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Originally posted by: ankitathanvi

Hi,

Thanks for the PM...you really know how to keep your readers hooked up to your story...I really like how you write, mist admit you really write from your heart...
So, thank you for sharing such a beautiful story with us...😊
May you always keep writing and let the readers have good content for reading...
Keep the good work up😊

Lots of wishes to you and your family for Diwali...😊




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Hi how are you all.Happy Diwali to all my friends who are celebrating this festival.


Ok frineds time ki shortage hai so direct update k chalte haan. but 1 baat jo mujhe kahni hai.Last update pe response kuch kum hai Y? Update acha nahi laga kya 😕 ? Yaar itna bhi kya busy ho k like bhi press nahi ho raha ajjkal.😊 Dekho main pahle se bata rahe hoon main ne busy hone k kam start kar diya to really mein dhondte rah jao gey. so plz response to sahi se do yaar.

Sorry in Advance in case of mistakes.

Part 36 A


Dhrulya Room.

Aliya with shocked voice: How could he do this with us ?... Cabir aisa kaise kar sakta hai.

Dhruv held her shoulders and said: Aliya ! os ney yeh sub plan hum logon k liye kiya tha but tum log os time a gaye aur phir os k baad job hi hoa sub ghalat hi hoa.

Aliya: But dhruv ... jo bhi ho main osey choron gi nahi and after this she left in the search of Cabir.

Dhruv: O God ! Ajj to lagta hai Cabir gya. (then he tought) but acha hai thori si punishment to banti hai.

In hall

Mukti came in the hall and saw Aryamaan and Rishab sitting there and playing some game on tab.

Mukti: Aryaman Manik kahan hai?

Aryaman : Hy Mukti ! Good Morning. I hope u r feeling good .

Mukti in irritation: Aryaman ! main ne pocha Manik kahan hai.

Aryaman looked at her face and then his eyes go to Maddy who was standing behind Mukti.Maddy with his eyes told aryaman to tell her.

Aryaman: Don't know yaar! Subha se Manik ko nahi dekha main ne.

Mukti: aur Dhruv ,Aliya ,Cabir wo sub?

Aryaman : Abhi tak to yahan koi nahi aya.

At same time they saw Manan entereing in that hall.

Mukti moved towards Manik and asked directly: Manik kal kya hoa tha?

Manik in surprise 1st looked at Mukti's face and then his eyes shifted towards Aryaman and Maddy's face.He with raised eye brows asked them the matter.but they shook their head in negative.

Before Manik speak something he saw Cabir was coming in their direction from outside and Navya was after her with a pillow.

Manik started smiling after seeing Cabir.

Mukti gave a surprised look to Manik and asked: Tu Pagal ho gya hai .Main ne kal raat k bare mein pocha tujh se aur tu hans raha hai.

Maink turned her by holding her shoulder in that direction and she saw the same scene.

Now again she asked in surprise: Arey in dono ko subha subha kya hoa yeh kyon Tom and Jerry ki tarhan start ho gaye haan.

Now others also looked in that direction and saw Cabir was trying to escape from Navya's Beating session and after seeing this all started smiling and smirking.

Cabir came and in their direction and Hide behind Mukti and said: Hey Pholan ! Mujhe is se bacha lo plz plz plz nahi to ajj yeh mujhe Mar dale gi.

Navya: Mukti tum bech mein se hat jao .Ajj to hum is ki hansi band kar k rahen gey.

Navya held mukti's arm and tried to push her in other side.

Cabir after seeing this moved behind Manik and all others are now watching this show with smiling face.

Cabir: Manik merey bhai mujhe is Madhubala se bacha le.tou to mera special bhai hai na dekh plz bacha le.

Navya now said to Manik: Manik plz tum bech mein nahi parna .

Manik in a very funny manner said: Ok and he held his hand up.

Cabir with surprise: Manik tu... tu to mera dost tha yeh dushman k gang mein kab se shamil ho gya.

Navya said in anger: Dushman ! Haw Hamein dushman bola ,, Hamein Navya Naveli ko,,, Cabir ab to tum bilkul nahi bach sakte and she again started chasing him.

But to cabir's Badluck Here comes a cushion on his head from backside.

Cabir without seeing who was there said: Aby kon hay yaar ! aik side kya kum thi jo aur bhi koi start ho gya.

And again a cushion hit on his head and the voice of aliya comes from backside:Aik side Cabir tujhe to main abhi batati hoon.and she one after other throw the cushions on his side.

Mukti now said in irritation: Yeh subha subha tum logon ko ho kya gya hai .kyo isey mar rahe ho?

