Vignette : Not Anymore ... - Page 3

An amazing update as usual! Totally alluring and lovely, well i'm still under the spell of your writing what can i say you always leave me speechless and short of words! Totally Mesmerizing and beautifully written Di. Reading your stories always take me along with them! Thanks for starting writing again i thought you are not going to write further!
my reaction when you updated! 😆

Write more then, Di...it's good for the soul 😊

Originally posted by: Santosh99

An amazing update as usual! Totally alluring and lovely, well i'm still under the spell of your writing what can i say you always leave me speechless and short of words! Totally Mesmerizing and beautifully written Di. Reading your stories always take me along with them! Thanks for starting writing again i thought you are not going to write further!
my reaction when you updated! 😆

Rachna, this is beyond amazing... I think I held my breath the entire time and it broke my heart a little bit too.

Sure Nidhi. I will wait.

Okay!
I've already said before that u r an amazing writer, you express every emotion so beautifully that i can't stop myself from drooling over your writings.
This was again written with perfection, this was breathtakingly beautiful, each and every word was telling its own story. I just loved it :)
P.s Your writing is flawless 👏

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Okay!
I've already said before that u r an amazing writer, you express every emotion so beautifully that i can't stop myself from drooling over your writings.
This was again written with perfection, this was breathtakingly beautiful, each and every word was telling its own story. I just loved it :)
P.s Your writing is flawless 👏

From the opening lines, I knew this was special, just from the way you described his hands on her.

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

From the opening lines, I knew this was special, just from the way you described his hands on her.

Now he smiled. He was amazed. That she allowed him to touch her this intimately. After all, they were just planning to watch a movie. Spend some time together now that the children were not at home. Amazed that she would allow him to touch her, to be with her. Amazed that she seemed to care about him.

Seemed to love him.

Since their separation, he had always considered himself unlovable. And had hidden the fact well within himself. Not even shared with his sister.

My poor N and R, still broken 😒 That insecurity can't go away easily, especially when they are just finding their way back to each other again.

She shivered in his arms. Like always. The always that existed long term ago.

She thought - he was difficult and haunted. Easy and open. He infuriated her and soothed her. And she could not be without him. Not anymore. Ragini knew for sure.

And then this:

He smiled as he thought of how difficult and inflexible she could be. Easy and affectionate. She infuriated and calmed him. And he would not, could not live without her. Not anymore.

Beautiful in the contradictions but also in how despite their insecurities they know they need each other and there is no other option.

All the while I am at their gorgeous physical intimacy.

But this was my absolute favorite:

Yet those words would pale and become nothing, nothing but a group of random letters in comparison to her eyes, her fingers. Hard as it was for him to believe at times, he could never, ever doubt her love at moments like this, when her hands were in his, when her bare skin was against his, when his lips slid over her heated skin. Never.

Have no words for this but how true it is, that the unspoken words pale in comparison to their touch ❤️

Even though things are not perfect between them they have each other and that is real.

Thank you so much for this Rachna - so much packed into a small intimate moment between the two. It is warm and gorgeous but also sad and hopeful. Fantastic 👏