VIDHA SS:I have the license to hold ur hand .

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HI,GUYS I HOPE U PEOPLE REALLY ENJOYING THE CURRENT CHEMISTRY OF VIDHA,IT IS REALLY ELECTRIFYING,SIZZLING,HOT,AWESOME AND KILLING 😊😊
Hence ,I thought of making an SS this own is done purely based on the two scenes were Viplav holds Dhani's hand ,I hope u people will enjoy it,it comprises of complete imaginary landscape of my own self along with true reality according to the story ,I swear this SS will make u happy,sad as well make u laugh coz it will be a mixture of all.

Now let's move on to the land of ViDha ,the land of dreams and wonder...😊😊
VIDHA SS :I HAVE THE LICENSE TO HOLD UR HAND...😊😊
VIPLAV POV: Viplav's heart❤️
What is she thinking in her heart??😕😕
Don't I care for her??don't I care for the Ashram??why is she doing this to me?? she upsets me a lot😭😭
I am completely lost in her memories and I think only to protect her and always keep her happy but she ignores me ,punishes me and mistakes me what did ,I do ??
I Must know what is the reason for which she ignores me am,I one who is meant to hate as per her,omg then my life can accept that reality...
Here,I go to find out what is in her small brain,What does she think about me,I am handsome and cute,girls do love to talk to me but she just ignores me,I will make her understand that Viplav Tripathi is born only to be admired and not to be cursed or cheated or to be hated or misbehaved😊😊😊
Then he is on in his way to the Ashram while he thinks about Dhani...something strikes a chord and he realises...
VIPLAV'S INNER MIND GETS FUNNY BY FALSE PRAISING DULAARI...😆😆😆
Is she worried due to her mother,Kakki u are really so funny,u know I used to normally think,why r u awesome 😆😆
U always praise me to the core and I know onething for sure,u would have invoked all bad opinions about me in ur Buchiaa's brains and that is ur hobby ,Kakki I love u for this😆😆
And Kakki ,how can u be so pretty with ur words😆😆
U always make me as vilan and drive happiness out of it kakki better u learn to tape record what and all u can curse me so that u can use it at times😆😆
Well ,Kakki ur a wonderful cook to u cook me with ur words😆😆
U fry with ur looks Kakki😆😆

Finally he reaches Ashram and he meets Dhani ...the first look was blazing with fire,then it was cooled by the view of her innocent face that made him freeze the moment and the day as well...
Dhani's POV:WHY DID HE ?WHY IS HE HERE??
Why is he here??
Why is he there ??
I know only to trouble me ??
Trouble my heart??
Trouble my mind??
Trouble my soul??
No to everything ...😊😊
I can't forget him ,I can forsake his memories,he was precious but his cheating ,his game play pierced my heart...


I had a very big respected place for him in my heart,my brain ,my soul and it grew into a place that could rule my heart and capture my eyes and enrich my beauty,Shall I call it love?? If it is so ,I am merely suffering from the pain he had given me by breaking my trust,my love for him made me mad to accept things when everyone called him a cheat except my own mother but for now ,I am sure he is the one who made me go in vain coz I have heard it from his beloved Daada that he is the culprit but still my heart holds on my love for him and it resists to delete his memories ,God save me...
He comes and asks her that I need answers for all the things that makes u accept me as a thief as a one who wants to destroy ur lives ,Do Give me an answer??

I no need to answer any of ur questions...
HE HOLDS HER HAND TIGHTLY...
LEAVE MY HAND,U DON'T HAVE RIGHTS TO HOLD MY HAND,UR A CHEATER,UR A LIAR,UR CULPRIT...
I WILL SLAP U ,IF U DIDN'T LEAVE MY HAND...
SLAP ME 😲😲
OMG ,I AM AFRAID😲😲😆
TUM,LISTEN COME ON SLAP,I AM HABITUAL TO IT😆😆
U LOVE TO SLAP ME RIGHT,U CONSIDER IT AS A GAME RIGHT,U FIND PLEASURE IN SLAPPING ME,COME ON BABY LET'S PLAY😆😆
BUT REMEMBER I HAVE THE LICENSE TO HOLD UR HAND MY BABY...

I HAVE IT,I HAVE IT FOR SURE,HUNDRED PERCENT COZ I AM THE ONE WHO IS UR RAKSHAS,MIND IT AND I WON'T REALLY CARE IF U TRY TO PUT MY HAND AWAY AND BURN MY MEMORIES,I WILL DO IT AGAIN ,I WILL GRAB UR HAND AND HOLD U AND EVEN,I WILL TAKE U THAT IS KIDNAP U TO ANY ISLAND,REMEMBER THAT BABY😆😊😊
By saying this he leaves the place and Dhani's mind says to itself , I don't ever feel pleasure while I hurt u but I cry and my heart aches when I slap u and ignore you...
TO BE CONTINUED...
I hope u guys would have enjoyed,do post ur comments and tell me whether I can continue...

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awida thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb.
Loved this story..the lines..soo romantic.

I am waiting for the rest.

Gr8 job Jenni.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jenny, This is too good and you makes it apt for the situation.. I loved your special description of love between Dulari and Viplav.. Lol
Your are gifted with magical words!!
Awesome job!!



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar loved the way he was bestowing his right upon dhani was too passionate I want to see his passion for dhani u have expressed it so well jenny
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: awida

Superb.

Loved this story..the lines..soo romantic.

I am waiting for the rest.

Gr8 job Jenni.

thanks a lot Awida di😊
I am glad u liked it ,coz I wrote in an urgent and thought of adding a lot inspite of it,u loved it na I am happy😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocobrownies

Jenny, This is too good and you makes it apt for the situation.. I loved your special description of love between Dulari and Viplav.. Lol

Your are gifted with magical words!!
Awesome job!!



My dear Archu🤗
I am so happy that u liked it Sweety😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..interesting..loved it
Can you please pm me when you update next part..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jenni before commenting on your story let me tell you that your new signature is awesome. Viplav in pain wow.
Congrats for your new story.
And I completely agree with viplav, he's handsome and girls are mad about him. And holding her hand is his birth right. Ouch it hurts to admit but it's true.
Now thank god she didn't slap him again. I can't take anymore slaps please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AISHU183

Awesome yaar loved the way he was bestowing his right upon dhani was too passionate I want to see his passion for dhani u have expressed it so well jenny
Plz update soon

Ohh thanks a lot my dear di,I am glad that u loved it 😊
I will update it soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow..interesting..loved it

Can you please pm me when you update next part..😛

Thanks a lot Zaara dr for sure will pm u when i continue😊😊

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