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NAUC-TSC
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WRITTEN BY- SHIBU


*Scene 1*

Kirti- (trying to make an excuse) Mera career toh abhi-abhi start hua hai...

Sukku- (confused and angry) Aise baat kar rahi hai jaise mere career ko shuru hue 26 saal hue ho...

Bunty- (confused) Par tab tak toh Dolly Di ka bhi birth nahi hua hoga...

Cousins, Saurav, Kabir and Viraj- Bunty, tu chup kar na...

Daadaji- Kirti, Sukku...shaant ho jaao...itni jaldi tum logo ki shaadi nahi karwa raha hoon... Bas bol raha hoon ki kabhi -na-kabhi toh shaadi hogi na...

Kabir- Ji Daadu, waise bhi shaadi ke laddoo toh sab ko khaane padte hai...warna life ka maksat hi kya hai? Beewi ki maar sab ko padni chahiye...

Saurav giggled and both raised their hand on the air to hi-5, but seeing their respective spouses face, made an innocent face.

Vasundhara- Jwala, Bunty, yeh tum sab ko humari taraf se...

Bunty- Chocolates hai kya?

Jwala- Chup kar, pathake hoge...

She took the heavy bag from her and took her blessings.

Sukku- Itne saare pathake...chalo jalaate hai...

Cousins, Saurav and RajBir went outside and lit the firecrackers with the other children of the area. Soon Laxmi, Ramesh, Rupan, Mohan, Vimla, Sudha and Vasundhara joined them and they all had a gala family time enjoying the beauty of the festival.

After one hour, Sudha and Saurav left for their house, followed by Viraj and Vasundhara. The cousins requested Kabir and Nisha to wait.

Nisha- Main ruk jaati yaar, par kal practices hai...

Ramesh- Ok thikh hai...

Nisha and Kabir hugged the cousins and took blessings from elders and left.

*Scene 2*

Nisha entered the practice ground and was surprised to see that she was the first one.

Nisha- Chalo, aaj toh Amit sir be wajah nahi daantenge...

One-by-one all the girls come and at last Amit entered.

Amit- First of all, Congratulations for getting selected for Nationals, I am proud of all of you...

All clapped and smiled happily at their success. But Amit couldn't see Nisha smiling.

Amit- (sternly) But getting selected only means that you all have to work a little more, am I right?

Girls- Yes Sir!

Amit- Shampa, pick the rifle and shoot...

Shampa picked the rifle and stood on the position and fired. It did not hit the circle.

Amit- Concentrate Shampa... Nisha, next you...

Nisha nodded and picked the rifle. Amit gave her a blindfold. Nisha looked at him in confusion.

Amit- Tie this and aim.

Nisha was shocked. Though she had tried this before, she was very unsure. Hoping the best, she tied the blindfold and shot, but failed. She opened the blindfold and stared at shooting target.

Amit- (shouting) What is this Nisha? Nationals are in the next week and this is what you have prepared? Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha hai ki tum iss Nationals ko itna lightly kise le sakti ho? Can't you just see, ki this a one-time-opportunity, aur yeh opportunity sab ko nahi milti...What the hell is wrong with you...

Nisha couldn't understand what to say. Her failure had already made her sad and Amit's scolding was affecting her more.

Amit- 20 rounds of the ground, now!

Nisha nodded and started running. Amit stared at her pleased to see that she was breaking and asked Anjali to aim.

*Scene 3*

*Kirti's Office*

Kirti had just entered the office when the peon told her that her boss wanted to see her in his cabin. She went in the cabin and knocked the door.

Boss- Kirti, come in!

Kirti- Good morning Sir...

Boss- Good Morning...

Kirti- Sir, apne subah-subah bulaya? Something urgent?

Boss- You know Kirti, pichle kuch dino mein jo bhi hua hai...nothing's hidden form you...but, jiss dedication ke saath tume apna job, apni duties puri ki hai... I think you deserve it...

Kirti - (confused) Deserve what sir?

Boss- deserve to work as the head fashion designer of our office.

Kirti-(shocked) What?

Boss- Yes, Kirti...I mean tumne iss din, jiss tarah se situation ko handle kiya...I am sure, aage bhi waise hi shiddat ke saath kaam karogi...and tumhare designs? They are incredible! So, Rashi ko agar yahaan pe koi replace kar sakta hai, toh woh ho tum...

