Virika OS: Never Forgotten

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Before you all go..."What?! Serah actually had the time to write an os as well as her ff updates this weekend..." hahaha firstly, this has to be the shortest thing I've ever written. This was requested by Sidhi and she was bugging me to write it quickly so I did. It's when Viren forgets to say bye to Jeevs 😒 I found it very unlikely that he'd simply just forget to say bye to her, but of course I guess that scene was needed for the drama and jealousy and such...so anyway, here this goes. Oh and I wrote this thing while waiting at the optometrist's office, so the good news is I don't need glasses, the bad news is this thing is unedited and written completely on the spot. 😆
"Bye Chutki!" Viren leaned over to tell his unborn child. Vidhi smiled at the moment of contact. Jeevika took a step forward to say her goodbyes as well, but Viren had already turned and was stepping out the doorway.

Jeevika felt slightly pained for a moment, forgotten. She forced out a smile for Vidhi, trying to convince herself that it didn't matter. Yet as she turned around, she noticed Viren had left his keys on the mantlepiece.

Frowning, she headed over to the doorway when an arm suddenly reached out and grabbed her wrist. She shrieked at the unexpected movement until she realized her attacker was none other than her playful husband. "Virenji!" she gasped. He had her pinned against the wall in a little hidden alcove, the leaves from a young sapling just brushing the top of her head.

"Hello, Mrs. Vadhera," he grinned, "I seemed to have forgotten something and I was wondering if you could give it to me?"

She held up the keys questioningly, but he shook his head, "That was my excuse so I could get you alone to myself. You didn't think I forgot to say goodbye to you, did you?"

She smiled, "You couldn't say bye to me in front of Vidhi?"

"I didn't quite want anyone to witness the type of goodbye I had in mind," he murmured in a low tone, tucking her hair behind her ear and leaning closer, his gaze focused on her mouth.

"Virenji!" she pushed him away, blushing, "Aap bhi naa...anyone could walk out and see us!"

He only responded by taking another step closer, pushing her further into the alcove, "No, they won't..."

She looked up at him, eyes widened, but she didn't push him away, her own gaze falling to his lips. He leaned in to whisper, his breath warm in her ear, "Aren't you going to give me what I forgot?"

She held up the keys teasingly, but he only caught them between their hands, entwining their fingers tightly together. He nipped at her earlobe gently, "Not quite," smiling at her intake of breath.

She slid her free hand up his chest, blushing, making her look all the more delightfully kissable and leaned in just as he did. Her eyes drifted back to his eyes for a single instant, which were dark and intense and she smiled, shifting a mere breath closer, her nose just brushing against his. Yet at the last second, he pulled back and kissed her cheek tenderly, taking the keys. "I could never forget you," he told her honestly, "No matter how busy I am, how many years we've spent together, I could never forget you, never get enough of you. I promise."
She smiled up at him, fingers idly playing with the collar of his shirt and leaned up to kiss his cheek back.

"Miss you!" he murmured, taking a few reluctant steps back. Jeevika only waved happily back, returning to the house in a much better mood. Viren realized their private moment had been witnessed by a curious Vidhi, who had caught a glimpse of them from the window. He had stopped himself from kissing Jeevika as intimately as he would have liked, but that hadn't stopped him from sweetly kissing her cheek. He didn't care if all the world knew how much he loved his wife.

Jeevika, too, heading inside, met with a self-conscious looking Vidhi who stammered and didn't meet her eyes directly.
She realized she must have seen something between the two and quickly engaged Vidhi in conversation, taking the girl's mind off the matter, although she blushed and smiled to herself, recalling Viren's words, that he would never forget her, no matter what.
I have no idea what I just wrote 😆. Just wanted to mention, Sidhi's original request involved just Viren kissing Jeevs on the cheek in front of Vidhi in that hallway, but when my writing muse takes over, I don't even follow what I originally plan out, so obviously the same happened here. But, hey, the more romance the better, right? 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow one of the cutest Os I've ever come across
How I wish this scene was actually portrayed onscreen!
"I could never forget you," he told her honestly, "No matter how busy I am, how many years we've spent together, I could never forget you, never get enough of you. I promise."😳
I luvd this bit a lot!!!❤️
Pls pls do write more serah!I'm in luv with ur writing!!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I smiled so wide when I saw your name flash on my screen ..

Beautifully written by you ...simplicity and romance at their best . I shall soon be sending you requests as well !!!! :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful OS ❤️
viren u naughty boy 😉
didn't leave chance to romance with jeevika 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Serah it's such a cute os.. Loved it.. So beautifully written.. It seems like u hv captured every breath tat Virika take with ur description.. Love ur os n the way u give words to ur thoughts.. Very well written.. Thanks for the lovely os.. Can never get enough of Virika romance.. Keep writing these beautiful stories which keep us connected to Virika n always make us fall in love with them all over again. Thanks for the PM.. :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os
absolutely loved it
superb
thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Os
Loved it though it was very short.
Their Romance is always a treat to read and with it written beautifully is something I can't describe in words.
Do write more!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os
Ih was so cute n adorable
Bt still really romantic
Even tho ih was short
Still beautifully written
Continue writing more soon
Luv ur writing
Thnx for the pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG THIS IS PERFECT
SO GOD DAMN ADORABLE
i feel so so so much better about this scene after reading this!
i have no other words for it!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os...
Just love it..
It was sweet and romantic...
Love the way viren said goodbye to jeevs...
I wish we could watch those type of scenes in ehmmbh...
Again u rock it with ur story...awesome..

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