Manan FF- 'Always dere wid u' Chptr 8 A/B updtd - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update loved it manik to clean bowled ho gaya it's amazing update soon the next part
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Part5:-
In Abhi's room:-
Muk- So baby did u miss me??
Abhi( teasng hr)- Aah!! Nt xactly..:p
Muk- Hhaaawww!! wt do u mean?
Abh- Haha..jkng baba!!! tmhe miss nh krnga to kise krnga ;) With dt he leans clsr to her nd dey share a passionate lip lock.. ;) [But..but..but Dere romnce ws brkn by Fab4..]
Cab(singng)- Doo dil mil rhe hn mgr chupke chupke.. heehehe..
(Evryone laughs..nd mukbhi pulls aprt.).
Abh- Stp it guys...
Mnk- Oohk bhai... we dnt tease u...
Abh- So guys wts d pln..Nyo entrs in room...
Ny- No pln fr tday guys.. frst u all cm dwn nd hv ur lnch.. chlo fst..
Mnk- Yeah mom.. uske bd kch pln krlnge ..
Ny- No mnk...aj no outng ...abhi needs rst..so aj jo b krna h ghr me kro..
Muk- Sure aunty...
Ny- Chlo guys cm fst maan is waitng...she wnt frm dere..
Mnk- Kya bt h muk..Mom ko imprss krne ki tyariabhi se horh h...
Muk- Shut up mnk... (blshng)
Dhr- Are bddy...sh b na..age jke koi prblm nh hgi ..
Aly- Lkn muk kya gurntee h ki abhi will mrry wid u nly... agr koi or psnd agyi use to??(Muk nd abhi glares at hr .)..
Abh- Cm on alu...ku pitwana chahti h ur mjhe..?
Muk glares at him angrly...
Mnk- Haha..ok enough guys dnt tease my bhabi...
Muk- Hogya tm sbka... m going dwn jsne ana h jlsi aao..with dis she leave frm dere nd othr strts laughng...
In Moorty Mnsn:-
Nav- Nandu wt will u hv fr lnch babu??
Nand- U knw my fav dishes navu...
Nav- Yeah yeah..cm ur pasta is ready wid ur fav cup cakes nd chclt cake wid milkshake..
Nand- Woow navu ye sb dkhkr to m more hngry nw.. :pp
Nav- Cm lts strt..Dey strt eatng nd gossipng..
Nand- Acha navu wt abt my admis-sn formalities..
Nav- Evrythng is done..bs day aftr tmrrw clg strthn.. to lts pln smthng till dn..
Nand- Yeah gud idea .. So wts d pln...
Nav- Umm aj to u tk rst..kl shppng pe chlte hn..nd movie fr mumbai darshn..(in xitmnmt)
Nand(in lw voice)- Yeah mumbai darsn..Navu reslizd wt she spilld out in xitmnt..
Nav- Srry babu..
Nand- Oh shut up navu...its ok...its jst sm memries are difficlt to frgt...
Nav- yeah i knw...bt give it a try..nd is br ka mumbai drsn inmy style...so gv me sxy smile..
Nav- Acha or Bade papa se bt hui?
Nand-Hn dad &mom se bt hogyi h..
Nav- Grt...Dey bth strt eatng nd dere chttng sessn..
In Malhotra mnsn:
(Evryone are prnt dwnstairs nd hvng dere food..Abhi nd Maan are tlkng abt d buisness deals)..
Nyo ,aly&muk are tlkng abt grly stuffnd,,dhrv is tlkng on phn..While our hero ws bsy thnkng abt our heroin nd cabir notice dt ..
Cab- kya bt h bhai?? kiske bare me sch rha h?
Mnk(lost)- Nandini..
Cab spits wtr sddnly.. nd mnk cms out frm his state..
Muk- Cab kya hua? u ok?
Cab- Yeah yeah m fn...
Mnk- Oie kya tha ye...
Cab- Wo to tu bta...nandni ke bare me kya sch rha tha?
Mnk(worried)- Nan..d..i.ni ke bare me me kya soochhunga...
cab- Achaa beta?? btayga kya bt h ya me aunty ko khu..
Mnk(Shouts)- Nooo!!!(Evryone luks at him.)..
Ny- Mnk kya hua h?
Mnk- Nn..ooo mm..oomm..om ...kch b nh hua...Me zra abhi aya... Cab chl mre sth..
Mann- Mnk khana to khale..
Mnk- Hogya dad...He drags cab to his rum nd lkd it..
Cab- Oie kya intnsn h be tre?
Mnk- kyaa??Cab- Me na one womn manhu..tje to pta h na i lyk navya fr ku mri izzt pe nzr daalrha h?
Mnk(frstatd)-Ooh shut up..kya bkwaas kr rha h sale... evn m intrstd in grls nly..
Cab(teasng)- Grls ya grl..?
Mnk - Mtlb
Cab- Mtlb Nandiniii
Mnk lks here & dere... tryng to avoid his gaze...
Mnk- Wt nandn...d..nii??
Cab- Wh to puch rha hu salle kya chl rha h?
Mnk- Kch nh yr... Abh to thk se bg nh hui h...
Cab- Sooo...smthng smthngMnk blushes..
Cab- OMG!!! Manik I mean THE MANIK MALHOTRA is blshng...wooo..
Mnk- Hogya tra...
Cab- Chl tu b kya yaad rkhega me tri sifarish krta hu navya se..
Mnk- Haha!!! Tu phle apni settng to krle salle..
Cab- Hn yr ye h.. wo mnti ku nh h yr??
Mnk- Maan jaygi dn wrry...
Cab- Lts try our bst...
"Moortu sistrs get ready"
(Dey bth winks at each othr)...
Frnzz ur respnse is not good...if u guys ate not intrstd soo plz tll me clearly i'll nor write it further...
But plzz at least do cmmnts...
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome update but it was too small pls give long one waiting for manans next meet n only manik can heal her so waiting for their love story
Update soon if possible give one more update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
It's cry NYC plz update soon
Waitng plz jaldi update karna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Small update.. But it was nice.. 😊
No MaNan 😔
But our romeo is already dreaming about her 😉 😃