Kirti- (not knowing what to speak) Sir mujhe kuch samajh nahi a raha...Will I be able to handle such a hue responsibility?

Boss- Of course Kirti...Apne capabilities ko question mat karo... Everything will be just perfect... You really have worked hard during your internship and you best reward will be this...

He gave her the appointment letter, which she took with trembling hands.

Kirti- Thanks Sir...

Boss- So, now that you have accepted you appointment letter, let's tell everyone this good news!

She nodded and followed him outside.

Boss- (to all) Attention Everyone

All looked up form their cubicles to know what their boss had to say...

Boss- We all know ki Rashi ne jo bhi, uski punishment usse mil chuki hai, par this needed a replacement, and that replacement is, our new head fashion designer is Kirti Gangwal.

Kirti smiled happily as all clapped for her.

Boss- Aaj se Kirti will be the and I am sure, we will reach new heights now... Continue everyone and Kirti, you have your own cabin now...

Kirti smiled and muttered a thanks as he left. All congratulated her and wished her luck for the future.

*Scene 4*

Kabir opened his website hoping to get a good response. He smiled happily to see comments like, "Awesome!" "Fab!" etc comments that only showed appreciation, but no one had approached him as a student. He shut the laptop, with frustration on his face. He heard the door open, so faked a smile. Nisha entered tired.

Kabir- Hey Mrs. K, kya hua itni tired?

Nisha sat on the sofa beside him, and kept her head on his shoulder. Kabir patted her head for some time.

Nisha saw the laptop and all her tiredness vanished.

Nisha- (excited) Kya response aaya hai?

Kabir- (dejected) Chod na...

Nisha- Aise kaise chod... main bhi toh dekhu...

She read most of the comments happily.

Nisha- (happy) Kabir, 500+ positive comments, this is Awesome yaar...

She hugged him, but broke the hug when she didn't receive a hug. She understood what he was going through and said

Nisha- Kabir, tu itna upset kyun ho raha hai...

Kabir- Nisha 1500+ views and 500+ comments, par ek bhi approach nahi, ek bhi student nahi yaar...

Nisha- Kabir, why are you being negative, abhi toh site banaye hue sirf do deen hue hai...

Kabir- Nisha, yahin sochke maine kal-parso khud ko sambhala tha...par aaj? I just can't take it yaar...

Nisha- dekh Kabire, tu jis tarah at present behave kar raha hai naa, that's not done! Arrey, todha time toh de logo ko, khud ko...itna impatience...

Kabir-(avoiding) Chod yaar yeh sab, tu apne practices ke baare mein bol...

Nisha- Don't avoid this Kabir...Tujh mein talent hai...tujhse fab dancer maine aaj tak nahi dekha yaar, aur dekhna, log jaldise tumhe approach karenge...tujhe jaldise students milenge...Tujhe apni wifey pe bharosa hai na?

Kabir- (hugging her) Khud se jyaada...

Nisha patted his back as he found the lost hope in his arms.

Kabir- (breaking the hug) Waise tune comments mein dekha, kuch ladkiyan ne post kiya hai that I am hot, cute, sexy, pata nahi kya, kya...

Nisha- Ab ki naa tune, Kwaali baat...

They both giggled.

Nisha- Tu naa, aise hi raha kar, kabhi change mat hona...

Kabir- Taaki aur ladkiyan mujhpe fida ho, hai na?

Nisha- (hitting his lightly) Oye, iss bande pe (pointing towards him) Sirf main fida hoon, and the world knows that, yeh hai iss baat ka proof...

She showed him the mangalsutra. Kabir smiled and side-hugged her.

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Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was fabulous.
i just hate dat stupid amit.what does he think of himself.bewajah nisha ko danta n low feel karaya.ek bar viraj ya kabir ko pata chal jaye den to he is gone.
happy for kirti.she has finally got d credit for her hard work.
hope kabir ko bhi achhe response mile.
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NAUC TSC EPISODE 407

By Niya

Scene 1

Lakshaya Academy

Since Viraj had announced about the competition everyone got busy with their respective works and Amit tried his best to discourage Nisha.

