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SamAina_yudkbh

@SamAina_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

manan spark is missing. niti looks aukword with parth. too much importance to maddy which is i think being done to retain yuvi.

a big missing factor. " a proper manan wala HUG ! " i am totally missing their hug. what they are showing ? either manik hugs nandu, or nandu hugs manik. they have forgotten that hug is an activity done by both the ppl involved.

by the way i don't mind nandini giving importance to aryamaan. aryamaan is much better friend to nandini that fab 3 to manik. but she should explain her and aryamaan's friendship to manik which i know will never happen. because it's a tv serial and rational talking and exchange of view points and explanation of intentions never happens in indian shows.

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Puja Bagchi

@puba

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I agree that Parth and Niti need to forget about offscreen drama and concentrate on being Manik and Nandini...maybe they should rewatch their scenes from S1...if that helps. Though I have to say...their chemistry has gotten better over the days (only talking about S2).

As far as the storyline is concerned, I do not understand why on earth Nandini does not ask Manik about what happened in the past 4 months and why Manik does not care to explain either. Also, Nandini should talk freely (with Manik) about her relationship with Aryaman. This is just one aspect that the CVs can explore.

Another thing that bothers me is the fact that Nandini's whole purpose in life is to be Manik's girlfriend. What about her own identity as a musician??

Even if there is a hint of story, automatically there will be more gravity in Manan's romance. Romance for the sake of it...does not make much sense. Also, there needs to be some progress in Manan's relationship...fueled by a solid story!

I think the CVs are trying to create some sort of story for all the characters and then infuse some lovey dovey Manan scenes here and there without much context. That is not going to work. One of the reasons why S1 worked so well was because...Manan's relationship growth was directly connected to the incidences that occurred in their friends lives. So it seemed like a well knit story.

I believe everything lies in the storyline. Make it sensible and logical...and most other things will fall in place.

Edited by puba - 9 years ago