Do update soon plz 😊
Edited by Palchinn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6:-
Nxt Morning:
In Malhotra Mnsn:
Mnk is sleepng peacefully in his room whn Abhi entrs..
Abhi(pov):- Ooh god!! Ye ldka abhi tk so rha h!!! May b thka hua ho.. lt him sleep...nd he wnt..
Aftr good hlf an hour: "tring""tring"!!!! his cell phone distrb his sleep nd beautifull dream in whch he is doing salsa with nanduu...He slwly opn his eys irritatd by cell phn..
Mnk(shouts)- Kya h salle?? sbh sbh pareshn kr rha h!! sone de..kitna pyara sapna dkh rha tha me tre phn ne tod diya...
Cab- Ooh Romeo!! Juliet ke sapne hi dkhega ya kch sochega b ki kse use imprss krna h..
Mnk- Ooh hn yr... to kya krna h fr?Meanwhile abhi entrs in his room nd relieve to see him awake..
Mnk(still on phn)- Mng bhai..
Abhi- Mng !! tym dkho jnaab... its 12...
Mnk- Oh srry bhai..
Abh- Kiska phn h ...(Dn mank reminds dt cabir is still on hold.).
Mnk- Ooh cabr srry wo bhai agya tha to..
Cab- Ohk k..to socha kch?
Abh- Mnk gv me ur cll... (mnk gv hm his cell)
Abh- Hey cabr..u all are cmng here within hlf ab hour..m gettnv bor n wnna go out so hrry up..
Mnk becms sad as wll as hppy too..Sad cz he wnts to mk pln regrdng to nandu nd hppy cz he is nw going to spnd sm tym with his bro..
Abh- Cm mnk lts go out... frsh hoja jldiii se ..
Mnk- Yeah bhai.. tu chl..m cmng..
In Moorty's mnsn:
Nav- Nanduuu!!!!! m tllng u na jst cm frm kitch rite nw..(shoutng)
Nand- Kya h navya?? y r u shoutng??..
Nav- Cz m waitng fr u fr hlf an hour md u r doing tym pss inkitchn...Nw jst go in ur room nd cm dwn... jldiii ready hoja...we r going fr shop-png,mvie nd dn lnch..so hrry up..
Nand- Ok meri maa!! m going...dnt do draama...
Aftr 15 min she cms dwn wearng a creamy crop top wid blckshrts .lkng hot...Navya is wearng a green knee lngth drss ...Dey r all ready to go...
On othr side Fab5 & Abhi also reaches at sm XYZ mall fr shppng nd sm fun..
Dhrv- Guys kl hi to shppng ki th ..aj ku?
Mnk- Yes grls... lts do smthng else na...
Muk- No yr kl acche se shppng nh hui th?
Dhr- wo ku?
Cab- Cm on dhrv ...its naturl na shppng pe dhyn kse hga kl abhi jo ane wala tha.. hhahahahaha!!!!!!
Abh- Bs guys!! stp teasng us nw... lts gt in d mall dn we'll decide wt to do..Meantym NAVNI also reach at same mall nd mukti saw dm...
Muk( to navni)- Hey guys...hw r u?
[All lks at dere directn.. nd mv twrds dm..while mnk is lost in nandu again nd didnt mv 1 inch frm dere]...
Cab lks bk nd mv twrds him..
Cab- Salle muh to bnd kr..(Mnk glares at him)...
Cab- kya?? ghur ku rha h?? dkhta hi rhega ya chlega ??
Mnk- Hn h jldii chl...(Mnk ran twrds dere dirctn nd cab laughs at him)...
Nav- Hey guys...wssup??
Abh- Hey nandni..u r lkng prtty.nd nvya to asusual beauty..
Navni- Thnkuu..
Dhr- So .. here fr shppng?
Nav- Yeah sm shppng.. nd fun..
Cab- Grt plan... y dnt u join us??(All of dm undrstnd hus intnsns xcpt nandu...cz she is nw nd dont knw cabirs likenss...she gt sm hint but still nt sure)
nand- Are its ok ... We r fn...U guys must hv sm othr plans na so u carry on..(Alya kch khne gi lgti h but Mnk jumps in cnvrsatn)..
Mnk- Noo ..we dnt hv any othr pln..we r also here fr shppng .. (lkng at nandu &smilng lyk a fool)(Evryone is shkd listng dis... Mnk malhtra is ok wid shppng.. But cabir knws his intnsns)
Cab- Yeah he is rite so lts go..
Abh- Yeah cm na plz... Tm 4 on ko ek dusre ki hlp mil jaygi...
Aly- Yeah plz.
Nand- Are are!!! Dnt b plz...ok we r in...lts move..
Nav- Yeah chlo..
( Mnk & cab are on 9 th cloud by listng dis ...nw det cn spnd sm tym wid dm)
Abhi notice it..nd thnks dt smthng is fishy... ..
Dts it fr nw...
M really srry fr dis crap but plzzz bear wid it... Tmrww hs my xam nd i hv to prepare more so able to manage dis mch only.. ... plz njoy nd do cmmnts...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update manbir KO chance Marne ka time mil gaya waiting for their shopping. All the best for exam
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I decide to countinue my dis FF... Soo plz tell me should i updt nxt prt or not??
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago
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#29
Pls post the next part today itself waiting
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Chptr 7:
In d Mall:-

