, new feelings began to stir.
Now no one knows if they will again be together,
Or if this hate will last forever.


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If you've read to the end, congrats for surviving my badly written poem.

You guys are probably wondering what the Karvi chronicles are. If not, I'm gonna tell you anyway.

I wanted to do something creative that I could commit to everyday that would be productive. Since a new episode comes out everyday and I love Yeh Vaada Raha, so I thought that this would be a perfect fit, so that's why you guys are being subjected to this.

I know it's kinda bad, but I'm gonna try and improve as I go along, until then, please bear with me;)

Plus, it increases forum activity so who's really complaining 😆😛😃



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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
OMG that was so good
Actually good would be an understatement
I loved it 👏👏👏

About complaining,who's gonna complain about a daily dose of Karvi saga 😉



Posted: 10 years ago
#3


Thank you😃😳
Posted: 10 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Vanellope

OMG that was so good

Actually good would be an understatement
I loved it 👏👏👏

About complaining,who's gonna complain about a daily dose of Karvi saga 😉




Thank you so much😳😳

I was worried it would seem too weird, 😕 but I guess it's okay😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice post dear !!! Surviella nice one !
And it matches the original story lol
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Very nice post dear !!! Surviella nice one !

And it matches the original story lol



Thank you 😳 and lol I know right? I couldn't help my self 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LightingHope


Thank you so much😳😳

I was worried it would seem too weird, 😕 but I guess it's okay😃😳


No weird
Everything is fair in love,war & fangirling 😆

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