Cabir after listening this again moved towards Mukti and said: haan pholan dekh na subha subha mujh jaise masoom bache ki jaan k peeche par gayi haan ye dono.

Aliya : Arey mukti abhi tumhe pata nahi hai k is Cabir ne kal kiya kya hai.

Now all looked at Aliya in surprise and then they looked at dhruv whose expression told them that aliya now knows all what happened last night.

Aliya then narrated all the story to the girls and they in shocking voice said: What.

Now Mukti came in her pholan devi's avtar and asked: Tera kahne ka matlab hai k subha se hamara yeh headache and kal k bare mein kuch bhi nahi ana yeh sub iss ki wajha se hai.

Aliya: yes! You remember kal jab hum garden se wapis aye the to yeh soft drinks k glasses k sath a raha tha.

Now Navya,Nandini and Mukti nodded in yes so aliya continued: wo soft drinks iss ne spike ki hoe thein.Isi liye yeh hangover type situation subha se hum sub k sath hai.

Now Mukti held her head in his hand and said: O God! Cabir teri wajha se hamara yeh haal hai.ab to dekh hamari wajha se tera kya haal hota hai.

Navya:Pahle wo gandi wali drink hame pilate ho aur phir hum pe hanste ho. Ab to tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta hum se.

And girls(Navya,Aliya,Mukti) started beating him with cushions.

And cabir started shouting: Arey meri matao ! Kya kar rahe ho,,, kyo mar rahe ho,,,,,,arey mar jaon ga main,,,,,,,, arey chor do... Arey kal to os Drink k baad maze le le k dance kar rahe thi sub os time hum ne kuch kaha tha kya.

After listening this all boys face palmed and thought: Cabir ab to tu totally gya.

Mukti in anger: Hum maze le le k dance kar rahe the (and hit him) aur kis ki wajha se yeh sub kuch hoa tha(again hit him) Hum ne kaha tha k wo drinks spike kar(again hit him)

Navya: Aur subha se hame tang kar kar raha hai( now she hit him) humara navya naveli ka mazak bana raha hai( again hit him).

Aliya: Aur hamein spike ki hoe drink pila k hamein kah raha hai k hum maze le k dance kar rahe the(now she hit him).

Now he sat on floor and held his face in hand and started his drama: Arey yaar bus karo jaan lo gey kya ab meri.wo dekho Nandini ko os ney to koi baat nahi ki kitni achi hai wo.

Now Mukti turned towards her and asked : Arey Nandini ao na Cabir tumhari mar ko bhi miss kar raha hai (and with this she again hit him with cushion).

Cabir: Arey wo kyo aye gi un ki raat to waise hi bhi shandar guzri ho gi meri wajha se( and he pulled his collar to take credit).

Nandini's eyes opened wide after listening this and Manik He with a sarcastic smile turned his face and take a cushion from backside and said in sarcastic tone: Ya U r right ! Bht shandar guzri raat .It was amazing to is shandar raat k liye tujhe thanks kahna to banta hai na.

Cabir with sheepish smile: Arey yaar rahne de .doston mein yeh sub to chalta hai na,

Manik said in teasing voice: Ya right ! yeh sub chalta hai and he now started hitting him with cushion .

Cabir now started acting like crying and said further: Tum log mere dost nahi dusman ho.Hey bhagwan yahan kisi ko meri zarorat nahi.Mujhe utha le (then he thought againand correct himself) arey nahi mujhe nahi in sub ko hi utha le.(All others smile on his Nautanki).

Manik :Acha hamein utha le .Chal tou kya yaad kare ga pahle tujhe hi uthate haan .

And he picked him in his arms and started moving outside.All others followed them with smiling faces.

Manik came near pool and asked: Navya is ne abhi tak bath nahi liya na.

Navya with smiling face said: No.

Manik: Ok to thek hai .He throw him in swimming pool and water splashed outside due to his weight.

Now all started laughing on him.

After sometime all came back in and again moved towards their room to freshenup and then meet again on the dinning table for breakfast.

After breakfast all came in the sitting area with their tea or coffee cups and sat on sofas.

Cabir: Thank God ajj main bacj gya nahi to tum logon ne to koi kasar nahi chori thi mujhe marne mein.

Manik in threatening voice: Cabirrr ! Chup ho k coffee pe yeh na ho hum teri dhulai ka apna decision change kar lein.

Cabir with scared face: oh kkk.