Amit : Nisha , here take his blindfold and shoot

Nisha nodded her head and tied the cloth around her eyes , Amit smirked as he thought that she will again miss her aim but Nisha hit the bulls eye leaving him shocked . Everyone was amazed at her Priyanka was really happy and was about to clap but before that they heard someone else clapping , all turned towards the source of the sound to find Viraj standing at a distance and clapping .Nisha removed the cloth and turned excitedly as she thought that finally Amit was clapping for her but she became little sad when she realised that it was Viraj , she smiled sadly at him as he kept walking towards her .

Viraj : Abh toh hume pakka yakeen hai ki aap hi iss competition ki winner hongi ...

Nisha (smilimg) : I'll give my best sir ...

Viraj : You are already the best Nisha ...

Nisha : Toh I' ll try to be better than the best ...

Viraj : That's the spirit , chaliye abh sab break le lijiye aur jake kuch kha lijiye kafi time se practice kar rahe hai aap , Nisha and Priyanka aap humare cabin main chaliye ...

They both nodded and went towards his cabin and one by one everyone started to walk out ,now Amit was left alone

Amit's monologue : Yeh Nisha samajhti kya hai aapne aapko ? Main isse kisi haal main competition jeetene nahi dunga ...

He punched the nearest wall and went out

Scene 2

Lakshaya Academy

Viraj was on his way to his cabin when he heard some noises from the store room , he went near to hear properly what it was ...

Kaira : Hum jante hai hum kya karna hai aur kya nahi please iss tarah hume phone mat kijiye ...

Viraj : Yeh Kaira kise baat kar rahi hain ? Kahin phir se inhe yahan Bua Ji ne toh nahi bheja ?

Kaira : Hum yahan sirf kaam karne aaye hai ... aur kuch nahi .. yakeen kijiye humara ...

Viraj : Nahi hume nahi lagta iss baar Bua Ji ne inhe yahan bheja hai ... Koi aur hai shayad par kon ?

He was trying to listen the conversation properly but his phone vibrated alerting Kaira , he quickly took some steps backwards and pretended that he has just reached the spot .

Kaira : Koi aa raha hai hum khud aapko phone karenge , aap please phone mat kijiyega...

She cut the call and wiped her face , she picked up some files and came out of the room

Viraj started walking looking in his phone and both dashed into eachother

Viraj : I am sorry humara dhyaan nahi tha ...

Kaira : Its ok ..

He bent down and started helping her in picking up the files

Kaira : Sir aap please jaiye hum kar lenge ...

Viraj : No , its ok galti humari thi toh hum hi isse suhdarenge ...

Kaira : Kuch galtiyaan chaha kar bhi sudhar nahi sakte hai ...

Viraj was left dumbstruck and confused hearing her words , while she left from there gathering her files

Viraj's thoughts : Yeh Kaira ko hua kya hai ? Kyun itna ajeeb behave karti hai yeh humare saath ? Aur yeh baat kise kar rahi thi ? Hume pata lagana hoga ki inki life main ho kya raha hai ...

He straightened himself and went towards his cabin to join Nisha and Priyanka

Scene 3

UmAn restaurant

Aman was busy seeing the costumers when she saw Viraj's car stopping infornt of their gate , she excused herself and quickly went to the gate , to her surprise Nisha and Priyanka were also with him

Aman : Aap sab yahan ?

Viraj : Ji hum yahan lunch karne aaye hai ...

Aman : Aaiye na ...

She guided them to the table and got ordered the chief to get their special dish for them

Viraj : Umesh kahan hai ?

Aman : Ji vo andar hai main bulake lati hun

She went inside and came out after a while with Umesh

Umesh : Hello sir , aapne bulaya ?

Viraj : Ji hume aap se kuch kaam tha ...

Umesh : Kahiye na sir

Viraj : Kuch dino baad humari academy main ek comeptiton hai , national level shooting competition, aise toh yeh kahin aur hone wala tha but hume aaj hi pata chala ki abh vo humari academy main hoga , toh hum soch rahe the ki catering ka contract hum aapko de de ...

Umesh and Aman looked at Viraj and then at eachother

Viraj : Kya hua aapko koi aitraaz hai ?

Umesh : Nahi sir hume koi aitraaz nahi hai , par itna bada contract ...

Nisha : Aap dono kar lenge .. aur kuch zaroorat padi toh vanar sena hai hi na ...

Aman : Umesh , Nisha sahi keh rahi hai .. kahin se toh shuruvat karni hi hogi na ?

