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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter-3
hi friends,iam here with another update to torcher u all😆 so please read and do comments ignore typos and grammmar mistakes.

next day in college shagun was waiing for ishita to spatout on her
ishita and mihika comes into college and shagun sees it and directly goes to them
S to I-i want to talk to u personally
M-not intersted talk to u so excuses us
S- I didn't talk to u so u will just shut up and leave us
mihika tries to speak but ishita stop her and tells to go
I-tell what is your problem
S-don't act smart ha muje pata hai thum aise bole bale chahra se raman ko patna ke liye koshish kar rahi ho
I-what! are u understanding thum kya bole ja rahi ho shagun cuts her in middle and says oh please jayda nataunki karne ki koshish mat karna samjhi oh sirf mera bf hai samji agar uska aas pass bi aaya na deklana may kya karthi ho
in the same time mihika was cursing shaggy under her breath and bump into mihir who was coming with raman and his gang mihika kya ho gaya dekha chalna chaye na
m-ha sorry
mihir-kya hua thum tension lag rahi ho
m-kuch nahi bas oh shagun hai na ishita ko leka gayi kuch bath karne ke liye i am telling u agar usna ishu ko hurt kia na oh mera hath may mar jayegi
m
R-itna gussa bapre
m-tho kya jabbe deko uska peche padi hogi
raman says tho chalo chalke dekhe tha hai ki kya ho raha hai(he also want to know what is going there so he says)
m-lekin usne mana kiya
m-koi bath nahi may usa bath karunga chale she nods and all of them goes with mihika
in the same time
I-oh jealous
S-jealous my foot tum na apna ka kuch jyade he samje the ho behenji
I-hey watch u r language and i am not at all interested in ur bf nor u so lets stop this and mera pass vakth bhi nahi hai ke may thum se argument karu so please at the time all comes there and ishita sees raman ye lo thumhara bf aa gaya ab thum muje chod de tho may apna kam karunga aur ek bath thumne mujh se jyad thumhare bf se time spend kara tho acha hoga and thanks for u r caring she says with taunt and leaves from there shagun stood their dumbfounded and goes to raman see baby how she is talking to me
R-one minute thum kabse mera gf bani ho may na tho thume kabhi nahi kaha
s- common raman iknow u like me u know i am the hottest girl in college
r-please iam not at all interested in u and he goes to search ishita leaving a angry shaggy
ishita also listen this and smiles
raman stops them mihika goes from there because she has a class
r-sorry
i-for what
r-ye jo bhi ho raha hai
i-oh thum ne nahi kia na so don't say sorry for that
r-i want to talk to u about yesterday's night she cuts in middle and says it was a momment i am so sorry for that u didn't force me na i didn't tell it to anyone so it is better u would be she says this and leaves from there raman stops her
r -u see agar thum ko koinproblem nahi ho tho hum friends tho ban sakthe hai na write ishita sees him and does not speak he again says i am not that bad you know
i-she stammers it's ... just ...like... u know ok ye sab chodo friends they both became friends
r-u know i am not at all regretting that kiss😉 he says and runs fro there ishita blushes
that's all for now hope u will like it and leave u r comments

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Love this update
Kya jawab diya h ishita ne shagun ko
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
chotu update try to give longest dear
btw nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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N yes my jhansi ki rani is back with a bang!! 😉
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice one dear
I really liked ishu's answer to shagun
And Raman is also a sweetheart
He wants to befriend with ishu
Continue soon
Can I know ur name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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IshRa moment was cute one. And Shagun got complete dose both from Raman and Ishita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimty1230

chotu update try to give longest dear
btw nice update

Thank u 😊
Next time I will try
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PinkRose95

N yes my jhansi ki rani is back with a bang!! 😉
Continue soon

Thank u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Nice one dear

I really liked ishu's answer to shagun
And Raman is also a sweetheart
He wants to befriend with ishu
Continue soon
Can I know ur name

Thank u😊
My name is pravallika
U can call me pravalli😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u😊

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