Mukti closed her eyes after taking a sip of her coffee and she got the flashbacks of last night but nothing was very clear. She saw she was kissing someone. At instant she opened her eyes and looked here and there and found Maddy's constant gaze on her.

Maddy was observing her action and expressions from last few minutes.

Mukti's Pov

What the hell is this. Yeh kya ho raha hai.kya kal... aisa kuch...(she looked at maddy's face and found him looking at her) Aur yeh Maddy yeh aise kyo dekh raha hai.

She threaded her hair with fingers .

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Friends is update k baad next update response pe depend kare ga coz app sub ki tarhan main bhi busy hoon.so agar to response sahi raha to update jaldi miley ga nahi to jab free hoon gi tab so now all depend on you😆.And i am serious as mera semester bhi start ho gya hai aur job ka kam bhi kafi hai aur is sub mein update likhna and post karna😕. so agar comments and likes milte rahe to update bhi milte rahen gey .Nahi to ... Samajh to app sub gaye ho gey.😉


Part 36 B


Now all were enjoying there time with chatting Manan were sitting opposite side so Manik was teasing Nandini with his flirty expression and Nandini who was sitting with rishab turned red and geeting the meaning of Manik's action and expression.

Cabir saw this special talk so he again comes in his teasing mood and asked to Manik: Manikkk waise kal raat sub thek hi raha na?

Manik looked at him with mocked smile so he said: Cabirrr terey hote hoe kuch thek rah sakta hai kya?

Cabir nodded like he was seeing yes merey hote bhi sub kuch thek rah sakta hai.

Manik gave an angry glare to him.

Cabir in scared voice wo bus aise hi main ne to is liye pocha k Raat k romance ka asar abhi bhi nazar a raha hai.

Now Manik and Nandini both gave a shocked look to him others with surprise looked towards Cabir

Cabir again to tease our Manan sing in a funny manner.

Sari Night besharmi ki hight

Sari night besharmi ki hight

Ik tu ik main

aur ho dim dim yeh light

Manik again with threatening voice called his name: Cabirrr.

Cabir now with most innocent puppy face: What ? main ne kya kiya ab . gana hi gar aha ho na. Kya ab main gana bhi apni marzi se nahi ga sakta.

Others except Manan smiled on his nautanki but Our Manan,,,hmmm,,,, Nandini was feeling very shy so she looked down with shyness and Manik he said in threatening voice: Tu aise nahi mane ga na tujhe to abhi main batata hoon .

Manik moved towards him . and Cabir after seeing Danger coming in his direction started running .

Cabir was running in different direction and Manik was chasing him and saying Ajj to tu mare ga merey hathon se.

And others started laughing on this tom and jerry fight.

Day passed in these type of funny fights at night all decided to sit in open air and decided to play Antakshiri.

Rishab was the only one who is not interested in this game so he started playing games on tab.

Cabir: hmmm to bolo teams kaise banana haan.

Mukti: simple Boys v/s Girls

Cabir : Ohkkk then I think sitting bhi aise hi ki jae .

So all boys came in one side and girls went on other side and then all sat.

Cabir: Ok to start kon kare ga.

Navya : Tum.waise bhi tumhe hark am karne ki jaldi rahti hai na to start bhi tum hi karo gey.

Cabir : And rules

Aliya : yaar no rules like ending words and all haan .Mujhe to bus songs enjoy karne han so bus simple sa competition karte haan na.

Cabir: Ok but 1 problem hai.

Mukti: What

Cabir : Hum 5 aur tum log ho 4 bahut nainsafi he yeh(he said this last line in filmy manner)

Navya in attitude: Jao jao hum 4 hi kafi haan tum logon k liye .

Aliya :ya we don't have any problem.

Cabir: Ok ! Tum logon ko hum se Harney ka itna hi shok hai to hum kya sakte haan kyo bhai log and he placed his hand in front of boys and all boys put their hand in agreement.Ok so lets start

Girls indicated to go ahead.

Boys

Cabir with a lil acting showing his Biceps to girls.while girls making funny faces.

Aa Dekhe Jara Kisame Kitana Hai Dum
Jamake Rakhana Kadam Mere Saathiya

Girls

While showing cabir their hands in same fighting manner and Navya sang

Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai

Cabir gave a scared look to girls after seeing their punches

Boys

Maddy sang this song looking towards Mukti(like he was saying all this to her) and mukti noticed all this.

Har dil ki apni hi taal hai
Apna hi ek raag hai
Har dil ki apni dhadkane
Apni hi ek aag hai
Jazbaat pighle pighle hain toh kyun na ho
Khayalaat behke behke hain toh kyun na ho
Har dil dhadakne do
Dil Dhadakne Do...