Umesh : Theek hai sir phir aap bata dijiye ki aapko kitne logon ka kahan chahiye ?

Viraj : Vo sari details hum aapko baad main bata denge , filhal toh hume yeh special dish enjoy karne diiye ...

They all giggled and enjoyed their lunch ,after the lunch Nisha went with Umesh to the shop while Priyanka retuned with Viraj and Aman got busy with her work .

Scene 4

Gangwal shop

Nisha and Umesh entered the shop and were surprised to see a lady trying to flirt with Kabir

Umesh (whispering in Nisha's ear) : Aaj toh yeh gaya kaam se .. yeh lady bohut flirt karti hai

Nisha looked scared for Kabir but she knew he will handle the situation

Lady (flirting) : Yeh wala set kaisa hai ...

Kabir (hesitating) : Acha hai ...

Lady : Main pehan ke dekhun ?

Kabir : Ji

The lady wore the set and started adoring herself while Kabir looked up to find Umesh with a sympathetic expression and Nisha with a scared one , he understood today he was in a big trouble

Kabir's monologue : Hey Bhagwaan , tujhe mujh se aisi kya dushmaani hai ki aise namumne mujhe de deta hai jhelne ke liye ? Abh tu hi kuch kar ...

Lady : Yeh itna bhi khas nahi hai ... kuch aur dikhaiye ...

Kabir showed her almost all the sets but she was not satisfied , first she would like it but after wearing it she would deny .

Kabir (irritated) : Ma'am aapko ek bhi set acha nahi laga ?

Lady (dreamily): Ache toh sare hai par mere liye ek bhi nahi bana , lagta hai mere liye hi bane hai ...

Her statement not only shocked Kabir but also the others

Kabir(shocked) : Excuse me !!!! ????

Lady (composing her self) : I mean , aap hi koi choose kar lijiye na ...

That was it for Nisha she went and stood next to Kabir , Kabir sighed in relief while that customer gave her a fake smile and Nisha reciprocated the smile

Umesh's monologue : Abh yeh customer gai kaam se ...

Nisha : Aap ek kaam kijiye aap yeh wala le lijiye ...

Lady : But yeh kuch khas nahi hai ...

Nisha : Arey aise kaise nahi ? Yeh designer piece hai , infact isse Kabir ne hi design kara hai ...

Kabir (shocked) : Main ?

Nisha stamped his foot and he winched in pain

Kabir : Maine hi toh banaya hai ...

Lady (happily) : Acha toh isse pack kar dijiye ... main payment kar deti hun ...

She got up and went to do the payment of the set while Kabir smiled at her and thanked her

Kabir : Yaar mere saath aisa kyun hota hai ?

Nisha : Disadvantages of being hot and cute at the same time hubby ...

Kabir (smirking) : Toh tu manti hai ki main hot bhi hun aur cute bhi ?

Nisha : Haan maine kab mana kiya ?

Kabir : Ok , chalo aaj pata chala ki wifey bhi mujh pe fida hai ...

Nisha : Agar fida nahi hoti toh tujh jaise bandar ke saath nahi hoti

Kabir : Abhi toh tareef kar rahi thi aur abhi bandar bula rahi hai ?

Nisha : Chahe kitni bhi tareef kar lun , mere liye tu bandar hi rehga...

She giggled and went to give the box to the lady while Kabir shook his head at her

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NAUC TSC EPISODE 408

By Niya

Scene 1

Lakshaya Academy

Amit had given a task to all the girls to run for a mile as a warm up exercise , Nisha tried her best to cope up but since she was running almost everyday as Amit's punishment she was becoming weak now .

Amit(yelling) : Nisha common run

Nisha nodded and tried her best to run but failed , she didn't realised when her own legs got tangled and she fell on the ground , Priyanka stopped running and rushed to her

Priyanka : Nisha are you ok ?

Amit : (whispering to himself) Lo shuru inka drama (yelling) Kya hua ?

Priyanka : Sir , lagta hai inka anklet twist hogaya hai

Amit : Great , toh inhe inke ghar bhejiye vahin theek hai yeh

He left from there while others dispersed too , Nisha had tears in her eyes not because of the pain caused by the twisting of her ankle but because of Amit's words and this didn't go unnoticed by Priyanka , she some how took Nisha to the medical room and then drove her till home

Scene 2

KNH

Nisha reached home with Priyanka , Kabir who had returned from the shop as he for lunch saw them and rushed to them . He saw a sprain bandage tied in Nisha's right foot . He carefully made her sit on the sofa and knelt next to her and started to open the bandage to see the wound.

