AKDHA OS-DREAM COMES TRUE

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HOLA FRNDS M BACK WITH MY 3RD OS... 😆 NO NO DONT WORRY KISI KA BDAY NAHI HAI JUST TGHT OF WRITING IT BUT YA JUST NOW HAPPENED TO SEE AKANKSHA'S THREAD WISHING AVIKA ON HER COMPLETION OF 1 YEAR ON THIS FORUM SO AT D LAST MOMENT JUST NOW THOUGHT OF DEDICATING THIS OS TO AVIKA...SO AVI DEAR HOPE U WILL LIKE MY OS...AND ALSO I WOULD LIKE TO THNK GEETU FOR D PROOF READING AND CORRECTIONS...SO THNX GEETU FOR HELPING ME OUT... 🤗
OK PEEPS SO NOW I WILL SHUT MY MOUTH AND LEAVE U WITH MY OS...DO LET ME KNOW V MUCH INTERESTED IN KNOWING UR RESPONSES... 😉 😳

DREAM COMES TRUE

Sun rays were getting intense indicating that it was heading towards d noon a young handsome charming prince with grey eyes having chiseled facial features brown long tresses with athletic built up body which would make any girl crazy for him riding an Arabian black beauty ...was on his way when something caught his eyes and was compelled to abruptly stop his horse...due to d sudden jolt his horse gave away and tried to put d prince down but at d nick of time he managed to handle d horse and stabilize him...

A fair looking beautiful girl having large xpressive doe shaped brown eyes which looked more elegant due to a tinge of kohl adoring her eyes...her black long tresses dangling on her shoulders till her waist and in btw giving a view of her milky white soft skin...her luscious rose petal like lips and her delicate tender waist making any man go crazy for her she thoroughly looked like a damsel descended from heaven... had just managed to pull d curtains of her palanquin giving way to see d beautiful nature around appreciating d mother nature's paintings which always kept d mankind amazed and dazed...revealing her beautiful face which all d while made her handsome secret admirer fall head over heels in love pondering him about d god's creations on earth...he was truly mesmerized by her innocent beauty...

He saw a troop of soldiers guarding d palanquin making him clearly guess that d caravan belonged to a royal princess but he was desperate to know d owner of this gorgeous face and left no stone unturned to find out...

he tried following her and was successful as fate was with him so he had to be successful till d palanquin came to a halt in front of a huge and powerful fort... He having an excellency in war techniques and having a far sightedness with having sharp diplomacy in politics could easily understand that this fort was no fool's joke to enter he have to enter like an invisible ghost ...but wait a min there was a sudden realization hitting him leaving him more astonished as this fort was none other than amer king bharmal and so d next thought which got him into confirmation was this princess living in this fort...giving way to revelation that she was none other than d gorgeous ameri princess jodha

Jodha stepped out of d palanquin as her maid helped to come out giving her full view but still her face was covered with d veil and couldn't clearly b seen but d sun rays falling on her golden veil made her look more like a diva...d prince was again lost in her beauty and he decided to follow her inside to get to see her one look in close quarters

Jodha was not alone her bestie her moti thou a maid but jodha being kind and compassionate never looked upon moti as a maid...this v nature of jodha made her different from her other siblings...d prince was following her all thru d corridors without being caught by any of d soldiers...as if he was playing hide and seek with d guards...

Only he knew how much he had to hold his life in his hand just to get close to this ameri princess... jodha was v tired and wanted to freshen up so moti had gone to prepare for her bath...leaving jodha alone in d corridors d prince was waiting for an opportunity to get close to her but moti her maid being d barrier he was getting irritated...but now that jodha was alone he smirked to himself adorning his handsome face about his encounter with this princess... suddenly jodha felt someone following her making him

alert and before he could react she had managed to turned back only to see this handsome charming prince who looked more like a greek god giving a sensation of butterflies dancing in her stomach stood still there as if d voice in her throat was choked and were not ready to come out...he could easily feel her lost in his charms and was happy within that his charms were working on her like her beauty had made an impact on him...he managed to close her mouth with his palm bringing her back from her drooling session and at d same time she was cursing herself for what was happening to her but she couldn't deny that this handsome hunk had managed to loose her consciousness and foremost was awestruck to see such a handsome prince in close quarters 1st time in her life

he could clearly see fear shock confusion in those large xpressive brown orbs... he just pulled her to d adjacent room and in this attempt both lost d balance making jodha fall on him...she was held tight by strong arms slipping into her waist sending shivers down her spine...her hands lying on his chest both were lost in each other forgetting that they were on d bed they were brought into reality by moti's voice... d prince released her from his clutches in d midst brushing his rough lips on her delicate soft lips creating an electric jolt in both...

Morning golden rays of d sun fell on d sleeping beauty making jodha wake up from her beautiful dream...jodha realized that she had seen a v beautiful dream where she had met her charming prince... Moti was confused seeing jodha blushing with d confused xpressions moti asked ...

jodha what happened...? Where r u lost early in d morning wake up u have to get ready its already late

mot's words were falling on deaf ears as jodha was still not ready to come from her dreams of her charming admirer just when her mother mainavati shouted entering d room jodhaaa... which brought jodha back to reality...

maina: jodha where r u lost...? Come on get up get ready soon...today is a special day for u...as ur father will declare ur groom's name and all d kings from different domains will b coming to participate in d function

hearing this jodha blushed till her cheeks had become cherry red...and at d same time she thought of her dream prince and wished he could also come here ...but realization hit her that d prince which she saw him was in her dreams and she might not get to see him in reality...thinking that he might not meet her again her face became gloomy...