Girls

Mukti

Mukti with sad voice sang this. And only Maddy understand her these words

Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

After this song Cabir said : Arey yaar yeh roney wale songs nahi plz.


Mukti in anger throw grass towards cabir and said: game se pahle decide karna chayeye tha ab meri marzi main jaise marzi song gaon.


Dhruv yaar game thori change karte haan like songs with dance something like dedicate a song to any member of opposite party and dance with that person.


Aliya: Nice idea dhruv.


All others: Ok


Now Boys turn


So Manik stand up and he placed his hand infornt of nandini and Nandini happily placed her hand on his.


He started singing and dancing with Nandini


Jeene laga hoon, pehle se zyada
Pehle se zyada, tumpe marne laga hoon

Main mera dil aur tum ho yahaan
Phir kyun ho palkein jhukaye wahaan
Tum sa haseen pehle dekha nahin
Tum is.sey pehle thhe jaane kahaan
Jeene laga hoon pehle se zyada
Pehle se zyada tumpe marne laga...
hmmm... ho..

After this They takes their places in their group


Girls


Navya stands from girls side and moved towards boys Cabir thought she came to him but she moved towards Maddy and placed her hand towards him and indicated with her eyes (Ho jae)


Maddy stands up from his seat now Navya sang and dance with him.

Left Leg Aage Aage
Right Leg Pichee Pichee

Aaja Yaara Lets Start Ve

Sar Ko Gumale Round

Paer Zaara Up Down

Itni Si Ye Baat Ve

Woh Banda Hin Kya Hain
Jo Naache Na Gaaye
Aa Haaton Mein Tho Haath Thamle
Oye Dance Pe Chance Marle
O Soniya Dance Pe Chance Marle

O Baaliye Dance Pe Chance Marle
O Soniya Dance Pe Chance Marle

Cabir was feeling a lil jealous on this so he came towards her and hold her by shoulders and said : Bus bht ho gya dance pe chance ! Chalo ab baqi sub ko bhi dance karne do . and Navya with bad face went back in her group.


As it was boys turn so Maddy came in mukti's direction and asked for a dance .Mukti with surprise accepted his offer .


Maddy started singing this song and his eyes were fixed on Mukti's face.Mukti feels the change in him.His touch was very soft and his eyes showed some kind of affection.She looked in his eyes and don't know why but she found herself drowning in those eyes.

Khamoshiyan aawaaz hain
Tum sun'ne to aao kabhi
Chhukar tumhe khill jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..


Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan

Kya uss gali mein kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahaan se zamaane ko guzre zamaana hua
Mera samay toh wahin pe hai thehra hua
Bataaun tumhe kya mere sath kya kya hua

Khamoshiyan ek saaz hai
Tum dhun koi laao zaraa
Khamoshiyan alfaaz hain
Kabhi aa gunguna le zara
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa.. haa..


And with the song their dance turns from simple one to couple dance .

(guys consider it as Mukti and Maddy).

Others were enjoying this dance with song but our Manan they looked at them with a lil surprise and then they looked at eachother to confirm that whether are on the same point or not.



After this Dhruv Aliya Aryaman and navya dance in terns but Manan's concentration was now only on Maddy and Mukti.


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love you ,take care and good night


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I love your story.. Happy Diwali
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Originally posted by: chattycatty

I love your story.. Happy Diwali



thank you dear
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u r welcome dear
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I will comment tomorrow after reading ..I just woke up
n all the best for ur busy routine do well in ur study and job make me proud Allah aapko gar kamyabi we faizyaab Kare is duniya ki
n plz concentrate on ur work more than me I know I m always in ur mind but iska ye nhi k aap apne kaam or study she compromise karlo...theek hai?
bye take care don't stress love u kitna? I don't know its limitless
chalo hum hain rahi forum k phir milenge baithe baithe
Allah Hafiz
good night have sweat dream about me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
finally cabira ko maar padi...
i soo luv flushed manan...
luved it...
thnx for pm...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome ...amazing ... sweet ...cute ...and adorable too
Hahaha the Cabir beating session was awesome ...hilarious ... and then MaNan teasing session ..mazing ..and cute

And Antakshiri scene was mazing ... like u choose best songs which matches their situation and condition

Then the dancing and singing scene was amazing

Loving it

And the pics ... they really give the clear picture of your story ... Beautiful

Aur ab to MaNan ko Mukhti aur Maddy k pyar aur say feelings ... ka pta chalnay laga hai

Thanks for the pm

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