Kabir (worried and concerned) : Yeh kaise hua ? Phir se heel tut gai kya ?

Priyanka : Nahi , inhe punishment mili thi usse pura karte waqt chot lag gai

Kabir : Punishment ? Kaisi punishment aur kyun ?

Nisha (trying to change the topic) : Chod na yaar Kabir , tu bhi kya baatien leke baith gaya

Kabir(in a stern voice) : Nisha mujhe bata kya hua ?

Priyanka : Yeh kuch nahi batayengi , hum batate hai , darasal humare coach ne hum sabko punishment di kyunki hum sab ne aaj apna aim miss kar diya .

Kabir : Itni si baat pai koi punishment deta hai kya ?

Priyanka : And vo sirf aur sirf Nisha ko hi punishment dete hai zyadatar , baki kisi ko nahi , aaj pata nahi kaise sab ko de di

Kabir(angrily) : What nonsense ? Isse coach kisne banaya

Nisha : Guys chodo na kyun itni choti si baat ka batangad bana rahe ho ?

Priyanka : Yeh choti si baat nahi hai Nisha , humne jab se academy dubara join ki hai , humne notice kiya hai ki unka behaviour aapke prati bohut alag hai , humse unhone kaha ki hum Viraj Singh Rathore ki behan hai issliye hume vo kuch nahi keh sakte . Par unhe aapko leke kuch toh miss understanding zaroor hai

Kabir (angrily) : Agar yeh baat sach hai toh uski misunderstanding toh main dur karunga

He got up in rage and was about to leave when Nisha caught his wrist

Nisha : Kabir dekh competition main bas kuch hi din bache hai competition ke liye please shaant hoja agar koi problem hogai toh academy pe asar padega

Kabir : Acha aur teri health pe jo asar padega uska kya ? Nisha tu best hai aur tujhe apna best dene ke liye apna dhyaan rakhna chahiye

Nisha : Main janti hun Kabir but please abhi ke liye shaant ho ja ,mere liye, please

Kabir : Theek hai , rukh main davai leke aata hun .

He signalled Priyanka to come with him , he went towards the kitchen to bring the first aid from the cabinet and Priyanka followed him making an excuse of having water

Kabir : Priyanka main Nisha ki baat se bilkul satisfied nahi hun but uske aage main kuch kar bhi nahi sakta

Priyanka : Hum jante hai , hum Viraj Bhai se iss bare main baat karne ki soch rahe the

Kabir : Nahi , usse pehle yeh pata lagana hoga ki Amit akhir aisa kar kyun raha hai

Priyanka : Hume lagta hai unhe koi misunderstanding hui hai Nisha ko leke

Kabir : Toh sab se pehle usse clear karna padega , usske baad Bade Bhaiyaa se baat karenge , abhi tum jakar practice karo , main chahta hun ki sare awards issi ghar main aaye , jao

Priyanka (giggling) : Theek hai , Nisha ka dhyaan rakhiye ga

Kabir : Bilkul

They came out and Priyanka took a leave while Kabir took Nisha to the room and gave her some pain killers and tied the bandage again after applying some ointment on the sprained ankle

Kabir : Tu araam kar main market jake aata hun kuch kaam tha

Nisha : Theek hai jaldi aana

He kissed her forehead and left , Nisha too dozed off easily as she was exhausted and the pain killers started showing their effect

Scene 3

Market

Kabir was bargaining with a vegetable vendor when he felt a hand on his shoulder he turned to see the owner of the hand and was surprised to see Umesh there

Umesh : Kya kar raha hai ?

Kabir : Shopping

Umesh : Yeh kaam Nisha ka hai na tu yahan kya kar raha hai ?

Kabir : Teri behan ki kartuton ke wajah se main yahan hun

Umesh : Abh kya kiya ussne ?

Kabir : Partice karte waqt pair moud gaya madam ka , dhyaan se kaam karna toh usse aata nahi na

Umesh : Yeh ladki kabhi nahi sudheregi

Kabir was about to reply but a lyoung boy almost around 3 years elder to Bunty came running to them

Boy (pointing towards Kabir) : Aap vahi hai na ? Passion Dance Academy wale ?