Maina saw her daughter's sulky face and hugged and kissing her forehead as she thought that her beloved daughter must b feeling sad since she will have to leave her mother and go to her in laws place soon and she dint wanted her to make more upset so she thought of speaking to her some other time as this wasn't d time to speak as lots of preparations were left to b done...but she wasn't aware of jodha's dreams for which she was thinking off...and maina told her to get ready and come as lots of preparations had to be done ordering moti to help jodha get ready so that she looks beautiful as damsel descended from d heaven...

D palace was decorated like a bride where everything looked so perfect and y not d most important event in amer's history was to take place where d princess jodha would get to meet her prince charming in reality...

D kings had arrived at d scheduled time...they were welcomed with grand pomp with carpet of flowers put to walk on...all were taken to d main hall where king bharmal was officially going to announce jodha's groom...everyone including king bharmal was waiting for d groom to arrive to attend this function as the announcement was to b made in front of d groom...

Sitting right diagonally on d top along with her mother and siblings and her maids Jodha was v much nervous and restless she looked like not less than a diva in red and white combination dress with khol in her large doe eyes even with d light make up and minimum kundan jewelry..Flowers adoring her long black tresses and had covered her face with d veil d atmosphere was brightened up with her glow

But finally d wait was over d charming and handsome Mughal emperor of Hindustan none other than Jalaluddin Mohammad entered d hall with an official announcement making everyone to stand with respect and was welcomed by king bharmal himself... seeing him jodha's heart skipped a beat she was thoroughly aghast she couldn't believe whether again she was drifted into her dreamland or was it real...to make sure of it she pinched herself and to her surprise it was a reality...her happiness knew no bounds she was on cloud nine and was recalling her dreams as d prince was none other than jalal himself whom she couldn't recognize in her dreams...this made her shock to d core...thou her family had got to meet him in last gangaur festival... only she and her siblings couldn't get a chance to meet him...

Bharmal had already decided to make jalal his son in law which he had already discussed with his family only jodha and her siblings weren't aware of it...king bharmal had good relations with d mughals and so he was v much enlightened when this proposal was kept in front of him by jalal when last time they both happened to meet in ganguar festival...and y not when d emperor of Hindustan who was d most powerful persona in d country would become his son in law it was truly an honour for bharmal and his family...

King bharmal finally with great enthusiasm announced his future son in law's name as Jalaluddin Mohammad ...jalal got up from his place and both shared a hug considering lucky to get married to a beautiful princess which he might have got to see her may b only in his dreams before sitting he just saw his bride and winked at her... jodha blushed but also was shocked to d core ...she wasn't aware of her father had already decided to make her dream prince her hubby in reality...tears of happiness flowed from her doe shaped eyes also thinking of her encounter with him in her dreams his closeness ...d lasting effects on her ... she blushed like a tomato...which dint go unnoticed by her mother and her bestie moti...as both were watching her in close quarters maina was happy to see her daughter's happiness she was foremost scared whether her daughter will accept this marriage or not but seeing her happiness she got a assurance of jodha's acceptance for d wedding...and silently prayed for her daughter's happiness and continue to bless her till lifelong...

So finally d epic couple tied a knot marking a day special in their lives and in d history of Hindustan too which would be proudly written in golden words in history...eventually leading to jodha's dreams coming true...

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155pari thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story harshu!!😃
Loved d way you described jalal and jodhas features
And also Jodha's drea...
So he was jos dream boy...
A readlly cute os😳
Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os ... Love jodha dream ... Mujhe to lga tha vo dream nhi h ... But it was a dream only ...😆😆 ... Nice harshu diii👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res😊
Unressed😛

Its a Beautiful OS harshu👏⭐️
Best of three👏
The way u have expressed Jodha's dream was amazing👏
Wow!! What a beautiful dream Jodha dreamed
U have described our beautiful princess nd charming king Jalal so beautifully..I was awed by ur description⭐️
No hatred btw Jo n Jalal in ur story😛
Just Loved Jo's feelings when she came to know her dream man was her fiace..❤️
She happily agreed for the marriage proposal😃
Loved the Happys Endings😃😆
Keep writing more OS Harshu🤗
Thank u so much for giving such a Lovely Os 😊😊
Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This time i m quite sooner i suppose 😆
But great attempt dear 👏 👍🏼 Do continue to experiment with ur writing skills and provide us with more OS's 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res :)
Will unres soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one Harshu.
I can see u experimenting with writing OS. I guess it's the prelude to writing a FF.
Carry on and keep writing. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful os harshu
Love it
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful os harshu love to read this. indeed dream come true.more on this time jo dreamed about it and smart jalal fix it at first only. superbly written about her beauty, dream and her feelings and jalal's antic.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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my my

it was awsum


suprb


keep writing

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