Evryone is bsy in shppng... Dey strtd wid grls & bys individual shppng bt ended up on couple shppng..
So Mukbhi,Dhrulya are bsy wid each othr & shppng...
While Mananbir r tryng bst to imprss navni..
While cabir is on his funny mode & tryng to mk dm smile..& Our Manik is smillng lyk a fool by lkng at nandu's smillng face...
Cab- Guys ye couple prty to bht tym lgaygi..to kch khate h tbtk..M hngry..

Mnk- Kbh tne ye b kha h ki m nt hngry..
Nav- Yeah i agree wid mnk...Mne b tmne maximum tym cnteen me hi dkha h..
Nand(teasng nvya)- woo to it means navuu..tm cabr ko bda notice krti ho!!!
Listng dis navya blshes nd cabr gts hppy...
Mnk- Agr esa h to mtlb aag dono jgh brabr lgi h ...(cabr glares at him while navya is blshng ...manan brst in laughtr)...
Mean while othr couples also reach dere..

Aly- Wtssup guys ...kis bt pe itna hns rhe ho??

Mnk- cbr ke joke pr.. h na cabr..?
(Cbr glares at him while nandu giggls)...
Mukt- Grls lts go nd gt sm accessries...
Aly- fn..
Mnk- Yr abhi tmne itni shppng ki..ab fr..kya thkte nh ho tm??

Nav- No mnk grls shppng krte hue blkl nh thkti..lts go nannu..
(Grls go frm dere nd bys too thought of sm dhppng fr thmslvs soo dey also leave)..

In grls cntr:
Aly & Navu are bsy eith nkpieces while nandu & MUkti r chkng out bracelts...
Muk- yr nandu slct sm unique designs of dese hnd bands ..i wnt to gv it to abhii...
Nandu is lost in thoughts nd gt sad...
Muk shks hr-Nanduu nandu" kh kho gyi??
Nand- nh khn nh...
Aftr searchng a lot dey gt a hnd bnd fr abhi nd sm othr accessries...

In bys countr:
Abh- Yr ye shppng is nt my cup of tea..
Mnk-same here bhaii...
Dhrv- Achaaa beta sbse phle shppng kelye mana b tu tha..
Mnk- Hn..to..wo..me..
Cab- Hn bl na bll..
(Mnk glares at him ..While abhi hs sm douts)
*Abh pov*

Ye chl kya rha h in dono ka!! kya chupa rhe hn ye... pta krna pdega ..
*End*

Outsyd bys countr...
Bys are passng frm a shp where mnk lks at drss whch is indeed beautifull...His eys gt stck dere..
He dreams nandu in dt drss..He sneak frm dere nd buy dt drss nd keep it wid him safely..But but but..
Abhi notice dt ..

*Abhi pov*:
Wt did i see!!!! OMG!!! Mnk bought a drss fr sm grl... Nw dts smthng nw nd shkng...But whoz dt grl???
End

Sooo guyzz kesa lga?? Mnk bought a drss fr whom?? Wanna knw!!? Keep redng...lv u all

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