Kabir gulped his saliva as he got scared that he will be caught today while he looked at Umesh who was totally confused

Boy : Mujhe bhi aap jaisa dance karna hai sikhaynge ? Aur aap next video kab post kar rahe hai ?

Kabir (stammering) : Beta , dance seekhne ke liye aap uss number pe contact karna jo website pe hai aapko sari details mil jayengi , abhi main thoda busy hun baad main milte hai phir kabhi ok ?

Boy : Ok main aaj hi phone kar dunga

Kabir : Ok Beta , bye

The boy went from there while Kabir sighed

Umesh : Kabir vo konse video ki baat kar raha tha ? Aur vo website ?

Kabir : Arey vo promtions ke liye meri dance academy ne ek site banai hai jahan sare choreographers ke videos post karte hai , kafi purana video tha usski ki baat kar raha hoga , chod na , meri thodi help kar de iss main aa ..

Umesh seemed satisfied with his answer so he didn't question him more and this gave Kabir mixed feelings of happiness because finally he will be bearing the fruits of his efforts soon and guilt because he lied to Umesh

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A/N :
Dear readers first of all let me tell you that I am feeling upset seeing the response for my previous episode just 6 comments after almost 24 hrs . Is there some fault in my work? If so please let me know. Also as you guys know that we are total 13 writers in TSC but at present only 2 writers are available i.e. Mansi and I, others are busy with their studies. Even we three have studies and work still we can't make excuses as this saga now totally depends on us. As we all know even Annie has exams coming still she is giving time to TSC. So as far you guys must have understood that TSC needs new writers who can join the team.

The conditions to become a TSC writer are -

  1. You have to be available all the time , we can't afford part time writers at this stage

  2. You shouldn't write too short scenes

  3. You should avoid grammatical mistakes and using shot forms/terms

  4. Its not a NiBir story , You will have to write about other characters too

If anyone is interested and is ready to accept all the conditions please contact me , Mansi or Annie

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NAUC-TSC

EPI - 409

WRITTEN BY- MANSI



Scene - 1

Kn house


Kabir entered in his room tip toeing as nisha was still asleep. He put the shopping bags on the table and sat beside her. He looked at her exhausted face and then at her foot. He moved towards the bed end and put pillows under her foot and removed the bandage.


Kabir -kitta swell ho gya h...


He brought an ice pack and applied it on her foot. Just then he saw bruises on her leg.


Kabir - are... isko itni chot bhi lag gyi h... chhodunga nhi mai us amit ko...


He softly checked her arms which too has small bruises as she had fallen badly on the ground. He immediately got up and brought first aid box applying antiseptic at her wounds softly trying hard not to wake her up. Though the wounds were small but it pained kabir a lot. He couldn't help himself as his eyes turned moist seeing her like that. He was doing his work smoothly when nisha woke up flinching in pain.


Kabir looked at her, worried and cupped her face in his palms.


Kabir - bahut dard ho rha h?


Nisha smiled seeing this much of his concern. She knew he cares but everytime something happens to her, an unknown fear and guilt arises in his eyes. She could see his eyes having tears of his love.


Nisha - kabir mai thik hu yaar... itni si kharoch se kuch nhi hota...


Kabir - chhoti ho ya badi chot to chot hoti h...


He said and continued his work. Finally when he was done with all her injuries, he looked up and found her smiling at him lovingly.


Kabir - kya hua...


Nisha - mjhe kuch nhi hua h...


Kabir - to kuch hone ka intzaar kar rhi h... kyu bewajah ki punishment jhelti h nishu.. jab teri koi galti hi nhi to...


Nisha - kabir yaar tu phir shuru ho gya... bola na mai galti karti hongi tabhi to sir mjhe punish karte h... mere betterment k lie...


Kabir - faltu ki punishment se koi better nhi hota samjhi...


Nisha - ur faltu ki fikar se bhi koi better nhi hota...


She rolled her eyes at him.


Kabir - matlab...


Nisha - tu itni fikr kyu kar rha h... itna tension mat le... kuch nhi hua h mjhe... ur mjhe ek baat btaega...


Kabir- kya...


Nisha sat straight and held his face in her palms.


Nisha - mjhe jab bhi kuch hota h... tu hmesha itna darr kyu jata h... chahe ho vo itni chhoti si bruise hi kyu na ho...


