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aanvi

@aanvi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

res!!!

Ahhmm.. so let's start my lecture!

First of all thank u thank u so so much for suuccchh a big OS!!🤗 Love u babez muuaah!!!❤️

this was the biggest OS i read in IF!!😃

Arre wah! Kya idea dhunda patch up ka! Pehele toh mujhe painful laga...😆

And they that forest thing... it took such a turn! U should be in balaji CVs!!😆

Over protective parth... It was too cute!

And this time heroine was panchu!! How she supported parth!

And aansuunon ke naadiyan behe gaye!!😭 Why did u put aansoons here??

And they the narration of all incidents... Kya zaroot thi iss achche kase blushing blushing OS ko bigaad ne ki!! Made me cry! Why u make me always cry!!😭

So overall, it was a mixed emotion of loved hatred, blush protectiveness etc etc... uncountable!

Perfect mixture re! Did u mixed all things of their life and blended it in any blender?? Then I need it!!

So sabr ka phal mitha raha!😃 U gave the biggest OS!!😃

P.S: sorry, maybe i gave double post... Instead of edit, i clicked quote!!🤣

kya karu o babez main hun aadat se mazboor!🤣

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res !

Mera Bhi ! 😛

unres ! Yes finally . 🥳

First of all kill me for not doing it soon . 🥺 Aree exams before that tests then practical Uff ! Yeh student life bhi na

Now enough of my excuses , what can I do . I m student I m perfect at giving such excuses . 🤣

Now the os was really awesome . Hot hot hot and what not 😆

Panchu is angry with Arjun . I was like is this after VH but this is after Hamare Arjun Ji k marriage expeditions .

Subhadra and Arjun marriage ugh ! 🤢😡

Then Arjun baby *hey wait I will not call him baby. The sole right of baby is only Mou 😛* so yeah he is like consoling her . So sweet 😳

What how dare he take his hands on her ! 😡 Arya . I hate him -_-

Draupadi anger meh forest chali gayi .

Wah fire queen . And Arjun following her "tere peeche main . Mere aghe aghe tu"

. Aree bae where did you get this awesome concept re ?😳

Love this dialogue , ""I won't talk with you. We had a fight." Lol like seriously 🤣

And then Arjun is hurt !nahii .

I love now Drau takes care of him . And their love making . Ahem ahem .😳

Baby but don use raw words such as pen**s or others is u against FF rules . 🤢

And the last part was a magic of words .awesome work done there 👏

These lines are beautiful

Yajna, if we are together in hell, that is not hell. If we are not together in heaven, that is not heaven

How ever our life was we loved, we cared, we craved..we were together even in hell cause we loved.

Lovely os . Lovely words had too hot ☺️

I can not say update soon

Love

Sam

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such a long OS !

I love you baby . With bow and arrow on top 😆

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aanvi

@aanvi98

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aanvi98
res!!!

ahhmm... so let's start my lecture!!

so this was the biggest OS I read eva!!

Loved the patch up re!!

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res!

Sorry, I have been so busy, just dropped by today and saw your PM. Will pakka unres by this weekend😳

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mahima

@Mahiima16

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Posted: 9 years ago

It is a such a long one! i love you for this 😳 And the OS is really very nice. I loved how you brought all the important incidents of ArDi's life in this OS and yet it was so romantic! ❤️
Well done!

Edited by Mahiima16 - 9 years ago