Manan FF- 'Always dere wid u' Chptr 8 A/B updtd

Hloo frnz...m bk withh my new stry.. i hpoe u guys like dis..My dis stry is ongoing on facebook so i thought to post it dere also...

Charctr sktch:

Manik-A cool.funny..hlpfull guy who plays prnk bt cn nvr hrt anyone's feelngs...He cn do anythng fr his FRNZ hapiness..Lead of FAB5..Frnz are like F*Ly fr him..Lvs his prnts...

Cabir,Mukti,Dhruv& Aliya are same as shw.. bt dey are not dt arrogant...

Dhrv& Aliya- In relatnsship..

Mukti & Abhi- In relatn...

Cabir- He likes navya bt dnt has guts to tell her...

Navya- Frn with FAB5.. Irritates cabir too mch..to tease him..(She knws he likes her)..

Abhi Malhotra- Brthr of Manik..nd Mukti's bf ;)

Nandini- A herat brkn soul.. she was kind of sweet,bubbly ,fnny girl who livs hr life fully..But knw she is a brkn case.. she hardly smiles fr sake of his frnz & F*Ly...
Recntly shiftd to Mumbai frm Delhi..
She is Navya's cousin...Intrstd in music nd navya hlps hr to move on or live again by usng music..so she reqstd her to cm mumbai fr frthr studies nd she accptd fr hr F*Ly nd navya..

Some charctrs will also aded durng d stry...
So guys tll me.. shld i cntinue???Thnkuu nd lv u manan fans..Ppplzzz do cmmnts...

Prt1:-

MUMBAI:-@10 am
A by is sleepng peacefully on his king size bed..whn sunlight falls on his face he hide it in pillow...

Yeah guys meet our here "MANIK MALHOTRA"
The door of his room opnd with THUDD!!! 2 bys cm inside nd surprisd seeing him sleepng peacefully...
1by- Yr cabir..ye ab tk so rhah ...
2by- To tje kya lga dhrv ki ye ready hke hmara wait kr rha hga...

(Yeah dey r DHRUV & CABIR)
Cab- Utha sale ko nh to wo dono hmara khoon pijayngi..
Dhr- Uthaye kse pr... khumbhkrn ko uthana asaan h bt ise...
Cab- Lts try... Mnk yr uth na jldi..(by kicking him)
Dhrv- Bddy grls r waitng in d mall yr... plz jldii uth..
Cab- Oooh shiittt!!! Mnk tre bed pe coackroach h... eeewww

Mnk jmps frm his bed wid a jrk..

Mnk- Kk..hh..aaa.nn.. h?? Khn h cooa..c..kro..ch??Ramuu kaka..ramu kaaka..aj hi peat cntrl krwao mre room me..
(While dhrv & cabir r laughng lyk hell lkng at dmmnk cms in angry mode)

Mnk- Saalon ese koi uthata h kya?? Jaan nkl gyi tb meri..
Cab- Hahaha!!! salle tri shkl dkhne lyk thi..
Dhrv- Lyk seriusly buddy...tu coackrch se drta h...Jo grls tjhpe flat hn jb unhe pta lgega to beta soch kya sochngi wo tre bare me...

Mnk glares at dm..nd dey kpt quite but again burst into laughtr...
Nd dere strts pillow fight btween dm...Aftr goid 15 min dey realize d situatn of room...Room becms garbage bin...

Mnk- Stp it gys m tird nw..wse tm itni sbh yhn kse?
Cab- Subha ke bcche tym dkha h..
Dhrv- Ooh shittt!!! Guys grls are waitng fr us in dmall..mnk gt up fst dude..
Cab- Hn me to bhul hi gya tha..chl jldi nh to beteshaamt h aj dhrv ki..
Dhrv- Mri shaamt ku?
Cab- Kynki alya tjhe chodegi nh na..