Kabir - kyu na daru... tujhe kuch ho gya to mera kya hoga... ek bar tjhe khud se door jaate dekha tha to jaan nikal gyi thi meri... is baar kuch hua to mai mar hi jaunga...


Nisha - ae... tujhe kewal mai maar sakti hu samjha ur koi nhi...


She lightly slapped him as he chuckled and hugged her close.


Kabir - darr lagta h tjhe khone k khayal se nishu


Nisha - mai khi nhi jaungi tjhe chhod k... kabhi nhi...


They remained in the same position for quite a time after which kabir got up and made dinner for both of them.


~while having dinner~


Kabir - pta h nishu aaj market m kya hua...


Nisha - kisine ched dia tjhe??...


She giggled as he glared at her.


Nisha - ohk sorry sorry... bol kya hua... khi tu fir meri scooty to...


Kabir - kya yaar nishu... tjhe har time apni scooty ki hi fikr rehti h na... apne pyaare se pati ki koi parwah hi nhi h...


Nisha - oo... nautanki drama band kar... kaun pyaara sa pati... mjhe to khi koi pyaara sa pati nhi dikh rha...


Kabir made a hawww face while nisha giggled and stuffed a spoon in his mouth.


Nisha - achha bol kya hua...


Kabir - vo aaj na ek bachha aaya tha... video dekh k... mjhse dance sikhna chahta tha... par tb umesh bhi tha mere sath...


Nisha - umesh bhaiya... vo kya kar rhe the vha...


Kabir - mil gya tha market m... kuch kaam se aaya tha...


Nisha - fir... tne kya kha us bachhe se...


Kabir - kya kehta bol dia ki no. P call kar le... i wish sab kuch jaldi thik ho jae...


Nisha - sab kuch thik ho jaega kabir... bhot jald...


Scene - 2

Gh house


Bunty was roaming in his room with a notebook in his hands trying to figure out what to do with it.


Jwala - kya kar rha h bunty


Bunty - soch rha hu jwalu di...


Jwalu - kya


Bunty - ki iska mai karu kya...


Jwalu - bunty... padte h ise...


She facepalmed him.


Bunty - jwalu di mjhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha h...


Jwalu - laa mai tjhe padati hu...


Jwalu started teaching him but after five minute or so bunty got bored of study.


Jwalu - bunty pen de...


Bunty - ye lo...


He handed her scale.


Jwalu - bunty... ye pen h kya... tu isse likhta h... dhyaan kya h tera...


Bunty - kuch nhi jwalu di aap padao..


Jwalu - hmmm...


Bunty - vo jwalu di mai... mjhe ice cream khani h..


Jwalu - bunty... pad le...


Bunty - jwalu di... mere dimag m kuch nhi ja rha h... mjhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha...


Jwalu - dhyaan dega to kuch samaj aaega na... paper h na tera...


Bunty made a sad face and stumped the notebook on his head.


Scene - 3

Viraj house


Viraj was feeling restless ever since he had seen kaira talking on the phone. He was marching in his room.


Viraj - kya kare hm... aakhir ho kya rha h kaira ki life m... hme kuch samaj nhi aa rha... hme bhot bechaini ho rhi h...


He got frustrated from his own thoughts and hit the table near by just then his diary fell out. He picked it up and kept it close to his heart and sat down to write.


Kaira,

Aakhir aap ye sab kyu kar rhi h... hme pta h aap esi nhi h... aap jaan bhuj k hme chot kyu pahuchane ki koshish kyu kar rhi h jabki... jabki aap esa kabhi kar hi nhi sakti... hme pta h aapki kuch na kuch majboori jarur h... warna aap ese behave nhi karti... aakhir aapki pareshani kya h.. kyu aap hmse kuch nhi baant sakti.. hmse apna dard apni takleef kyu chhipa rhi h aap... kya hme aapki aankho m dard nhi dikhta... kyu esa ho rha h hmare saath... jante h hm... hmne bhot galtiya ki h... par hm un sab ko sudharna chahte h... pls kaira hme ek mauka to dijie...


He got exhausted pouring his turmoil in words and sighed in pain. He kept his head on the board and kept thinking about kaira and that phone call, the way she had behaved with him and how painful her voice was while talking on the phone.


He didn't knew when sleep overcame his thought process and pushed him in a deep slumber.




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