Mnk & cab laughs at him lkn hus scard face..
Drv-Hnso mt tum...beta cabr navya ke saamne kse bolti bnd hti h tri yaad krwau...
Cab quits..nd mnk laughs at him..
Dhrv & cab(unison)- Beta tra b dn ayga..
Mnk- Jb ayga tb dkhnge abhi to mje lne do...haha...
Dhr- Chl buddy gt up nd gt ready faast..
Mnk- Ok ok... nd he goes to washroom..

So guys hws it...nandu & nava's entry in nxt prt...
I wnt ur respnse guys plzzz dnt mk me feel dejctd...

Nice update waiting for second part update soon

Prt2:
Aftr 1 hour..Outside XYZ mall...All 3 bys reachd at mall nd searchng fr grls...
Mnk- yr dhrv call ur gf nd ask hr..where r dey?
Dhrv- Yeah bddy i calld bt she is nt pickng up my calls..
Cab- Beta smjh ja bs ..temp bht grm lgta h...

Mnk & cabr laughs hard..nd bechara dhruv
Tbhi peeche se awaaz ati h..(Agye tm teeno..kbse wait kr rhehm tmhara...)
Mnk- Chl bddy gt ready..

Aliya- Hw could u guys...tm 1:30 hr late ho..nd dhrv tm b..i did'nt xpct dis frm u..
Drv- Cm on baby..m soo srry..wo mnk ki glti h sb..ye salla uth hi nh rha tha...
Mnk-Achaa juthe!!... nh alya mne kch nh kiya yr..
Mukti- ooh shut up ...!! u bth..tm teeno kitne irrespnsble ho yr... shrm nh ati tmhe..hm kbse wait kr rhe hn..

Cab- Bs maate!! maaf kro..Ab chle shppng pr..
Muk- Hn jldii jldii chlo.. fr air prt b jana h..
Mnk(cnfusd)- Air prt ku..??
Aly- Loo g!!! ye to bhul b gya ki aj kon aa rha h..nd mukti ku itni xitd h guess kr..
Mnk- Ooh ooh $hiittt man!!!!! Bhai is cmng tday... yipee yr..
aj aftr 2 mnths bhai aa rha h..

Muk- Yup...M to tooo xitd...
Aly-Hn hn ku nh hgi tu xitd...ur bf is cmng na..Dey strts teasng each othr...

Nw cms to our Princess Heroin..
DELHI:-
Moorty mansion:-

Nand mom- Beta u r strtng ur nw lyf... Dnt let ur past cm in ur way..
Nandu- Mon!! M f9..Dn wrry..

Yeah guys here cms our own "NANDINI MOORTY"
Nan Dad- Dnt wrry Ishita..our daughtr is a big girl...Or fr whn Navya b h na..
wo khyl rkhegi iska..Acha tne infrm kiya na ki tu aj whn phunch jaygi?

Nand-Yes dad..i infrmd her...wo aa jaygi mjhe lne..
Na mom- Chlo ab nklte h nh to flite miss hojaygi..nd nandu kbhi b zrurt ho to mjhe call krlena... hm hmesha tre sth hn..
Nand- Dnt wrry mom..m good..mjhe koi prblm nh h.. me blkl thk hu..ap purani baatein mt socho... kynki ab me kisiko khudko hrt krne ka chnce hi nh dngi..(With a carefree smyl with hidden pain)
Dad- Chlo no more emotnal talks..lts goo..Dey reachd air prt nd nandu calls navya..
Nand- Navu tu aa rh h na mjhe receive krne..?
Nav- Nanduuu u cnt evn imagine kbse wait kr rhe hn hm is din ka..finlly tm aa rh ho...i missd u soo mch.. ab bs jldiii se aja..Nand- are mri xprss brk lga ..chl i hv to go in plane its finsl announcmnt .. mlte hn..
Nav- Yup byee.. cm faaast...
Nand- Byee..

So guys dts it fr nw... Wait fr manan frst meet..kn kn xitd h????Plzzz supprt me Frnzz...

Hey very nice concept ... Plz continue soon... Very excited. For manan meet ... N ya also eager to know that... What nandini's secret... Be happy. ... Keep smiling ... Thanks for the update... Take care... ... God bless u... 😊

update soon exited for manan meet 😊

awesome dear...